[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2019 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Poor Esme
Date: 13 Jan 2019 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
i love the twists and turns in your story.
Date: 13 Jan 2019 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
i love the twists and turns in your story.
Date: 13 Jan 2019 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
I would have NEVER guessed Garrett. I know it makes perfect sense bc he was meant to take over, but goodness!
Date: 13 Jan 2019 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Wow
Date: 13 Jan 2019 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
OMG! Such a twist. Please update soon 🙏
Date: 13 Jan 2019 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Wow another cliffy ending.... Ack. Was not expecting it to be Garrett. Poor Esme & Kate
Date: 13 Jan 2019 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
OMG!!! That's all I've got!! WOW! I really started to think it could have been Jasper! This is really great!! I am excited for more! ;)
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2018 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Hi - just finished my fourth read of your story to date. Absolutely love it. I am not going to tell you how I think the story should go, I personally love to wait until I read what you think and how it will go. I know you like people to tell you how they want it to go etc, but that does 'nt suit me. I love the imagination of writers. Have been reading fan fiction stories for years, ever since Twilight came out and this is by far the best story I have read and love. Maybe its the Edward personality I love so much, but I also like your Bella. She is strong and knows her Edward so well, love love love them both. He is so strong and so "in charge" of everyone and everything he touches.
Please keep writing this story and a follow-up would be lovely also. I wish you lots of happiness and good health and please, keep writing. Regards Pamela
pamhanley7@optusnet.com.au
Date: 11 Dec 2018 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Who cares about Alice, but Carlisle, that is sad.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2018 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Gah! I must wait for updates!!! I’ve been binge-reading all day!!! Love this story!
Date: 24 Nov 2018 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Amazing, I am sad to see Carllisle dead but I know how it goes with written can never force it lol.
Date: 21 Nov 2018 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
I’m so happy to see an update I love this story . Can’t wait to find out what happened to Alice and her dad. But what about the baby
Date: 18 Nov 2018 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
is this an honor and suicide killings? hate to say
#1 did Carlisle kill his daughter then himself...or
#2 did Alice kill Carlisle as he tried to kill her...or
#3 did someone else kill both Carlisle and Alice
are they going to make it look like #1 or frame Jasper or
since it is a mafia world, it was someone, an assassin?
intriguing...
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2018 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Wow, I kept waiting for something to happen at the wedding. Then when Edward got a phone call I thought something happened to Lizzie. Didn't see something happening to Carlisle & Alice. I love this story can't wait to see what happenes.
Date: 08 Nov 2018 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
You ate so naughty to throw on the twists on this chapter. But I loved them.
Date: 06 Nov 2018 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants
That was sweet
Date: 05 Nov 2018 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Wow Hell of a cliffy there at the end. ACK
Date: 05 Nov 2018 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
I absolutely love this story, this chapter, these characters!!! I am excited for more of this!!
I hope life brings you sunshine and rainbows very soon. :)
Date: 05 Nov 2018 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
What a wedding OMG. What happened at home who killed them??? I was so happy to see your update thanks so much
Date: 05 Nov 2018 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 04 Nov 2018 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
I understand you take it where it goes. No need to worry anyone that thinks Mafia can not believe there is never any life and death drama.
Date: 04 Nov 2018 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Wow, I did not see that coming!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2018 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Wow!!! I knew something was going to happen but didn't expect that.
Sherry
Date: 04 Nov 2018 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
again love this story but I was noticing that you mentioned Five Families I thought it was now Four. Just wondering.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2018 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
awesome thank you for updating I have ready this a couple of times now Can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2018 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Loved the wedding, but poor Carlisle
Date: 04 Nov 2018 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Love it
Date: 04 Nov 2018 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Yowza....dead.....
Loved the update
Date: 04 Nov 2018 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Was a fun and interesting chapter. Were the wedding details real? I would love to attend a wedding like that. Oh but what a cliffhanger!hopefully your writers blocknis gone. It is a mafia story and these things happen. Lol 😂
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2018 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
I absolutely love this story!! Thank you for writing and sharing it!. Can't wait for more !
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2018 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
I absolutely love this story!! Thank you for writing and sharing it!. Can't wait for more !
Date: 29 Aug 2018 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
I absolutely love this story!! Thank you for writing and sharing it!. Can't wait for more !
Date: 04 Jun 2018 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Loved the update! Looking forward to more!!!
Date: 25 May 2018 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Loved it and can't wait to see what Will happen next! Poor Jasper! I hate Alice!
Date: 25 May 2018 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Loved it!
Date: 25 May 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
Loved it!
Date: 25 May 2018 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
Loved it!
Date: 25 May 2018 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 25 May 2018 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Loved it!
Date: 25 May 2018 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
Loved it!
