Date: 16 Nov 2020 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 35
"I had loved him once and still would hate to have something bad happen to him; but if it came down to a choice between his life or Jasper's? Sorry Edward, I'll save a nice place on the mantle for your urn."
Lol the last line had me dying laughing.
Date: 02 Oct 2017 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 35
As much as I love your story I can understand why Jasper is pissed at Bella cause I would be to. She went behind his back and kept the fact that she called Edward from him when she promised she wouldn't keep things from him. And it's not Bellas place to decide who fights she's a newborn so she has no idea what it takes to win a war like Jasper does. But as I said I do love your story
Date: 27 Apr 2017 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 40
I know that Edward a duck for most of this story but I really want you to write a sequel about him and his mate. If you could that would be great! If not I'll be happy with what you've written so far! Thanks for the story it was amazing!
Date: 03 Dec 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 40
Just finished reading this and I loved it. Truth is, I am not a huge fan of Twilight. I am more like a Buffy, Angel, Moonlight, Blood Ties, Being Human and True Blood fan. Also any traditional vampire movie. . I like Bellla with anyone but Edward. He was a controlling manipulative dick, even in the books. I grew up with the Munsters, the Addams Family and Dark Shadows. I love Twilight Zone, Night Gallery and shows like that, mostly were reruns. Have a great day and blessing for you and yours
Date: 16 Jan 2015 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 28
Read this before on ff.net and reviewed it then as well, just bares saying again however that this chapter and the one before it are probably my least liked chapters of the whole fic. I don't like Jaspers behavior and reactions to the reveal of Bella's powers and his justifications for that reaction for one very simple reason. Bella never lied to him. He never once asked any of the girls for ANY details on their training outside of 'practicing her shields' so his overreaction in these two chapters about her 'hiding her abilities' seems overblown and more of an Edward type of reaction to me. I could see it if he'd asked specifics and they'd not told him, however he did not . If it had really been as important as he makes it out to be then he should have asked her just what she was now capable of instead of letting it go in previous chapters or just not asking at all.
Also the dominating behavior and humilation punishment really turned me off the fic for a while. Toes the line a little too close to emotional abuse for me as a former abuse victim. I had originally stopped reading this story before (when posted on ff.net) and had to be talked back into it by a friend because it offended me so. I am glad I did start reading it again since the overall story is great but the fact remains that these two chapters almost ruined the story for me as reader.
Date: 08 Jun 2014 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 32
Ithink i am missing something about this famous idreamofeddy.she has written two stories and neither one of them are finished but eveyone praises her as the second coming because she wrote Peter a that everyone likes and copies,i don't get it.
Date: 07 Jun 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
How long will it be before the light bulb goes off over their heads and they realize they are mates,will it take a little push from Alice.wonder when the Red Head will return for round two.what will happen when Eddie shows up.i have a feeling this is the lost story ihave been hunting for for a while.if it is i am so pissed at the smut Nazis for getting the narrow asses on FF to pull the story.i need a few more chapters and i will know for sure.
Date: 26 May 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! I read this story once before on fanfiction.net and I loved it. I decided to read it again since I saw that you had started a sequel. I couldn't find it anywhere so I found that you moved it here. I became a member to this site just so I could read this story. This is by far one of my favorites if not my favorite jasper/bella story.
Date: 14 Nov 2013 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am 'so' glad I found this over here. I was on ff.net, and went looking to re-read this, and it wasn't in my favorites, and I 'know' I'd added it. And then I found it was gone completely! I was so upset, I love this story, and not because of the smut either (though that is good too), the story is wonderful, and ff.net is stupid to let such a good piece of fanfiction be removed.
Anyway, very glad I found it here. :)
Date: 18 Sep 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
lol b avoiding him is cute. Guess he hasnt realized she doesnt know about alive yet. I like garrett. Cant wait for Peter to come.
IdreamofEddy is SUPERB. glad I dl'd before it got removed from FFn. I've read it so many time.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
giggles i know i read the after it's complete but I just had to say "it's only a flesh wound" ok now i wanna watch MP the holy grail when i get home...of course i am one of the sick sick puppies who watched a doc on the plauge and could not resist "bring out your dead, I'm not dead yet"
Date: 10 Feb 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 40
Great story! One of my top 5 all time favorite ever! Due to this story, I am now fully Bella/Jasper!!!
And thank you for allowing Edward to redeem himself. I was really worried there for a while. And I love B/J, but that doesn't mean that I want ol' Eddie to be such a jerk. So thanks for that.
Date: 13 Dec 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 26
I'm enjoying this story very much. It's the first that I've read where Edward was absolutely Fuckedupintheheadward, and wanted to drain Bella. I see the logical extension of his behavior into this persona. You've fleshed out the, previously, secondary characters very well, and making Peter her real great-uncle was creative.
Thanks for the story,
Date: 14 Jun 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
Sorry I am reading and not reviewing. This is a great story. I would like to see Edward reap what he has sowed with Bella. She is a beautiful vamp. and she is strong.
She has got to toughen up mentally and then she can kick his..booty.
Date: 03 May 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 40
I read this story over the course of three days and was astounded that there were no more reviews than what are showing. Thank you so much for sharing this story and I look forward to reading more of your writing!!!
Date: 02 May 2011 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I got about 5 updates all at once and they made me decide to reread this story. You are a great write and I am glad to refresh my brain on the awesomeness that is "Insecurities" :)
Date: 01 May 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 40
Not sure why I decided to read this, I only EVER read Edward / Bella stories, but I am so glad I did. I spent the whole day reading it, it had me hooked from the beginning. It's a definite favourite and one I am sure to read again (and thanks for turning Edward back to the guy we all know and love!)
Date: 12 Apr 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 33
please tell me that you are planing on continuing with this story i love the story line and cant wait to see what happens next why do i have a feeling that edward is going to wind up in the mix with victoria and maria to go against his family for betraying him so please let me know if you do plan on finishing this story and if my hunch might be right so pleae update soon
So glad you like it. The story is complete and due to problems with this site can be read over on FanFiction.net. My pen name is the same there and is pretty easy to find. I hope you enjoy the remaining chapters.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
Do you know how much fun it is to find a great story...and then click on the chapters link and see that it is really long... I am so excited. Thanks for creating such a gripping story and I have only read three chapters. I am gitty and all a flutter. (I think that's good, or it could be gas.. humm)..
No seriously.. I am really going to enjoy this.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 33
The God of War's attitude is absolutely cracking me up! I don't think he needs to check just yet haha :)
Nice twist on who Alice's mate is! I love little surprises like that! And she was his singer? Awesome!
My breath caught in my throat. Again, I could visualize the gold in his eyes melt away as he descended the basement stairs *shivers* :)
Oh no! Now I have to wait for an update!! :)