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Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 40

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 39

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 38

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 37

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 33

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it! 

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Date: 17 Mar 2017 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 22

I hate Irina! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 16

Fantastic chapter! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 15

Go Bella! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Bella! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

Awesome! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

Go Bella! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!  Poor girl! 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 59

So glad Jasper is on her side!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 59

Loved it 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 59

good

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 59

Very very good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 59

Glad Jasper found her.  Jared deserved what he got it seems. Traitor

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 59

Good chapters, don't wait so long to update please

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 59

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 59

Edward needs help but I am such he will be pissed if she helps or are they going for the wemon?

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 59

We have confirmation the Jared was working for the kidnappers. Now will someone help Edward?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 58

She is so smart Jard is or was a bad guy.  Thanks god she was found by Jasper.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 58

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 58

good

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 58

Yay!! finally friendly people!! Welcome back!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 58

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 58

OMGosh!!!!!! So excited that you are back. Missed you. Can't wait for another update.  

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 58

Thank goodness. Please don't let Jasper be in on it.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 58

Go Bad Ass Bella

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 58

ahh wish you would put POV on your pages. Helps. thanks

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 58

Jasper is always good.   : ) 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 58

Yay!!!! She will be safe now.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 58

Hopefully, Jasper is still a good guy. 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 58

YAY!!!!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 58

YAY!!!!

Reviewer: Roxie619 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 57

Please update when you can. I miss reading this story

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2017 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 57

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 57

Go E.  Go help your girl before Jared get her hurt

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 57

:) 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 57

Get him Edward! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 57

Get him, Edward.  Can't wait to see who is behind all of this. Also can't wait to see what Edward's reaction is to Bella being pregnant.  

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 57

Keep writing

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 57

Oh my!! So close!!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 57

Please let them find the females

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 57

Please let them find the females

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 57

OMG Edward rip his ass apart.

Reviewer: Lela Noah Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 57

Omg!!! I love love all you stories! Ur amazing at keeping me hooked!  

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 57

good

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 56

I really don't trust him!!!!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 56

Loved it can't wait for more 💗

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 56

Uh oh!!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 56

Please don't let her get screwed over 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 56

nooooooo You know that isn't going to turn out well.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 56

Yikes!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 56

Damn it......

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 56

I would not trust Jared. I would definitely keep him in front of me and not behind me. I know he cannot be there with Edward. He would be much more  Urgent to get her out of there

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 56

I don't trust Jared 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 56

don't think she should trust jared

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 56

No dont go just hit the bastard in the head.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 56

Don't go!

I'm so happy and excited with these frequent updates. Thank you.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 55

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 55

Hope the sapphire thing wasn't a setup

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 55

I hope Bella runs into Edward and the others.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 55

yikes

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 55

Damn it, now what .

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 55

Damn it, now what .

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 55

:) 

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 55

Hot damn.....they may make it after all! Hopefully the packs are waiting for them on the outside!!!! More soon please!!!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 55

Those poor women. I hope that they're not in more danger for trying to escape. Hopefully they get away.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 55

Oh I hope she gets out and runs into Edward and their pack. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 55

Got to love Sapphire they better not hurt her

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