Date: 07 May 2016 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great update I just hope you don't have the girls get raped or for bella to lose the baby.
Date: 07 May 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great update I just hope you don't have the girls get raped or for bella to lose the baby.
Date: 06 May 2016 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
I was just gonna say. Satilight phones are what you need no cells. Cells don't work in the Jungle.
Date: 02 May 2016 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ohhhh so good. Great update. Edward does need to stay put. Are you going to hurt the girls! I can't wait. Great job.
Date: 01 May 2016 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love it, love it, love it! Excitement from start to finish. I can't wait for the coven to go get the girls and for Edward and Sean to meet up with Roberto, that is going to be one painful and messy meeting.
Date: 01 May 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
As always exciting, fast paced and family! XOXO,Cheri
Date: 01 May 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
So thrilled to see this continuation of your wonderful story. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
Woman my heart is fluttering! You have me on pins and needles.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow! This is intense!!! Love it!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
I have to laugh that it took Edward waking up from a semi-coma to remind them about the tracking devices. All this time & no one even thought of it::))
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
That's it they were localized !
Good chapter!
Thank you.
Date: 01 May 2016 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Huge sigh of relief havin' Edward awake, havin' escaped from the claws of the devil himself LOL! And for our heroes finally puttin' two and two together to find Bella and Elizabeth *fist bump!* Now to go get 'em and make Roberto pay in blood!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMG ! Love your story can not wait to read more!
Date: 01 May 2016 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
Things are going on quite well, I hope it'll be the same for the girls...
Oh no... I think finding out its Bella that's pregnant not Elizabeth will be very hard on Sean :(
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love it so far, please write more.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
Sean is going to kick Roberto ASS!!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
I couldn't sleep and to my surprise I found an update. It's 2am here in Cali and I'm all smiles. 😄 It's a relief to know that at least they now know we're the girls are. I'm hoping for Sean's sake that Elizabeth is in fact pregnant also. OMG! I am so excited 😊and concerned 😳 because when we last heard from them Roberto Cortez said he was gonna make Bella his. They need to hurry over there and kill Mr Cortez. READ YOU SOON 💞
Date: 01 May 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Roberto is in for a world of hurt! Sean and Edward are going to make him pay!!!!
great chapter. Please update, soon. 😘
Date: 01 May 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
Just found your stories and have really enjoyed them! Thank you so much for posting them. I can't wait to read the remainder of this one! Great job!!!
Date: 01 May 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh hell yeah. Edwards up and now Sean is going to get their women.
Date: 01 May 2016 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
Glad that they have tracked down the ladies. Looking forward to going back to their point of view soon.
Date: 01 May 2016 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
OK are men in the crew are laughing cause in their words, "Sean is caring around Bella pee stick".
Now we are trying to figure out how Roberto will get away when Sean gets there and the only thing we can come up with is 1) he has a meeting or 2) he has a photoshoot for a commercial. Can't wait to see what you come up with. Also us girls are feeling bad for Elizabeth when she tells Sean she is not pregnant and Sean too.
KEEP WRITING!!!! ALSO BOUND HAS BEEN POLLED ON FACEBOOK MAFIAWARD TWILIGHT FANFICTION!!!🚑🚒💖
Date: 01 May 2016 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 01 May 2016 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
:O :O :O :O
Date: 01 May 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
I hope they rip that bastard Roberto to shreds,Aro the asshole started it all.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
This chapter is perfect, because it will allow us to see the coven in action. It will allow us to see the badness that is Bella Cullen and her side kick Elizabeth. I thought the punishment they gave Aro was horrendous, I guess they will burn Roberto alive or skin him, I hope they get them women like tomorrow.
Date: 01 May 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love everything about this series! Please please please update soon!
Date: 01 May 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
I wish I could be there to see Sean kill that asshole Cortez. It is always a happy day when I get an update on my favorite story!!!!! Thanks for writing.
Date: 01 May 2016 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for more.
Date: 01 May 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 3
this was so worth the wait to find out whats going on at least they know where they are at now i cant wait to see how they get them out of there so please a thousand times update soon
Date: 01 May 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love how you added the pictures....
Date: 01 May 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
So exciting the way things are playing out. Even though Edward is injured your other characters still keep the story interesting and exciting. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
Please keep it coming... So ADDICTED...
Date: 30 Apr 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yay, yay! Can't wait to see Sean in action. Pretty sure the ladies may get to do some damage as well. It is only fitting asshole Cortez gets some Bella justice meted out to him. I hope the Coven takes out his whole operation b4 his very eyes b4 his execution. Nobody messes with this B&E. I just love them.
Date: 30 Apr 2016 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
This story is going to give me a heart attack. I'm glad they at least know where the ladies are.
Date: 30 Apr 2016 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
So excited to get this update. I have been so looking forward to this update. I am glad they have found out where Bella and Elizabeth are. Glad Edward is going to be ok.
Date: 30 Apr 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love it. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2016 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am so thrilled with this chapter Clo well done my friend excellent writing...Deb
Date: 30 Apr 2016 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
I especially liked the lines about Edward running through hell.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love It, Can not wait for MORE. Thank You for your time.
Date: 30 Apr 2016 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
I liked that chapter. Was excited to see it in my in box.
Glad they found the girls.
Looking forward to more :D
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is getting so exciting but please let Edwards baby be okay
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved the update.
