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Reviewer: psychovampirefreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 27: This is My Hell

Another awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope you continue to think so as we get into the nitty gritty. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: balesp Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 26: Blindsided

I absolutely love the story!!!  I am eager for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Hi there!!! Thank you so much. More is coming soon.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2016 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 26: Blindsided

An excellent turn of events.  And a good place for a cliff hanger!  Yep!  ... Good place for a cliff hanger!   :(



Author's Response:

I didn't mean for it to be this long of a cliff hanger. Promise more to come soon.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback

Very moving.  Glad that Charlie is being considered.  Loved it.  Thanks.  I realise the time has passed but I thought you might a kick from this.  It's Aussie Jingle Bells

Dashing through the bush,
in a rusty Holden Ute,
Kicking up the dust,
esky in the boot,
Kelpie by my side, 
singing Christmas songs,
It's Summer time and I am in 
my singlet, shorts and thongs

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Oh! Jingle bells, jingle bells, jingle all the way,
Christmas in Australia 
on a scorching summers day, Hey!
Jingle bells, jingle bells, Christmas time is beaut!,
Oh what fun it is to ride in a rusty Holden Ute.

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Engine's getting hot; 
we dodge the kangaroos,
The swaggie climbs aboard, 
he is welcome too.
All the family's there, 
sitting by the pool,
Christmas Day the Aussie way, 
by the barbecue.

.

Oh! Jingle bells, jingle bells, jingle all the way,
Christmas in Australia 
on a scorching summers day, Hey!
Jingle bells, jingle bells, Christmas time is beaut!,
Oh what fun it is to ride in a rusty Holden Ute.

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Come the afternoon, 
Grandpa has a doze,
The kids and Uncle Bruce, 
are swimming in their clothes. 
The time comes 'round to go, 
we take the family snap,
Pack the car and all shoot through, 
before the washing up.

.

Oh! Jingle bells, jingle bells, jingle all the way,
Christmas in Australia 
on a scorching summers day, Hey!
Jingle bells, jingle bells, Christmas time is beaut!,
Oh what fun it is to ride in a rusty Holden Ute.

 



Author's Response:

Okay that is hilarious. And somehow it was Emmett's voice in my head as I read it. Thank you so much for sharing that.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 26: Blindsided

Don't kill Edward! 

 

Darn,  I'm all caught up! 



Author's Response:

I'm a happily ever after kind of girl. There is trouble ahead, for sure. But kill Edward? Never.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 24: A Trek, A Tree, and Titty Hard Ons

So much fun.  So relate to Emmett singing out loud at Christmas.  We even have an old guy go around the neighbourhood on a motorised pushbike (WT...just don't get that) ringing a bell wishing everyone Merry Christmas.  Glad Bella tried to shut down Edward's spiral into self-loathing.  Loved it.



Author's Response:

I can picture Emmett as that neighbor you have. Hilarious!!!!!

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 23: Teasing, Tasting, and a Trip

LOL at Emmett and his antics.  Never a quiet moment when the boys are around and ready to play.  Felt for Charlie as he contemplated Bella moving on with Edward. It is a relief that he is not pushing Bella to visit Jacob and La Push.  I confess to feeling a bit of tension wondering if and when Vicky will show up.  I'm staying tuned.  ;D



Author's Response:

I'm feeling that tension with you. ;) But for now at least, we get to enjoy their fun.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 26: Blindsided

I should be careful what I asked for.  Lol!!!

Great chapter! 



Author's Response:

I know, right? And more "fun" ahead for sure.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen

Loved the way Bella played all that.

I like to think of her driving off with "I did it my way" blaring out :D

 



Author's Response:

Ha - that would've been the perfect song to play. Wish I would've thought of it for the chapter list. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 22: Strawberries and Cream

Well that wasn't exactly baby steps .  Lol.  And an almost epiphany.  Well, pretty much one.  Sometimes less is more and this was one those occasions.  Is it hot here or is it just me?  Perhaps a cold shower.  *huge sigh*



Author's Response:

I'm a big believer that less is more is often a much more rewarding thing. Glad you enjoyed it too.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 21: Payback

Edward is getting these life lessons when he least expects them.  And at a very inconvenient time.  Lol.  It was thoroughly enjoyable, illuminating and compelling to hear Jasper's version of life in the Cullen Lane.  It is good to see, that since the Cullen's return, Bella has not continued to cut herself (tank top).  And if Edward hasn't already listened to her messages to Alice during his absence, perhaps that time has passed.  All Jasper's good work would be for naught and Edward would again spiral into self loathing.  An unexpected chapter that added more layers to your characters backstories.  Loved it.  Thanks



Author's Response:

I appreciate how much you were able to get from this chapter. There are so many layers that we never got to see in the original works that I missed and desperately wanted. Jasper was the perfect person to provide some much needed insight to Edward - and really the only one that could've made Edward really see and understand how what he did effected so many others in a negative way.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 22: Strawberries and Cream

That was great!  So proud of Edward! Now, where's my husband? Hahaha :)

 



Author's Response:

Haha - trust me I went looking for mine after writing all of that too. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 21: Payback

Loved it! Jasper was awesome!



Author's Response:

Gotta love Jasper!!!! He's the one everyone just takes for granted as walking valium, when really he feels more than anyone else whether it's their joy or their pain. So glad he gave Edward a bit of much needed insight.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 20: Rounding Second

WOW!  What's not to like?  Seriously good fun with your nickers on!



Author's Response:

Haha - thanks! Bella needed Edward to understand that there are things they can do without killing her. ;) She isn't letting him limit their relationship any longer. Somehow, I think he'll agree to continue this exploration.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 26: Blindsided

I should have guessed that it was all going too well!



