[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2016 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love this story! Can't wait for the rest!
Date: 21 Jun 2016 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Not a bad plan as long as Sean can refrain from saying the F word
Date: 21 Jun 2016 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you for your update.
I wonder how bad Edward is going to take this... and being bound to a bed - that's going to be hard. I'm looking forward to see how they are going to arrange the rescue process.
I guess mext chapter is going to be about the girls. I'm looking forward to see how they are going to keep the assholes away. I hope nothing happens to them.
Date: 21 Jun 2016 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it :) thanks for the update. it will be interesting to see how edward takes it lol
Date: 21 Jun 2016 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love you soo hard right now..... wait that sounds wrong.... oh well great story although the suspense is killing me here....impatiently waiting on the next update!!!
Love,Tink
Date: 21 Jun 2016 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you for the update but WHY did you stop there??????????? More More More just getting good!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2016 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
Are you SERIOUS!!!!!! A CLIFFY? Meanie ( he he he) You've been missed. 😊READ YOU SOON.
Date: 21 Jun 2016 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
Damn daddy c. Is it hot in here? Great chapter. This was perfect.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2016 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. I don't envy them when they show Edward those pictures.
Date: 21 Jun 2016 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yay So Happy That You Have Finally Updated 😊😊
Sorry To Hear That You've Had Writers Block 😞😞 Must Be A Real B**ch To Have
Oh That Hot Piece Of Candy Meat Doc Better Have More Than A Tranquiler For Edward
I Hope They Make Roberto Suffer Badly (Like Kill Him VERY VERY VERY Slowly) & Letting Bella & Elizabeth Have A Piece Of Him Too 😌😌
Can't Wait For E&B To Be Reunited & For Him To Find Out That He's Going To Be A Daddy 😄😄
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Update Soon (like tomorrow lol)
Date: 21 Jun 2016 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
Such powerful male roles. They are thrilling to read. Not the crime. Just all that testosterone oozing off the page. Yum. Really enjoyed this update. Thanks.
Date: 21 Jun 2016 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
I was laying on my stomach on my bed when I saw this update. Next thing I know I'm on my knees, ass in the air like some tail wagging hyper ass dog. So much for being even a little bit dignified. That' how in love I am with this series & all the characters. Love Sean & Alec. Edward's gonna poop his pants when he finds out Bella's pregnant. He'll be a big blubbering baby
. Can't wait. Waiting on updates is excrutiating.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
This is so intense and scary I wish this rescue was over. Bella's pregnant too, I believe.
Date: 21 Jun 2016 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
Off to a great start!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh shit did the Doc bring a tranqulizer gun cause whenEdward see's those pic of Bella's face all hell is gonna break loose.Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2016 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
Cant wait for more
Date: 21 Jun 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
Damn.... Ripped Carlisle... wow.. pass me a fan! ;)
Date: 21 Jun 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
I can't imagine Edward staying behind! Is Elizabeth pregnant, too? Or just Bella? I forgot....glad you're back! Loving this story!
Date: 21 Jun 2016 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loving this story, thanks for the update.
Date: 21 Jun 2016 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 21 Jun 2016 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Good to see this again.
Date: 21 Jun 2016 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well worth the wait and I cant wait for more
Date: 21 Jun 2016 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
They are getting closer to bringing the girls home. Im anxious to see them home. I can't see Edward being left behind. I look forward to another update.
Date: 21 Jun 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Had to have special meeting!!!!
We all agree Edward will lose his shit!!!
KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑💖
Date: 21 Jun 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
So excited to get this update today. Love me some Carlisle. He is definitely HOT and SEXY!!!!!! Esme and Bella are 2 lucky ladies. I don't blame the good Dr for being worried. Edward is going to be pissed. I hope you no longer have writers block. I hope the characters are talking on you again. Hope we get an update soon, as always you leave me wanting more and more.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad you updated and wow carlisles pic, he is gorgeous lol and no doubt Edward will flip out look forward to next update x
Date: 20 Jun 2016 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love it more more more please please please soon soon soon...
