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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 54

Longer chapters please

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 54

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’—

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 54

Sounds like Dr Crock has a painful death coming his way along with the guards.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 54

good

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 54

I hope her captors burn in Hell.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 54

OMGOSH!!!!!I hope Edward and the pack get there before they can do any more to Bella.  What about the drug they just injected her with, will it hurt the baby? I always get excited when I get your update notice. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 54

I hope Edward gets there soon 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 54

Them bastards better die

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 53

Oh shit....please tell me they get there in time!!!

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 53

not cool to just leave us hanging like that.... please update soon. I love this story. You know a mothers instincts are strong enough to break any restraints.... just saying. lol

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 53

hope it is the right place and they get to b before something really bad happens 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 53

Please save their pup or litter.

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 53

Go Edward!! Go!!! lol

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 53

Well at least they have something to go on

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 52

Wow  Sounds like a whole lot of people need to be added to the Kill list.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 53

:) 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 53

I hope he gets to Bella in time.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 53

OMG!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 53

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 53

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 53

Damn....now what?

Great update

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 53

I hope that is where they have Bella so they can get her before they do anything to the baby

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 53

OMG Please don't let them hurt Bella's baby. I'm nearly in tears here... I love your work though. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 53

Oh I hope this is where they are keeping Bella and the other Alpha females. 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 52

How sad to find out you are pregnant that way. I hope she can get away before they can take the baby away from her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 52

OH shit they cant hurt the baby NOOOOOOOOOO

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 52

They can't hurt the baby!!! I hope the guys figure it out soon.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 52

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’—

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 52

yikes

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 52

Oh no, I sure hope Edward and the rest of the pack are able to rescue Bella and the other females before any harm can happen to any of them especially Bella ,

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 52

OMGosh!!!!!! I don't blame Bella for being upset.  She will kill them all if she can. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 52

Well damn.... you have to have her kill them all and release the hostages OR Edward has to rescue them.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 52

I hope she can get away 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 52

NO!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 51

uh oh. hopefully they find her soon

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 51

uh oh. hopefully they find her soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2017 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 51

I hope Edward finds her soon 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2017 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 51

OMG what are they going to do OMG

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 51

Oh my. So other wolves are helping humans take the alpha females. Oh they will pay for that. Can't wait for Edward and the others to find out. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 51

Wow

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 51

Sounds like something the gov't would do.  Hmmm i wonder if her half breed status will help her somehow

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 51

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 51

Very good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 50

OMG freaking out he was out for 8 hours

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 50

 This will be good for Bella because then she'll be able to find the other women.  Hopefully they don't hurt her.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 50

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 50

Can't blame E for wanting to do something rather than rest

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 50

Her family?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 50

Wow!  Edward is going crazy. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 49

Oh no

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 50

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 50

good

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 50

WOW!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 50

Edward is taking Bella being gone better than I thought.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2017 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 49

When Edward wakes up he is going to be so upset.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2017 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 49

When Edward wakes up he is going to be so upset.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 49

I knew her stubborn ass was going to cause problems.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 49

Poor edward, he's gonna blame himself. At least he knows how thE females got taken easily.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 49

Ack  you are killing me.  Are the wolf with no scent or magic hiding scent or humans.   Again ACK.  My head is spinning.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 49

Oh no!!!!!!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 49

OMG!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 49

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 49

Edward is not going to be happy 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 49

OH shit they will be sorry for taking her

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 49

good

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2017 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 48

Oh no you might disappear too! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2017 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 48

ooh they've got a new clue.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 48

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 48

And then Bella disappears.......

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 48

Edwards going to be pissed that she went after him...but maybe Bella will find out more about whats going on. Loved it and cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 48

Is he taking her some place? Is he wanting to show her something? 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 48

Oh for the love of crackers! Not a good idea Bella!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 48

Bella shouldn't be running into the forest alone 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 48

Shit Shit Shit she should not have run after him.  Edward is losing his shit right now.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 48

uh oh

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 48

Oh that is not good. Edward is going to be pissed. 

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 48

Oh that is not good. Edward is going to be pissed. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2017 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 47

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 47

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 47

uh oh

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 47

Edward is going to lose his shit if something happens to her.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 47

Oh boy! Here comes more trouble!! ;)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 47

B has the right idea.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 47

B has the right idea.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 47

Another updated!!!!!!!!! So ,excited!!!!! I am worried about the last sentence in this chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 46

If it is a kid maybe a female needs to talk to them. You the motherly method. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 46

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 46

Maybe had a girl talk to the kid and not some big old wolf dudes?

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 46

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 46

When they find out WOW heads will roll

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 46

I'M betting on it being Jared and irina 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 46

Great update.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 46

:) 

Reviewer: RHIRHI03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2017 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 36

I love it so much the twist on the original plot is just amazing, a few incorrect things here and there but other than that it was truly amazing I was captivated by the intense love and protective behaviour from Edward towards Bella it truly brought me into the book. You are an amazing writer. Hope you write more soon.~R

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 45

Nice that she is being so supportive.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 45

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 45

good

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 45

Such a kind female alpha! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 45

So glad to see them pulling together. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 45

:)

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