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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

LOVE the start of this.  Always disliked how much she was kept in the dark.



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Thank you, glad you like it xx

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Reviewer: Galudan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

One problem with Bella's Plans to ask him to leave, is she forgetting the whole fact that a promise was made to the Volturi. An agreement that if broken will mean death for them all, though Aro would likely keep Alice, Jasper, and Edward making them join the guard. Aro would also possibly turn Bella himself to find out what her blocking of his and Jane's Gifts will become as one of them.



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Thanks for reading, you're quite right about that omission xx

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Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

cool :)



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Thanks xx

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Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

It is a good chapter!

Thank you.



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thank you xx

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Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bella at least gets a happy ever after.



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Thanks, Glad you liked it xx

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Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

great story



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Thanks, glad you liked it x

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