Date: 25 Nov 2016 11:30 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue
Thanks for an entertaining story.
Date: 25 Oct 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue
Great Story.
Date: 06 Jul 2016 8:15 AM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue
Great & sweet little story. Loved it. Thanks for sharing it.
Date: 27 Jun 2016 4:20 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue
thank you for sharing this sweet little story with us ;D
Date: 20 Jun 2016 6:12 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue
Great story. Thanks so much!
Date: 16 Jun 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue
Loved it d84;a039;
Date: 16 Jun 2016 7:41 AM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue
Thanks so much for another great story. I always look forward to more :)
Date: 16 Jun 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue
Good story, just too short.
Date: 15 Jun 2016 5:27 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue
Thank you. I've enjoyed this but as anything good, I wanted more.
Date: 15 Jun 2016 5:25 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue
Sweet ending. TY for writing and sharing
Date: 15 Jun 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue
:) loved this story. Going to miss this Edward and Bella too
Date: 15 Jun 2016 4:17 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue
Oh I loved it. Short but oh so sweet at the end.
Date: 15 Jun 2016 1:31 AM Title: Chapter-14
That was so sweet he picked his right time
Date: 14 Jun 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter-14
Lovely story ! I only wish it was longer !
Date: 14 Jun 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter-14
awww so nice of him to bring Rose
Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:08 PM Title: Chapter-13
Edward needs to step up and declare his love.
Date: 13 Jun 2016 4:03 AM Title: Chapter-13
Alice will give him the right shove lol
Date: 13 Jun 2016 3:09 AM Title: Chapter-13
he can offer her a great love that maybe she will stay for.
Date: 12 Jun 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter-13
Men can be so clueless.
Date: 12 Jun 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter-13
Lol medicine taste isn't much better today.
Date: 12 Jun 2016 7:16 AM Title: Chapter-12
Will this little fic have a lemon?
Date: 12 Jun 2016 6:28 AM Title: Chapter-12
Glad someone told e where he went. Gawd people of that age were stupidly superstitious
Date: 12 Jun 2016 3:24 AM Title: Chapter-12
Still loving this tale together at last.
Date: 12 Jun 2016 2:31 AM Title: Chapter-12
good chapter thank you
Date: 12 Jun 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter-12
He told her what she needed to here
Date: 11 Jun 2016 9:22 PM Title: Chapter-12
That explains her sudden disappearance.
Date: 11 Jun 2016 4:46 PM Title: Chapter-11
overwhelmed I would venture a guess.
Date: 11 Jun 2016 6:38 AM Title: Chapter-11
She is hot for him!
Date: 11 Jun 2016 12:00 AM Title: Chapter-11
Good thing Aro stayed quite
Date: 10 Jun 2016 6:31 PM Title: Chapter-11
oooh B recognizes him. Hope she doesn't try to run.
Date: 10 Jun 2016 2:14 PM Title: Chapter-10
Burn Aro and his religious pricks. The Laird would lose the respect and confidence of his subjects if he goes through with it.
Date: 10 Jun 2016 9:36 AM Title: Chapter-10
Oooohhh. This is getting good Edward as a champion...yes and please.
Date: 10 Jun 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter-10
You my sweetie are the tease! Giving us just enough to wet our whistle and then bammm!!! it's gone.(lol) READ YOU SOON 😋💞d24;
Date: 10 Jun 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter-10
Aye and so he will save her from death.
Date: 09 Jun 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter-10
OMG he will fight for her love it
Date: 09 Jun 2016 2:11 PM Title: Chapter-9
hurry up Edward you have to fight for her or your Mama will not get healing.
Date: 09 Jun 2016 2:06 PM Title: Chapter-8
Well they did that in that day. Sad isn't it what people do when they don't understand the differences of others.
Date: 09 Jun 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter-9
Great chapter! Unfortunately, many women lost their lives this way during that time. Idiocy!
Date: 08 Jun 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter-9
Lord Edward to the rescue!
Date: 08 Jun 2016 8:20 PM Title: Chapter-9
Edward will be that Knight
Date: 08 Jun 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter-9
Aro and all his "brethern" should be burned at the stake. Stupid men
Date: 08 Jun 2016 3:49 AM Title: Chapter-8
Edward will get to her and when he figures out who she is nothing will stop him
Date: 08 Jun 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter-8
Aww, I feel bad for Bella.
Date: 08 Jun 2016 2:24 AM Title: Chapter-8
Loving this and on pins & needles.
Date: 07 Jun 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter-8
Men.....Sigh. lol for E calling out Crowley
Date: 07 Jun 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter-8
I I like this story very much it is a big change from your usual type of story, and I am glad to see you are branching out into different genres . Keep up the good work !
