Date: 19 Aug 2016 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 22
Yea esme is one manipulative biatch
Date: 19 Aug 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
I was so excited to see this new chapter posted! Loved it!!! They are finally hitched!!! Just got to say that I totally agree with Bella, Esme has got some nerve, by first flat out telling her how much she dislikes her and how she isn't good enough for Edward, and then proposing a truce specifically so that she (Esme) doesn't lose Edward or so that he isn't angry at her(Esme). Go Bella for telling her where she can stick her so called truce and exactly what YOU think of HER! She so had it coming and I'll bet that she no longer considers Bella to be MEEK and TIMID! Hah!!! I'm also glad that Jasperis coming around and being nicer to Bella now that she and Alice are friends. He is like a completely different person where Alice is concerned, as she seems to bring out the best in him! I have a feeling that Bella will need all of the Allies she can get with Esme as an enemy, just saying!!! It is just such a shame that Carlisle and Esme are completely disregarding Jasper's happiness and his love for Alice and their unborn child and choosing not to acknowledge their own granddaughter, not to mention that they're forbidding him to give HIS daughter HIS last name. I think that they're the ones that will be missing out and they only have themselves to blame. I am glad that Alice and Bella met and became friends (MUCH TO EDWARD'S DISMAY), as I think that they were both probably VERY lonely without many friends or relatives and both having to be very careful of who they do befriend because of the BUSINESS with which the men that they LOVE are involved. As always, I am anxiously awaiting and REALLY looking forward to the next chapter!!! Great work and Happy Writing!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
With them worried about Bella because of the families in town, I was surprised to see her out and about alone. I know she has protection, but since they didn't help her with the bouncer at the club, they aren't close enough to be effective.
Thanks for the chapter.
Date: 19 Aug 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
Glad she stood up to Edward!
Date: 18 Aug 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm so glad Bella fought for Alice.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh Esme is a tricky bitch....She needs to be watched. I can just picture her going to Aro and working with him to get Bella out of Edward's life
Date: 14 Aug 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
At this point, screw ma Cullen. . He really needs to have words with her unless he's will to allow here to pull her coniving site forever.
Date: 14 Aug 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow I really want to wring Esme's neck. What a conniving bitch. . Edward has a lot of nerve.
Date: 14 Aug 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
Good chapter. Thanks.
Date: 14 Aug 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 21
GO BELLA!!! She not only smacked a bouncer and stripper around, putting them in their places; but Edward too!!! Although Edward so had it coming for his behavior, atleast he had enough sense not to cheat and he actually listened to Bella and what she said about Esme. I do hope that he manages to put her(Esme), in her place and let her know that he will not tolerate her mistreatment of Bella. Also, on a happy note, they BOTH said THE L WORD to each other!!! YEAH!!!! Just got to say that the aforementioned bouncer better hope that neither Bel!a nor Emmett mentions to Edward of his treatment towards Bel!a, I have a feeling that he would not take to kindly to knowing that he touched HIS FIANCEE. 😉
Date: 14 Aug 2016 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh no cnt wait until next chapter :)
Date: 14 Aug 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story. Please update soon. Can't wait to see how it turns s out
Date: 13 Aug 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
please hurry up on this update.. can not wait. Perhaps she needs to tell him if he does not trust her to call off the wedding and then tell him you will move out with nothing of his money or mother.
Date: 13 Aug 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
If he thinks his fiance is using him that's only because he won't talk to her. His running off doesn't help. There are always going to be bad days and extreme stressors in his job. If he's going to run off to drugs and whores as a default, she should just let him go...he's not worth it. His whole family is crazy or has behaved so at one time or another. She should consider trying to leave like she did before, though it's made more difficult due t oAro now.
Can't wait for the next...seriously.
Date: 13 Aug 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
Please update fast! I don't want Edward to be an ass!
Date: 13 Aug 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
Esme is a real piece of work. She wants her way in everything. I don't know why Edward can't see that.
Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
GO JASPER!!!! Who would have thought that he would be her ally and the voice of reason? I am soooooo disappointed in and not liking Esme !!! I hope Bella listens to Jasper and saves Edward from doing something stupid and I really hope that Esme doesn't succeed in breaking them up! Àlso, I believe it was Edward's idea that Bella work on the house while Esme and Rose focus on the wedding, which he seems to have forgotten and is now playing into Esme's hands. She has already more than proven that she doesn't care for Bella and really doesn't like that Bella doesn't bow to her will. I do hope that Edward opens his eyes and sees what she is doing and doesn't allow her to succeed. I also hope that Carlisle isn't blinded by her and sees what she is trying to do, surely he knows that she is trying to manipulate the situation to get what SHE and only SHE wants!!! As Bella really doesn't need him as a enemy, Esme is bad enough and he would be much, much worse!!! I'm beginning to wonder if she is working with Aro, after all she was the one that supposedly got the phone call about the fire that DIDN'T happen!!! Hmm!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!! Happy Writing!!!!
Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
Very impressed with Jasper
Date: 11 Aug 2016 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well we have a person to hate.. Esme. Jasper at least has something of his own and hopefully he will change for the better
Date: 11 Aug 2016 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 19
Esme is a nasty woman! She seems to get worse & worse every chapter. I think she will try to do something to Bella secretly.
Date: 11 Aug 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
Bella has Esme pegged thats for sure.
Date: 11 Aug 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 19
K I say that Esme and Aro are going to start working together to stop this wedding... Bella needs to press being a friend with Alice
Date: 05 Aug 2016 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hiya
Really enjoying this story.
Thank you!
Date: 05 Aug 2016 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am so glad bella stood up for herself. What is jasper & esme's problem??
Date: 05 Aug 2016 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
Something doesn't add up as I thoght Jasper's men saw Aro at the wreak!
Author's Response:
Hi, Jasper only left behind one of the associates. A young guy who hasn't even made his button was left to check on Bella. That was another reason Edward was so mad. Had Jasper or one of the made men been there, it would have been brought to the the Cullens attention straight away. Hope this explains it.
Date: 05 Aug 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
Glad she stood up to Esme. Wonder if Rose is playing games or not. Jasper is such an arse.
Date: 04 Aug 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 18
This was a very good chapter...lots happened. Thanks.
Date: 04 Aug 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hurry up next chapter. I need you. Not really rushing you. Just getting more excited as the story unfolds. Loving this story.
Date: 04 Aug 2016 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Bella she is going to get hurt either way....Edward is a manwhore when they get married he will have a goomah and she will be stuck with his children....I think he is only marrying her for more power not her safety....Naive girl that only wants love but is in for alot of heartache....
Date: 02 Aug 2016 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved this. Really hope the rest of the family go out of their way to apologize to Bella. Really can't stand jasper
Date: 01 Aug 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well at least Carlisle is backing him up. Hope someone has words with Rose as well.
Date: 01 Aug 2016 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 17
Good chapter ! Keep up the great work , although grammatical mistakes are somewhat distracting .
Author's Response:
Sorry, no Beta. Can only hold my hands up and apologise. I really should check it over before I post. It takes me a couple of hours to write a chapter, by that time I just want to get it out there. Plus, I usually write in an evening, so I've had enough by the time it's written. The main problem is, nothing is pre written. I work out what's happening in the chapter as I am writing it. Which is really bad of me I know. Hope it doesn't deflect from the story too much.
Date: 01 Aug 2016 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
Aro is in trouble!
Date: 31 Jul 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
Edwards outrage was just needed to happen
Date: 31 Jul 2016 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
Please update sooner. Good story. Why not get her out of there right now and set her up in his condo? Wait that is where he keeps his one night stands?
Date: 31 Jul 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am so glad that Edward took such care of Isabella and admitted how much he cares for her, especially after the way she was treated, or I suppose I should say NOT TREATED or even CONSIDERED by Jasper!!! I am also very glad that she told him about Aro being there, she didn't seem to question it although I do realize that she was more than likely in severe shock from the previous events as well as the accident not to mention all of the garbage that Aro was spouting go her! However, I found it quite FISHY that he was there; making me think that either he was behind the set up and accident or Jasper was assisting him to try and get Bella away from Edward and the Cullen family. I really wouldn't put ANYTHING past Jasper as he has made it obvious from the very beginning that he didn't like Bella. I am very glad that Edward let into him and STRESSED the IMPORTANCE of Bella to him(Edward) as well as the family, because he soooooo had it coming and I am glad that Carlisle supported Edward and his actions after finding out how Bella was treated or in this case NOT TREATED!!! I did feel a tad sorry for the doctor though, the poor guy probably peed his pants after all the threatening Edward did towards him!!! Just saying!!!😋 Looking forward to the next update!!!!
Date: 31 Jul 2016 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Bella! Good for Edward!!
Date: 31 Jul 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 17
Jasper actually got off easier. I was glad carlisle agreed with edward. Now ir's very clear to edward That Aro had something to do with the crash.
Date: 31 Jul 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
I would say that Jasper and Aro were working together on the accident.
Date: 30 Jul 2016 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm happy with the way Edward handled things but Esme and Rose...All of them really need to be kissing her ass they fucked up. Aro needs to be handled swiftly
Date: 30 Jul 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good question Edward. I re-read that part several times in the last chapter. I thought t first that Aro was a hallucination the way that he just popped up. No one else seemed to notice him or comment. Why didn't Jasper's man (I noticed he called him Boss) speak up?
Author's Response:
Hi, asam 75,
I think Aro waited deliberatly untill Jasper had left, leaving only one of the lower ranking men to deal with Bella. Aro seemed to pose no threat to Bella and he will know she is related to him. If there had been a scene, or Bella had been distressed by him there, i'm sure he would have informed his boss. However, only the Cullens themselves knew that Aro needed to be watched, as he may be a threat to Bella. They had not made it know to the men. Probably now hoping that with the wedding, he would accept things and back off. Hope this answers your question.
Date: 30 Jul 2016 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
I am glad that Edward is on her side. Hopefully Bella will realize that it was Aro who probably caused the accident.
