Date: 08 Oct 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 08 Oct 2016 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lol...read the review after mine and almost died, Ed is Edwards grandfather? As soon as I read it I was like, how did I miss that...lol
Date: 08 Oct 2016 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
Nice full circle here.. I am glad many things have come to light for Bella. I am excited for Edward to learn of these things as well in the next chapter. I hope he goes crazy and puts up a slight fight with all the people who have caused him and Bella pain. I am how ever confused about Edwards dad.. Wouldn't he know his son is a Chimera? Thanks for the update, glad you're feeling better..
Date: 08 Oct 2016 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
I can't wait to find out how the bitch (yes we all know it was Alice) kept the letter away from him.........
Really liked this chapter, wasn't to heavy..... great job ladies.
I worked it out ...... Ed's Edwards grandfather......
This is going to cause trouble though cause they will think that she has been leading his grandfather on so that he (Ed) will buy her stuff.........
Bleeping Alice.....
Jasper nothing but a f***** wimp......please let him grow some balls...... asswipe (Jasper)
I think Edward is going to shit himself looking at Ethan......
That thru me that Uley didn't rape her....
I reckon Alice paid them to do it & I'm thinking that maybe Alice bit her hmmmmm.
PS: good luck with the test results.
Date: 08 Oct 2016 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella has so many people that care about her now. I'm glad that Jessica and Lauren never gave up on their friend and are still in her life making sure she's okay. And James and Vicky are there for her too. Thank goodness for James' cousin, Mike, who saw Bella's dad for who he really was. All of these people along with Kate, Mike's parents Frank and Sasha, and Jessica and Lauren's parents Charlotte and Peter, step in to become the family she always needed and deserved. I feel the love they all have for her. And they help her to move on to a better life for her and Ethan. Now Edward returns to complicate her life once again.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2016 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
I want to know so badly did he get the letter?
Date: 07 Oct 2016 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
I don't believe Angela. She seems surprised that Edward is interested in trying to pursue a relationship without sex or kissing first. Since they've only had just a sexual relationship she's going have to want that. Personally I think she wants to keep both Ben and Edward. She likes the idea of being Alice's sister-in-law because they're already best friends, but maybe she's also attracted to the Cullen family money and prestige, and Edward's occupation. Maybe she wasn't happy just being fuckbuddies with Edward, and wanted more and Edward was wrong thinking she was okay with what they had. Or maybe Alice is just so desperate for Angela to be part of her family that she's convinced Angela that she wants more from Edward than she really does. Either way, with Edward going slow I think he's going to decide that Angela is not the woman he wants to be with.
Date: 07 Oct 2016 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 18
your stories are always so detailed and have enjoyed
reading them. i didnt want you to misunderstand my previous post
regarding my frustration at bella which is not completely uncommon
in some of the fanfics. many of her behavior/character befuddles me
and i just want to shake some sense into her sometimes...
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06 Oct 2016 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
This chapter not only gives us a load of information, but also gives me hope. I'm so glad Bella has all this support around her now. I'm hoping that Edward will begin to see the big picture and just how much Alice and Angela twisted everything he thought he knew. I am also hoping both of them get their cumuppance.
Date: 06 Oct 2016 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
i realize bella is the victim in all this but,
she is being just too stupid, too timid. everything
in this story is going too too slow and bella is too
too frustrating.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2016 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks for fast tracking Bella through the roughest part of her discoveries.
Her adoptive family has really rallied around her and Ethan.
If Ulley didn't rape her than it has to be someone that knew her and her family. Could it have been Jacob?
How close is Mike to learning the identity of the rapist? Who would be dumb enough to return her clothes from the night of the attack?
I'm wondering how Edward figured out where Bella worked?
How old is Ethan now? I've lost track of his birthday.
Date: 06 Oct 2016 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 18
Your story makes me cry for her pain because it's so beautifully written . Keep on <3
Date: 06 Oct 2016 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
WOW!!! Thank you for such a wonderful chapter1 Great chapter
Date: 06 Oct 2016 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Gee this chapter covered a lot of territory. So pleased she has such good support. The ending was a good way to round off the chapter. Thanks
Date: 06 Oct 2016 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
glad b is healing and finding new people who care. thinking pap ed is e's grandfather and that he know's the truth. wondering what happened to the letter b sent . . . did alice, angela or jas intercept? can't wait for ali and ang to get what is coming to them . . . for their lies that ultimately led to b going to the party and being raped . . . just ugh!!! can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 06 Oct 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 18
This is good but I still want bad this to happen to Alice and Angela.
