Date: 03 Feb 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 54
Longer chapters please
Date: 02 Feb 2017 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 54
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’—
Date: 02 Feb 2017 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 54
Sounds like Dr Crock has a painful death coming his way along with the guards.
Date: 02 Feb 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 54
I hope her captors burn in Hell.
Date: 02 Feb 2017 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 54
OMGOSH!!!!!I hope Edward and the pack get there before they can do any more to Bella. What about the drug they just injected her with, will it hurt the baby? I always get excited when I get your update notice.
Date: 02 Feb 2017 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 54
I hope Edward gets there soon
Date: 02 Feb 2017 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 54
Them bastards better die
Date: 01 Feb 2017 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 53
Oh shit....please tell me they get there in time!!!
Date: 01 Feb 2017 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 53
not cool to just leave us hanging like that.... please update soon. I love this story. You know a mothers instincts are strong enough to break any restraints.... just saying. lol
Date: 31 Jan 2017 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 53
hope it is the right place and they get to b before something really bad happens
Date: 31 Jan 2017 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 53
Please save their pup or litter.
Date: 31 Jan 2017 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 53
Go Edward!! Go!!! lol
Date: 30 Jan 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 53
Well at least they have something to go on
Date: 30 Jan 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 52
Wow Sounds like a whole lot of people need to be added to the Kill list.
Date: 30 Jan 2017 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 53
I hope he gets to Bella in time.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 30 Jan 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 53
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Date: 30 Jan 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 53
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Date: 30 Jan 2017 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 53
Damn....now what?
Great update
Date: 30 Jan 2017 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 53
I hope that is where they have Bella so they can get her before they do anything to the baby
Date: 30 Jan 2017 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 53
OMG Please don't let them hurt Bella's baby. I'm nearly in tears here... I love your work though.
Date: 30 Jan 2017 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 53
Oh I hope this is where they are keeping Bella and the other Alpha females.
Date: 30 Jan 2017 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 52
How sad to find out you are pregnant that way. I hope she can get away before they can take the baby away from her.
Date: 29 Jan 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 52
OH shit they cant hurt the baby NOOOOOOOOOO
Date: 29 Jan 2017 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 52
They can't hurt the baby!!! I hope the guys figure it out soon.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 29 Jan 2017 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 52
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’—
Date: 29 Jan 2017 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 52
Oh no, I sure hope Edward and the rest of the pack are able to rescue Bella and the other females before any harm can happen to any of them especially Bella ,
Date: 29 Jan 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 52
OMGosh!!!!!! I don't blame Bella for being upset. She will kill them all if she can.
Date: 29 Jan 2017 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 52
Well damn.... you have to have her kill them all and release the hostages OR Edward has to rescue them.
Date: 29 Jan 2017 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 52
I hope she can get away
Date: 19 Jan 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 51
uh oh. hopefully they find her soon
Date: 19 Jan 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 51
uh oh. hopefully they find her soon
Date: 19 Jan 2017 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 51
I hope Edward finds her soon
Date: 19 Jan 2017 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 51
OMG what are they going to do OMG
Date: 18 Jan 2017 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 51
Oh my. So other wolves are helping humans take the alpha females. Oh they will pay for that. Can't wait for Edward and the others to find out.
Date: 18 Jan 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 51
Sounds like something the gov't would do. Hmmm i wonder if her half breed status will help her somehow
Date: 18 Jan 2017 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 51
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Date: 18 Jan 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 50
OMG freaking out he was out for 8 hours
Date: 18 Jan 2017 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 50
This will be good for Bella because then she'll be able to find the other women. Hopefully they don't hurt her.
Date: 18 Jan 2017 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 50
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Date: 17 Jan 2017 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 50
Can't blame E for wanting to do something rather than rest
Date: 17 Jan 2017 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 50
Wow! Edward is going crazy.
Date: 17 Jan 2017 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 50
Edward is taking Bella being gone better than I thought.
Date: 15 Jan 2017 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 49
When Edward wakes up he is going to be so upset.
Date: 15 Jan 2017 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 49
When Edward wakes up he is going to be so upset.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 49
I knew her stubborn ass was going to cause problems.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 49
Poor edward, he's gonna blame himself. At least he knows how thE females got taken easily.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 49
Ack you are killing me. Are the wolf with no scent or magic hiding scent or humans. Again ACK. My head is spinning.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 49
Oh no!!!!!!
Date: 13 Jan 2017 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 49
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Date: 13 Jan 2017 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 49
Edward is not going to be happy
Date: 13 Jan 2017 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 49
OH shit they will be sorry for taking her
Date: 11 Jan 2017 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 48
Oh no you might disappear too!
Date: 10 Jan 2017 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 48
ooh they've got a new clue.
Date: 09 Jan 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 48
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Date: 08 Jan 2017 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 48
And then Bella disappears.......
Date: 08 Jan 2017 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 48
Edwards going to be pissed that she went after him...but maybe Bella will find out more about whats going on. Loved it and cant wait to read more!
Date: 08 Jan 2017 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 48
Is he taking her some place? Is he wanting to show her something?
Date: 08 Jan 2017 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 48
Oh for the love of crackers! Not a good idea Bella!!
Date: 08 Jan 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 48
Bella shouldn't be running into the forest alone
Date: 08 Jan 2017 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 48
Shit Shit Shit she should not have run after him. Edward is losing his shit right now.
Date: 08 Jan 2017 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 48
Oh that is not good. Edward is going to be pissed.
Date: 08 Jan 2017 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 48
Oh that is not good. Edward is going to be pissed.
Date: 07 Jan 2017 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 47
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Date: 06 Jan 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 47
Edward is going to lose his shit if something happens to her.
Date: 06 Jan 2017 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 47
Oh boy! Here comes more trouble!! ;)
Date: 06 Jan 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 47
B has the right idea.
Date: 06 Jan 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 47
B has the right idea.
Date: 06 Jan 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 47
Another updated!!!!!!!!! So ,excited!!!!! I am worried about the last sentence in this chapter.
Date: 06 Jan 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 46
If it is a kid maybe a female needs to talk to them. You the motherly method.
Date: 05 Jan 2017 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 46
Maybe had a girl talk to the kid and not some big old wolf dudes?
Date: 05 Jan 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 46
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Date: 05 Jan 2017 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 46
When they find out WOW heads will roll
Date: 05 Jan 2017 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 46
I'M betting on it being Jared and irina
Date: 04 Jan 2017 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 36
I love it so much the twist on the original plot is just amazing, a few incorrect things here and there but other than that it was truly amazing I was captivated by the intense love and protective behaviour from Edward towards Bella it truly brought me into the book. You are an amazing writer. Hope you write more soon.~R
Date: 03 Jan 2017 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 45
Nice that she is being so supportive.
Date: 03 Jan 2017 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 45
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Date: 03 Jan 2017 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 45
Such a kind female alpha!
Date: 03 Jan 2017 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 45
So glad to see them pulling together.