Now make them go and kick some ass.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
why did he what bella did he know her before ?
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Will they have to tie Edward to the bed to keep him there?
Date: 30 Apr 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for the next One
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOVED chapter 2 can't wait till you update again
Date: 23 Apr 2016 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMG! That manip of Edward in the hospital bed had me snotsobbin'! Good news is that Edward made it through the surgery...bad news is Roberto has Bella and Elizabeth so I hope someone remembers their trackers ASAP!
Date: 23 Apr 2016 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
wow! excited to read the 3rd installment!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
The power of love is undeniably strong between Edward and Bella! Got all my fingers and toes crossed they get out of this mess!
And I'm so pleased you were gently coerced to continue this wonderful trilogy, Clo darlin'!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh Crap, Aro created this monster. When they find this fool heaven help him.
Date: 21 Apr 2016 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 21 Apr 2016 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love it can wait for the next chapter
Date: 20 Apr 2016 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
I cannot wait for more. Seriously I run home and check every day for a new chapter! I feel sorry for this schelp when Edward and Sean get a hold of him. He will wish he was dead, especially if touches Bella.
Date: 18 Apr 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love this story.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
I guess Roberto will be in for a rude awakening if he hinks Bella will be full compliant to his advances; )
And I have a feeling he wont be the only one...
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I might be a little naive here, but shouldn't the hit Aro put out for Edward be null and void after his death? I mean, Roberto could have let it go unnoticed as he got the money already and Aro is out as well... Taking Bella of course still makes sense, seeing how much of a reaction he showed to her picture only tthough.
But why take Elizabeth as well? She's another unknown factor for them...
Date: 17 Apr 2016 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
Excellent chapter !!! I LOVE that you add pictures. Thanks so much for updating. Have a good week !!
Date: 17 Apr 2016 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow. Excellent chapter. Thanks
Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Uh-oh! Poor Edward and Bella! Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
Playing dumb will pay off for them.....eventually and then I hope they kick some ass. (lol) READ YOU SOON💖
Date: 17 Apr 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh I hope they are going to get out soon and then Edward will get his revenge.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMGosh!!!!!! This is so good. Glad Edward is going to fully recover. I am a little scared for Bella and her baby.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Holy Moly... Edward is going to go on a killing spree!!
Looking forward to more :D
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yes so Sean thinks that Elizabeth is pregnant. 1 bet down 1 bet to go.
Now we are wondering how Bella and Elizabeth will stall Roberto until Sean and Jasper can get there.
Also we are worried that the drug they gave Bella to knock her out if it will harm the baby???
KEEP WRITING!!!!🚑🚒💖💞
Date: 17 Apr 2016 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
I knew Sean would find the pregnancy test and think it was Elizabeth who was pregnant. But this will just spur him on further to find the two. I guess Roberto thinks that Edward was killed but won't he be surprised!
Ugh...I hate reading a WiP. :(
Clo, thank you for continuing this story!! :)
Date: 17 Apr 2016 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Of course it's Roberto! Heck, all of the other bosses were at the party!
Date: 16 Apr 2016 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
That is rather presumptuous of her kidnapper. Does he know who and what she is? If so, why does he think this will work? Is he sane? Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
Roberto is not going to know what hit him with these girls. Great pictures Clo!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to see them kick ass, great chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh way did you have to leave there dam now you have to update asap please
Date: 16 Apr 2016 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
Glad Edward seems to be out of the woods now and an looking forward to next update to see how Bella and Elizabeth are coping x
Date: 16 Apr 2016 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well I hope they get out soon. Then Edward wakes up. Or he wakes up and goes ape shit crazy and tracks her down. I hope they are still wearing their trackers. Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nous vous remercions de ce chapitre!
Comme d'habitude, il est très bon, je me réjouis de la poursuite (suite).
Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ik love this story
Date: 16 Apr 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you Thank you for continuing. This is brilliant. I love everything about it and anxiously await every chapter you write. I love it!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it keep up the good work
Date: 14 Apr 2016 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
I suck at reviews. But I'm glad you continued it. Great chapter, can't wait for the next.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 13 Apr 2016 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please update soon i love this story
Date: 12 Apr 2016 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE!??!?!!?!??!?!?!?
Date: 11 Apr 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for continuing your story and sharing with us.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh my God!! i really need an update and quick! a very intense chapter! thanks clo
Date: 11 Apr 2016 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 11 Apr 2016 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story and love how you put photos every chacter. Keep going your doing greate. I love this edward
Date: 11 Apr 2016 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you you are the best. I can't wait for thenext chapter!! Thank you to your team. I love the story. Elizabeth and Bella are going to kick some ASS i hope. Thanks Sandy
Date: 10 Apr 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am so glad you are continuing your writing. You have a wonderful talent and I am so grateful to read it! This is very exciting and I know when Edward comes to and is able to get around, there will be HELL to pay. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please don't abandon his story!!
Date: 10 Apr 2016 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi. I have not written before but felt this was the time. Continue writing. Don't let anyone stop you from expressing yourself. If they don't like it, don't read it. I look forward to reading all of this story.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the dream E&B conversation. Happy that Edward isn't D O A and that Bella and the baby haven't been hurt too badly yet
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love your story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoyed it, I can't wait to read more!
Date: 10 Apr 2016 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
your back! your back! YAY YAY