Date: 06 Oct 2016 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG I loved this chapter so much healing for her and a family she deserves and needs. I am willing to bet Edward never got her letter Alice or Angela got to it.
Date: 06 Oct 2016 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
This chapter was so worth the wait... Through this whole story I've been trying to Remember the name of that sort of DNA ... This is a story that I look forward to reading...d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;
Date: 05 Oct 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am glad that Bella is has sone many people that are helping support her. I am assuming that Mike did not get any DNA off her clothes since there was nothing else mentioned about who raped her. I am glad that Bella was pregnant before her rape. Glad that is it Edward. I have a feeling that Edward did not get Bella's letter. Can't wait to get Edward's POV.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
OH my heavens... I'm anixously waiting for the next update... you could have mercy and post early, lol. Someone is running interference with Bella's attempted contact to Edward. Lord have mercy, please let him see Ethan is his baby this time after all the time he's missed because of Alice and Angela. *crossing fingers he's not made a life with Angela*
Sherry
Date: 05 Oct 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
:O :O cant wait to read that
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG!!! YES!!!! Finally - Bella has grown a brain cell and realized how Alice, Angela and every other person in Edward's life has screwed around with their relationship. If they had just left them alone, none of this would have happened. Massive Miscommunication to nth degree. Both are to blame but at least Bella tried to reach out to Edward. I have a feeling the letter she sent was intercepted by Alice, Angela or Jasper and Edward never got it.
I think Edward was severely hurt by the false DNA results...and deep down inside he knew Ethan was his but he let his evil sister spew her lies and her bitch of friend was so desperate, she went along with it.
I think Edward wandered into the Diner by accident (or Karma finally stepped in) and has seen the proof in his son's face; Ethan is his.
I cannot wait to hear what Edward has to say.
I'm so glad you all did the time jump the way you did. It felt very fluid and not like you glossed over or skipped anything. I am curious to see if they ever catch who raped Bella. I'm thinking it may be more than one (cringe) but if not, hope his balls get nailed to the wall.
I think what will happen next is Edward is going to be in shock, disbelief and may not know how to process it. Just hope Angela is finally out of the picture....would be nice if Esme was with Edward so she could see the spiiting image of her son in her grandson.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward should have come a lot sooner
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope she smacks him
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well happy to read that Bella is doing better and is around people who truly care for her. Also she finally knows what happened to her and is getting the help she needs. Edward messed up and I think he is already begun paying for it. He missed a lot time with little Ethan. As for Ed what nice surprise!! Can't wait for Epov!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 18
See this is why i waited to read until now, I think i will backpeddle once chapter 19 comes out, and then instead of starting there i will read from beginning to there. I didnt want to not read this story becuase i always love your work, but seriously i think Bella needs to make Edward work for everything at this point on.
Date: 05 Oct 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward's grandfather could not have missed that Ethan looks like Edward. He probably set them up. Thanks for the great tien in chapter.
Date: 05 Oct 2016 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'll try not to hate edward...but I still want him to grovel and feel guilty for missing out on Ethan and for what he did to Bella and the things he said, I still want her to throw his words back in his face that too much has happened that they can't be anything more. If he lets alice, jasper, and Angela stay in his life after all this, their part in her rape and Ethan condition...then he is not redeemable. There is no forgiveness for those 3, edward maybe can can be redeemed. I really hope Bella gets a bf before her and Edward ever go that path as she needs to try other fish, ones without psychotic family and friends. I'm thinking Angela or alice had something to do with that missing 3rd page. Bellas rape has changed her, and Edward can't expect those scares to heal completely and her to just let him in so fast. I'm thinking alice or Angela also dystroyed that letter she sent and he never saw it. I can't wait for the next update...this story has evoked all my emotions great job
Date: 05 Oct 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love the chapter. I'm glad Bella has friends that have become her family. Can't wait to see Edward's response to seeing Ethan.
Date: 05 Oct 2016 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
I knew she was Rape, I had hoped that he wasn't Ethan's father. Ed, is Edward's grandfather right. Has he shared pics of Bella and Ethan with Edward, how else would he know where to find her.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
If it were me, I would kick his ass from the restaurant. It is so cool to read that Bella is doing good for herself and Ethan, for a moment I thought that the lone gentleman was Emmet, but grandpa Ed is a warm surprise.
