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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2016 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 22

Yea esme is one manipulative biatch

Reviewer: MooMoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 22

I was so excited to see this new chapter posted! Loved it!!! They are finally hitched!!! Just got to say that I totally agree with Bella, Esme has got some nerve, by first flat out telling her how much she dislikes her and how she isn't good enough for Edward, and then proposing a truce specifically so that she (Esme)  doesn't lose Edward or so that he isn't angry at her(Esme). Go Bella for telling her where she can stick her so called truce and exactly what YOU think of HER! She so had it coming and I'll bet that she no longer considers Bella to be MEEK and TIMID! Hah!!! I'm also glad that Jasperis coming around and being nicer to Bella now that she and Alice are friends. He is like a completely different person where Alice is concerned, as she seems to bring out the best in him! I have a feeling that Bella will need all of the Allies she can get with Esme as an enemy, just saying!!! It is just such a shame that Carlisle and Esme are completely disregarding Jasper's happiness and his love for Alice and their unborn child and choosing not to acknowledge their own granddaughter, not to mention that they're forbidding him to give HIS daughter HIS last name. I think that they're the ones that will be missing out and they only have themselves to blame. I am glad that Alice and Bella met and became friends (MUCH TO EDWARD'S DISMAY), as I think that they were both probably VERY lonely without many friends or relatives and both having to be very careful of who they do befriend because of the BUSINESS with which the men that they LOVE are involved. As always, I am anxiously awaiting and REALLY looking forward to the next chapter!!! Great work and Happy Writing!!!

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 22

With them worried about Bella because of the families in town, I was surprised to see her out and about alone.  I know she has protection, but since they didn't help her with the bouncer at the club, they aren't close enough to be effective.

Thanks for the chapter.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 21

Glad she stood up to Edward!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 21

I'm so glad Bella fought for Alice.

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 21

Oh Esme is a tricky bitch....She needs to be watched. I can just picture her going to Aro and working with him to get Bella out of Edward's life

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 21

At this point,  screw ma Cullen. . He really needs to have words with her unless he's will to allow here to pull her coniving site forever. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wow I really want to wring Esme's neck.  What a conniving bitch. . Edward has a lot of nerve. 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 21

Good chapter.  Thanks.

Reviewer: MooMoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 21

GO BELLA!!! She not only smacked a bouncer and stripper around, putting them in their places; but Edward too!!! Although Edward so had it coming for his behavior, atleast he had enough sense not to cheat and he actually listened to Bella and what she said about Esme. I do hope that he manages to put her(Esme), in her place and let her know that he will not tolerate her mistreatment of Bella. Also, on a happy note, they BOTH said THE L WORD to each other!!! YEAH!!!! Just got to say that the aforementioned bouncer better hope that neither Bel!a nor Emmett mentions to Edward of his treatment towards Bel!a, I have a feeling that he would not take to kindly to knowing that he touched HIS FIANCEE. 😉 

Reviewer: rosesblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 20

Oh no cnt wait until next chapter :) 

Reviewer: lizzielutz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love this story.  Please update soon. Can't wait to see how it turns s out 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

please hurry up on this update.. can not wait. Perhaps she needs to tell him if he does not trust her to call off the wedding and then tell him you will move out with nothing of his money or mother.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 20

If he thinks his fiance is using him that's only because he won't talk to her.  His running off doesn't help.  There are always going to be bad days and extreme stressors in his job.  If he's going to run off to drugs and whores as a default, she should just let him go...he's not worth it.  His whole family is crazy or has behaved so at one time or another.  She should consider trying to leave like she did before, though it's made more difficult due t oAro now. 

Can't wait for the next...seriously.

Reviewer: banned2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 20

Please update fast!  I don't want Edward to be an ass!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

Esme is a real piece of work. She wants her way in everything. I don't know why Edward can't see that.

Reviewer: MooMoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 20

GO JASPER!!!! Who would have thought that he would be her ally and the voice of reason? I am soooooo disappointed in and not liking Esme !!! I hope Bella listens to Jasper and saves Edward from doing something stupid and I really hope that Esme doesn't succeed in breaking them up! Àlso, I believe it was Edward's idea that Bella work on the house while Esme and Rose focus on the wedding, which he seems to have forgotten and is now playing into Esme's hands. She has already more than proven that she doesn't care for Bella and really doesn't like that Bella doesn't bow to her will. I do hope that Edward opens his eyes and sees what she is doing and doesn't allow her to succeed. I also hope that Carlisle isn't blinded by her and sees what she is trying to do, surely he knows that she is trying to manipulate the situation to get what SHE and only SHE wants!!! As Bella really doesn't need him as a enemy, Esme is bad enough and he would be much, much worse!!! I'm beginning to wonder if she is working with Aro, after all she was the one that supposedly got the phone call about the fire that DIDN'T happen!!! Hmm!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!! Happy Writing!!!!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 20

Very impressed with Jasper 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 19

Well we have a person to hate.. Esme. Jasper at least has something of his own and hopefully he will change for the better

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 19

Esme is a nasty woman!  She seems to get worse & worse every chapter.  I think she will try to do something to Bella secretly.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 19

Bella has Esme pegged thats for sure.

