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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

Awesome chapter

Reviewer: Kreitlow Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 16

Love it!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 16

Well master Edward is just a giver in this chapter. Sweet words in the contract and then a dirty scene. Loved it. 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 16

Um.....yeah ALL of the men have gone to the shower room. Lol!!!! Us women want to know when is  Master Edward going to role play as a firemen. Then we can take cold showers. I'll even order him the by bunker gear. Lol!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!! HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!🎃💀👻💖🚑🚒

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 16

I really enjoyed this chapter.   The roll playing was fantastic. 

Reviewer: debjwalsh Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh my friend you have done it again it is another amazing chapter I love it I really thought the role playing was great.  You have some mighty fine talent cudos it is great.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2016 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

Really good

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2016 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 16

Just what they both needed after goin' without for so long *woo hoo!*

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2016 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: PoseyRosey Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 16

A great chapter as usual, I always look forward to the updates and they never disappoint.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 16

holy shit :O :O

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2016 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

love it

Reviewer: sandezzy_ Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 16

sexy dominant edward has me all hot! Clo you are awesome and I love this chapter!! XD :)

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2016 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 16

Whew! Smoking.

Reviewer: Bella Scissom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2016 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter can't wait for the rest.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2016 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMG! I love your story and all your others as well ! Can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 15

thank you for the update...Edward reminded Bella of the contract..well done..she realize it to when he spoke of contract...I do love how she told him we are not playing now..lol..Paul Jacobs trouble with a capitol T..I'm sure they will handle it

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 15

Paul is really stupid coming up to them that way.  Yummy reunion though

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2016 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 15

Outstandingly good!

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 15

Yeah when is Bella and Edward going to catch a break lol Paul reeks of Jessica sticking her nose where it don't belong look forward to next update xx

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

For some reason I have not been getting my update on this..

 

But I loved the last four chapters.

 

Thank you for sharing :D

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 15

great chapter

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 15

Good chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh, boy! More trouble coming?

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 15

love it; can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

Dirty talking Edward and Bella came out in this chapter can't wait for Master Edward to come play.

OK so we need a plan cause the next couple of months we have November is feeding the hungry for Thanksgiving and right after we have to fill as many ambulances and fire trucks for toys for tots. So we need to make bets!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑💖👻💀🎃 HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved the pictures,  always.  Glad they have reconnected.  Loved Bella's smart mouth and how Edward corrected her. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great lemon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it!

Reviewer: Blkcharger08 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love that they were able to reconnect. Powerful!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

No rest for the wicked LOL! And Edward is deliciously wicked where Bella's concerned. Nice to have the cocky bastard back in action!

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 15

Please remind me how Charlie fits into this? Thanks for the awesome chapter, can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

Charlie was married to Renee.  She told him that she was pregnant with his child, when in reality it was Aro's.  Charlie found out when Bella broke her leg and needed a blood transfusion.  He blames Bella for making the love of his life leaving him.  He is now in Forks and so is Jessica (Aro's old girlfriend)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it

Reviewer: PATTYBG Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 14

WHAT IS YOU PLAN FOR FUTURE CHAPTERS? THIS IS SUCH A COMPELLING STORY THAT IT IS HARD TO BE PATIENT. AS ALWAYS, IT MOVES FAST AND I NEED MORE!!! THANKS. PATTY



Author's Response:

Patty, Chapter 15 is now up and live.  Enjoy.

Reviewer: Bella Scissom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

Absolutely loved it can't wait for more!

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2016 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 14

I do hope they have fun tonight. Alex said"he would be more prepared for the enemy next time", I hope he is. You can not let down your guard when you are a high profiled crime family.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 14

Awesome story so far!  Can't wait to see what will happen next! 

 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2016 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 14

Love your story can not wait to read more!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2016 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

J'aime ce nouveau chapitre.

Je vous remercie.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2016 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 14

A lot of fun. I really enjoyed this chapter. Thamks

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2016 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 14

🍼 READ YOU SOON : )

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2016 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 14

Can't wait for the fun to begin once again.

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 14

Goody! Missed their fun times, too!

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh-oh, someone else is after the Cullens? Sheesh, they never get a break!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 14

Awww for first baby viewings . . Glad he is doing better and talked to Peter . 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 14

can't wait to see what you come up with next lol

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

I bet the next chapter will be hyper hot. Great chapter, thank you.