I hope everything in your real life get better and that the biopsy come clear of anything malign. God bless you all.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
It was scary for her to walk into that but in the long run I think it was for the best. She needed to get her bearings straight for herself and her child. She couldn't do that living under Double A's Evil.
Please don't have her fall right back into his arms! I would hope that she's a more self confident person and mother now. Allow him to be a part of his sons life but take everything else slow.
Date: 05 Oct 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait for chapter 19 and seeing Edwards POV
Date: 05 Oct 2016 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yes can't wait for more
Date: 05 Oct 2016 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love it. I'm sure that Ed is Edward's grandpa.
Date: 05 Oct 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm just afraid that Edward went there after finding out who his grandfather has been having lunch with. I'm sure it will be seen as her trying to manipulate another member of his family. The good thing is I can't see his grandfather letting anyone say anything bad about Bella or Ethan!
Date: 05 Oct 2016 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
Sadly I can understand E's reluctance. Hard to argue with 2 failed DNA tests as well as his "family" feeding poison into his ears.
OMG So Glad Mike and everyone else are helping her out. Hope they find the scumbag soon. oooh Kate and the mysterious third page has me entrigued. Not sure I like the Tanya/Rose thing
Good that he sees Ethan, but wonder how he found her. Tanya/Rose maybe???
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
Someone needs to kick Alice and Angela's asses, well Jasper too. Bella needs to tell Edward everything they've done and not keep everything to herself.
Date: 03 Oct 2016 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
i think angela and alice had something to do with the D.N.A test
Date: 03 Oct 2016 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
I am sorry but I think Edward right now is one stupid jackass! The real victims are Bella and little Ethan. I hope that the deceit that Alice and Angela is pulling off is discovered and soon. What a fool Edward will think he is and if he is not blaming himself for the situation now, he will when he finds out that Angela with help from Alice has been playing him. I wonder if there is a Ben or was that someway to keep Edward at Angela's side.? As for this Alice, she can fall in a sinkhole and stay there. I do not think I have ever read such an evil Alice and a in mature Alice. I hope when this is all over and Edward goes back to Bella on his damn knees begging for forgiveness that Alice's parents wise up about their daughter and take away all finical help except taking in Alice's baby to raise. Alice to me makes a horrible mother. Also what ever happen to the Edward who told his own father it would not matter if Bella's son was not his own flesh and blood, guess he has forgotten about that. So, so, so many people are going to have to humble themselves to Bella and ask no beg for forgiveness and if I was Bella as of today I would tell them all to go to hell and slam the door in their faces. They do need to have a major talk, tell the truth on everything that they know and I am sure both will be surprised at what is found out and I think Edward will be the one who is more in shock than Bella will be, his whole world as he knows it will come tumbling down!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2016 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 17
Angela is still up to hear old tricks. She keeps Ben on the shelf in case Edward pushes her away.
Alice will find ways to interfere.
It's sad that Jasper has turned away from his friendship with Edward.
Date: 01 Oct 2016 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
Still hope Alice gets her come upeance.
Glad Esme stepped in, I think maybe she might put two & two together & work it out what happened to Bella.
Angela's still being a sneaking coniving Bitch...... I think she wants to sleep with Edward to get pregnant so that he will fully commit to her.
Still don't think Alice's baby belong's to Jasper.....bitch.... lol... a bit to conveinent if you ask me.
How someone tappered with the 2nd DNA results ...... hmmmm the only thing I can think of is that nurse that wanted to call Charlie & I suspect did call him since he turned up...heard them talking & told either Angela again or Charlie..... someone had to have over heard.
Can't wait for the next chapters
Ps: All the best for your tests
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2016 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 17
Edward has played perfectly into alice & angela's scheme.
Date: 01 Oct 2016 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow I'm sure Alice and Angela messed with DNA
Date: 30 Sep 2016 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
I can see Edward's point of view from the secong DNA test. I am anxious to see how you will write this. Alice is an evil manipulator. I don't trust Angela
Date: 29 Sep 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well damn I'm not sure I'm feeling this Edward at all but I'll keep going.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2016 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
Why do I have a feeling Angela is behind the DNA tests. So much heartache. I really hope Edward realizes he's making a mistake soon.
