[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am so glad you updated the story it is one of my favorites. Charlie got what was deserved. Now I would love to read Edward's reaction when her learns what sex the baby is. I hope it's a boy. I loved this chapter, Esme was fantastic, just love her and Bella did great ! I can't wait for more.
Date: 23 Dec 2016 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
Way to go Esme! I love her! Please please update soon!
Date: 14 Dec 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love all three in the bound trilogy please update when you can waiting to find out the rest of the story. Olive your writing style and just wanted to say thank you for your time writing the storie I love them all.
Date: 12 Dec 2016 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
Seriously another great chapter! Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
Can't wait. Love this story.
Date: 02 Dec 2016 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
I like this series. I hope to see more soon.
Date: 29 Nov 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
Don't screw around with Bella & Edward!
Date: 28 Nov 2016 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah I remember those urges... poor Edward. ( yeah right!! poor Edward my ass ) all men look forward to this part of pregnancy. Oh and as for Charlie fuck it...kill'em. READ YOU SOON 💖
Date: 28 Nov 2016 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 18
Will we be "seeing" more of Dakota???? (lol). I hope Charlie gets exactly what he "deserves"
Date: 28 Nov 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
Piggy Pooh! Pure genius!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
I think Bella should face off with Charlie before he dies. Paul should not die for doing his job. Jessica should know her mouth got her in trouble, before her demise. Damn good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2016 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
An interesting and exciting chapter. Thanks
Date: 22 Nov 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
I never thought I will see the day when Edward''s cock will be sore in this fiction. Great chapter, thank you.
Date: 22 Nov 2016 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
lol for Edward being sore. hee hee. Jasper def can think on his feet.
Date: 22 Nov 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 22 Nov 2016 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow don't get on the wrong side of this family.lol
Date: 21 Nov 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well, Edward could always play the sympathy card for his poor, overworked peen! A little hissin' and grittin' of the teeth and when Bella asks what's wrong, play dumb and ask her to check it for him. She'll see how irritated it is and give him a break...well, not his tongue, or his fingers, or his toys, of course LMAO!
Date: 21 Nov 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oooooooo can Bella be the one to kill Charlie? Love to see his face when he finds out that Bella was not only not his biological daughter, but the woman whom he thought was the love of his life was the former goomah of a mafioso and used him to hide her out of wedlock pregnancy.
Date: 21 Nov 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
Well bye, bye Charlie~~ LOL
Date: 21 Nov 2016 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
Jessica's justice. Charlie's delusions and Paul's recklessness. Oh my! Great chapter.
Date: 21 Nov 2016 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
OK starting Friday we will be starting Toys for Tots filling our ambulances and fire trucks our goal this year is 20 meaning 10 for each so we have a bet: who will kill Charlie and Paul
17 say BellaCharlie, EdwardPaul
13 say Carlisle Charlie, EmmettPaul
Now the rules are whoever loses buys a toy but if let's say you had Bella kill Charlie and Emmett kill Paul than whoever bet for Edward and Carlisle has to buy a toy.
KEEP WRITING & HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!🚑🚒💖🍴🍖
Date: 21 Nov 2016 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Lol just thought of a episode of better or worse
Where Leslie was wearing out Joseph with sex super funny
Great work
Happy Thanksgiving
Date: 20 Nov 2016 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
Sooooooo!!!!!!! Goooooooood!!!!!! You are the best my friend. I love your writing...
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2016 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think it's a good desison to take them out! Poor Edward, I'm sure he will survive, lol!!!
Date: 20 Nov 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved this chapter!!!
Date: 20 Nov 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
:) :) poor edwards peen lol
Date: 20 Nov 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awesome chapter!!!!!!!!! Bella is wearing Edward's poor dick out. She needs to kiss and sucks it and make it feel better. Lol
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
I have just started this series and I am in love! Keep updating please! You have such talent!
Date: 17 Nov 2016 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
Gorgeous dresses, by the way! Charlie's about to get more than he bargained for and we're not talkin' profitable LOL!
Date: 17 Nov 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wondering if Charlie is really a crooked cop or is he just playing it trying to get in undercover. Especially since it seems Paul Jacobs is trying to take them down & his dad is friends with Charlie.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2016 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Beautiful place and a wonderful idea, the club is a hit. Charlie must have a death wish, and I hope they give it to him. I believe this is a trap, for once I hope they are prepared, do not trust his foul mouth, he is not Bella 's father.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2016 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
Omg ! Love it ! Can't wait to read more! Sitting on edge here waiting lol!
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2016 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
Well things are going to get more exciting.
Date: 14 Nov 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
oooh Dakota is def yumminess
Date: 14 Nov 2016 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 18
I have to agree that Dakota is definitely HOT!!!
Charlie wants to get what he deserves! I'm sure his opinion of what her deserves and the Don & Donna's opinion of what he deserves are two very different! Can't wait to see what all comes to play on this. I love this trilogy so much! I hope you have a lot more to come for The Family because I don't want it to end! Looking forward to next chapter, as always. I may go back and start from the very beginning in the meantime.
Date: 14 Nov 2016 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter . The picture of Dakota looks familiar ; is he someone famous ? The two little girls were adorable! I love the pictures you include with theseveral stories It really makes the stories more fun to read! Keep up the great work !
Date: 14 Nov 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 18
OH wow...
Charie is going to be bbbbaaaaadddd news I am afraid!
Date: 14 Nov 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love it can't wait to hear what Charlie wants!