Author's Response:

I know, right? Dun dun dun!!!!! But even more "fun" is to come.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback

They really did spend a lovely evening together. I've never heard of the Christmas nail tradition but it's very simple and poignant.



Author's Response:

Thank you! All of the traditions incorporate in the chapter are actually from my own extremely large and diverse family. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

Lol.  This was so much fun.  And then it was Hawt!  LOL. 



Author's Response:

Oh it gets hotter. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

What a showdown!

Awesome, just awesome :D



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! I needed Bella to stand on her own against them in her own way. ;)

 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 24: A Trek, A Tree, and Titty Hard Ons

That was a lovely chapter, I enjoyed Bells joining in with Emmett and his singing although I admit to a moments panic when Bella's gloves slipped off!



Author's Response:

Oh jeez - my heart jumped into my throat when that happened. But I love that is was Jasper that caught her. Jasper, the one that went after her over a paper cut, has come so far in making Bella a part of his family. And let me just add that Emmett is a truly terribly but hilarious singer. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

Loved the chapter! So fun! 



Author's Response:

I want to go on a group date like that. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 17: Turning Stone into Silly Putty

Bout time! He needs to loosen up a lot more!



Author's Response:

Oh, trust me - he's about to get a whole lot more loose. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

In the original, poorly written, crater-sized plot holed saga, there were so many characters that were easy to hate on.  Especially if they were blonde  and good looking.  I really like all your characters.  They are individuals with their own foibles and voices.  An amazing talent you have Lisa.  Remember to tell us and you are published.  😀



Author's Response:

That is such a huge compliment!!! Thank you so much for the kind words. I promise to keep you in the know when I get my first publication out. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 15: Blood Doesn't Make a Mom

Love her! Esme is wonderful! 



Author's Response:

Momma Lion has a special place in my heart. ;) I have a mother like her that's not by blood.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 17: Turning Stone into Silly Putty

You're right about Cullen family time and the sibling relationships.  You bring them alive with their banter.  So much fun.  Lol.  Thanks



Author's Response:

I want to be a part of the Cullen family. They seem to be hilarious when they're allowed to be themselves. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 16: Invisibly Shaken

From Esme to Bella's art subjects, to E&B's truthful communication, and even the bravado of the pseudo-hero Mike...I have no words.  Except to say 'Struth mate.  That was bloody brilliant!'  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed everything that went in to this chapter, even Mike trying to be the tough guy!

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 15: Blood Doesn't Make a Mom

So pleased Esme insisted.  A wonderful heartwarming chapter. Thank you



Author's Response:

Momma Lion loves her kids. All her kids. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Martyr

Haha!

 

One thing I've never really understood is that the "outsiders" to the Cullen/vampire info all forget that The Whole Family Moved! Carlisle took a job elsewhere and they moved. Parents move their kids to different areas all the time for new jobs.

 

We really know what happened but still. 

 

Know what I'm trying to say?



Author's Response:

Yeah I didn't like that it wasn't really addressed in the books that well. I tried to add more dimension to all of the family.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Hina-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 26: Blindsided

Oh my! I can feel a showdown coming on.... The part with Charlie got me near to tears.... All in all....I LOVED IT!!! Thank you for updating soon. Love it!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, the showdown is super close and wicked fun. Can't wait. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14:Too Much Testosterone

I love Three Days Grace!



Author's Response:

Me too!!!! I have my husband to thank for that. 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback

The presents were meaningful and just beautiful.  Thanks for the tissue warning. I really did cru and was just in awww.

Question: will there be any drama or action?



Author's Response:

Thank you! And warning - both drama and action up ahead. Keep your arms in the vehicle at all times. ;)

Much love, 

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 26: Blindsided

From a lovely Christmas to this horror, this chapter had it all! Thank heaven Laurant didn't have time to rape or bite Bella! I guess now Bella will learn about Quileute shape shifters, who luckily showed up to save her! Jacob swearing to kill Edward just proves his theory of jealousy on the part of Bella's friend. Well, at least one dangerous vampire is gone, now they just have to find Victoria and finish her!



Author's Response:

Oh yes,what a horrible ending to what started out as the best Christmas ever. 😥 Jacob is still a jealous bratty boy that is upset that he can't have Bella. He'll get served a dose of reality soon though. Promise.

Much love, 

~Lisa

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 13: Gunpowder and Lead

Way to go Daddy Charlie! 



Author's Response:

All of Charlie's internal monologue about being able to shoot Edward from away, etc....was one of the very first things I wrote for this story. Just had to save it for the right place to put it. 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 22: Strawberries and Cream

That was such a powerful experience for both of them!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so. Not only did it empower Bella, but it also proved to Edward that he can restrain himself and trust that Bella knows how much he can handle.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Tayjj44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 26: Blindsided

Wow. A lot happened. First off, I totally l laughed at Charlie's heating blanket gift.  I don't know how many fan fic's I've read where I think about that amazing invention that nobody thinks about when Bellas chilled to the bone cuddling with Edward.   Second For them to finally have sex. Again wow. I so impressed with Edward. I was so looking forward to the razing from Alice and Emmett only to have that take a back seat to Laurent showing up.  Was wondering how that was going to play out. Poor Bella I was hoping with the Cullen's being back early Laurent wouldn't get that close to her again but the possibility of being sexually assault and choked out . ( how awful) It was way worse and not expected.   Eagerly waiting for your next update.     Thanks :) 



Author's Response:

I thought the heated blanket was too cut to pass up, especially as Charlie always has Bella's comfort and safety utmost on his mind. Now, the sex...pivotal moment for them as he really thought for a fraction of a moment that he was going to kill her. Again, she proved to be the stronger one as she pulled him back from that point and anchored him. Yes Laurent had to go and ruin a perfectly wonderful day. Let's just say that Edward is not going to react well. 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

That ice made things a little heated!



