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Reviewer: yomayrasan27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 11

U have one in me love the story.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

You still have me hooked

Reviewer: squkymun Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2016 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 11

Just wanted to say that I am still reading your story and can't wait to see what happens 

 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 10

Really liking your story and can't wait for an update.  Bella is funny, I love how honest she is.  I do think she and Edward coudl have some chemistry but other than protecting her, he has been an ass to her. 

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 10

Aro seems creepy when it comes to Bella...She needs to pack her shit again and go. Edward is an ass

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2016 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

Cliffie much! Tantrum time. My bed is getting face punched & strange growly noises are coming from my throat. Please hurry with next chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

Edward is so hot and cold.... no wonder B has whiplash.   Sadly Aro probably does think of her as property.....sigh.  At least Alex is dead

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 9

I am really really liking this. Can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!! 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

Good chapter.  Like the way you quickly got to the ball.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Love Bella's spunk

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 9

Bella is awesome love her

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

Can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 7

Uh ho...jasper!! 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 6

Hahahaha!!!! Love Bella. 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

Really enjoying it. 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loving it 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 3

Looking forward to ready more. 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

Enjoying your story

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Enjoyed the first chapter. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 8

Glad he took the time to talk to her about things.   Eavesdroppers rarely hear what they want to.  E is in denial I think.   But B is too, to think she'll ever be allowed back to her old family and life

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

Thank you for another interesting chapter... keep them coming!

T

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 8

Interesting.  Thanks.

Reviewer: MooMoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

Just gotta say that I am loving this story and I totally LOVE this Bella!!! I just have to agree with Edward whole heartedly that she is absolutely hilarious, even when shes not trying to be. I absolutely LOVE her lack of verbal filter.Jasper may think she is NUTS, but Edward seems quite fond of her NUTTY TENDANCIES. I am sooooooooooooooooooo LOVING IT!!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter and i hope that both Alec and Maria get exactly what they deserve soon!!!!

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2016 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

Enjoying this!

Thank you...T

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2016 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 7

Don't blame her for not wanting to play a stupid floozy.   Jasper needed a good beatdown.  What a jerk,  Of Course E's not much better, but at least he stood up to Jasper.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 7

Enjoyed this chapter...especially the part about "dumbing" Isabella down.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 6

Glad B is sticking up for herself

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love her rants d84;a039;d84;a039;

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

Ugh James is going to be an issue I think. Prob involved with Jasper fiance. 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love Bella's rambles 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm guessing that Alec's interest in her has to do with her name, Corsaro?  I think you should have seen the red flags long before eight months.



Author's Response:

I agree, she should have realised way before then. However when your desperate for somebody in your life, you may bury your head in the sand rather than face what's in front of you. Also remember she hasn't know any affection or attention all her life, untill she met Alec.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ugh Men like Alec are so pathetic.  Poor b

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

Really enjoying this new story.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 3

Your doing great I hope you keep going

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

Glad he was there to help her. Stupid boys.   

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 2

Good story so far.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Hanastasio Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love this story, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

Liking it so far can't wait to read the next chapter

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start.  Can't wait to see where you take it.

Reviewer: dustybritches Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

A good start. Looking forward to more

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Enjoyed it...so she's mob born and doesn't know it.  Good start.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

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