Date: 20 May 2016 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Glad to see your back and got some rest!! For not wanting to write this chapter it was really good! I love your writing and this story and hope it gets finished. Hope you post soon.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2016 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh crap that is not a good idea bella!
Date: 18 May 2016 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is going to be in deep shit for not telling her where he has been.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2016 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
Way to end it so hurry and get us to the club.....boy, this should be good.
Date: 18 May 2016 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
i hope u fell better , oh and edward plz oh plz i would hate to see ur balls all string up .and god only know what else bella would do.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2016 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
Glad you are back.
Maggie is trouble. So two Russian guys are following Bella around that is not good & Edward is going to have a cow.
So Bella's going to go to the club & see something and misinterpreted it.
I can't wait until they get passed this & are back to their newlywed selfs.
Date: 17 May 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
Good for her. READ YOU SOON
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2016 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think Maggie is nothing but trouble, & Bella shouldn't hang around with her, no matter how lonely she may get.
And I hope for their sake that Edward has been behaving himself. He doesn't strike me as the cheating type, but you never know what may happen with that kind of temptation all around, or the constant peer pressure.
Date: 17 May 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh, this should be good! I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 17 May 2016 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
He's gonna get it! Something tells me I am going to enjoy the next chapter.
Date: 17 May 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh shit!! What next???
Date: 17 May 2016 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh boy Maggie is trouble. The Stripper place is sooooo not going to go ever well. Those boys are going to be trouble. Glad B had the brains to leave.
Date: 17 May 2016 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
The Maggie invite was a nice thing to do.
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2016 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
Is Maggie more aware of the type of setting her father is involved in than Bella gives her credit?
Once Bella finds Edward, she needs to keep a cool head. Then, ask him questions about the two Russians she left at the mall with Maggie.
The stripe club can be discussed in his office once everyone has seen her.
But will she overstep her position as wife in this very public place?
Date: 17 May 2016 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
While I can understand the "united front" part outside the house, he needs to understand that he's not going to just get to snap his fingers and make everything alright with her
Date: 17 May 2016 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well he did say she could come and go. His temper is going to make things go so much more slowly with her forgiving him.....as it should be.
Date: 17 May 2016 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad she's got bruno
Date: 17 May 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think its going to be awhile until B comes around. So much for someone so young to deal with
Date: 17 May 2016 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 17 May 2016 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
I worry the two brothers arebrothers are Russian. I still do not trust Maggie. I hope Bella doesn't find Edward in a compromising position.
Date: 17 May 2016 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
:)
This should be good
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
thank you for the update...Maggie seems like she may get Bella into trouble...she is already walking a tight rope....until you post again
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bruno's reaction to Maggie is interesting. Maybe it's only because Maggie suddenly showed up on Bruno's turf but I'll still be watching her.
Date: 30 Apr 2016 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Does Maggie have an alterior motive for wanting to have a party in Isabella's home?
Let's hope Nora is the perfect fit for this troubled couple. It's time to reconcile the past and build for the future.
Date: 29 Apr 2016 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't trust Maggie either...assuming this is really Maggie. She doesn't have an evil twin, does she? ;-) I wasn't sure Edward had actually sent her at first, but then we found out he did. I'm sure all will be revealed in due time!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hope Bella is honest with Edward about the party that Maggie is wanting to have. I do not trust Maggie. Why was Bruno growling at her today and not yesterday? Maggie has a hidden agenda.
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
Something tells me that Maggie is going to be trouble.
Date: 29 Apr 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
hope maggie doesn't have ulterior motives
Date: 29 Apr 2016 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love this story so far. I don't think I like Maggie, is she as deceitful as she seems or just young and fun loving, thinking she can get away with anything, also strange that Bruno doesn't like her, when he was ok the previous day.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2016 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Maggie is trouble with a capital T!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad they are on speaking terms again
Date: 29 Apr 2016 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Not sure Maggie is going to be a good idea influence on her
Date: 29 Apr 2016 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
So happy they are getting along and he is trying to keep her happy. something up with Maggie Bruno didnt like her and I always trust my dog.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2016 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
I don't know I don't trust this Maggie. Especially since Bruno doesn't like her. I'm glad that Edward and Isabella are mending some bridges.
Date: 27 Apr 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm so glad they made up!
Date: 26 Apr 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad they finally talked. Hopefully they will remember to keep talking to each other from now on.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hope you feel better soon .Love your story can't wait to read more! Best wishes and prayers for you.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Is this new someone really just a housekeeper or are they going to be assigned to watch Isabella?
Date: 26 Apr 2016 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
Glad they talked and she is coming back to the land of the living
Date: 26 Apr 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
LOVE THIS, MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Apr 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
this is getting good cant wait for more to come
Date: 22 Apr 2016 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Maybe it's me but I think enough is enough and right now she's the one being childish.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well yeah he's was probably worried sick. She goes for a walk with the dog and is gone all day. He doesn't know if someone has taken her or did she get hurt.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
She needs to talk to him. They aren't going to get anywhere not talking.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
She definitely lot track of something; time, her mind, reality. All the things Edward promised to watch over as her husband. Ensuring Isabella's safety.