Sherry
Date: 29 Sep 2016 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Why do I get the feeling that Gianna is in on the deception? Ugh Now Charlie is getting into Edwards head too. Gawd you are killing me here. At least Kate and Elezar both seem to be on her side.....at least I hope so (besides Jess&L).
B is right to be worried about the test issue. Thinking someone will mix up the tests even after kate does them. The transport person, someone in the new lab, someone making the report.....its obvious her sperm donor has long reaching fingers.
Ugh Angela is getting exactly what she wants and Alice is such a witch
Date: 29 Sep 2016 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 17
ali or ang didn't change their bitchy ways. can't wait for the truth to come out. it's definitely time for some ass kickings and can't wait for carlisle to have to eat crow. even though he doesn't know the truth, he was pretty awful to b, ugh, just looking forward to some relief in the angst department
Date: 29 Sep 2016 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
Angela is just acting the good guy she has figured out how to deal with Edward. Alice is the evil of the evil and I cant wait till she gets what is coming to her.
Date: 29 Sep 2016 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
How can Alice be so evil and Jasper has went to the dark side.
Date: 29 Sep 2016 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
I just want to slap someone I would chose Alice first lol
Date: 29 Sep 2016 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
I think Edward is an ass, as for the DNA, I do believe Angela had a hand in the first one. The second one I'll bet someone who works in the NICU heard them talking about getting a second DNA, and told Angela. She works in a lab, I would be willing to bet that she knows others who works in labs. I wouldn't be surprise to find out that the person who heard them talking about it suggested, the new lab and Angela had a buddy there. In another words I think she is up to know good, with Alices help of course. I still say Alice's baby isn't Jaspers and that is how this is all going to come out. Jasper will find out she isn't his and he will confess to Edward everything that Alice and Angela has been up too.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2016 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
I don't think Alice is staying away at all. She's probably the one scheming & coaching Angela.
As far as Bastward, he's very gullible & too trusting of the people around him.
Date: 29 Sep 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
Glad Bella and baby Ethan are both ok. Please don't let Uley be the baby's daddy. Will we ever get others POV, like Alice, Charlie, or Uley? How or if they all got together and spied on Bella. Can't wait to find out everything.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2016 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well that was intense😟!! Poor baby Ethan. Edward well he is trying in his way I'm glad he realize all the stress he put her through. And I'm actually glad Bella is beginning to speak up and take control of her own life. Angela is so shady Alice is B and Charlie is disgusting. Can't wait for the next update and hope everything is well with you.
Date: 28 Sep 2016 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
She is a nasty sneaky thing (Angela) I know it!!! I really hope we don't find out Edward isn't Ethan's father cause that would break my heart. But I want Edward to feel like the low life he is when he sees her and his son again and I hope she makes him grovel for a while and doesn't just forgive and forget 😭
Date: 28 Sep 2016 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
I don't understand. How can the baby not be his if she didn't have sex with anyone else? Did Alice and/or Angela do something? Did someone else have sex with her without her knowing it? I want so much for the baby to be his....
Good luck with your procedure...
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2016 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG...u almost killed Ethan! Wtf Charlie??? So what is Bella remembering? Someone touched her...who?
Date: 28 Sep 2016 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well that was gut wrenching you had me crying in the car line for afternoon pick up... And Angela just makes me mad at how pushy she is that she just can't let it go that he's not that into her
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2016 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
I don't trust Angela one bit
Date: 28 Sep 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
I wonder how they interfered with the 2nd test..
Angela is up to something & I think as long as Alice thinks Edward cares about Bella she will be playing games. Good for Bella getting her own place. Good for Edward not jumping into bed with Angela immediately. I am amazed Charlie showed up. I thought he was through with her. I guess he's more interested in making sure she gets punished. Im not surprised he lied to Edward.
Edward needs to talk with Bella's friends to understand what her relationship with her parents is like
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
I swear this story gives me heart failure and anxiety every time.
Damn straight I think Angela and Alice have something to do with the DNA testing. Angela should quit the lab and become an actress because she's staring in the role of her lifetime. Friends with Benefits, best way to get over an old love is to get under an new one?? Oh yes, Angela has an agenda.
