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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2022 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

Keep on writing 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2022 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2022 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks for writing and sharing.  :)

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2022 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 20

Awesome challenge between the girls and guys.  

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2022 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 20

I am glad that you're back! This chapter is amazing and definitely worth the wait! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2022 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 20

Glad you're back and with an awesome chapter! Glad Bella and Alice reconnected. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2019 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 19

Heavy. 

Can't wait for the next update! Glad you're back!!! (: 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2019 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 19

Love your story can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2019 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: gajujubee Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2019 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 19

I can't tell you how much I am enjoying reading your updates).  I miss them.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2019 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 19

Talk about stubborn. Emmett can talk to Renee. He can get the stem cells or whatever he needs to Bella. She doesn't even need to see her. It can be very business like. It happens all the time with donors. Most don't meet before or after the donation. Renee owes this to Bella and Esme. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2019 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh my so painful all around 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2019 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wonder if Essie or Edward will reach out on her behalf. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2019 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 19

Keep on writing

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2019 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thank you for not abandoning this story Edward and Bella find themselves in the middle of such a mess! There is her illness, their feelings for each other, the complicated family_ background both of them have... Iamvery curious how it will all turn out. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2019 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 19

I really hope Bella gets cured.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2019 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 19

:)

Reviewer: leinchen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2019 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 19

First of all:

Thank you so much for continuing this story!

I so love it!

But - to be honest - I really don't understand Bella ... There's the possibility of being helped, eventually cured ... and she postpones it ....

I am dedicated to my work, but not for th complete sake of my health nor life!

I really am looking forward to the next chapter!

Greetings from Germany,

leinchen

 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2019 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 19

such a gut wrenching chapter.....   thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: annacaroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2019 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 18

Where are you????? Please came back!!!!🥺



Author's Response:

I’m working on the next chapter, but have a lot going on in real life too. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2019 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 18

Bella is def on the broken side.  Hopefully e can bring her around

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2019 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

Bella is so stubborn. Her mother can donate and not even have to see her.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2019 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

I hope her mom agrees to help her 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2019 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

My heart is breaking for Bella

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2019 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

Bella is so dam miserable.   I want to give her a big hug.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2019 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 18

It’s so heartbreaking I am crying but I love it

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2019 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 17

Good story.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2019 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

This chapter was so worth the wait!  I loved it.  I am very much looking forward to the next chapter!  

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2019 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 17

I love how Emmett is the mystery doctor. I hope he can help.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2019 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 16

Bella needs to try to live and give the treatment a chance. She needs and deserves to be loved by Edward.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2019 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

Can understand Bellas reluctance.  

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 17

A cure, cool, keep on writing

Reviewer: MaryE1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 17

Hopefully your writing mojo is back I love this story please update very soon!

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

Omg emmet yes save her please please

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 17

Holy snap could this be true I loved it thank goodness Edward isn't giving up 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh this story will be getting good. Really hope Emmett can cure Bella.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2019 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh, I am so glad you posted. I have enjoyed your writing on this story,.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2019 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2018 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh how I love this story. Please continue to update. I know really life can be a bitch but you make a difference. I have never cried, laughed and smiled so much with one of these fanfics as I have with this story.

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2018 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2018 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2018 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2018 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 16

Edward will be strong, since right now Bella can't. She will get her fighting gloves back on in a little bit, but for now she needs to rest and let Edward be the strong one.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2018 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 16

Glad you're  back  Monday  good  chapter !   Keep  up  the  great  work ! 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2018 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 16

Well okay then. Also did they win? 