Date: 30 Jul 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Cnt wait until next chapter
Date: 30 Jul 2016 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good chapter. I'm so glad Edward and his father put the family in thier place. Love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 29 Jul 2016 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
I know she's hurt but she shouldn't make any decisions before speaking to Edward....jasper is an ass
Date: 26 Jul 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
Jasper and aro are in this together......Edwards probalby doesnt even know...But If I was bella I would leave and forget them all..........
Date: 26 Jul 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh man, sometthing tells me that JASPER is behind this and trying to run her off.
Date: 26 Jul 2016 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ugh jasper set her up I bet. Hmm is rose in on it too ? I wouldn't think so unless she is a really good actress
Date: 26 Jul 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
Well Aro made a good point on who they care about. Now a wedge is driven in and the seeds of doubt. She will leave I bet.
Date: 25 Jul 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
Don't go anywhere bella. Edward is going to rip some new a$$holes when he gets home.
Date: 25 Jul 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm really enjoying this story. The Cullens have a lot explaing to do. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 25 Jul 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
Good chapter, but I hate hanging here. Aro's right about how concerned the Cullen's weren't about her, but then again that was Jasper.
Date: 25 Jul 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward really needs to step up to the plate here or he is going to lose her. One can only take so much feeling unloved by the people around you before you have to get away.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
She is going to make edward jump through some hoop. I'm glad!!
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
Well then here we are in another marriage to someone she does not love. At least he is not her father's age.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wel from one damn frying pan right into the hot oit. YIKES
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ut oh. Well Edward made a play for Vicky so why just try to lie out of that? Ahh now Isabella is the successor to Aro's family. Maybe a Cullen shot him to advance Edward to hold that position with marriage.. err
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well She is not good at acting only at the running part, now that one was good. :-)
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well of course Edward likes blondes who Hang on his every word.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
You are doing great. I love Mafia stories. However I do not like such a speed to HEA. come on life is not like that and the Mafia are not sweet men waiting to do you good.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter
Date: 20 Jul 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
hmmm They really aren't making her feel wanted, except E a little bit. Can't blame her for Carlisle, Aro, and all the others making her feel like a pawn in a game
Date: 19 Jul 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope this works but I'm wondering why not just fly straight to Vegas and marry Bella before anyone can stop it from happening....Then go home and plan a big show for everyone to attend
Date: 19 Jul 2016 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope his snadwich doesn't get smooshed. Haha.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
Aro really is disgusting!!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
He needs sweet alice to come him crazy.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
Her ignoring him is working.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aro shot him for sure!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
Let the good times begin.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Way to go edward! Fave chapter so far!!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
Her response is going to be priceless!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
I hope they keep her safe....
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
Glad they got her out of there before the creepy old man showed up.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you for your hard efforts to post.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
Glad E got her out of there in time.
Date: 18 Jul 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
You ate doing great! Is edward one of the three suit guys i wonder?
Date: 15 Jul 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
If Edward and her sneak off an get married...Problem solved.
Date: 15 Jul 2016 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ugh I just knew Aro was going to sell her off..... or at least try to. Disgusting man.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm hooked can't wait until next chapter :)
Date: 11 Jul 2016 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
So aro is a bit freaky
Date: 11 Jul 2016 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow Aro is a real piece of work. POS for hurting her already. Doesn't bode well for her future. Jasper is still a wanker
Date: 11 Jul 2016 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
Jasper is not his friend!
Thank you.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
Monde cruel!
Je vous remercie
Date: 11 Jul 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
I like this fiction.
Thank you.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
She managed to escape Alec for the moment.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella is too confident, I do not believe that she is going to be able to escape him.
Kisses
Date: 11 Jul 2016 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
Aro is creepy...He seems to want her for himself. That might have been the reason Renee left. With her looking so much like her mother maybe he thinks he has a 2nd chance. Sick I know but possible
Date: 11 Jul 2016 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
She is slowly going to throw itself into the geule of the wolf.
Kisses
Date: 11 Jul 2016 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
She should pay attention.
If his new name is known of the mafia !!!
Kisses
Date: 11 Jul 2016 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this beginning!
Date: 11 Jul 2016 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well Aro is not quite the loving Grandfather is he? I wonder if Aro had Felix killed so he could put Bella in the boss position and then marry off Bella to another family to increase their strength. As for Edward he doesn't want to be her friend because he wants to have her as his girlfriend or wife. The funeral in New York should bring some things to light.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wish Edward would have heard her talk with Aro as I think he might set here straight
Date: 10 Jul 2016 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm betting he wants to be way more than just her friend.
Date: 09 Jul 2016 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad b called e on his crap.
Date: 09 Jul 2016 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
I don't think she understand what Edward was trying to tell her.....but he does need to pull his head out.
Date: 09 Jul 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
im still reading
haha please update on sunday
Date: 09 Jul 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
ABSOLUTELY!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!
Date: 09 Jul 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
It's too bad she lost her cousin. I think they could have related to each other better than she will with Aro.