Date: 20 Jun 2016 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
So good, can we have another update tomorrow?
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2016 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
Please more can't wait. I love it
Date: 20 Jun 2016 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
They are going to flip when they figure out its B prego and not E. Hope they can get to the girls before anything worse happens to them.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
I loved the chapter. Can't wait to read more. :)
Date: 20 Jun 2016 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
Carlisle was impressive!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
They just think that Edward will remain calm....ROFLMAO!
Date: 20 Jun 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it! Can't wait until Edward and Bella are back together fighting the world again.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella and Elizabeth are extremely intelligent and quick thinking on their feet! Roberto has seriously enjoyed way too much of his product to just accept the switch in personality that quickly. I hope the Calvary gets their quickly. I think Bella isn't the only one expecting a future prince or princess!
I love these characters so much! I read the Bound series straight through to this point! I can't wait for the next chapter to post!
Date: 19 Jun 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 16 Jun 2016 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Please update your story. It was at the point where violence, bloodshed and my favorite torchure are just around the corner. I check on this story twice a day for updates since the last time you updated. Please give us an update very SOON.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2016 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
Please update soon! I love this story!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2016 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
can't wait for more
Date: 10 Jun 2016 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Clo, I am hoping for chapter 5 soon I am really enjoying this part 3 of the Bound series I want to thank you Deb Walsh
Date: 10 Jun 2016 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Please continue!! ^_^
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Would be hard to be so sweet to someone so slimy like Roberto.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2016 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wait until Edward finds out that the hit was put out by Aro and that he gave Bella to Roberto. There will be no way he's going to stay in that hospital bed.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2016 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
Yeah I can't wait to he tries to make her his. That should be interesting. LOL
Date: 20 May 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
They're being smart, but the coven better hurry before the wedding gets planned.
Date: 20 May 2016 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
The girls are amazing! Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
"Just as he came closer to her lips, Bella regurgitated right into Roberto’s face." lol lol Priceless!
Date: 19 May 2016 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
Excellent chapter. Thank you for updating
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2016 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
So far so good! You have a gift for words!! Thanks for this awesome story
Date: 18 May 2016 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
LOOOVVVVEEEE IITTTTT
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
Pls Continue and update very soon!! I am addicted!!
Date: 17 May 2016 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2016 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
Omggg, I can't wait for the saving. I really love this series. Good move with the puking :D
Date: 17 May 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
you definitely need someone to help you with the spanish translations... google it only helps with a general idea.
Date: 17 May 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
i don't want to be rude or anything, but the spanish translations a little bit wrong
the correct form in the first part must be: Ellas (because you're refering to women, ellOs it's to men) aún estan inconscientes (are still unconscious) because as you put it, it sound as if they are out, somewhere in another place.
An in the second part, we, the spanish speakers use another words to speak with respect to superiors (old people or bosses) It must be: Sí señor. Le dejaré saber tan pronto como se despierten.
They are still unconscious. Yes Sir, I'll let you know as soon awaken
Ellas aún estan inconscientes. Sí Señor, Le dejaré saber tan pronto despierten
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I do not know spanish and use google translate. But I hope you were able to enjoy the story anyways.
Date: 16 May 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
Def smart moves of the girls
Date: 16 May 2016 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yessss ! Roberto wont see it coming. He is a dead man walking.
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2016 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
I wish Edward could be there. I hope they take Roberto alive and hold him until Edward is able enough to be part of whatever they decide to do with him. Aro that evil no good man even in his grave he sends trouble, maybe this will be the end of his reign of terror.