Author's Response:

Funny how that worked out, right? ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback

Loved the ornaments and traditions. Such wonderful ideas you have.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, although I will admit that almost all of the traditions in this chapter come from my own extremely large and diverse family. I'm glad you enjoyed them.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Hina-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback

The gifts got me soo emotional.  Beautiful chapter. I love it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I wanted them to all mean something special and for Bella to have her own tradition to add.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 14:Too Much Testosterone

This emotional rollercoaster ride lived up to all my expectations of your creativity and writing.  Thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you! This chapter was a roller coaster between laughter and frustration and tears and heartfelt moments. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 11: Reality Check

Great insight to the characters! 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I really wish we got more insight into each of them in the books as I feel them so fully and they are all dynamic in their own way and with each other.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback

The gift Bella gave Carlisle was such a thoughtful one, even more so than the one she gave Esme. The message panties to the girls were cute and might even curb the questions about her own! The gifts she and Edward exchanged were so touching and so very meaningful! The Alice decorated cookies had me in stitches, and I don't blame Bella for decapitating the ones for Billy and Jake. If the next thing is her going to LaPush to confront Jake, I hope she comes back without any issues, or injuries! If she were hurt there, I'm sure the Cullens would retaliate! See you soon!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed the gifts, they took a lot of time to sort out what would work well for everyone. As for the cookie decorating....well, my family heard a lot of laughter during that scene as well, but that's Alice for you. ;) Jacob would never intentionally hurt Bella, but he is a "new" wolf so you just never know what might happen. *mwah*

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 13: Gunpowder and Lead

Lol.  Emmett thought he had the higher ground. Tactically speaking. But, Bella played her 'hit and run' maneuvers (even if it was instinctually) so well he didn't even realise he had been nullified.  Lol.  Well perhaps the wack to his jaw was a hint!  Lol.  I thought the talk between Edward and Charlie went better than I anticipated.  I earn in terms of emotional  anxiety.  However, I do belief they were well within their characters.  There is a mischievous part of me that is disappointed Edward realised he shouldn't 'date crash'.  Drat.  What fun.  For the readers.  Not the characters.  Brilliant chapter.  thank you

 

 



Author's Response:

Emmett is definitely the most fun to have mess with people. He doesn't care how much trouble it gets him into with Rose, or anyone, he will still do what he wants ruffling as many feathers along the way and you have to love him for that. What you see is what you get with him. And just because Edward doesn't plan to crash the date, doesn't mean he stays away. ;) I mean he is a bit of a stalker when it comes to Bella. Hahaha

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen

Loved this!  I am so proud of this Bella and her big backbone!



Author's Response:

Thank you. That was the one thing that bothered me the most about the books. She wrote that Bella was smart, but then made her weak in her relationship.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Tayjj44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback

Great Christmas. Can't wait for more :) 



Author's Response:

Aw - thank you so much. I wanted Bella to have some traditions she added to the family. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 24: A Trek, A Tree, and Titty Hard Ons

Stand up for yourself Bella!! Don't let him go back to his old ways. Damn jerk almost ruined the trip.

Good job

 



Author's Response:

Oh don't worry. She won't let him slip into his old ways. He's going to still mess up sometimes, but he's trying.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 6: Torture Devices

Way to go Bella!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Bella might be human but she sure is fierce. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 23: Teasing, Tasting, and a Trip

LMAO!!! This chapter had me in tears from laughter.  Finally she spends time with the whole family. I love their banter! Hope Bella and Carlisle get some time together getting to know each other and maybe some Rosalie time as well. Seems she hangs out more with Jasoer, Alice and Edward. Hope that changes. 

 



Author's Response:

I laughed a lot writing this chapter. The entire family dynamic is just entertaining as hell, and given how many years they've been together, they know exactly what to do to push each other's buttons. I want to be a Cullen. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 22: Strawberries and Cream

Amazing what a taste of sex can do for a person. How quickly he has changed his thoughts.    Lmao

 



Author's Response:

I know, right? That entire scene was it's own kind of torture for Edward, but again I doubt he minded. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 21: Payback

GO JASPER!!! JASPER IS THE MAN!! WAY TO PUT EDWARD IN HIS PLACE. EDWARD BETTER NOT THINK ABOUT FUCKING BELLA OVER AGAIN. NOT ONLY DOES HE HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT JASPER BUT I'M SURE HIS FAMILY WILL PUT THE SMACK DOWN ON HIS ASS. EDWARD REALLY NEEDED TO KNOW HOW HIS DECISION EFFECTED HIS FAMILY.  HE NEEDS TO STOP THINKING ABOUT HIMSELF AND THINK OF HIS FAMILY AS WELL. AND GIVE BELLA MORE CREDIT. SHE IS STRONGER THEN HE REALIZES. OPEN YOUR EYES EDWARD BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE!

EDWARD REALLY NEEDS TO MODIFY HIS WAY OF THINKING, DIDN'T HE LEARN HIS LESSON WHEN HE WALKED AWAY FROM BELLA? I AM GONNA UNLEASH THE WOLVERINE ON HIS STUPID ASS... UGH

GREAT CHAPTER!!!! AGAIN LOVE JASPER IN THIS CHAPTER!



Author's Response:

*sigh* Jasper is one of my favorites. He's usually treated like a human xanax given his ability - so he shoulders a lot. But damn, that man calls it like he sees it and to be willing to throw down with Edward if he screws this up with Bella? Hell yeah! Like he said, she's the only person EVER to not blame him for his loss of control. Not once. And even if Alice said she didn't, he could feel that hesitation in her (and it hurt her that she felt that itty bit of blame) which hurt him so much more than any of the others blaming him. But Bella? He's never felt blame from her. And he can feel everything. This is why he'll die to protect her now, because he knows she accepts him completely, and she loves them all completely, and she will never stop feeling that way. So glad you loved it. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 20: Rounding Second

Oh fucking hell, excuse me while I go take ten cold showers... damn that confidence Bella has tapped into. 

