[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2016 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
Is Charlie still following Edward?
Little girl is playing with fire.
Author's Response:
Charlie has stopped following Edward because that case is over. But yes, Bella is playing with fire.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2016 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 10 Jul 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
hoping she can pull it off and send him spinng a bit ;)
Author's Response:
Yes, that would be fun, wouldn't it? ;)
Date: 10 Jul 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
I think she'll have a few mishaps that will cause Edward to question her
Author's Response:
Ahh, great point! :)
Date: 10 Jul 2016 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh Bella. cnt wait till next chapter
Author's Response:
I know right? Chapters will post every day and I love to hear what you think! :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2016 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
At 18 you're not thinking of any future consequences.
Author's Response:
*sigh* Yes, I'm afraid that at 18 so many of us are unable to conceive of future consequences, lol!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2016 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
:)
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Thanks!
Date: 09 Jul 2016 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
hope she doesn't get in over her head :)
Author's Response:
Hmm, I think she may very well get in over her head... but will she be able to get out? ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2016 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm intrigued by his eye color. Is that a precurser of his true identity?
Author's Response:
you'll find out more about the eye color in later chapters. Everyone is a human in this story. Thanks again! I'm really enjoying your comments :)
Date: 08 Jul 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
wondering what b is thinking . . . hope she doesn't get in over her head. would be amusing if an innocent girl took e for a ride
Author's Response:
Haha, great comments, and yes, that would certainly be amusing! :) You will find out what happens soon...
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
:)
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thanks!
Date: 07 Jul 2016 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
wonder if he is going to let her get away :)
Author's Response:
You will find out soon! Thanks for reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hell No!
Author's Response:
hahaha! you are so right, lol!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
Doesn't she realize the position she's put her father in? He may be at the end of the gun now.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, Aro will realize the truth after he's calmed down, and will give up on using his gun. Charlie is in no danger. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
:)
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thanks!
Date: 07 Jul 2016 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
can't wait to see how e handles sulpica and b :)
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
:)
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Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2016 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
How self serving of Edward. I know he's going to ask her to pretend that she's the woman he's spending time with in the room. The sad but true thing is, Bella's a naive, awestruck teenager, so of course she'll agree. She's saving their lives.
Author's Response:
He is totally self-serving! Thank you for taking the time to comment and rate my chapters. I really appreciate it! :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am not sure what Edward could ask of her. Maybe to say she just checked in. She will need to be very careful or risk putting her father in danger because Aro may think he didn't get the correct information. And hide behind a curtain...really? LOL! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Haha, good points! Loved your comments. Don't worry, her father is not in danger. Aro will realize the truth after he has calmed down.
Date: 05 Jul 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
seems like maybe b will be donning a blonde wig and stepping in for sulpica??
Author's Response:
haha, good guess :)
Date: 03 Jul 2016 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am already obsessed with this story 💋
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm wondering if her thoughts are foreshadowing?
What is their age difference?
Author's Response:
Great guess and thanks so much for the reviews! Bella is 18 and Edward is 30.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2016 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Dribble or drabble, it doesn't matter to me as long as this story continues.
In my opinion the names don't matter. It's the settings description that sets the stage for me.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2016 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Is tall, dark and slimey Aro?
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2016 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Anxious to see where this goes.
Date: 02 Jul 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
NO WAY don't drop the word count! Lol. Longer the better. :) Anyway, loving this story so far!
Author's Response:
Got it! We won't drop the word count :) Thanks for your review!
Date: 02 Jul 2016 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
Daily.. Daily updates when small are just fine. Small monthly I would not even read till finished.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! :) Glad to hear it.
Date: 02 Jul 2016 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting hopeyou keep it up
Thanks
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2016 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
:)
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Thank you :)
Date: 01 Jul 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻
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xoxoxo
Date: 01 Jul 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
good
Author's Response:
thanks <3
Date: 01 Jul 2016 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
I need more! Lol
Author's Response:
More will be coming today! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 30 Jun 2016 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
good
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
:) looking forward to reading more of this
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't normally read period pieces, because of the blatant sexism or May-December stories, because just ugh.... However since ya'll are such awesome writers, I'm giving this one a shot even with all my preconceived notions. :)
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you for your trust! <3 We'll try not to disappoint. :)