Isabella is in for another round of self preservation talks. I wonder if he will rebook her freedom to roam as she pleases until her mindset is balanced out?
Date: 16 Apr 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it. He deserves to worry about her after just abandoning her like he did. She needs someone to be there for her with a shoulder to lean on not someone who is going to scream and yell at her. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
He was so worried but he better be careful how he deals with her.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well I kind of think Edward deserves to worry for a little while.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
Maybe he should just commit Bella somewhere, for a while. I doubt she'd get help otherwise because she's far too immature & stubborn. She certainly seems in desperate need of help, not to mention that she seems to be a danger to herself as well. Losing track of that much time, wandering around like a zombie, not taking her phone...what if Maggie wasn't the one who found her, but some killer or rapist?! She's always been on the irresponsible side anyway. And she obviously isn't thinking clearly because, if anyone has thorns, it's HER! Lol
Can't wait for more! 😊
Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
She is so messed up. A child that has gone through a lot and emotionally not really grown up.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
Looks like your roaming privilages have been revoked.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 16 Apr 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love Love your story can not wait for more
Date: 16 Apr 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
They have a lot to work on.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
I hope she gets it out of her system and talks to him soon before she does something to get herself in trouble.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
She is such a spit fire sometimes.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bella is so hurt and I just love Bruno!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more. How heartbreaking for both of them, he has a lot of hard work to repair that bridge and demage he done by leaving her alone to deal with all the mess. I hope they find their way to each other soon. I hope to see the next chapter soon and a little bit longer pretty please.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
What a treat 2 chapters in one week! I hope you start feeling better, was really missing this story! Glad to see its back=
Date: 15 Apr 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! Poor Bella! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Again, I must say that Bella is EXTREMELY petty, selfish, & immature. She's certainly not wife material right now, or anything else, for that matter. Edward NEEDS to be the mafia boss that he is & put his foot down majorly with her or give her an ultimatum. She's the spoiled type that if you give her an inch, she'll take a mile, which she already has. Typical princess drama queen. The longer this is allowed to continue, it's only going to make things worse.
Don't get me wrong, I feel sympathy for what she's went through with her family, but she NEEDS to realize that none of that was Edward's fault & that he has only tried to help her from the very beginning while having to take A LOT of unecessary crap from her. Granted, he might not handle everything the right way, but she needs to see that like her, he's not perfect either. She also needs to realize the he had to clean up all of the mess that HER father/family left behind, as well as take over NY because of it, which took time. Yes, he was wrong for avoiding her for so long, but in some ways, I can't really blame him. Everything seems to be on his young shoulders, while nothing but self-pity & petty anger is on her's. She could have a great life with him, if only she'd grow up, talk it out, & handle things better.
To be honest, if I were Edward, I'd be seriously tempted to divorce her, & send her on her merry, lazy way. Let her be her own or someone else's problem, from now on. There's plenty of women who would probably kill to take her place...just like her sister almost did. She'd do well to remember that.
Can't wait for more! ;)
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
They have such a long road ahead of them.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next! Poor Bella!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Bella!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2016 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
I was hoping he would go in and snuggle her.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
so glad your back....lol
Date: 15 Apr 2016 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 3
He should've checked on her. I wouldn't put it past her to try to sneak out the window, or maybe even try to hurt herself. I wonder if she's pregnant, angry, & extremely hormonal? They both seem like they've given up on each other, & they BOTH have A LOT of growing up to do!
Hope you get to feeling better. Can't wait for more! ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2016 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
How sad. Yeah he messed up, but they were such a great pair together. He needs to find something to bring her out of this.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am worried about Bella. Can't wait to read more and see what you have in store for them.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
:)
Seems like lots of his choices are coming back to bite him in the but
Date: 14 Apr 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
He has no room to be upset. He did this. He left her all on her own with no family left so she has a right to be upset with him.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
It's going to be a long haul for these two.
Why don't Jasper and Alice move to New York. Alice is sort of family.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2016 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
How will therapy help? It's not like she can just blurt out she shot her sister point blank in the head. Or she tried to maime her brother-in-law before hger husband shot him in the head. How many therapist are on the mob payroll?
She is feeling......Abandoned. Rejected. Unlovable. Her dog Bruno is the only consistent thing in her life.
New York may hold to many bad memories.
Let's hope Edward gets his act together where his wife is concerned.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Honey, I'm Hoooooommmmmmme.
That went about as well as can be expected. They haven't taken the time to talk or even appear concerned about the distance between them. So Bella's state of lethargy and anger seems rational to her.
Not so sure Edward's attempt at being in charge after this time apart will set well with his young wife.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
He is trying n but it is going to take time she is so hurt
Date: 14 Apr 2016 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
good
hope you feel better
Date: 04 Apr 2016 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh boy. Sounds like he has a lot of work to do!!
Date: 04 Apr 2016 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think she was to easy on him! lol I love these two! I missed them! :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2016 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
How heartbreaking. He has a lot of work to repair that bridge.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
Cant waitfor more it real good so far
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2016 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
That's right ya big jerk. He's already forgiven!