Date: 17 Jul 2021 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot to me.
Date: 03 Aug 2017 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 30
Really nice ending. Thank you for writing.
Author's Response:
You are an awesome reviewer. I've read your reviews on others too. You are so encouraging, even when giving helpful advise. Thank you so much.
Date: 03 Aug 2017 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 29
Good chapter. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2017 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 28
Really good read. Thank you
Date: 03 Aug 2017 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 27
Another good chapter. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2017 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow. Good chapter. Good sense of humour. But all those mouths to feed. Thank goodness my name's not Esme. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2017 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 25
This chapter was so much fun and very interesting. I can picture Carlisle never allowing those boys to forget who scored all those points. I would image the 'reminder' would consist of a knowing smile and a raised eyebrow. Lol. Thank you. Yes. I'm procrastinating. Enough said. ;P
Date: 22 Jul 2017 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
Really good. Thanks
Date: 22 Jul 2017 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
Really good. Thanks
Date: 22 Jul 2017 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
Lol. Testy hormones with Bella laying down the law. ;D
Author's Response:
You make my heart feel so good. Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
Date: 21 Jul 2017 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
Sweet. I wonder if Charlie will mate with Tanya or Irina. Thanks
Date: 21 Jul 2017 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 21 Jul 2017 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
Really good chapter. Thanks
Date: 21 Jul 2017 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Some nice excitement in this chapter. Thanks
Date: 21 Jul 2017 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
Good chapter. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2017 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 21 Jul 2017 6:02 AM Title: CHAPTER 10 DECISIONS, WEDDINGS
Sweet. Thanks
Date: 21 Jul 2017 5:46 AM Title: CHAPTER 9 RELAXATION AND PROCESSING
Sweet.
Date: 21 Jul 2017 5:36 AM Title: CHAPTER 8 CONFRONTATIONS
Pleasantly surprised by Rose and Bella standing up to their parents. Good chapter.
Date: 21 Jul 2017 4:55 AM Title: CHAPTER 7 SOULS’ GUARDIAN
Interesting research from Carlisle and Alice
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2017 4:20 AM Title: CHAPTER 6 MEETING YOUR SOULMATES (2012 January Semester)
Exciting and interesting. Thanks
Date: 21 Jul 2017 3:27 AM Title: CHAPTER 5 MOVING TO SEATTLE
Sweet. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you so nuch. We appriecate your comments and taking the time to do so.
Author's Response:
Thank you so nuch. We appriecate your comments and taking the time to do so.
Date: 21 Jul 2017 2:24 AM Title: CHAPTER 4 TWO SOULS MISSING (Year 2011)
A lovely sweet chapter.
Date: 21 Jul 2017 2:17 AM Title: CHAPTER 3 GROWING FAMILY
Good chapter. Enjoying the changes in their backgrounds
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2017 1:26 AM Title: CHAPTER 2 - NEW FAMILY
Lovely chapter. Thank you
Date: 21 Jul 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - HISTORY
Good start.
Date: 03 May 2017 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 30
I really liked the story ! And I loved the fact that Aro was good for once!
Date: 27 Apr 2017 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
That was great. Congratulations on completing it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. We are working on two outtakes. Will post when we can.
Date: 03 Apr 2017 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 28
It's great. Lots of information. Had to read it twice. Lol
Happy writing.
Date: 29 Mar 2017 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 27
Such sweet babies. Happy writing..
Author's Response:
Your reviews are so welcome to us. Thank you so much.
Date: 28 Mar 2017 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 26
That's great, babies.. Happy writing..
Date: 28 Mar 2017 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 26
That's great, babies.. Happy writing..
Date: 24 Mar 2017 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
2 chapters today, yeah. Thank you. Happy writing.
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
This was so sweet I can't wait for more
Author's Response:
I'm getting reading to post 22. 23 and 24 are being edited. Thank you so much. I lost my first editor (the love of my life) to his work over load. He was still going to try, but I want his free time with us doing other things. Ended at chapter 11. Just got a new editor at chapter 22. Editor is awesome. Hope it make reading easier. Thank you so much.
Date: 20 Jul 2016 6:15 PM Title: CHAPTER 9 RELAXATION AND PROCESSING
it's a cute little story so far.
the only objection i have is having both rose
and bella be soulmates of emmet and edward
the soul protectors...what are the chances?
plus, it's just too much.
it detracts from the importance of it all,
i feel to have "so many" people involved. instead
of this special feeling between 2, it just seems not as special
to have it happened to 4...
Author's Response:
Well, I just felt everything was always Bella this and Bella that. I wanted a closer bond with Rose. So what if they were sisters and they relied on each other. Thus you have DNA and Gene makeup playing a roll. I wanted Bella seeing to Edward's needs and wants instead of only her's. I wanted a better balance/maturity level between them and everyone else. Edward always felt Emmett was more of a brother, so I let them have that bond. I gave them something they could rely on each other and talk through things that no one else could feel what they feel. Yes we have Carlisle, but brothers talk about things they don't want to say to Dads. I see your point and I did weight that option before starting, but in the long run I was happier this route. It's fantasy and anything can happen that your imagination can dream of hopefully. Thank you so much for sharing you points with me. You will find this story leaves so much open for anyone to take it and run with it from so many directions. If it sparks a story from this for you run with. I will not get mad. Thank you again. P.S. just let me know so I can follow.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2016 3:36 AM Title: CHAPTER 2 - NEW FAMILY
That was awesome
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I have finished, 30 chapters. My Editor/ the love of my life is very slow. Trying really hard to get it out on a regular base. Again thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 1 - HISTORY
Interesting start