Date: 01 Nov 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don't like Carlisle!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
no carlisle she is going to be your end i have a feeling... you are a bastard!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2010 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
damn Carlisle!
kind of a fucked up person
i was just wondering... was edwards training in some way the same as kung fu? That kind where your body gets beating so much that it becomes hard as steal
i just watched a show about child-training kung fu... really sick, but those kid where defiantly tough
you can see some for yourself by youtube-search: shaolin kung fu
Author's Response:
Hey you!!
I didnt base Edward's training on anything really, but yes, he did have VERY intense physical training in order to harden himself. His favourite forms of hand to hand combat include Brazilian Ju Jitsu (submissions and ground fighting) and Muay Thai (striking and kicking, it's an asian form of kickboxing. kinda. lol), although he is proficient in many forms of martial arts and hand to hand combat. Im a total freak for all kinds of fighting though so im definately going to go and youtube that shaolin kung fu. LOL.
If you want any youtube clips on muay thai or BJJ just let me know and I will email you some links.
Thanks for the review chickee!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
That you have done... without the outakes the ambivilance of Carlise to Bella and Jasper makes less sense.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh shit his kind of love is sick and twisted. Awesome chapter though.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
omg why is carlisle such a douche! i mean let ur boy be men, he has esme and he fell in love why cant edward to i hv 2 say I do NOT LIKE HIM AT ALL!
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Carlisle is such an ass! He thinks it is ok for him to have and love Esme as much as he does but doesn't want his children, who he claims to love, to experience that kind of happiness!?!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh carlisle is a man with lots of messed up ideas, he really thinks he can kill of bella and edward wont know, edward will be lost without her like everything else in his life it the very extreme version of events falling in love is no different he just has the extreme reactions, after carlisle thoughts about jasper i think he wants his two children single, and he dosent know whats going on between esme and edward i would so love to know thanks tracy
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
how can he think of himself as a good father when he stole eddie's childhood and brought him into this world? i can sorta see how daddy c thought he was doing right by his family and providing for them, twisted logic but he was trying to give his family the best. but to force this life on his 10 year old son? and in such a way? no logic behind that and no way does it show love for his child. then to say that alice was too good for the life? oh my god, double standard anyone?!?!
Date: 07 Apr 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Mr C is a little evil bastard... I still like him... Can I kill him??
Oh I am fucked up...
I dont really make sense...
xx
Marianne ;)
Date: 31 Jan 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh gosh...is that some magical foreshadowing..or what...yikes.. I am scared...Have I told you today that I love this story...
Well, I love your story..
Thanks..K.. BY BY