Date: 09 Jul 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
U have one in me love the story.
Date: 09 Jul 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
You still have me hooked
Date: 09 Jul 2016 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
Just wanted to say that I am still reading your story and can't wait to see what happens
Date: 26 Jun 2016 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
Really liking your story and can't wait for an update. Bella is funny, I love how honest she is. I do think she and Edward coudl have some chemistry but other than protecting her, he has been an ass to her.
Date: 22 Jun 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aro seems creepy when it comes to Bella...She needs to pack her shit again and go. Edward is an ass
Date: 22 Jun 2016 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
Cliffie much! Tantrum time. My bed is getting face punched & strange growly noises are coming from my throat. Please hurry with next chapter.
Date: 21 Jun 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is so hot and cold.... no wonder B has whiplash. Sadly Aro probably does think of her as property.....sigh. At least Alex is dead
Date: 20 Jun 2016 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am really really liking this. Can't wait for next update.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
Good chapter. Like the way you quickly got to the ball.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love Bella's spunk
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is awesome love her
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
Uh ho...jasper!!
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hahahaha!!!! Love Bella.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Really enjoying it.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to ready more.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
Enjoying your story
Date: 19 Jun 2016 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoyed the first chapter.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
Glad he took the time to talk to her about things. Eavesdroppers rarely hear what they want to. E is in denial I think. But B is too, to think she'll ever be allowed back to her old family and life
Date: 19 Jun 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Thank you for another interesting chapter... keep them coming!
T
Date: 18 Jun 2016 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Interesting. Thanks.
Date: 18 Jun 2016 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
Just gotta say that I am loving this story and I totally LOVE this Bella!!! I just have to agree with Edward whole heartedly that she is absolutely hilarious, even when shes not trying to be. I absolutely LOVE her lack of verbal filter.Jasper may think she is NUTS, but Edward seems quite fond of her NUTTY TENDANCIES. I am sooooooooooooooooooo LOVING IT!!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter and i hope that both Alec and Maria get exactly what they deserve soon!!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2016 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
Enjoying this!
Thank you...T
Date: 17 Jun 2016 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Don't blame her for not wanting to play a stupid floozy. Jasper needed a good beatdown. What a jerk, Of Course E's not much better, but at least he stood up to Jasper.
Date: 16 Jun 2016 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Enjoyed this chapter...especially the part about "dumbing" Isabella down.
Date: 16 Jun 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
Glad B is sticking up for herself
Date: 16 Jun 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love her rants d84;a039;d84;a039;
Date: 12 Jun 2016 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ugh James is going to be an issue I think. Prob involved with Jasper fiance.
Date: 12 Jun 2016 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love Bella's rambles
Date: 11 Jun 2016 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm guessing that Alec's interest in her has to do with her name, Corsaro? I think you should have seen the red flags long before eight months.
Author's Response:
I agree, she should have realised way before then. However when your desperate for somebody in your life, you may bury your head in the sand rather than face what's in front of you. Also remember she hasn't know any affection or attention all her life, untill she met Alec.
Date: 10 Jun 2016 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ugh Men like Alec are so pathetic. Poor b
Date: 09 Jun 2016 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
Really enjoying this new story.
Date: 09 Jun 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Your doing great I hope you keep going
Date: 08 Jun 2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad he was there to help her. Stupid boys.
Date: 07 Jun 2016 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Good story so far. Thanks.
Date: 06 Jun 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love this story, can't wait for more.
Date: 06 Jun 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
Liking it so far can't wait to read the next chapter
Date: 05 Jun 2016 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. Can't wait to see where you take it.
Date: 05 Jun 2016 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
A good start. Looking forward to more
Date: 05 Jun 2016 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoyed it...so she's mob born and doesn't know it. Good start.