Talk about taking the bull by the horn. Jeez! Go Bella!!!!!!! Poor Edward. That was a test of trust and Edward proved he was giving her control.

I think she should've kept the window closed a little longer...  lol



Author's Response:

Ha - okay see I think Bella has always had this inner confidence, but Edward didn't take the time to really know her well enough to see it. Paying for that now, isn't he? Somehow I doubt he's complaining. ;) And she just couldn't keep the window closed any longer. She wants him....badly.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

I love that Bella and Alice have so much faith in Jasper. I like the triple date. Lol. Mostly the girl talk Bella really need that. I was grinning like a madd woman when reading this chapter.

Kudos to Bella for stepping up. I almost fell out my chair when she mentioned going commando  and then the ice thing.. I am sure that Edward will be there in no time flat.   Lmao 

Love a teasing Bella



Author's Response:

Haha - yes Bella needed the girl talk, but it she considered the advice coming from Angela than anything Alice would've suggested. ;) And Bella's faith in Jasper is in part why he's so willing to do what she asks (spending time in close proximity to her which is extremely painful and difficult). Commando and ice melting were taunts that Edwarad would certainly never be able to pass up. Haha

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

Really loved the playfulness in this chapter. Sometimes we all need a break from the heavy. I like seeing Edward interact with his family. It shows that even if they are Vamps they still retain their human personalities. 

Awesome work!



Author's Response:

I really felt there could've easily been more playfulness in the books that wasn't there. In fact, I would've like a lot more interaction with the family - which I guess is obvious since I wrote it this way. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 4: Thin Red Line

I liked it! 



Author's Response:

Hi there! I'm so glad you liked it. It was the most difficult chapter for me to write as I didn't agree with Bella's decision. But then it wasn't my decision to make, so I wrote where she led me. I look forward to hearing more from you soon I hope. Thank you for taking the time not just to read, but also to review. I appreciate it, and I read and reply to every single one.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 12: Moves and Countermoves

Another wonderful chapter.  I admit that I do feel a little sorry for Edward. He can be a little lost.  A little trapped by his era. A little trapped by the experiences with his gift.  And a little trapped by his human age and experience. But, your Bella continues to handle him with respect and control.  Her insights make me laugh so often.  I also confess to be looking forward to when Edward finds out about movie night.  LOL.  POor pet.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Yes, Edward is a bit lost and stuck in time. I honestly think he's had the most difficulty assimilating his language and behavior to the time he's in now (like change speech patterns and incorporating slang) compared to the others of his family. However, I also think that it's in part because he's never fallen in love while the rest of his family are all perfectly matched pairs. He'll come around. Bella will see to that. ;) 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Hina-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 24: A Trek, A Tree, and Titty Hard Ons

Rose is warming up to bella... Can't wait for more. Love!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, she is. Surprised me, but there's no denying that Bella doesn't "hate" Rose. And now Rose actually feels a bit stupid for believing that, although she'll never admit it. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Hina-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 21: Payback

Awwww.  Love!!!



Author's Response:

Aw - thanks! I love Jasper!!!! He just has a way to melt me. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 8: Skipping Rocks

Prefer this Jacob much more than the original. 

I'm glad you put this chapter in with the Jacob talk - it's at just the right place too :D



Author's Response:

Jacob will still have his irritating jerk moments in this story as well, but I am very anti-triangle so he will never be more than a friend. Bella might have to be pretty first about it, but there won't be any confusing the lines. 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 22: Strawberries and Cream

Wow big steps in heart and mind 

woo



Author's Response:

Haha that might just be an understatement! ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 11: Reality Check

A thoroughly brilliant chapter.  His introspection was interesting and enlightening although I fear he missed some bullet points along the way.  The biggest being her eventual ...renovation.  And the long term guarantee to success ...communication.  I really enjoyed the scene with Carlisle.  I thought that Esme would have more to say, but I'm pleased she didn't pollute the father/son talk. The tree scene should be memorialised.  Such fun.  Lol.  I love Edward, but his 17 year old arse would drive me to commit murder.  Thank you for writing such good entertainment.  FF, in general and your writing in particular, are the reasons I don't watch TV anymore.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I agree that Edward definitely missed key elements of Bella's speech - mainly the point that she will be changed some day even if she has do make it happen without him. I really love Carlisle and Edward's discussions as well as they have been together so long that they almost have their own language. I feel he really needed the medical analysis from Carlisle, even knowing it's biased. Your commitment to reading and reviewing my story kewep me humble and grateful. So thank you!

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: psychovampirefreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 24: A Trek, A Tree, and Titty Hard Ons

Love it! Awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it.:)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen

Your chapters have been such a joy to read it is impossible for them to be too long. While acknowledging the cost of all the hours and the certain consternation each chapter brings with it, you have to know the end result is pretty much perfect.  I do admire Bella's maturity in handling each of the Cullens. As Jasper stated she is already a successful tactician.  Both her inventiveness and lack of vindictiveness is refreshing.  After all, hurting her family and Edward only causes more hurt to herself and ultimately delays the healing process.  Again, a wonderful read.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you for continuing on this journey, and for taking the time to leave me a review. I appreciate it. And yes, Bella's "revenge" was all aimed more to teach the Cullens that they could interact with her and think of her as a part of their family even though she is not as durable as them.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 24: A Trek, A Tree, and Titty Hard Ons

Best tree hunting expedition, bar none! Except for Bella's fall, it was a fabulous way to select a Christmas tree! Trust the Cullens to do such a unique thing! Why am I surprised? After all, they really are perfect, right? I keep thinking you aren't going to top yourself, chapter-wise, and then you do! Loving each and every one! Looking forward to Christnmas with them all!