I think there's more to Alice and Jasper as well...how can Jasper do a 180? Alice is the puppet master and she's got everyone wrapped up tight. Seems like Esme is the least fooled by her daughter. So difficult to understand how no one else sees Alice for the conniving, deceiptful bitch she really is.
I don't understand why the blood tests are coming back false but there has to be a way to prove Edward is the father.
Edward hit the nail on the head when he said when its only him and Bella, it all seems fine. Happiness disappears when others are involved and we all know how much interference there has been from the beginning.
Hope once we get up to the prologue, things will move along. I'm glad Edward put restrictions on dating Angela. No kissing and Thank God, no sex!!! Wouldn't put it past Angela to get knocked up herself.
Date: 28 Sep 2016 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
I think Angela is a fake just like Alice. They are both bitches. I hope Edward realizes how they really are. I know it takes a while for him to grow up. Bella needs to grow up too and not believe everything her parents think. Edward also needs to realize Bella's parents are abusive and mean to her.
Date: 28 Sep 2016 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Bella's parents are not parents they are just shit. Love Jess and Lauren they are the best. I want to know what Alice told Edward?
Date: 28 Sep 2016 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
i'm really surprised Edward and Alice's parents have not taken some sort of action with Alice's behavior
Date: 28 Sep 2016 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
Okay, so i assume everyone is commenting on what bitch Alice is... grrrr
Date: 28 Sep 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
really enjoying your story though it's been difficult for me to wrap my head around the fact Jess and Lauren are nice while Alice and Angela are evil bitches... Old reading habits die hard..lol Your stories always keep up on our toes and thinking that's for sure.. great job ladies
Date: 27 Sep 2016 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
So I'm thinking Angela as well sweet sister Alice may have had something to do with the DNA testing results. Seems Alice & Bella are not BFF in this tale
Date: 27 Sep 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
okay,, so far i'm like Jess and Lauren.. I'm sort of hoping they continue to be the nice friends to Bella they seem to be. Not sure her fragile ego could handle it if they turned into "bad guys"..
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
Kasi, please do what ever is necessary to take care of yourself first. The stories can wait.
I have to confess that every time I see a new chapter of this story appear in my inbox I hold off reading it. There is something about this storyline that makes me apprehensive. Maybe the underlying family stresses hit close to home. Bella's upbringing is a major part of that feeling. I'm biding my time because I know you two believe in HEA endings. Thank goodness. Lol.
Date: 27 Sep 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
sooooo, really not like liking daddy Charlie at the moment. At least Jess and Lauren are looking out for her.
Date: 26 Sep 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
I only wish Bella had smacked Alice a long time ago. So I'm thinking there is a good chance that Alice's baby is actually not Jasper's, the conception date is off and she is way too sneaky. I honestly think she was cheating on him, maybe with Sam, and is trying to pass it off as Jasper's.
Date: 26 Sep 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 13
Jasper is an ass, what lies had Alice told him to get him to believe Bella is a skank? Or is he just so pussy whipped by Alice he will follow her lead no matter what? I'm thinking Sam assaulted Bella, but no penetration and that's why she is so leery of being touched.
Can I just say I want to hit Alice in the face with a big brick? Angela too!
Date: 26 Sep 2016 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh man, please tell me Bella wasn't raped, because I'm sure she got a date rape drug given to her.
Date: 25 Sep 2016 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
Having read the prologue then seeing in this chapter the screw up Angela did on the DNA tests for another family, I'm going to take a stab in the dark and say that Angela rigged the DNA tests both times to make it appear that Edward is not Ethan's father...
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2016 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
I really wish I could rip Alice, Angela and Charlie a new asshole. Those three are the worst!!! Jasper too. I really wish Bella would tell Edward about her parents. He really needs to know. The baby is coming!!! I really want to see Edward's reaction to his child.
Sherry
Date: 25 Sep 2016 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
So much drama in this story... I wish you would let Edward find some truth in what's been going on with her or her with him. Let Edward have it out with Lauren and Jessica and find out the truth...then let him go and knock out Uley or something. I mean..something because there is only so much you can take when you mistrust someone or harbor bad feelings towards them. Great story! I love reading it with that being said..
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
Finally she got a good hit in!!
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
P.s not serious mean it in good fun!! Hope everything goes well with ur surgery
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
I like this story but I will hate u forever if the baby isn't Edwards and is that asshole teachers!!! Cuz then it proves Alice and everyone rite
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
I still want to bitch slap Alice
Once again please tell me she gets her come upance in the end...Jasper wakes up to himself.
