Date: 11 Jun 2023 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 45
Loved it!
Date: 11 Jun 2023 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 44
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 11 Jun 2023 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 42
Loved it! Poor Bella and Edward!
Date: 11 Jun 2023 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 11 Jun 2023 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Bella!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 45
Phew! I didn't think they'd ever get together.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 34
You're knitting a very fine web of suspects.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 32
I have a couple of ideas flying around my head.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 30
Esme needs to know everything.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 29
It started with her first incident with Edward. Edward was running from something/one. I wonder if whatever he was involved with ties into Bella bumping into him?
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 26
I had a feeling Jacob & company might have something to do with it.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 22
See what manners get you? A crazy stalker.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 19
Manners be damned. She doesn't owe anything to that arrogant ape,
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
I can't read this fast enough.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
"Rescue Ink" an excellent story.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2017 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
At first I thought he was just testing her but now I think he's been through some Hell.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2017 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
He was in the wrong place at the right time for Bella to use him as her temper board.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
Does she even have any emotions?
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm curious to see where the title ties in.
Date: 14 Nov 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 45
They both deserve a happy ending.
Date: 24 Oct 2016 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 45
Oh wow, I loved this story. Proper intrigue. A heroine who we can sympathise with, who's made something of herself after a hard start in life. A man who is by turns a tramp and a potential rapist but allways sweet and respectful.
There are so many times when Bella could just have walked away but she stood by her man and that solid basis of friendship finally evolved into true love! Sigh....
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2016 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 45
Great story & I really enjoyed getting updates & reading your story, I just felt the end was rushed, a lot of loose ends & unanswered questions or whatever. I just had to say what everyone else wasn;t saying. Ending was too rushed & just seems incomplete, other than that, great story.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 45
This has been a wonderful story . Keep up the great work !
Date: 18 Oct 2016 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 45
Great story. Thanks
Date: 17 Oct 2016 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 45
I hate to see it end
Date: 17 Oct 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 45
OH! I guess I should have known that the end was coming when you posted 3 chapters today. I didn't. Silly me. I knew you were winding down, but you really wrapped this up very nicely at the end. I'm a bit stunned that you gave me a HEA with Esme. Hmmm....I'll take it! Thanks and I look forward to whatever comes next from you!
Date: 17 Oct 2016 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 44
Oh poor Edward! What an extreme reaction he had. Damn Tanya! I'm really glad to be getting all this backstory, thanks!
Date: 17 Oct 2016 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 43
Tanya, ever the slut. She broke Edward's heart. I'm glad he cried and got that out. I see you've posted 3 chapters of this story this morning, so I'll go on to read the next one.
Date: 15 Oct 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 42
So glad Jacob is going down for beating Edward
Date: 15 Oct 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 42
Finally, Jacob is out of the way! Poor Edward, having to hear him admit that Jacob and his friends were the ones who beat him up in the park. I hope Bella can console him!
Date: 15 Oct 2016 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 42
Poor Edward, he just can't seem to catch a break.
Date: 12 Oct 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 41
Edward is stronger than he realizes.
Date: 11 Oct 2016 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 41
Awesome. Loved it's!!
Date: 11 Oct 2016 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 41
whoa! that was some reveal! Did he just confess to framing Edward and beating him up? at the very least, Leah is in violation of her restraing order, or whatever is keeping her from Edward, right? Jacob is such an overconfident asshole!
Date: 11 Oct 2016 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 41
Wow, didn't see that coming
Date: 11 Oct 2016 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 41
Glad Jacob hasn't turned violent yet. I still think it was insane for Bella not to leave the apartment. I hope Jasper turns up with reinforcements before Jacob hurts someone.
Date: 10 Oct 2016 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 40
Jacob obviously thinks he has something to hold over her.....now I want to know what is is.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 40
She needs to kick his a**.
Date: 08 Oct 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 40
oh man. Jacob is really a piece of work! He is dangerous, I think, as his grasp on reality is very tenuous! I'll bet it was him, and/or Sam, and maybe Leah, who beat up Edward! I hope Edward shows up in time to interfere with what Jacob has planned for Bella! Gripping chapter! How are you? I haven't heard from you for a while....
Author's Response:
Hey honey I'm fine I just don't like leaving messages for you on this open review, do you still look at FF if you do I can pm you
Date: 08 Oct 2016 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 40
I hope Bella can dial 911 or she should just walk out of her apartment and to the doorman
Date: 06 Oct 2016 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 39
That went well! Now that we see where the video came from, and that it was obviously doctored, and now that Caius has seen the truth, maybe we can finally get to the bottom of it. It's sweet how all his years on the street have made Edward into an almost childlike man. Not that I would wish that on anybody, but it's good to be able to see a benefitial side to his misfortune. He hasn't a clue how he turns Bella on, does he?
Date: 06 Oct 2016 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 39
Wow, the plot gets thicker.
Date: 03 Oct 2016 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 38
Love the story.
Date: 02 Oct 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 38
Esme's husband should be locked up!!!!
Date: 02 Oct 2016 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 38
ooh yes! of course she will! i thought he'd never ask. so i'm wondering why they never used this incriminating footage of Esme getting beaten at her ex's trial. did you already tell us that? guess i willfind outsoon if you didn't already. i still get a charge out of seeing my name in this story!
Date: 01 Oct 2016 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 38
So glad he asked her
Date: 01 Oct 2016 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 38
Hope he doesn't run when he hears about the clippings..
Date: 30 Sep 2016 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 37
In a way it's better this way. Bella can have Emmett tell Edward she believes the allegations are unfounded & wants to hear his side of things as soon as he is ready to tell her.
Date: 29 Sep 2016 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 37
Wow, some peopk will go to all lenghts for revenge.
Date: 28 Sep 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 37
This has become about so much more than a homeless Edward. What I can't quite figure out yet is how that ties into this new thing with Bella being followed and filmed, James Hunter, the candy, and all that....I'll keep reading and trust you to show the way...
Date: 27 Sep 2016 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 37
Bella better be smart enough to know that these are lies against Edward. It is the black mailer.
Date: 26 Sep 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 35
Didn't see any of that coming from the last two chapters
Date: 25 Sep 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 37
I'm not sure if it was Rose or Bella who spoke at the end. It is good that they know it's a smear campaign against Edward. I'm almost expecting that Jacob and Company were the rapists. I wonder if when they were beating up the homeless dude if they saw their scapegoat or they've even made the connection between the two