Author's Response:

So glad you loved it. However, I wanted to point out that Jasper is the one that saved Bella from the fall, which I know you read - but think about that for a second. The vampire that was ready to attack her and drink her blood for a papercut a few months ago, SAVED her from certain death by catching her when she slipped from the tree. That is so huge for him, and I have a proud momma moment everytime this chapter comes up. I'm glad I can keep surprising you. That's a huge compliment and my goal is to always make people want to keep reading. ;)

Muchlove,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

This chapter made for a compelling read.  I feel there are still things to be cleared but it is a great start to recovery.  Loved it thanks



Author's Response:

Yes, there are definitely a lot of things that still need to be sorted out, but the healing process can start now. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 17: Turning Stone into Silly Putty

This chapter was too cute. Not so heavy just an easy flow. Really nice :)

Loved it all



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Sometimes they need to just loosen up and have fun. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 23: Teasing, Tasting, and a Trip

It sounds like we would all love to spend this time with this family! They have so much fun together! I was a tiny bit sad for Charlie, he sees the inevitability of what's coming, Bella and Edward together. Maybe he might feel better if he realized how much they all love her and how long they will! Life is good right now, that's for sure!



Author's Response:

Definitely a dream family to have. Charlie is starting to feel that sense of loss as he realizes that Edward will most likely always be a part of Bella's life. I think it's what ever Dad fears, though.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 16: Invisibly Shaken

I will admit this one had me in tears. They are getting close and Bella is realizing that with out her intentions she hurt her friends. To

This was amazing! I am anxious to read more :)



Author's Response:

Agreed. She didn't intentionally pull away from her friendships, but it happened all the same when she just shut down. Mike wasn't completely wrong in that she doesn't know how to be friends. Just like Edward doesn't know how to be a boyfriend. But...they are learning together.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 22: Strawberries and Cream

The pep talk from Jasper, and encouragement from Bella, have sprouted and borne fruit! Sexy, wonderful, fabulous fruit! They should both be so proud of themselves! I know I am!



Author's Response:

It was a hot chapter to write and it's still a hot chapter to read, if I do say so myself. How they restrained themselves from doing anything more us beyond me. ;)

Much love, 

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 21: Payback

I so love Jasper, for his advice to his brother as well as his fierce protectivness of Bella! It was a a talk that Edward needed to hear so he could understand better, to help him not make the same mistake again. I was kind of proud of Edward for not rifling through Bella's underwear drawer, too! He may get his reward when she wakes up!



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter as it's one of my favorites. In the books I felt everyone kind of treated Jasper like a walking value without ever stopping to think how helping all of them with their emotion struggles meant that those struggles became his own. He felt them as much, if not more, than the person he was helping. And to tell Edward that he'd throw down with him if he screws this up again? Jasper comes a long way. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 8: Skipping Rocks

I am terribly biased against Jacob.  Canon Jerob just makes my skin crawl as an abuser in training.  So, with that in mind your Jacob wasn't such a jerk and he is only 15 or so.  The emotional ride of Bella was a joy (?!?) to read.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

Jacob, when he's interested in Bella, bothers me too. When he can just be her friend he's okay and I don't mind him so much. So, while I can't promise that Jacob won't be a jerk, I can promise there is not even the possibility of a love triangle. I'm Team Edward all the way. Jacob doesn't know that though. Don't worry, Bella sets him straight. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 15: Blood Doesn't Make a Mom

You have to just love Esme. Mama bear is the bomb. It is very important to get the prospective of someone outside the situation. She really opened their  eyes to show them a little bit about the other situation. I really loved this chapter and it made me miss my mom like crazy.  

Awesome freaking chapter!!! I really hope she gets time with Carlisle. She started to developers more of a relationship with Esme hope she can form one with carlisle.  To me it would be amazing to see. 

Another teary chapter. I will continue reading after work :) 



Author's Response:

You're right, Momma Bear is the bomb! I adore her and she defninitely said things the kids needed to hear, and that they would respond to coming from her instead of someone else. We'll see if she develops more of a relationship with Carlisle. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 14:Too Much Testosterone

Oh damn! This was a slap in the face to Edward. I also like that Quill was there. Lots said in this chapter but again his actions come back to bite him in the ass.... he really needs to let her be and follow her request.. ugh

She has to also understand he can't change in a few days. He has been like that for 80 years and it's hard to change especially when it's been set in stone, literally. 

Great chapter!

Thanks for making it clear that Jakes is only a friend and that she needs someone in her corner that she can truly be herself.  



Author's Response:

She will come to understand that, but he also has to come to understand that maybe he never really knew Bella before. He made assumptions based on watching other humans for the last 80 years. She's not like anyone he's ever encountered. Quil makes me smile if for no other reason than his presence keeps things lighter than they might have been if Bella and Jacob had been alone.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 13: Gunpowder and Lead

I love emmett so much!!! That boy is trip. Bella is very wicked, she is playing the Cullens so damn good. Really dumbfounded the way she has things planned. 

Ok so I am not feeling her going out with Jake. Yes they are friends but Jake has more feeling for her and it's not fair. I feel like she is using him to make Edward jealous. She is playing with fire. I know that she and Edward aren't back together that they are working to better themselves for each other but still it doesn't sit right with me. I hope she knows what she is doing.