I actually thought that she might be faking her pregnacie all along.....drats that she wasn't.
Yeah & I still want to bitch slap Edward twice.
Come on Lauren & Jess.
Ps: Be well & take care of yourself first.
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Alice is so jealous of anyone showing Bella attention. Poor Edward is stuck in the middle between Bella and Alice. Bella needs to talk to Jessica and Lauren. They are such good friends and support for Bella. Alice deserved that slap. I hope some day her family sees the selfish conniving person she is. That they see how badly she's hurt Bella.
Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
I don't get what is going on with Jasper. Why is he taking Alice's side? Alice is such a major bitch. Poor Edward is so confused.
Date: 24 Sep 2016 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
I hate this Alice. She is such a witch. Why didn't anyone notice that Jess and Lauren were not there?
Date: 24 Sep 2016 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
It's about time she stood up for herself, truth be known I think Esme is just as bad as Alice, did she know that Alice and Angela called Bella's dad. I guess we all know who has been informing Charlie. I figured as much, between her and professer asshole. Really Angela is any thing but a victim, a bitch with a plan to get Edward, God I can wait until they are exposed as the little bitches that they really are. I hope that baby Alice had isn't really Jasper's I hate seeing him being so wimpy like he is. I think at this point the only way I could forgive Jasper is if he comes out and tells Edward the truth.
Date: 24 Sep 2016 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
This is agonising
like watching a crash you can't turn your head away from
Bella has real issues but Edward really has no excuse
he hasn't once asked Bella anything directly
assume assume assume makes an ass out if you and me!
I want to grab them both and mediate a sit down.
grrr lol
thanks
Date: 24 Sep 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
I hope everything is ok with you. Yes I am glad that Bella smacked Alice. I can't believe that her parents told that couple they could have Bella's baby. I am thinking that when Bella was drugged that she was ganged raped and one of those guys is her baby's daddy. But Bella does not know that she was raped so she believes she has only had sex with Edward and that is why she is so adamant that Edward is the father.
Date: 24 Sep 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is just having so much bad luck. I am really worried about Bella. No one is going to hire a girl that is six months pregnant knowing that she will need off when she has the baby. Alice or someone set her up at work. Charlie is an ass. I thought Bella was there on a scholarship.
Date: 24 Sep 2016 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
The smack wasn't nearly good enough, but at least it was something.
Hope your medical issues resolve themselves in your favor.
Date: 24 Sep 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
gah . . . so much angst!! hoping poor b will get a reprieve soon. so hoping ali, jas, ang and e get a major ass kicking. hoping when the truth is finally learned, b doesn't let them off the hook so easily. wondering if ulley did something to here mentally to make her so paranoid and what alice knows about it.
hope you are ok and feel better soon.
Date: 23 Sep 2016 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
extremely angst filled in regards to b. wondering when she will catch a break.
not sure about e and if he will be able to redeem himself . . . he seems smart overall but is acting pretty dumb in handling the situation and not finding out more himself, considering so many weird things are going on, and he has issues with alice himself
Date: 23 Sep 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
Please take care of yourself and your family first. Everything else takes a backseat.
I am thrilled that Bella Smacked Alice I only wish she'd d smacked her father as well. Interesting choice of words on Charlie's part that he heard she tried to sleep with a professor. Does that mean that Uley didn't rape her or he just didn't have the guts to tell his friend that he did?
Date: 23 Sep 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2016 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm glad she slapped Alice. Your personal lives and health do come first
Date: 23 Sep 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
So far I do like the concept of this story, and I know that Bella is a very shelter person, it almost seems she grew up in a cult, the only negative part of this story is that I feel it goes around in circles with the same issue. Obviously there is a huge lack of miscommunication but I would think at some point she would mention what Alice and Angela actually done instead of suffering in silence, which is what Bella seem to do and that get a bit tiring at some point so I do hope after the baby she grows a backbone. I wonder if Alice has cheated on Jasper? I do hope that is the case. I wonder if you will say what actually happened to Bella in the night of the party when she black out. Also, what is up with Jasper? Does Alice have a mental disease? Her actions are not from a sane person, no matter how much you hate someone and want them to be with you best friend. I wonder what will be the dynamic when Emmett arrives. Keep going and get better