Date: 19 Jun 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
I love this story so far. Thanks for taking the time to write it. I seriously hate Jacob and I hope karma is swift and fierce.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Date: 19 Jun 2016 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
I was never a Jacob fan, and it's going to be interesting to see how the men react to Bella the Lioness
Date: 19 Jun 2016 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Oh wow Jacob is a real a-hole in this, poor Claire but at least she'd been smart about making sure her daughter would be taken care of and I think the missing money Jacob can't find is what Claire has been taking. Hopefully if Bella and Edward find out its Claire they'll help her rather than do something horrible. Another awesome chapter, getting to see into Jacobs head and to know exactly what he's planning, I hope Bella's the one to put that pig down! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Melissa
Date: 19 Jun 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Can't wait to see Bella take on Jacob. I hope Claire & her kid get out ok
Date: 19 Jun 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Never liked Jacob
Date: 19 Jun 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
I've always hated Jacob, but more so now. I hope she really hurts him where it hurts, he deserves it. Can't wait to see how this goes.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
I love your story, it is refreshing and well written and I can't wait to read the next chapter,
to see how Bella shows Jacob his place.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
I am with you. What a slime ball. Great chapter though.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
:):)
Date: 19 Jun 2016 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Agreed. I hate him ALOT.
Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Love the story! can't get enough!
Date: 10 Jun 2016 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Love it can't wait to read more!Great story!
Date: 10 Jun 2016 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
She is a strong woman when she needs to be.
Date: 06 Jun 2016 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Mrs 'Boss' is definitely her name
Date: 06 Jun 2016 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
I love this pair -- they are really a hoot to read about! Great job!
Date: 06 Jun 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
His kitten is wanting some of he sugary sweet cream.
Date: 05 Jun 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
It is a good chapter!
Thank you.
Date: 05 Jun 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
I like this chapter!
Bella is a strong woman and Edward is proud.
Thank you.
Date: 05 Jun 2016 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Great chapter. Loved seeing a strong Bella!!
Date: 05 Jun 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Great update
Date: 05 Jun 2016 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Love seeing him support her but not overpowering her. LOVE IT
Date: 05 Jun 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 05 Jun 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
I love how they just fit
Date: 04 Jun 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Wow! Way to go Bella!
Date: 04 Jun 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
I love that Bella is learning to hold her own and demand the respect she deserves as a business woman and as the boss's wife.
Sherry
Date: 04 Jun 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Love it!!
Date: 04 Jun 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
I love how she handled the meeting and I am glad Edward let her.
Date: 04 Jun 2016 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Bella was ace with vacilli and Edward was just being a horn dog lol look forward to next update x
Date: 04 Jun 2016 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
I love how confident she was and how hot you made Edward as he watched. Yummy.
Date: 04 Jun 2016 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
They are so well matched...she's growing and he's yielding!
Date: 04 Jun 2016 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
I loved the pants skirts debate :) she held her ground!
and she's a women of power ;)
Date: 04 Jun 2016 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
I'm so glad things are going so well for them
Date: 04 Jun 2016 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
thank you good one
Date: 04 Jun 2016 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
There is nothing quite like watching a business meeting conducted by brains and common sense, rather than a dick. Pun intended.
Date: 04 Jun 2016 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Loved how Bella who went in still unsure, which makes sense this is all new. She was raised not to take an assertive role, just took her strength from Edward and showed that manager who was in charge. So glad that Edward just sat back & let her do it, he was just there for moral support.
Same thing for the pants/skirts glad he realised that he would have not been any better than her father by making her just wearing pants.
These 2 are going to be amazing once Bella gets her groove & confidence. I think though Edward needs to remember that some will not just sit back and let this happen. Bella could become collateral damage if he's not careful.
Date: 04 Jun 2016 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Bella is a badass and knows how to get things done and she knows how to work Edward love it.
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
:)
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
i love it
Date: 04 Jun 2016 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
I love kick ass Bella!!!! I love how Edward let her run the show. He has so much faith in her. I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing.
Lisa....Gail Cullen
Date: 01 Jun 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Bring on the pants!
Date: 01 Jun 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
What a way to celebrate!
Date: 01 Jun 2016 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants
Daddy's home!!!!
Date: 25 May 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Good for Bella. Charlie is too stupid to know he is being manipulated.
Date: 23 May 2016 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
Loved it!
Date: 23 May 2016 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 23 May 2016 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
I've been waiting so anxiously for this chapter and I can't wait for the chapter to come not to mention the sexy lemons!!! Update soon!
Date: 23 May 2016 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
I love strong Bella.
Date: 23 May 2016 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
So amazing to see her go from his kitten to lioness in minutes!