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 16

Crying at work is not a pretty thing but I am totally doing it!  I love this story!  Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 16

He said the three words!!!  So exciting.  Can’t wait for the next chapter.  I want to find out how Bella responds!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 16

Newton deserved even more than he got.  Too many men get away with that crap... Esp those in professional sports

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2018 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow! Just wow. Nice work. The struggle paid off. I know this had to be hard to write. Good job! Brilliant!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2018 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

He is going down.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2018 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh B you are in denialville with the not loving him.   Wonder how the trial C mentioned will help out.  You are making me hopefull for  a happy ending.   OMG Newton is a sleezeball.  Thank goodness Seth was there.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2018 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

I can understand her wanting to not rope E into something but he's a big boy and can make his own decisions.  Carlisle's parents....jeez.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2018 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 15

Well a lot has happened since my last read. I don't know what to say really and then this ending happens. Wow. 

Always supporting those that can, working hard. Thanks for continuing to update.

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2018 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMG!!!!! Its soooooo good!!! I thought you were giving up on this one. So happy that you are writing again.

Author's Response:

I never give up on stories. I may slow as hell, but I never give up! 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2018 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 15

I am loving this story so much.  I love when I can become part of the story with the characters and that’s something I’ve always been able to do with stories.  This one has definitely pulled me and made me cry with Bella.  I can’t wait for more.  

Good luck with your second job.  I have 3 now, so I know how little free time we get.  ðŸ˜Š

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2018 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 15

Mike is a dead man OMFG he needs more than a broken nose.  I hope the trial will work and Bella will not fight about doing it.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2018 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow Edward truly cares for her but she won’t let him and damn poor Bella I hope Mike gets band from the game 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2018 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 15

Whoa...go seth

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh no

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh NO! Edward's gonna Kill him!

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh, a little glimmer of hope from Carlisle! But, I don't blame Bella for not getting her hopes up. Hope it comes true. 

And, damn that Mike Newton! What an ass. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 15

I say let Alice and esme teach this ass hole to respect women

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 15

I hate jack ass rapists.   grrrrr...........

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2018 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh my I am so conflicted it is such a beautiful love story but heartbreaking all at the same time I want to smile and cry at the same time 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2018 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 14

Love  this story  so much!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2018 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2018 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 14

You're Back!!!! Yay!!! I love this story and these characters!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2018 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2018 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

I just don't see how this story can end without me bawling like a dam baby.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

Can understand her trepidation about wanting to get something going with E.  Newton is a sleezeball.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

aww for meeting Seth again.   Newton is just a foul POS.   Yummy lemony time

dl

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2017 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 13

It is time she is a little selfish and I dont think Edward will have it any other way.  Newton is a dick head.  See you next month.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2017 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more 💙 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 13

My heart breaks for Bella and Edward!  I hope they can come up with something. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 13

Esme is the selfish one. Why shouldn't Bella enjoy her life. Edward knows what is going on in Bella's oife. He wants to be with her. It is also his choice. Esme likes the power in controlling Bella.  She should leave with Edward and enjoy seeing the world together. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 13

This story is so dam sad.  I just can't think how you are ever gonna get close to around that.

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 13

*heart* 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 12

WOW I dont think he will be able to let her go.  Find a cure please

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2017 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it can't wait for more 💙 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh my so beautiful but heard at the same time

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

I like this so much!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 12

I wish she would give Edward a real chance. He would see that she lived her life to the fullest.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2017 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2017 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 12

I don't know who was more of a douche in this chapter.....Alice or Newton

I feel good that Bella and Edward are progressing but sad that all Bella sees is an ending.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2017 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

Edward is so sweet. Carlisle is right. Bella pushes everyone away. She needs to truly live and not wait for the worst.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2017 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it can't wait for more 💙 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2017 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 11

Glad  you're  back with this stiry!  Keep  up  the  great  work ! 

Reviewer: dms1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2017 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 11

Happy to see update!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 11

You need to do what is important and that is you.  Bella will not scare Edward off he cares no matter what she says and she is happy he does

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 11

Hello I found this on Facebook and I love it more please 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 11

Glad he's sticking with her

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 11

Sounds like they are getting closer despite what Bella thinks she wants.

Reviewer: BellaSC23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

Omg!!!! I'm seriously ugly crying right now. I can't stop reading. Great story.

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