Date: 02 Apr 2016 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Wedding
Oh my! Can't say I was expecting that. Seems wrong that Wdward didn't morn her after all this time. Disappointing turn in the story.
Sorry to read you are disappointed. Hope you stick around for the rest and perhaps I can restore your faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 01 Apr 2016 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Wedding
When Demetri took the heart from Bella's body, he took it right out of Edward and me, too! How can their be anymore love story , with Bella dead and Edward and Jacob bent on revenge? I hate this twist, it makes me very sad!
Every great love story has to have a tradegy in it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Mar 2016 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 2-LONG NIGHT
I really enjoyed this chapter. I like the way you take canon characters and start to make them your own. Edward, in canon, puts up such feeble arguments they are easy to pull apart. For instance, and this is taken from the book or movie as well, where he asks Bella if she is ready for 'never changing, never moving forward'. And then he questions her about changing her mind about children. If she doesn't want them before her change, why would she want them after it? There are so many holes in the original works I want to drive a B Double through them. Loved the touching moment between Edward and his sire. I am really looking forward to your version of how it should have been. Thank you.
I did try to stay true to the orignal characters as much as possible. Glad you like it so far.
Date: 18 Mar 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 PRELUDE TO A WEDDING
Sounds pretty normal to me, just like any other well-off family planning a wedding. The women are totally involved and the guys are laying low, trying to stay out of trouble! See you next time!
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I wanted the wedding to seem as normal as possible, job done. LOL