I only have a couple of slight corrections to note. When you refer to the "land of the Scots," you should use only one "t" or you are talking about property belonging to a family named "Scott," not the people of Scotland . AND a person (usually accused of heresy or witchcraft) being executed is said to be "burned at the stake " (singular ). "Stakes" usually refers to a horse race.
Really like your work and look forward to the rest of the story .
Date: 07 Jun 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter-8
Father Aro has too much power
Date: 07 Jun 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter-7
Men always think they know best, esp religious ones
Date: 06 Jun 2016 11:07 PM Title: Chapter-6
I feel for Edward and Esme. I hope they can find help for her in time!
Date: 06 Jun 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter-7
Father Aro needs to feel the equivalent pain of child birth
Date: 06 Jun 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter-7
Aro didn't like Bella s help
Date: 06 Jun 2016 8:15 PM Title: Chapter-7
Is Edward going to miss her because she was arrested already? I don't think Edward had anything to do with that.
Date: 06 Jun 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter-7
ut oh. hurry Edward
Date: 06 Jun 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter-2
the simple mind of a child.
Date: 05 Jun 2016 4:27 AM Title: Chapter-5
Now to find the healer is that Bella?
Date: 05 Jun 2016 3:51 AM Title: Chapter-5
oooh the plot thickens
Date: 05 Jun 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter-5
Good start, write another chaptersoon and maybe longer ones please
Date: 04 Jun 2016 10:05 PM Title: Chapter-5
I enjoy mystical stories with surprising twists.
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter-5
I hope something can be done for her. I wonder if the healer will be Isabella....
Date: 04 Jun 2016 6:44 AM Title: Chapter-4
I love the story so far, but the chapters are so short. THAK YOU
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter-4
I like this one so far. Very interesting ! Keep up the great work !
Date: 03 Jun 2016 6:00 PM Title: Chapter-4
Prejudice over the centuries.
Date: 03 Jun 2016 5:29 PM Title: Chapter-4
Poor Edward. Hope Alice can help.
Date: 03 Jun 2016 4:39 PM Title: Chapter-3
This story intrigues me. Keep posting
Date: 02 Jun 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter-3
That is so sad why was she crying
Date: 02 Jun 2016 5:56 PM Title: Chapter-3
This makes me so sad. I can't wait to find out what is going on. Thanks!
Date: 02 Jun 2016 5:15 PM Title: Chapter-2
I love Isabella! She must keep her Mother busy!
Date: 02 Jun 2016 4:52 PM Title: Chapter-2
Rosemaria...too cute
Date: 02 Jun 2016 4:52 PM Title: Chapter-1
aww little E is cute
Date: 02 Jun 2016 1:20 PM Title: Chapter-2
Awwwwwww..they're both so sweet! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann xo
Date: 02 Jun 2016 7:30 AM Title: Chapter-2
She was so proud of herself
Author's Response:
Lol. Little ones are like that, don't you think? ;)
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann xo
Date: 01 Jun 2016 9:58 PM Title: Chapter-2
More please.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann xo
Date: 01 Jun 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter-2
:)
Author's Response:
:D
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann xo
Date: 01 Jun 2016 4:35 PM Title: Chapter-2
So sweet I love your stories I am a long time fan.
Author's Response:
Aww ... you're sweet. :*
Thank you. :)
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann xo
Date: 01 Jun 2016 3:54 PM Title: Chapter-2
They sound so cute. About what age?
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Edward is about 10 and Isabella is 8.
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann xo
Date: 01 Jun 2016 11:16 AM Title: Chapter-1
The good beginning!
Has tomorrow
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you.
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann xo
Date: 01 Jun 2016 11:07 AM Title: Chapter-1
Looking forward to reading more
Author's Response:
Hey Deb. *waves*
It's always great to have words from you, hon. :*
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann xo
Date: 01 Jun 2016 10:47 AM Title: Chapter-1
I can't wait to see how this plays out! Thanks!
Author's Response:
You're welcome. :)
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann xo
Date: 01 Jun 2016 7:15 AM Title: Chapter-1
So far so good.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you.
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann xo
Date: 01 Jun 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter-1
Sounds good cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you.
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann xo
Date: 01 Jun 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter-1
I'm in....Wooooo hooooo!!! daily updates too. Hello my friend it's been a while but your magic has sucked me in 😊 READ YOU SOON 💖💙💚💛
Author's Response:
Hey! Hi! How have you been?
Yes, it's been a LONG time. :)
It's good to hear from you again.
Welcome aboard on this journey. ;)
Take care.
Ann xo
Date: 31 May 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter-1
Kitten, thanks so much for doing this for Granpa! He's excited, and truly your FanboyinGranpa! *Giggles*
Loved working with you again...we make a great team! All my regular reviews will be on FFN. But my love for you will go wherever you go! *winks*
Love you so much! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- Your Granma Dee (FangirlinGranma)
Author's Response:
You're welcome, Granma. I'm glad to have you with me on this journey. :)
Love you too.
xo