Date: 16 May 2016 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
great chapter! Can´t wait for more! hope bella and elizabeth get help soon!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
Just as I suspected 2 babies!!!!! Yay!!!!!! OMG! Hurry Edward!!!!!! Hurry Sean!!!!! Cause shit is getting bad. Update soon missy it's getting serious (lol) Seriously though I'm glad they're playing along with Roberto but let's face it that can only last so long.Edward and Sean need to get there like yesterday. Please don't be too long in updating I'm old waiting can be deadly : ) READ YOU SOON💖
Date: 15 May 2016 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
While I don't lie the way they immediately ceded to Roberto's demands, I realize it is more important that they get out and about.
Love the last photo.
Date: 15 May 2016 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yes, very smart to play along. He' S a psycho, and it will be his undoing, I bet. Meanwhile, is Edward OK?
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Roberto is so stupid
Date: 15 May 2016 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
Exciting and as wonderful as the first two stories. Thank you XOXO,Cheri
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bon chapitre.
Je suis impatient de lire le sauvetage et je veux avoir des nouvelles de la santé d'Edward.
Merci. Bisous.
Date: 15 May 2016 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
Roberto has no idea who he's dealin' with but he's gonna find out...soon! His humiliation will be complete when he finds out two mere women outsmarted him *gigglesnort!*
Date: 15 May 2016 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, yet another great chapter, I'm so looking forward to all help breaking loose. Please update again soon as I just love this story x
Date: 15 May 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
That dude is wacked for sure, I hope he dies a slow and painful death, for what he has done to the girls.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!!! I would have loved to have seen his face when Bella puked on him, lmao!!! Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing Edward kick his ass!
Date: 15 May 2016 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Roberto better hope he dies in the shoot out. Because if Edward or Sean get their hands on him he will suffer. Could Elizabeth be pregnant also? Thank you for continuing this. Love love love this story.
Date: 15 May 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
Absolutely love the story. How many chapters do you think this will be
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
Let the shit storm begin!!!!
With as big as the window are the can throw some alcohol fire balls in them. That's what we're betting on.
KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑💖
Date: 15 May 2016 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love the June Cleaver look. Not sure if I could play along with the jerk! Good chapter !
Date: 14 May 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it Clo. Could Elizabeth be pregnant too? I hate that they couldn't fight back but it will be fun once they are able to. The arrogance of this guy. Wow.
Date: 14 May 2016 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
I just love these guys, the story, everything. So looking forward to the rescue & retribution. Guessing little ms Elizabeth is preggers too. Gonna love Sean"s reaction. Tee hee hee.
Date: 14 May 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
Very smart cookies. Good for them. Edward and Sean is going to make Roberto sorry for hitting Bella.
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 14 May 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for the next update and the shit storm to hit.
Date: 14 May 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, I'm looking forward to that shit storm! And what excellent actresses Bella and Elizabeth were! I love how Bella spew vomit on Roberto's face! It would have been so funny to see him with vomit all over :)
Hope we get the next chapter soon. Will the rescue happen next?
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for the 'team' to arrive and cancel this ass**e's passport !
Date: 14 May 2016 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
I totally agree with Elizabeth, Roberto has to take A LOT of his own drugs thinking a few slaps to the face and about 30 minutes are enough to magically "cure" the women of their rebellious behavior!
Date: 14 May 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Omg Bella throwing up in Robertos face was classic I was laughing so hard and wow think Elizabeth might be preggers too look forward to next update x
Date: 14 May 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
i love this story. i can't wait for the next chapter. please please please update really really really soooooon :)
Date: 14 May 2016 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh they are smart!! LOL at the part where Bella threw up on Roberto....
Date: 14 May 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Very good, can't wait for the next update
Date: 14 May 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
The fifties housewife act was genius.
Date: 12 May 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad they have some smart techie people on thier side.
Date: 12 May 2016 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hope they find the girls before this scumball does something to B
Date: 12 May 2016 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
ugh Sounds like Matthew is in some deep shit. Glad they have their trackers on.
Date: 08 May 2016 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
Fuck yeah that update was amazing! Now find manuel's ass!