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 19

K I say that Esme and Aro are going to start working together to stop this wedding... Bella needs to press being a friend with Alice

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2016 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hiya

Really enjoying this story.

Thank you! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2016 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 18

I am so glad bella stood up for herself.  What is jasper & esme's problem?? 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2016 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 18

Something doesn't add up as I thoght Jasper's men saw Aro at the wreak!



Author's Response:

Hi, Jasper only left behind one of the associates. A young guy who hasn't even made his button was left to check on Bella. That was another reason Edward was so mad. Had Jasper or one of the made men been there, it would have been brought to the the Cullens attention straight away.  Hope this explains it.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 18

Glad she stood up to Esme. Wonder if Rose is playing games or not.  Jasper is such an arse. 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 18

This was a very good chapter...lots happened.  Thanks.

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

Hurry up next chapter. I need you. Not really rushing you. Just getting more excited as the story unfolds. Loving this story.

Reviewer: flowerboxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

Poor Bella she is going to get hurt either way....Edward is a manwhore when they get married he will have a goomah and she will be stuck with his children....I think he is only marrying her for more power not her safety....Naive girl that only wants love but is in for alot of heartache....

Reviewer: ihaveapotplant Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved this. Really hope the rest of the family go out of their way to apologize to Bella. Really can't stand jasper 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 17

Well at least Carlisle is backing him up.  Hope someone has words with Rose as well. 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 17

Good  chapter !   Keep  up  the  great  work ,   although  grammatical  mistakes  are somewhat  distracting . 



Author's Response:

Sorry, no Beta. Can only hold my hands up and apologise. I really should check it over before I post. It takes me a couple of hours to write a chapter, by that time I just want to get it out there. Plus, I usually write in an evening, so I've had enough by the time it's written. The main problem is, nothing is pre written. I work out what's happening in the chapter as I am writing it. Which is really bad of me I know.  Hope it doesn't deflect from the story too much.

Reviewer: kuch44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 17

Aro is in trouble!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 17

Edwards outrage was just needed to happen

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 17

Please update sooner. Good story. Why not get her out of there right now and set her up in his condo? Wait that is where he keeps his one night stands?

Reviewer: MooMoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 17

I am so glad that Edward took such care of Isabella and admitted how much he cares for her, especially after the way she was treated, or I suppose I should say NOT TREATED or even CONSIDERED by Jasper!!! I am also very glad that she told him about Aro being there, she didn't seem to question it although I do realize that she was more than likely in severe shock from the previous events as well as the accident not to mention all of the garbage that Aro was spouting go her! However, I found it quite FISHY that he was there; making me think that either he was behind the set up and accident or Jasper was assisting him to try and get Bella away from Edward and the Cullen family. I really wouldn't put ANYTHING past Jasper as he has made it obvious from the very beginning that he didn't like Bella. I am very glad that Edward let into him and STRESSED the IMPORTANCE  of Bella to him(Edward) as well as the family, because he soooooo had it coming and I am glad that Carlisle supported Edward and his actions after finding out how Bella was treated or in this case NOT TREATED!!! I did feel a tad sorry for the doctor though, the poor guy probably peed his pants after all the threatening Edward did towards him!!! Just saying!!!😋 Looking forward to the next update!!!!

Reviewer: HappyEverAfter Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 17

Poor Bella! Good for Edward!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 17

Jasper actually got off easier.  I was glad carlisle agreed with edward.  Now ir's very clear to edward That Aro had something to do with the crash.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 17

I would say that Jasper and Aro were working together on the accident. 

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2016 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 17

I'm happy with the way Edward handled things but Esme and Rose...All of them really need to be kissing her ass they fucked up. Aro needs to be handled swiftly

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

Good question Edward.   I re-read that part several times in the last chapter.  I thought t first that Aro was a hallucination the way that he just popped up.  No one else seemed to notice him or comment.  Why didn't Jasper's man (I noticed he called him Boss) speak up?



Author's Response:

Hi, asam 75,

I think Aro waited deliberatly untill Jasper had left, leaving only one of the lower ranking men to deal with Bella. Aro seemed to pose no threat to Bella and he will know she is related to him. If there had been a scene, or Bella had been distressed by him there, i'm sure he would have informed his boss. However, only the Cullens themselves knew that Aro needed to be watched, as he may be a threat to Bella. They had not made it know to the men. Probably now hoping that with the wedding, he would accept things and back off.  Hope this answers your question.

