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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2018 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

So good and hot.

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2018 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 16

wow...can't wait to see what has caused his nightmares...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2018 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 16

He is screwed and he is going to ge his ass kicked if he bad mouths Rose again.  He is a mess poor guy.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2018 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 15

OMFG he needs her and no one else will do.  What happened in his past who or what is the monster???

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2018 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 14

My heart is just braking for her. She is in so much pain

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2018 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 16

So what is the monster??

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2018 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

Jerk

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2018 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 16

OMG Loved it can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2018 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

He needs a therapist so bad!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2018 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 15

That was a rough dream!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2018 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 14

I really wanted her to text him and just say it was more than sex to her.  I hope edward will have pulled his head out of his butt by the time she gets back.  Jake's back story was probably one of the sweetest i have read.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2018 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Edward 

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2018 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story is awesome.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2018 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 13

So sad they both want each other but have to be tough about it.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2018 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

OMG , Love it can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

They should be honest with each other 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow do they need to communicate

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 13

Thanks for the update so quickly!! I would like to knock their two heads together and tell them to stop being stupid!! :D

Reviewer: duiskue23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 13

I loved were this story was going when I first read it. I'm glad your starting it back up. It's really good so far. I can't wait for more updates.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

I truly love this story!!!!! I hope you are able to keep updating!  These two are so addicting!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 11

I really want him to get first place!  I'm also worried about his reaction to DC.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 9

Finally

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 10

He has felt so unwanted most of his life. It's very sad.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

There is still so much bad stuff to talk about. I'm worried!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 8

Goodness gracious! Could he be anymore dramatic!  I'm not sure who is more damaged!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 7

Come on Bella!! You can do it!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 6

They are so intense!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

Finally one of them stepped up!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

Goodness what ever cut her sounds really bad!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Yes he should text bella and take the modeling contract with his own stipulations of no tanya!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 2

What happened to her? I think that has something to do with her fear.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is delicious!!  

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2018 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh man...shes in deep

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

great first chapter!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 12

Good to hear from you thanks.  Edward is hooked he should stop fighting it He is Bella's and Bella is his.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 11

Can't wait for more please post soon you have me so hooked 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 11

Emmett is just a shit starter lol he knows how to fire Edward up.  Why is Edward fighting his feelings for Bella?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 10

They both have secerts

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 9

That was a perfect make up

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 11

honestly, i was a little nervous about how things

started out in the beginning...the covert meetings

and sex with a stranger in the dark...but your writing made it

so endearing almost, so natural b/t these 2.

and i love how you made bella so smart and not

whiny or weak minded, so far without being obnoxiously

unreasonably stubborn. 

can't wait for the update(s) :)

Reviewer: lizzielutz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loving the story,  motorcross, hot sexy, dominate , Edward. Can't wait for update. Thanks for sharing 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 11

Just caught up on the whole story and I am loving it!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

I"m in love.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love it!!

Reviewer: Rachael Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

Thanks for updating.  I hope they can me honest with each other!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 11

:):)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love the story 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 8

WOW he was being an ASS good thing he pulled his head out of his ASS.  Poor Bella she is so clueless she thinks it is her he didnt want.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

I am so excited for them to meet.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: Rachael Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

Whoa...that was something!  I can't wait to find out what happens next!  :)

Reviewer: Rachael Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved the back story.  I wish Bella would give this a chance!  I was so sad to see that chapters 7 and 8 didn't exist!



Author's Response:

that was a mistake on my part. I have corrected it now and ch. 7 & 8 are up. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 6

Love this chapter but chapters 7&8 did not post.



Author's Response:

That was a mistake on my part. but it's fixed now and ch. 7 & 8 are up. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 6

Bella got the family that she need and they needed her to.  Edward is missing her as much as she is missing him.  Love Rose she is to cool.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Edward he is in so much pain

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 4

So happy you posted

Reviewer: yna asza Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story and can't wait for the next chapter....

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

Gawh I am hooked can't wait for more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 4

Its funny when everything you thought you wanted happens and it is not what really matters anymore.  Bella is so confused now.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2016 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 4

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loving it yes he needs to text Bella.  He needs to sign with to be a model and kick Tanya's ass lol.  Cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2016 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

So sad what is she so afraid of.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

So loving it and so happy you are going on with it thank you

Reviewer: arat Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

loving it so far, really would loveto see where this goes. Character development is fantastic... kept me on the edge of my seat ;)

Reviewer: Rachael Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

I really enjoyed the one-shot in the contest, and am lookig forward to the expansion!  I am a little bummed that it seems so angsty so far...keeping fingers crossed!  :)

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Really enjoying what you have so far I do hope you post again soon

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

I have to read the next chapter I have to know more

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is great you have me hooked so glad I have two. More chapters to read please keep going with it

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