Date: 14 Nov 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
You pick the best pictures. Loved how d script I've you were. Great chapter.
Date: 13 Nov 2016 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think Dakota needs a woman and I think Charlie is about to get his ass handed to him. I cannot wait to find out!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2016 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait for more
Date: 13 Nov 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh go! What does he want!?
Date: 13 Nov 2016 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
Keep going
Date: 13 Nov 2016 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 13 Nov 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 18
Another awesome chapter. Can't wait to read what they do to Charlie!
Date: 13 Nov 2016 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
But I love Charlie...well Twi Charlie. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 13 Nov 2016 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 18
Dakota is hot and his 2 little girlsare adorable. Hope he finds someone in the family to love and also loves his 2 girls. Can't wait to see what happens with Charlie. I thought Edward and Bella were going to talk to her doctor about their lifestyle and her pregnancy.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2016 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 18
i see charie going to be a ass hole lol
Date: 13 Nov 2016 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
OK bet for Hams for Fams for Thanksgiving:
1) Dakota and Crystal together
12 No they won't. 18 say yes they will
2) Will Charlie die or not
15 say yes by Bella. 15 say no because he took care of her when she was growing up.
3) Baby Cullen Gender
15 girl. 15 boy
KEEP WRITING!!!!🚑🚒💖🚻💯
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, for Charlie to say he is owed something is absurd! He never gave her the time of day, I think she should call him out on it and let him know she is aware he us not her father. He had as much to do with her as Aro did, with was nothing!!!
Date: 12 Nov 2016 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yes Dakota is extremely hot and Charlie is being a pig he needs to be taught a lesson and E&B are just the people to teach him along with Jazz's help I am pretty sure that Bella will see to it that he gets what is coming to him but somehow, I don't think he is going to like it.
Well Clo my friend another wonderful chapter I love it. Can't wait for the next one...Deb
Date: 12 Nov 2016 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
:O :O :O :O :O
Date: 12 Nov 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
Excellent chapter. I think Charlie is a dead man on his feet, but he don't know it.
WOAW Dakota is really hot.
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 11 Nov 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
I so love your stories, and nice job with the cops!
Date: 09 Nov 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
OMG, Clo, you have outdone yourself. I have never laughed so hard or imagined such a sight in all of my life and having grown up on a farm says a lot. Your creativity and imagination are astounding. Thank you, thank you, thank you for the ammunition for some humour on a rough day. That page will be forever marked as a keeper.
You had mentioned someone from Bella's past a couple of chapters ago. Is it James by chance? I really don't think we have heard the last from him yet.
Keep knocking them out, Clo, I'll be sure to keep my glove on.
Date: 09 Nov 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 17
So good serves them right pigs should walllow.
Date: 08 Nov 2016 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
Omg that was hilarious I could picture it happening as I read it lol great chapter look forward to next update xx
Date: 08 Nov 2016 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
oooh davidson looks quite yummy.
Date: 07 Nov 2016 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
another great chapter Clo!!! keep 'em coming XD!
Date: 07 Nov 2016 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love the series. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 07 Nov 2016 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
OK we are betting that Paul Jacobs will try to arrest people on the first night:
17 say yes
13 say no
This is for Feed Hungry Families we are feeding the homeless here at the station.
KEEP WRITING!!!!!🚒🚑💖
Date: 07 Nov 2016 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
Lol, too funny about the cops.
Date: 07 Nov 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love how well everything is going. Can you do another story after this about DC and their foray into politics? Great job.
Date: 07 Nov 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
Freaking hilarious. dakota deserves a raise.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2016 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
That was so funny, they should put him in charge or make him part of the family
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
I really am enjoying this story. The only part that really bothers me and I know it is just me. I see nothing wrong with dominance and submission but the being respectful and writing an essay? I feel that is demeaning. To me it makes the woman seem beneath the man. they both should be respectful to each other. Like I said it is just me. Great writing
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hilarious loved it
Date: 06 Nov 2016 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
Damn shame that little video couldn't be put up on YouTube...that woulda been fuckin' epic LMAO!
ps: who the hell is that hunk you used for the Dakota Mills, the crane operator *woooeeeee!*
Author's Response:
Joshua Sarri is my Dakota Mills. I would love to see it as well. It was a fun chapter to write.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it! Love your story can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
omg i love how your mind works lol
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2016 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Sounds like everything is running smoothly, which is good they need smoothly. I'm just waiting for something to happen, because you know something is going to happend.
Date: 06 Nov 2016 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
LOLLLL ! Great chapter, as always. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 06 Nov 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
That was a fun chapter!
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2016 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hahahhaaa that was a good one :D
Date: 06 Nov 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG, that ending is to to funny you could make a trilogy out of these 3 ff stories and when I read them I will enjoy them so much...Love ya kid amazing writing...
Date: 06 Nov 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
Beautiful and deadly.
Date: 03 Nov 2016 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
Very, very hawt! Glad Master is back in action!
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2016 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
I can not say it enough LOVE your story ! Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
WOW!!! Totally INTENSE Chapter. It's time for Charlie to pay soooo..... Let the game begin (he he he) READ YOU SOON 💖
Date: 01 Nov 2016 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome HOT chapter!!!!!
Date: 31 Oct 2016 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
Glad they got to have a little play time.
Date: 31 Oct 2016 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it Clo, you have written some beautiful characters
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2016 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 16
So glad that they had some play time before they get into another big family business.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2016 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was a nice surprise for Bella.