Date: 30 Jan 2020 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
:) loved this story
Date: 14 Nov 2017 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
Lovely story! I don't normally like period pieces, but actually quite enjoyed this one! I get tired of all the constant "lemons", in so many stories. Thank you so much!
Date: 11 Jul 2016 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 24
I enjoyed reading lots of unexpected twists and turns thank you for sharing you wonderful work.
Date: 25 Jun 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
thank you for your story.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'm glad things have worked out for them. I have truly enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 23
I knew Bella would always be there for her "family ". I hope Rose will be nicer to her now.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella handled herself very well with Tanya. I can not believe that she was trying to ruin another one of Alice's important days.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 21
Things seem to be going good for everyone. I am wondering if Tanya will leave without saying her piece.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love Edward's mother.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, I did not expect that to happen with Carlisleand Tanya. Tanya is a real piece of work.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm not surprised about what Carlisle did to Jacob but I am surprised that Carlisle was killed. Can't wait to find out what happened.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
What the heck is wrong with Carlisle? Is he sick, mentally?
Date: 20 Jun 2016 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am glad that Edward and Bella had a great day with Alice and Jasper. I like that Edward is already talking about their wedding. Can't wait to find out what the deal is with Carlisle.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
I already like it. I love when I find a new author who is so good I know any story will be a good read. Just found your work tonight. Must go. Much more reading to do even if it is 2am. Can't stop. I'm hooked.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
What the heck had happened to Carlisle? Why is he acting like he did?
Date: 20 Jun 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
I am glad that Bella did not run into any trouble while visiting the cottages. Also glad that Edward came to talk to Bella.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
Glad Bella had Jasper to back her up. I am so happy that Bella does not let Tanya intimidate her.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hate that Tanya ruined Alice's moment. How rude.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Bella. I feel sorry for her. I had to laugh at little at her yelling and throwing a potato at Edward.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh wow, what is Edward saying?
Date: 19 Jun 2016 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh no. Poor Bella.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
I wonder who is going to find out about Edward staying at Bella's. I wish she would have told him what men had been disrespectful to her.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am glad that Edward stopped Rose. I hope the Americans don't stay long. Bella needs to ask Carlisle about Samuel.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like that Carlisle talks to Bella and seems to respect her.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am glad that Alice is trying her best to be Bella's friend.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 4
What caused Edward's changel in attitude?
Date: 19 Jun 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am so glad that Bella stood up to Edward like that. I kind of wish she had done the same with Rose.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am glad that nothing happenedto Bella on the way to the Cullens. Glad she is away from James.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am wondering if James had something to do with his father's death. I am glad Bella is leaving
Date: 16 Jun 2016 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 24
Nice story thanks for seeing it through.
Date: 15 Jun 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 24
I feel like there should be more. Are you planning a sequel?
Date: 14 Jun 2016 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 24
"make 6 monthly visits" That makes it sounds like Edward will visit 6 times a month. If you mean he visits every 6 months, the term is "biannual."
Author's Response:
Your right. At least you where able to grasp what I meant. Hope it didn't spoil it too much for you.
Date: 14 Jun 2016 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow...I did not expect that
Date: 14 Jun 2016 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great job. Good story.
Date: 13 Jun 2016 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
I loved it wow it's seems everyone is where they should be thank you
Date: 13 Jun 2016 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
Fun story to read . Thanks.
Date: 13 Jun 2016 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 24
thank you for a lovely story!!!!James got what he deserved in the end..Tanya got nothing...lol
Date: 13 Jun 2016 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks for sharing :)
Date: 13 Jun 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 24
I hope James gets everything that is coming to him. Rose is a good person she made a bad dissision she will pay for it but all will be good. They have a happy family with love. I am sad it is over I loved it Thanks so much
Date: 13 Jun 2016 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
Good chapter good story
Date: 12 Jun 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm glad the baby is healthy. Bella risked so much to help Rose and the baby. Edward needs to have a talk with Felix.
Date: 10 Jun 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 23
YEA, ROSE IS COMING AROUND.....BUT IT TOOK HER ALMOST LOSING HER CHILD FOR IT
Date: 10 Jun 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow no wonder Rose was trying to push Tanya onto Edward she was try to make herself better in society but Bella being the better person still after all that took care of her
Date: 10 Jun 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 23
So selfish. Great chapter will rose become team Bella now?
Author's Response:
Hi VickiShy.
Thanks for reviewing. Sorry I can't comment, although I will say I like happy endings. Only another 2 chapters left, so not long to wait to find out. x
Date: 10 Jun 2016 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
Rose has changed how she thinks of Bella and hopefully herself to. Got to love Bella
Date: 10 Jun 2016 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, not what I was expecting!
