Date: 18 Mar 2016 5:16 PM Title: Too Busy Being Yours (To Fall For Somebody New)
Intriguing power struggle between these two lovers. Yet both give up their willfulness easily when the moments dictate.
Nature versus Nurture. They both struggled with this age old battle and defining time in their lives.
Yet they found the one partner that understands and is ready to defend to the end.
The power struggle, I feel, is one of the things that really defines this particular couple. It is the basis of their relationship, their ability to know when to pull back and press forward int eh effort to reach their end goal. I'm actually wanting to go back and reread the fic to see all the little things that you lovely reviewers have picked up that I didn't really notice
Date: 13 Mar 2016 3:02 AM Title: Too Busy Being Yours (To Fall For Somebody New)
Will there be more?! Loved this!!! It was sensual, exhilarating, thank you lil,baby jaysus dominant! These two were just perfect and would love to see more of their story. Wonderful and artistic writing!
Date: 12 Mar 2016 9:37 PM Title: Too Busy Being Yours (To Fall For Somebody New)
That was amazing
I've never read a kissing scene that long
is this fir a contest? Where did the prompt come from ?
I cannot begin to tell you how long it took me to write that kissing scene. It was actually split into three parts and extensive research was put into making it just right :P
It wasn't for a contest, but early last year there was a kink challenge put out for people to request writers to write stories based on prompts. It didn't really take off, but there were so many intersting prompts that I couldn't help but write them anyway. I have a list on my facebook page: Welcome2myworldxoxo of all the prompts I want to write where you can request which one you want to see first
Date: 12 Mar 2016 7:12 PM Title: Too Busy Being Yours (To Fall For Somebody New)
I'm glad he's too caring a boyfriend to even CONSIDER taking her tiny rosebud!
Addie and Bee's trysts are too intense for a daily occurrence - that's for sure! Well, I see you haven't marked this complete - so I hope to see another chapter from you later this year.