Reviewer: sandezzy_ Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 14

lovely chapter as always. can't wait for your next update Clo

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 14

OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!! That was hot and there was not even any sex. 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

LOL'd at Edward expectin' to see Baby Cullen's little dick at this stage, if there even is one! And for someone who's not aware the doctor has given Edward the all clear to have sex, Bella certainly dressed to kill her poor mate LOL! I'm so lookin' forward to his surprise for her and I'm not just talkin' about dinner and dancin' *wink!*

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 14

:) :) :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: debjwalsh Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

I have no words all I can think is AMAZING ILOVE IT you always write so beatifully. Deb Walsh

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 14

Love it

Reviewer: noahbug Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it. I cant wait for next chapter.

 

 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 14

OK boy or girl let's see,

16 say boy

14 say girl

Who will be bringing candy for Halloween we are starting to fill the laundry basket cause we have a lot of kids!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑💖

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2016 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

Very good

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 14

I just love his dirty mouth. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2016 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bella loves the stubble and so do I!

Reviewer: dolphinpink310 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2016 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

This was so good!!! I love this so much!

Reviewer: priyal19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 13

When will you update again ? What is time gap between each update ?

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 13

A wonderful chapter. I felt like your I were preparing us for the end. However, Maria's new love interest feels wrong to me. I really hope I'm wrong. Thank you for your update.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

So happy for Maria and Alec/Maggie.   Evil cliffy woman!!!

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2016 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh it's getting interesting now was thinking it might be Charlie if Jessica has been spilling her guts about aro look forward to next update xx

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2016 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 13

Ooh mysterious. Can't wait to see what you have for us next.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 13

Interesting turn of events l'd say....wouldn't you?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 13

Fantastic chapter.   The family has to brace themselves for another fight. 

Reviewer: bellagirl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 13

Don't tell me it's fucking Billy?!

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

Paul Jacobs is part of the Cullen family, I hope. I bet that bitch Jessica has Charlie believing she knows more and played a bigger role than everyone, Charlie mistreated Bella, it's time for payback. Good chapter, Alex and Maggie are adorable.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 13

Always a pleasure to read more of this family.

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 13

Another threat to the Cullens! Who is this man? Is he known/close to the Cullens? 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

If anyone deserves a chance at true love, it's Maria! So happy she got it! And how gorgeous is that house Edward and Bella gave Alec and Maggie?!?! My kinda house LOL!

Reviewer: jcnf1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh oh! More war is coming!!

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

Always someone wanting to take out the family.... Bella's mood swings may take out Edward..lol   Love the pics with the updates... laters girlie.. big smooches

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it!

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 13

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 13

So excited to get this update.  Yes Maria does deserve to be happy after being married to the devil. While is oureally new mystery man at the end? I am a little sad, there were no sexton pictures this time. 



Author's Response:

Edward it healing and maybe not in Chapter 14, but Chapter 15 will be filled full of lemony goodness.

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

Hmmmmm wondering who this new mystery man is that's wanting to bring down the Cullens??? 

Thank you for updating we were going through Clo with draws!!!! Lol!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!💖🚑🚒

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 13

I'm guessing it's Charlie.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 13

oh no who now thank's for the ch

Reviewer: kan92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!! Nice ending and shocking as well. Who is this new person? Can't wait for your next chapter. It is getting very interesting and excitement filled with lots of love.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

hot damn :O :O

Reviewer: clozano Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved the update but does this mean you are going to start a third installment?  Keep it up babe!



Author's Response:

This is the third installment.  This will be the last part in the Bound Series.  I have about 25 chapters planned out.

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 13

Really good

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

Well damn.....now what are you going to put us through? We are going to get a HEA, right?

Author's Response:

Always a HEA.  I have one person who has been in the background who had not been seen. 

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 13

Now that's a mysterious sounding development!



Author's Response:

Yes it is.  There is one person who has always been in background who needs to be seen.

Reviewer: debjwalsh Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

We have somone evil lurking trying to hurt our bound family lets get him it isn't Pierdo is it?????

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2016 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

Would love to see the look on the big bad don/doms face at that moment. I do hope we will get conversations between Edward & Sean about the harridans their wives turn into at the drop of a hat then minutes later weeping at for being mean. Especially since both women are strong willed in their own way. Hope the noys enjoy the roller coaster rode they are in for.

Reviewer: MoiAndrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 12

Love these series

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