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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 10

awesome

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Date: 23 Jul 2016 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

great so far

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 10

I loved it!!! I would love to read a sequel.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

Very very good

Reviewer: RoseE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2016 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 10

I really enjoyed your story and writing style. It's easy for me to picture Edward as Lucifer Morningstar. He knows a million loopholes, doesn't he. Sexy beast. 

I also thought that your twist on Bella's mind melding power on Edward was interesting!

I'm hoping that you plan to continue the adventures of Edward and his Queen😉 I'd love to see how The Seer and The Soldier are incorporated! 

Thank you for sharing! -RoseE  x

 

Reviewer: tjputvin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it, intriguing start can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2016 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for sharing.  Save your FFn files as RTF before you cut/paste  THey will upload much better.  FFn and programs like word have hidden HTML that messes with how things upload here

Admins will copy your stories for you from FFn if you ask.  Kelly@twcslibrary.net

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

Very intriguing and such fun to read! It probably be more fun to continue reading, even! Thanks so much for something quite different!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

It kind of does sound like you are too late, Safrina!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 8

I suppose it is a bit wicked of me, but I really didn't mind that Bella killed the man who murdered her father. Beside the fact it allowed her eternity with Edward!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 7

That was a pretty damn scary dream, especially since I think it was really a memory!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 6

Since it seems something went wrong so many years ago, I guess this is the opportunity to set things straight!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 5

His plans seem to be going well, except for the problem he must deal with before their date tonight.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

This tale seems to reinforce the idea of reincarnation, if he truly met her in 1692! Wonder how this will unfold?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

That must have been an unusually deep sleep, for her not to have heard the storm. Then again, a half bottle of wine will haelp with that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 2

So, now we know what that black smoke really was! What an interesting background for their relationship.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Unseen forces are always spooky and this is a really good example! Something drew her to the shop, the desk and the feather. Can't wait to find out what it is!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was very good.. I just read it and l liked it a lot!! :D

 

Thank you for sharing your story :D

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 10

Bravo something totally different. Thank you, I am going to vote for it right now.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh, we get to meet Alice. Betting Jasper is going to want her. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh damn. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow, he made it seem easy. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

Rut Row. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

Guessing her father killed her instead. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

Well where is he going? Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 4

I wonder why she never married? Also is she some sort of shield? Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'm assuming Bella had EVERYTHING to do with that storm. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting. Thanks for sharing. Take care and peace. T.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

It will really freak Bella out if that information shows up at her house. That lady doesn't even know her name much less where she lives. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

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