Now edward is not only gonna have to prove himself to Bella but to Charlie as well. Action speak louder then words and right now his actions are shit. The one thing he has done right was with the flower and letter. That is just a small start. I hope he isn't stupid enough to try and buy her. She isn't like that. She Loves him not the fact that he has money. He's gonna have to be original to win her back. He should go fishing with Charlie.  Lol

Great chapter! 



Author's Response:

Okay, lots to respond to with this review - which is awesome! Emmett: He is so much fun and I think people really don't give him enough credit. He knows exactly what he's doing when he needles Edward, even when it gets him into trouble with Rose. And with Emmett  you always know where you stand because he says exactly what's on his mind. Zero filter.

As for Jacob: I know you aren't feeling the date. Don't worry. I'm not a love triangle fan so there will not be that element. However, you are correct that he wasn't more than friendship with Bella. Bella doesn't realize that yet, but she will. When she does realize Jacob's interest it does cause her to re-evaluate some things which is great. She isn't intentionally playing with fire and she isn't trying to make Edward jealous. Not at all. I've had a lot of people tell me that Bella is just a bitch after they read chapter 14 - but really she isn't. She is learning how to find her way and be strong the same way that Edward is learning to find his way and not be overbearing. They will both still make mistakes. Having said that, she will always make it clear that Edward is the only one she wants.

Charlie: Actions do speak louder than words, especially to a man like Charlie. Edward has a long way to go to prove to Charlie that he won't hurt Bella again - and honestly, Charlie's fear of that might never leave him because he still has never gotten over Renee. That hurt runs deep.

Finally: Edward does realize that Bella has never been impressed or interested in what his money could do for her. He has no idea how to "woo" her, but he does realize he's going to have to be creative to win her heart and it has to be with sentiment and not physical things.

So glad you enjoyed the chapter so much! I loved your review and appreciate the time and thought you put into it. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 7: Circle the Wagons

Lots of great Jasper and Alice stuff there - nothing at all not to like except ... I have to wait until tonight to have time to read the next chapter.

Can't wait to see what happens with Rose ;)



Author's Response:

Jasper and Alice are my favorite (aside from Bella and Edward of course). I just love their connection and believe that they are the most spirtually connected that even time and distance cannot cause a ripple in that connection. I'm lucky enough to have that kind of connection with my husband, and maybe that's why I'm so drawn to them. Soulmates. What Bella has planned for Rosalie will definitely cause a tantrum to the point the rest of the family is afraid she's going to kill Bella. ;) So much fun!

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 20: Rounding Second

His girl is so damn smart, it must amaze him every day! She knew it would be okay and showed him that truth, too! I don't doubt the cold shower you needed after, either! My oh my!



Author's Response:

You're correct, Bella is smart. I mean even SM made that clear in the books, which is why I had such a hard time with how she was portrayed in New Moon, and honestly how Edward didn't give her much credit in the books when it came to what she wanted. He always passed off her desires as "human folly" when he turned out, even in the books, to be 100% wrong about her a lot of the time. But she definitely showed him more than a thing or two here and he is not going to forget this lesson....ever.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

The day was wonderful for all concerned! Angela got to share some girl talk, they had fun together and Bella wasn't even hurt, much!  Jasper should be very proud of himself and Alice got most of what she was aiming for, also! Now, to see where this invitation will lead!



Author's Response:

I love Angela!!! And the fact that Alice was able to zip her "meddling Matilda" mouth and let Angela do pretty much all the talking about the intimate stuff made Bella much more receptive to the advice. ;) Alice is no dummy. Jasper did very well and should be proud of himself. I was so proud of him and loved that he and Alice lindy hopped and jitterbugged all over the dance floor. You just know they had the entire crowd focused on them. The invitation opens up a whole new world of possibilities.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

It really is so much fun to hang around the Cullens, you never know what to expect next! I am curious as to what Edward has dreamed up for this all day to Seattle date!



Author's Response:

I agree and would love to hang around them all the time. I feel that way about certain celebrities - like you seem them and just know they'd be a blast to hang out with on a regular basis. For me that's the Cullens all the time. ;) Edward is going all out to "best" Alice with this group date and I will admit it is a real event that I had to a lot of research on to make sure I got it right. After doing all that research, I wanted to go experience it all myself and I live in Florida. Hope of the eternally hot and sunny.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 17: Turning Stone into Silly Putty

I liked that Alice relented her mental battle of wills with Edward in favor of helping his when he needed it! I really liked when it dawned on him he had lost some part of his control with Bell's teasing and still hadn't hurt her! That was a great epiphany and I must agree with Alice, it was about time!



Author's Response:

Oh that epiphany was long overdue, but I thought it was pretty awesome the way Bella pointed it out to him in such a round about way to where he couldn't even try to deny it. Those moments are where her real kickassedness come out. ;) And every time Alice does her mental naked twirling I start to laugh because you know it's something only Jasper wants to see. :p

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 16: Invisibly Shaken

A wild guess about Bella seeing Esme after school? Perhaps to ask if her offer of art supplies stll stood? I really liked this chapter, especially the forty minutes in art class! As usual, Mike was a dork and Angela still a sweet, real friend.



Author's Response:

You know it's funny, we never actually find out what Bella and Esme discuss after school and I've got 31 chapters completed so far. Originally, it was supposed to be a conversation about what Esme believes in regards to if they have a soul or not, then it switched to more of an art conversation, and now? I have no clue if we'll ever find out. The fact that it was just some mother - daughter time was what was really important as it gave Edward the chance to go hunting with Alice and learn that he can leave Bella's side and will have to now more often because she needs her own space at times. Mike will always be a dork, but his posturing to look tough for Edward really cracked me up. I was impressed that Edward kept it together though. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 15: Blood Doesn't Make a Mom

It was great that Esme had the opportunity to talk to both her children this morning. It surprised her that Bella's drawings were so good and that Edward had no idea she was that talented. It made me misty to read the effect of Bella's heart-felt words about mothers!