 

Reviewer: Maggie79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2016 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 17

I am glad that Edward is on her side. Hopefully Bella will realize that it was Aro who probably caused the accident. 

Reviewer: rosesblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 17

Cnt wait until next chapter 

Reviewer: banned2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2016 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 17

Good chapter.  I'm so glad Edward and his father put the family in thier place.  Love this story!  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 16

I know she's hurt but she shouldn't make any decisions before speaking to Edward....jasper is an ass

Reviewer: flowerboxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

Jasper and aro are in this together......Edwards probalby doesnt even know...But  If I was bella I would leave and forget them all..........

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh man, sometthing tells me that JASPER is behind this and trying to run her off.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2016 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 16

Ugh jasper set her up I bet. Hmm is rose in on it too ? I wouldn't think so unless she is a really good actress

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 16

Well Aro made a good point on who they care about. Now a wedge is driven in and the seeds of doubt. She will leave I bet.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 16

Don't go anywhere bella.  Edward is going to rip some new a$$holes when he gets home.

Reviewer: banned2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 16

I'm really enjoying this story.  The Cullens have a lot explaing to do.  Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 16

Good chapter, but I hate hanging here.  Aro's right about how concerned the Cullen's weren't about her, but then again that was Jasper.

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 16

Edward really needs to step up to the plate here or he is going to lose her. One can only take so much feeling unloved by the people around you before you have to get away.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 15

She is going to make edward jump through some hoop. I'm glad!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

Well then here we are in another marriage to someone she does not love. At least he is not her father's age.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wel from one damn frying pan right into the hot oit. YIKES

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

Ut oh. Well Edward made a play for Vicky so why just try to lie out of that? Ahh now Isabella is the successor to Aro's family. Maybe a Cullen shot him to advance Edward to hold that position with marriage.. err

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 7

Well She is not good at acting only at the running part, now that one was good. :-)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 6

Well of course Edward likes blondes who Hang on his every word.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

You are doing great. I love Mafia stories. However I do not like such a speed to HEA. come on life is not like that and the Mafia are not sweet men waiting to do you good.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

hmmm They really aren't making her feel wanted, except E a little bit.  Can't blame her for Carlisle, Aro, and all the others making her feel like a pawn in a game

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 14

I hope this works but I'm wondering why not just fly straight to Vegas and marry Bella before anyone can stop it from happening....Then go home and plan a big show for everyone to attend

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 14

I hope his snadwich doesn't get smooshed. Haha.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

Aro really is disgusting!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 12

He needs sweet alice to come him crazy. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 11

Her ignoring him is working.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

Aro shot him for sure!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 9

Let the good times begin.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 7

Way to go edward! Fave chapter so far!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

Her response is going to be priceless!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 5

I hope they keep her safe....

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 14

Glad they got her out of there before the creepy old man showed up.  

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 14

Thank you for your hard efforts to post.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 14

Glad E got her out of there in time.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

You ate doing great!  Is edward one of the three suit guys i wonder?

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

,😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

If Edward and her sneak off an get married...Problem solved. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2016 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

Ugh I just knew Aro was going to sell her off..... or at least try to.  Disgusting man. 

Reviewer: rosesblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2016 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm hooked can't wait until next chapter :) 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 12

So aro is a bit freaky 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wow Aro is a real piece of work.  POS for hurting her already.  Doesn't bode well for her future.  Jasper is still a wanker

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

Jasper is not his friend!

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

Monde cruel!

Je vous remercie

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

I like this fiction.

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

She managed to escape Alec for the moment.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 4

Bella is too confident, I do not believe that she is going to be able to escape him.

Kisses

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

Aro is creepy...He seems to want her for himself. That might have been the reason Renee left. With her looking so much like her mother maybe he thinks he has a 2nd chance. Sick I know but possible

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

She is slowly going to throw itself into the geule of the wolf.

Kisses

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

She should pay attention.

If his new name is known of the mafia !!!

Kisses

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like this beginning!


Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

Well Aro is not quite the loving Grandfather is he? I wonder if Aro had Felix killed so he could put Bella in the boss position and then marry off Bella to another family to increase their strength. As for Edward he doesn't want to be her friend because he wants to have her as his girlfriend or wife. The funeral in New York should bring some things to light.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wish Edward would have heard her talk with Aro as I think he might set here straight

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2016 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 11

I'm betting he wants to be way more than just her friend.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2016 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 11

Glad b called e on his crap. 

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 11

Good chapter

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2016 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

I don't think she understand what Edward was trying to tell her.....but he does need to pull his head out.

Reviewer: Claire_bates Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 11

im still reading 

haha please update on sunday 

Reviewer: MooMoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 11

ABSOLUTELY!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 10

It's too bad she lost her cousin.  I think they could have related to each other better than she will with Aro.

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