Great chapter!
Date: 10 Jun 2016 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks for update :)
Date: 10 Jun 2016 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks good chapter
Date: 09 Jun 2016 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter. Thanks
Date: 09 Jun 2016 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my her home...so sad...but we'll done with evil!
Date: 08 Jun 2016 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow go Bella beautiful and classy
Date: 08 Jun 2016 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved the way Bella put that bitch in her place I think Rose needs put in hers also.
Date: 08 Jun 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
Glad she put Tanya in her place.
Date: 08 Jun 2016 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
Good job Bella. Excellent comeback.
Date: 08 Jun 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks good chapter
Date: 08 Jun 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
I loved that Bella stood up to Tanya
Date: 07 Jun 2016 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
Good chapter. Bella behaved with grace and ingenuity.
Date: 07 Jun 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
I expected Tanya to do something nasty. I just hope someone does try something while Edward is gone.
Date: 07 Jun 2016 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
Knew Tanya wouldn't let the opportunity pass but well done B!! Thanks for update :)
Date: 07 Jun 2016 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
Poor Bella. Glad Esme and Alice are there for her. Why is Tanya still there.? Ship her skanky butt back to where ever she came from. Thanks for the update:)
Date: 07 Jun 2016 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 21
It is out now Rose and Tanya will just have to get over it.
Date: 07 Jun 2016 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
Sad for all of them and yes I think Carlisle was a coward. I am glad Edward's mom is happy for him.
Date: 07 Jun 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 21
I keep waiting for something sinister to happen... I'm sure you have something planned, can't wait!
Date: 07 Jun 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thanks good chapters
Date: 07 Jun 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
I loved it so sweet and romantic but will Tanya try anything with Edward again
Date: 06 Jun 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for taking the time to post.
Date: 06 Jun 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
Hope there's no upset on Alice's wedding day. Thanks for update :)
Date: 06 Jun 2016 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh can't wait to see Roses reaction
Date: 06 Jun 2016 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love this story! What a rollercoaster ride!!
Date: 06 Jun 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great story. I am really enjoying it. I can't believe the situation Edwards father put Bella, then himself, and his son in. Very selfish.
Date: 05 Jun 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
Cool heads needed now!
Date: 05 Jun 2016 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
well I just keep thinking she will be cast aside because Tanya will throw a fit and he will cave in for his distraut mother.
Date: 05 Jun 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
So that at least explains the cahnge in attitude a bit, Someting tells me that Tanya is not done plotting.
Date: 05 Jun 2016 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
thanks for the chapter. You know in those days Tanya could be sent to a nunnery or put in under lock and key. She is messing with the king and his family.
Date: 05 Jun 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
Carlisle may have loved his wife, but he was willing to barter his son's happiness and well-being. I think he underestimated his wife, who undoubtably would have traded her peace of mind for her son (besides she was already suspicious of them). Edward's marriage to Tanya would have caused Esme great distress. Carlisle was selfish in both of his actions.
Date: 04 Jun 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
Knew there was something amiss with dearest Tanya!! Thanks for update :)
Date: 04 Jun 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thats the truth the whole truth and nothing but the truth WOW so sad. A hanging would be good thing to happen to Tanya what a evil bitch
Date: 04 Jun 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks good chapter
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow Tanya is even more nasty than I thought what a horrible woman but now will Edward and Bella be able to marry as they want or will Tanya try something esle
Date: 04 Jun 2016 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
really loved this chapter, can not wait for tomorrow..
Date: 04 Jun 2016 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow...what a surprise...I never saw that coming! Great update...I so love period pieces and there's just not enough of them!
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it. I agree, I love a period set story. There just isn't enough of them about.
Date: 04 Jun 2016 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
So glad you went this way.
Date: 02 Jun 2016 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
So much happening! Why is Tanya still there? I hope she doesn't take advantage.
Date: 31 May 2016 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward needs to come and talk to Bella. He needs to know she is in the house and not the cottage.
Date: 31 May 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
Omg so sam and aro are out there somewhere
Date: 31 May 2016 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
The plot thickens!! Thanks for update :)
Date: 31 May 2016 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
we shall see. Tanya is there for Edward he may shove Bella out as he will blame himself over his father.
Date: 31 May 2016 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks good chapter
Date: 30 May 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG the prick is dead who did it Please dont let Bella be blamed for it. I think it was Tanya just cause I dont like her lol
Date: 30 May 2016 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no what will happen between Edward and Bella now and will they find out who killed Lord Cullen update soon