Author's Response:

Once again, I'm humbled and grateful that I was able to move you emotionally with what I wrote. I also have to say that once again, the part about mothers and even the chapter title comes from personal experience. I have been blessed with an amazing stepmother who never once has made me feel like anything other than her own child. The drawing talent surprised me as well, but I was very glad that Bella has something extraordinary (even if she doesn't think of it that way) that is separate and special from anything the Cullens can do. Esme's reaction and conversation with her helped to boost her confidence even more, while at the same time made her realize she really does have a lot more she needs to share with Edward.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 7: Circle the Wagons

Fun.  And a little bit naughty but nice.  Lol



Author's Response:

Thanks. I couldn't resist adding in a bit of a lemon twist for Alice and Jasper. I just love them so much and really believe they are the most spiritually connected of all the couples. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 14:Too Much Testosterone

Aside from Jacob beginning his transformation to wolf, the movie went well, even including Edward's arrival. It was also really good that he and Bella hashed out a few more things.



Author's Response:

The movie was horrible. Well, the choice in movie was at least. But Bella really did have a good time, and yes, you're correct that Jacob is beginning to phase - although none of them realize that's what it is and won't for a while. And not only did Bella and Edward hash out a few more things, but she also got her favorite t-shirt back. Hahahaha Edward the little clepto.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 13: Gunpowder and Lead

Bella certainly has changed, in so many ways! She really enjoyed causing the uproar with the family, not something she would have ever done before they left her!



Author's Response:

Her ears still turned very pink, but yes, she did enjoy it. I don't think it's that she would've never done this before they left, but more that they never gave her a chance. None of them really got to know her before they all just went in to protect the mortal mode. There was so much more to Bella that she is now finally getting to show them, and it's so much fun!

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 12: Moves and Countermoves

Somewhere in Time is such a beautiful love story, how could you not love it? They may be baby steps, but at least they are steps, which gives me hope!



Author's Response:

Somewhere in Time will always hold a dear place in my heart and the music? I play it on my piano quite frequently so it overflowed right into the story. And you should have hope. They are making progress at a slower pace, but also a better pace than the first time around as they are learning about each other like a "real couple" would.

Much love

~Lisa

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 6: Torture Devices

Imaginative.  Original.  Compelling.  Intriguing.  *smiling from ear to ear*



Author's Response:

Wow! Such amazing words. Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate the time you took to tell me. It made me smile from ear to ear. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 11: Reality Check

Purple print on blue panties, just perfect! Especially the effect it had on Edward's equilibrium! I laughed at her asking him if he enjoyed the show! I'm glad Carlisle came up to speak to his favorite son, it helped them both, I think.



Author's Response:

Confession? I actually own those exact panties which is what gave me the idea. Haha. And the conversation with Carlisle was very much needed for Edward to get a medical opinion on Bella's state of mind, especially in regard to the cutting.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen

Longwinded they may have been, but it all needed to be said, out loud. It probably won't be the only time he will need to be reminded, but I have every hope he's on the right path, the one that leads to them being together forever! I don't think Bella is quite through making him pay for his sins!



Author's Response:

Oh, you're right on the money there. Bella is going to continue to assert herself and push at Edward if she feels he's not listening to her or reverting to his old ways. And she'll have some very interesting ways of making him suffer. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

After this session, I put nothing past this girl! Edward better be prepared for the worst time of his life! I felt for Esme, and some for Carlisle, but Rosalie was nearly my favorite target! Bella's plan with Jasper was so well thought out, as was Emmett's future ! She really laid it all out and on them, for leaving her behind. Loved the chapter, by the way, but seriously look forward to the next!



Author's Response:

What she did to Rosalie made me laugh and cry. Laugh because Rosalie so deserved it, but if you had seen those shoes? Such a shame they were destroyed. And they're not available anymore or else I would've linked a photo. I'm a sucker for skyscraper stilettos. ;) As for Esme and Carlisle - it will take time to heal, but they'll be okay. Jasper will have the most difficult task in regards to Bella's plans, but I also think they will be the most rewarding. As for Emmett? Well, let's just say that he's going to get in trouble a lot. Hahaha

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 12: Moves and Countermoves

Go Bella!!!!!! I love that Bella stood up to Edward and stood up for Jasper. I always felt that Jasper and Bella would've had a strong friendship given the chance. Bella truly knows the Cullens and she knows Edward better then edward himself. 

Excellent chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

I agree that Bella and Jasper would've had a strong friendship given the chance. She gave him something that no one else ever could - peace from Edward's constant angst. ;) Thank you so much for the compliment. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much. It's near and dear to my heart so any time someone else falls in love with it I smile from ear to ear.

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 31 Mar 2016 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 11: Reality Check

He is finally realizing the error of his ways. He never did right busy her and that has to be the biggest slap in the face. The all mighty Edward Cullen being read and served by a human no less. The fact that Bella isn't backing down and only standing stronger makes me love her more. She is gonna be a hard cookie to crack...lol

Loved the conversation with Edward and Carlisle. 

Favorite part: has to be him falling out of her tree. That has priceless!

Great job!



Author's Response:

I still laugh when I think about him falling out of the tree and it's been forever since I originally wrote it. I just can't help it. I'm glad you enjoyed the conversation with Edward and Carlisle. It really needed to happen. Edward wanted a clinical opinion on Bella's state of mind, and Carlisle will always be honest with Edward - even if it hurts. He won't like it, but he'll still tell him the truth.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 8: Skipping Rocks

That all just went the way it had to go, so that's the way you wrote it!