Date: 25 May 2018 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Loved it!
Date: 25 May 2018 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Loved it!
Date: 25 May 2018 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
Loved it!
Date: 25 May 2018 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Loved it!
Date: 25 May 2018 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice
Loved it!
Date: 24 May 2018 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Loved it!
Date: 20 May 2018 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
Loved it!
Date: 20 May 2018 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Jacob got what he deserved!
Date: 20 May 2018 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
I hate Jacob!
Date: 20 May 2018 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Bella is amazing!
Date: 20 May 2018 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Loved it! Go Bella!
Date: 20 May 2018 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Loved it!
Date: 20 May 2018 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants
Loved it!
Date: 20 May 2018 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice
Loved it!
Date: 20 May 2018 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten
Loved it!
Date: 20 May 2018 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten
Loved it!
Date: 20 May 2018 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 5 - About time
Loved it!
Date: 20 May 2018 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous
Loved it!
Date: 20 May 2018 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now
Loved it!
Date: 20 May 2018 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
Loved it!
Date: 03 May 2018 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Carlisle better kiss Jasper's fert after the way he treated him. Alice should be sent away and have to make it on her own.
Date: 28 Apr 2018 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
OMG! I didn’t see the Alice thing coming! How heartbreaking for Jasper! I can’t wait for him to meet someone else and move past Alice. That is so messed up!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2018 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Poor Jasper.
Sherry
Date: 28 Apr 2018 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Jazzz....i feel for him....
Date: 25 Apr 2018 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Loved the update! I bet Russian weddings are a blast!
Date: 25 Apr 2018 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Alice is lucky to still be alive what a twit.
Date: 24 Apr 2018 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Wow Alice can't believe it I didn't expect that look forward to next update
Date: 23 Apr 2018 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Poor Jasper. I had a feeling it was something like that. Glad B has E in her life
Date: 23 Apr 2018 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Great chapter! Alice is a real piece of work. I feel sorry for Jasper being played like he was. Poor guy! I think the Russian wedding will be intereting. I am greatful for the chapter; it's been awhile... I love this story.
Date: 23 Apr 2018 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
i was so happy to read your new chapters...have always loved your stories...cannot believe what alice did...cannot wait to read more...
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2018 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Poor Jasper
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2018 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Sorry for jasper's experience but glad he continues to regain his honour in terms of the family. Loved this chapter. Thank you
Date: 22 Apr 2018 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Poor jasper. Great update.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2018 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
; )
Date: 22 Apr 2018 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Yeah, so glad you've updated, yet another great chapter. I've missed you please update soon x
Date: 22 Apr 2018 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Good decision Carlisle and Jasper.
Date: 22 Apr 2018 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Wow, I did not see that coming. Poor Jasper.
Date: 14 Apr 2018 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Please update
Date: 08 Apr 2018 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
I hope everything is ok and that life lets you return soon
S
Date: 02 Mar 2018 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Merci pour ce bon chapitre.
Date: 07 Feb 2018 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow, what a man.
wish such a man existed but doubt so in reality.
he says things without problems . hard to imagine someone
saying such things to a girl...
guess we can all dream.....
Date: 14 Jan 2018 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Well, she finally knows. I wonder what Lizzie is going to think. She did not seem to like the idea when they were going to meet Rose and her baby for lunch right before they were attacked in their home.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
The Woods are definitely stupid. Especially Victoria. Mr. Woods just needs to grow a pair and stand up to his wife.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
Im glad Bella has not forgive Sue.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, the rat was Charlie. Jacob was his son. Charlie had a long time affair with Sue. Sue pretended to be a friend to Bella. I wonder what will happen to Sue now. Poor Bella, she will learn that her father was a rat and sent those men to kill her.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Im assuming that Laurent was the rat in the McCarthy Family. Also assuming that he was working for Aro and maybe Jacob. Does William Black know about any of this?
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2018 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Love your story can't wait to read more.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
GGlad they got Jacob.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Glad Edward and Sam explained everything. Glad Jasper is safe.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Bella was stupid to go by herself. How in the world did she think that she was going to get Leah sea y from Jacob. All by herself. I don't blame Edward for be upset.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
Loving this story.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Edward is handling business. I don't agree with Carlisle wanting to send Jasper to Russia. I don't see Alice being happy with it either.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice
Glad there was no major drama at their wedding.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Omgosh!!! Victoria is a piece of work. Now we know where Tanya got her attitude from. Poor Jasper. I hope Carlisle does not put a hit out on Jasper. That would make Alice very upset with him.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
I like that you have included little Elizabeth throughout the story. I'm a worried about Jacob and him taking revenge. Love that Claire is helping Bella.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Wow!!!!!!
Date: 13 Jan 2018 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Jacob is a prick.