Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 32
Beautiful!
Author's Response:
Wow, I loved reading all your reviews. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave comments on multiple chapters!
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 31
Brave, beautiful, silly girlz
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
Charlie totally surprised me!!
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 26
Charlie is going to snitch. He’s going to discourage Edward’s affection for Bella. Methinks.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wrong answer, Eddo!
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella Bella Bella. The jig is up!
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
Is she finally busted???
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
Uh oh. Bella is gonna get it from Charlie!
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 21
Lol! I like the little bit of insecurity from Edward.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
She went too far. She violated the first rule of effective lying... stay as close to the truth as possible, only changing what is needed to serve the purpose.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope that he gets to see her play the cello.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hmm. Is this a story about past lives, I wonder?
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
She’s playing a dangerous game.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
He’s screwed. Ms. Bella will mess him up and his formula.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
Run away Bella! Don’t go to the dark side.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
He just obliterated her rose colored glasses.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
He’s going to pretend that Bella is his lover? Fun!
Date: 23 Dec 2017 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh dear. Out little Bella is face to face with Edward’s paramour. Poor thing.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella to the rescue?
Date: 23 Dec 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
I’m guessing the man is Aro?
Date: 23 Dec 2017 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I’ve just picked this up today. Sounds very promising already.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2016 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 32
I loved it thank you
Date: 12 Sep 2016 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 32
That was cute and funny.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! :) Glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2016 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 32
love your plot story line , great and sweet ending
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and I'm so happy you liked the ending. <3
Date: 19 Aug 2016 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you!
Author's Response:
You are most welcome!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2016 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 32
Good story
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2016 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 32
:) loved this. Definitely interested in reading the outtakes and the epilogues
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your kind and consistent reviewing and rating! *hugs* I really, really appreciate it. And I'm glad you're interested in the outtakes and epilogues. :)
Date: 10 Aug 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it! Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing and I'm very glad you loved it!
Date: 10 Aug 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 32
I have not seen the movie so I can not compare. I would love any outtakes and/or epilogues. Love the everyday posting. Your chapters seem longer than most dribbles. I like your longer chapters. Thank you for sharing with us. Great job.
Author's Response:
Loved all your reviews! Thanks so much for taking the time to comment on every chapter. It means a lot to me! And thank you for the feedback on epilogues and daily posting. Glad the chapters felt longer than most drabbles. Thank you for all your kind words and generous feedback. It's very encouraging to us as writers. People like you are the reason we keep on posting. *Big hugs*
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2016 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 32
Great story!!! I would love to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing and rating, and you will get your wish for epilogues! :)
Date: 09 Aug 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 32
may have to go back and watch the movie again
Yes to epi and outtakes . . . of course ;)
Author's Response:
Glad you're interested in the epilogues and outtakes. We are planning a short break and then we will post several. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Date: 09 Aug 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 32
I loved the story! I actually wish it was a little longer and went more in depth so we knew the characters a little more and more of a story line between them. More more more! Haha
Author's Response:
So glad you loved the story. Yes, I agree it was a little short. Sometimes I think that's the issue with movies, you just can't get as much information and character development as you can with novels. This story was only 15,000 words long, which means it doesn't even qualify as a novella (more of a novelette). For our next story, we plan on going into more depth, more like the way we did in Bitter Sun Rising.
Thank you so much for reviewing! <3
Date: 09 Aug 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you. I'm not familiar with the movie.
Author's Response:
The movie is "Love in the Afternoon" (1957), directed by Billy Wilder, starring Audrey Hepburn and Gary Cooper. But you can enjoy the story without knowing the movie at all. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 09 Aug 2016 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 31
She kept up the front
Author's Response:
She sure did!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2016 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 31
Poor Bella
Author's Response:
*sobs*
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2016 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 30
I hope he doesn't leave her
Date: 09 Aug 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
Sniffle sniffle
Author's Response:
*sobs*
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 31
Has Charlie confronted her?
Author's Response:
No... he's more subtle than that in this story...
Date: 08 Aug 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 31
One more chapter??? I'm not ready for the story to end. Is Bella trying to convince Edward or herself that she will be ok.
Date: 08 Aug 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
Will Edward go through with leaving? I am not sure he can leave her.
Date: 08 Aug 2016 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 29
He loves her too much to stay.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 29
Well, jerk ward is back.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 28
Thanks for giving us more of Edward's past.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wow!!!!!!!! I did not expect that from Charlie. I would have thought he would have threatened Edward if he didn't leave.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
Is Charlie going to bust her out to Edward?