Author's Response:

I agree, but I caught a lot of flack from people claiming it was just a filler chapter - which is wasn't. Bella has no idea that Jacob visited her a lot when she was an incoherent mess. She looked right at him and yet never saw him, never knew he was there. He really is her friend, but that doesn't mean he gets to push her around to get his way either. She needed to see him for the smile, but also then stayed to make her point. It was good practice for what she was going to face the next day. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 7: Circle the Wagons

My sympathy was all with Alice, telling some but not all to her family. It pissed me off too concerning Rosalie's attitude, but what else is new?



Author's Response:

Rosalie really chaps my ass, but don't worry - she gets hers. Bella isn't leaving any out of her quest to show the family that she is a force to be reckoned with.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 6: Torture Devices

You do what you have to do, based on your strengths and weaknesses, and that's exactly what she did, with a bit of help from Alice. Can't wait to see what Bella sent to Rose, and perhaps the rest of the family!



Author's Response:

Exactly! Those silly vampires thought that just because she's human she couldn't inflict any damage? Oh were they ever wrong or what? Hahaha

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Pixie versus the Kitten

Shocked even Alice, I see! Can't wait until Edward sees the damage he left behind! Damn fool!



Author's Response:

Yes, and as we all know - Alice doesn't shock easily. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 4: Thin Red Line

I didn't much care for her cutting herself, either, but I understand why you wrote it and why she did it!



Author's Response:

Oh I didn't care for the cutting either. In fact, I did everything I could to not write it. Bella wouldn't budge. Kinda knew I was in trouble after that. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 31 Mar 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen

Is it crazy that this chapter made me cry? This was very hard to read. Just wow!! I am so happy that I came across this story. 

Let's see how he steps up. I love that she didn't forgive him so quick and that she shut him out til SHE is ready.. 

My favorite part that whole damn tbing!



Author's Response:

No, it's not crazy. I have been told before that I need to issue tissue warnings before some chapters and I almost always forget. I believe you can't predict what will make people cry, but the fact that it moved you so emotionally is such a huge compliment to me that really makes me smile. Thank you for that! It was hard to read (and write) this chapter as it would've been so easy for Bella to just give in and let things go back to how they were. But she had to be strong. She had to remember that she needed to have a place in the relationship, even if that meant keeping him at a distance when all she wanted to do was run into his arms. He needs to work to win her heart this time around. It was also hard to hear the thoughts he was thinking in reaction to what she was saying, because he was really listening to what she was saying and realizing how many mistakes he had made and how much he had taken for granted. Lots of learning for him in this chapter, and honestly, he's just scratched the surface. Bella's no where near done with him yet, hence the closed window. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 3: Pendulum

Through this part of their story, it always makes me feel bad, for Edward, but more so for Bella. I'm more angry with him for how he lied to her, than sorry he felt like he had to!



Author's Response:

I agree with you about this completely. While I can understand why he felt he was doing the right thing, I get so furious with him that he felt she would be able to just move on. Idiot. Him...not you. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 31 Mar 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 2: Voicemails

With his power, it surprises me that Jasper had no idea how Bella felt until Alice let him listen to the voicemails from her. It is a good sign that Bella has turned her misery into anger, by the way.



Author's Response:

The way I understand Jasper's power is that he has to be in the room with the person to be able to sense their emotional climate. I also feel the one exception to that is Alice because his connection to her is such a deep spiritual level that he can feel her emotions no matter how far away she is. I enjoy the question and observations though so please continue asking anything you wonder about. It allows me to more fully explain the characters the way I see and hear them. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 31 Mar 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Martyr

I agree, only Alice could have gotten through to him, even a little bit! Of course, being the stubborn ass that he is, it will take something a bit stronger to get him off his butt and on his way back to his love!



Author's Response:

Hi there!!!! So happy you are giving my story a try and hope.you enjoy the journey. I will admit that it takes more to get Edward to realize he's being completely stupid. But don't worry, it's coming. ;) Thank you for the review. I appreciate each one and reply to them all. 

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 31 Mar 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

Badass chapter!!! Nothing I would've changed.   Love her back bone.. just Damn!



Author's Response:

Awesome!!!! Thank.you so much. I'm thrilled you thought it was "damn" worthy. ;)

Much love, 

~Lisa

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Date: 31 Mar 2016 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 6: Torture Devices

I am so loving your story. I love a pissed off Bella. One that stands for herself. This is wicked good. I am hooked and just had to review to let you know before I moved forward. The different POV go with the story and flow perfectly. Freaking amazing story!!!!

I'm excited to read what happens next



Author's Response:

Hi there!!! I'm so thrilled that you're enjoying the story so much. It's a project of love for me, so I get all warm and fuzzy inside when people are entertained and loving it. Thanks for not only reading, but also stopping to review. I appreciate it and I read and reply to every single one. Hope to hear more from you soon.

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 31 Mar 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

What a great date.  Glad Bella got to reconnect with Angela. I was worried after Edward issued the challenge with Emmett that talking about Bellas underwear would end. it's been too funny the just let go.  I also felt in the books and movies Edward was alway so stuffy,  he ever dressed too old. It's awesome to read this more fun teasing version. And Bellas line of "going commando" I can see driving Edward crazy.  I'm so have fun reading this my son actually got off his x-box to see what had mom laughing so much. Of course when I told him it was a twilight fanfic he called me dork and went back to his game.  Thanks 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed the date. I thought it was a great fun place for a bunch of "teenagers" to get to know each other better and really have good time. I don't think Bella's underwear will ever truly be off the table as a subject, because Emmett just enjoys the Badass Bella Show too much, and he feels that Rosalie helping Edward win the wrestling match means he doesn't have to honor the agreement. ;) Your son sounds like mine. It takes a lot to tear him away from the xbox. 

Much love,

~Lisa

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