Date: 23 May 2016 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
je suis fiere d bella Qu'elle a soutenu cont son pere peut tu mettre des chapitre plus vite stp j'adore ton histoire et je suis impatiente merci
Date: 23 May 2016 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Thank you for sharing
Loving this fic!
Date: 23 May 2016 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Good update
Date: 23 May 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
So glad that E is supporting her with the business stuff. Charlie really needs a wake up call.
Date: 23 May 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
"so you are going to wear pants!"
Love that line!
Date: 23 May 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Please update soon! I waited two weeks hopefully more story comes quickly!! Also Edward should probably say something to Charlie or I see his (Charlie) relationship with Bella going very badly, very fast.
Date: 23 May 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Wow way to go Bella. She needed to set her father straight.
Date: 23 May 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Can't believe Charlie believes jake over Bella think he's in for a huge surprise there look forward to new York xx
Date: 22 May 2016 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
I am so proud of Bella for standing up to her dad and not backing down. Edward is amazed by her love it cant wait for more
Date: 22 May 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
I really love all the loving going on. But I would like to see Edward in action too. Maybe defending Bella.
Date: 22 May 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time
Love little Elizabeth!
Date: 22 May 2016 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
lol gotta love 'em. Looks like Jacob doesn't want Bella to find out what he's been up to.
Sherry
Date: 22 May 2016 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
:)
Date: 22 May 2016 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Way to go Bella, put Charlie in his place. Come on Bella you had jeans on, I'm sure the pants Edward buys you will be comfy and show your authority. That's all he is trying to do for you.
Date: 22 May 2016 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Love it!! :)
Date: 19 May 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
All Bella needed was a chance to blossom. Edward is the best thing to happen in her life.
Date: 17 May 2016 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Bella is so smart. She is handling everything so well.
Date: 17 May 2016 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants
Love how Bella handled the grandparents. Wonderful her getting to know Lizzie too.
Date: 17 May 2016 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice
Glad he behaved in the club with the wankers. Buh Bye Embry
Date: 17 May 2016 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
Please update soon!!
Date: 05 May 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Oh I can't wait to read when she goes back to her side of the Cartel & tell them how to do their business. They aren't going to like that.
Date: 05 May 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants
I loved how she told off the Woods. I so can't wait to hear when Edward hears.
Date: 05 May 2016 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten
Awe how sad for them to be separated.
Date: 05 May 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time
Big changes for Bella
Date: 05 May 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow another great chapter. Love this Edward more and more.
Date: 05 May 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous
Wow great chapter. Answered a lot of questions.
Date: 05 May 2016 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now
I like this Edward & Bella. Great story.
Date: 05 May 2016 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
I'm guessing little Elizabeth's mother is dead?
Date: 04 May 2016 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
real good
Date: 04 May 2016 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 May 2016 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Wow, I love this story!! Nothing sexier than a mobward, well maybe a dom mobward but mobward nonetheless. Can't wait to read more! Thanks for writing.
Date: 03 May 2016 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Love Love Love !! Love your stories and this one is my # 1 favorite Can't wait for more!
Date: 03 May 2016 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants
Love your story! You are a great author! I get so happy when I see your updates. Thanks for sharing your amazing talent!
Date: 03 May 2016 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Another steamy chapter
Date: 03 May 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Bella knows her stuff. She's gonna make headway.
Sherry
Date: 02 May 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Edward is finding out how intelligent and quick on her feet Bella really is. It's great that he is the opposite of her father. I can't wait for the cartel to see what exactly she's capable of! And I'm so looking forward to the wedding!
Date: 02 May 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Bella kicked ass, Edward knew she wasn't just a pretty face. and this is an awesome fic , girl be pound of what you've wrote it's most excellant.
Date: 02 May 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
wow i love this edward and bella
Date: 02 May 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice
i'm hoping the end result is Jacobs death at the hands of the lion
Date: 02 May 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time
I love that Edward wants a partner in his wife not just arm candy.
Date: 02 May 2016 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
thank you for the update...Bella is going to shine and Edward will be very proud..until you post again
Date: 02 May 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
i just LOVED IT!! so HOT!!! that line before the BJ! DAMN!!! can i be Bella??
and she's SO smart! :) i really love it!
cant wait to see what's next :)
Date: 02 May 2016 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now
It seems as she has won the proverbial prize in spouses,but sonhas he.
Date: 02 May 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
This Edward kicks ass
Date: 02 May 2016 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 02 May 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
:):)
Date: 02 May 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Bella is amazing not just a pretty face lol. Love it thanks so much
Date: 02 May 2016 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Can't wait for more
Date: 02 May 2016 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
So happy to see him helping bella reach her potential
Date: 02 May 2016 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Damn I love this story. And I love this Edward and Bella. And Petal and Mrs. C. Are there pics anywhere?