Date: 07 Aug 2016 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
Can't wait to see how Charlie handles this.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh no. Charlie is going to know who the girl is before he even gets started on the case. Lol.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 23
If it's Edward at the door will Bella hear him or walk in on them
Date: 07 Aug 2016 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh no!!!!!!!! Too funny.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
I laughed at Edward checking out his knees. Lol
Date: 07 Aug 2016 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
They need to get to know each other, so I would say D.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think Bella had over done her experience. Lol
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for responding on multiple chapters! I've been loving your comments. <3
Date: 07 Aug 2016 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
So Edward is spending everyday with her for over a week and has not slept with her. Boy, that is probably a record for him. Lol.
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I think you're right! :)
Date: 07 Aug 2016 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
I didn't think she could go through with sleeping with him so soon. I am wondering what Bella is really thinking and feeling.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
I hope we find out what is going on with his eyes.
Author's Response:
You will! :)
Date: 07 Aug 2016 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
Is Bella really going to go through with sleeping with him? She must really have a huge crush on him.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I still say Bella is playing with fire.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am thinking that Edward is falling for Bella but he does not recognize it. Bella is a very good actor to be so young and naive.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
I think Edward
Date: 07 Aug 2016 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am still worried that Bella will get her heart broke.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella is playing with fire.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is a playboy. Bella needs to get away from him.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
I knowBella really wants to accept the invitation. Bless her heart.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
I knew he was going to ask her to do that. Like I said in the last chapter, glad Aro did not see Bella when he was at Charlie's.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad Aro did not see them off when he was at Charlie's
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2016 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 29
Poor Bella. He needs to give it a try
Author's Response:
He really does! Thanks :)
Date: 07 Aug 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well, what will she do now? Will Edward ever take her seriously? This is an odd thought, but I hope she does not lose her cello that she left out in the hallway. How would she explain that to Charlie?
Date: 07 Aug 2016 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
So, Bella has been following Edward in the papers. And she has been keeping it a secret from her dad. I have a feeling that things are going to get interesting. Will Edward feel the same connection to Bella that she feels for him?
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 29
He is a ass
Author's Response:
He really is! Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 07 Aug 2016 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
I have a feeling that Bella is not going to listen to Charlie. Shorter chaptersare kind of hard to review.
Author's Response:
Sorry about the short chapters, but short reviews are fine!! :) Thanks so much for commenting. XD
Date: 07 Aug 2016 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
The shorter chapters sometime make it hard for me to leave a review because not much happens. I think Charlie's client in Aro.
Date: 07 Aug 2016 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can'twait to read more
Date: 07 Aug 2016 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 29
poor b
Author's Response:
I know right? Thanks for the review :)
Date: 07 Aug 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 29
I wanna punch him in the junk, bastard! 😠
Author's Response:
Haha, he deserves that, doesn't he? Thanks!
Date: 06 Aug 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 29
He's a cad or at least trying to be . But she'll see through him and call him out
Author's Response:
Great analysis and thank you for the review. <3
Date: 06 Aug 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 29
Poor Bella, though she's already gotten more than she could have expected.
Author's Response:
Agreed! Thanks for the review.
Date: 06 Aug 2016 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 28
Yes, it will help to understand his pov.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the helpful feedback! :)
Date: 06 Aug 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 28
Love hearing his thoughts
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 06 Aug 2016 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
I love EPOV and I love the flow of your story. XOXO
Author's Response:
Thank you for your positive comments about flow and POV. :D
Date: 06 Aug 2016 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
pls update ASAP.. thks..
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing on all the chapters! That is a really huge deal and means so much to me. I loved reading each and every single one of your comments. *hugs*
I'm so sorry about the delay in posting, but I promise we will update every day until the end of the story from now on. :) The next chapter will be out within an hour. :D
Date: 06 Aug 2016 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 27
I am speechless.. huh!
Date: 06 Aug 2016 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 25
oh..Edward ..wrong answer..
Date: 06 Aug 2016 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
Edward in the house..Or.. not
Date: 06 Aug 2016 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
lmao...Edward.. what wrong with you..you got it bad..really really bad..
Date: 06 Aug 2016 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
damn..can't decided.. just go on...with your
Date: 06 Aug 2016 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
very funny.Bella....
Date: 06 Aug 2016 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
lol...Bella such a brilliant girl you are..
Date: 06 Aug 2016 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 16
oh my god..what happened.. wait EC was not a human?
Date: 06 Aug 2016 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
oh Edward you had been played by an innocent girl..
Date: 06 Aug 2016 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
how did Bella got so bold and seductive.. I hope she won't get her heartbroken