Date: 07 Jun 2023 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Loved it
Date: 07 Jun 2023 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Loved it
Date: 07 Jun 2023 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Loved it
Date: 07 Jun 2023 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Loved it
Date: 07 Jun 2023 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Loved it! Poor Jasper!
Date: 06 Jun 2023 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Loved it
Date: 06 Jun 2023 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
Loved it
Date: 06 Jun 2023 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
Loved it
Date: 06 Jun 2023 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Loved it
Date: 06 Jun 2023 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
Loved it
Date: 06 Jun 2023 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Loved it
Date: 06 Jun 2023 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 05 Jun 2023 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
Loved it
Date: 05 Jun 2023 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Loved it
Date: 05 Jun 2023 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice
Loved it
Date: 05 Jun 2023 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Loved it
Date: 05 Jun 2023 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
Loved it
Date: 05 Jun 2023 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Loved it
Date: 05 Jun 2023 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Loved it
Date: 05 Jun 2023 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Loved it
Date: 05 Jun 2023 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Loved it
Date: 05 Jun 2023 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Loved it
Date: 04 Jun 2023 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants
Loved it
Date: 04 Jun 2023 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice
Loved it
Date: 04 Jun 2023 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten
Loved it
Date: 04 Jun 2023 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time
Loved it
Date: 04 Jun 2023 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous
Loved it
Date: 04 Jun 2023 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now
Loved it
Date: 29 May 2023 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
Loved it
Date: 24 Feb 2023 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Bravo
Date: 17 Jul 2022 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
wanted more lookew for a sequel but sadly there was not one
Author's Response:
Thank you for your lovely reviews i have read each one. I am hoping to do a further outtake/epilogue/future take so please keep the story on your follow or favourite list so you get a notification when i do the update.
Date: 17 Jul 2022 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
shocker
Date: 16 Jul 2022 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
it was awesome
Date: 15 Jul 2022 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
I would love to try it
Date: 15 Jul 2022 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice
I hope you won
Date: 15 Jul 2022 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
wow
Date: 15 Jul 2022 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
do not know if I have ever liked a Jacob
Date: 14 Jul 2022 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
so sexy
Date: 14 Jul 2022 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice
she been the perfect wife and business asset
Date: 13 Jul 2022 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
wow what a start
Date: 13 Apr 2020 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Good job
Date: 05 Feb 2020 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now
Loved it!
Date: 04 Feb 2020 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
Loved it!
Date: 11 Nov 2019 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
HAWT HAWT HAWT
Date: 18 Jun 2019 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Good story. Thanks for sharing! :)
Date: 07 Jun 2019 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I wish there was another final chapter, with findid out what the baby was and if Jasper got with Kate like a year or two later down the Rd. But a great story I could not stop reading it right to the last word. Thank you for being such a great writer and read more from you.:-)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind review. I am glad you enjoyed the story. I am hoping to do a further outtake/epilogue/future take so please keep the story on your follow or favourite list so you get a notification when i do the update.
Date: 21 May 2019 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I have truly enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing it with us .
Date: 28 Apr 2019 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Loved this story. Hoping for a future take!!
Date: 25 Apr 2019 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Loved!
Date: 22 Apr 2019 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I would liked to see her have their baby and future
Date: 18 Apr 2019 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I've loved this story, would love to know how they all faired after this, but it was a good ending!
Date: 12 Apr 2019 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I am so sad to see this story end. I loved it so much. It is my sincere hope that once you complete your other stories, you will revisit these wonderful cast of characters for maybe a sequel. I know I would love that immensely!!!
Date: 10 Apr 2019 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Loved it
Date: 09 Apr 2019 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Good story. You could make a sequel. Just saying.
Date: 09 Apr 2019 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Oh!! I will miss these folks! But excited the Busy Bee will be getting updated/completed.
Date: 09 Apr 2019 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I loved this story and this Edward and Bella. I'm sad it is over. I wanted to see them with many babies.
Date: 09 Apr 2019 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I love this story. Thank you for writing and sharing it.
Date: 08 Apr 2019 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I am so sad this is over I loved every chapter thanks so much.
Date: 08 Apr 2019 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I'm sad to see this come to an end but I can't wait till you finish your other work and start your new ones !!!
Date: 08 Apr 2019 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Thank you for an amazing story. I loved every word of it, beginning to end.
Sherry
Date: 08 Apr 2019 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Holysmokers!! This is absolutely fantastic!!! I love it!! I am very sad that it is over! I would have read them forever! ;)
Date: 07 Apr 2019 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Really good
Sad to see it end
Date: 07 Apr 2019 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I'm sad to see this come to an end but I can't wait till you finish your other work and start your new ones !!!
Date: 07 Apr 2019 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
:) loved this story
Date: 07 Apr 2019 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I was so shocked to see that this was complete. I thought we would have at least up to the baby being born. I truly loved this story. Loving both your Edward & Bella, but your whole plot. Thank you for sharing your story.
Date: 07 Apr 2019 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
I am so upset! I can’t believe the story is over. That was a great way to finish though. I’m glad Bella took Kate under her wing. Kate deserves to be happy. Thanks for the wonderful story. I will miss the Lion and his Kitten.
Maria
Date: 07 Apr 2019 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Wonderful chapter. Glad B stood up for Kate. Very classy
ty for writing and sharing
Date: 07 Apr 2019 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
:):)
Date: 16 Feb 2019 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Loved it! Hopefully we get an update soon!
Date: 09 Feb 2019 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Wow, I did not see that coming. It never crossed my mind that Carlisle or Alice would do the other one in. How sad.
Date: 06 Feb 2019 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 06 Feb 2019 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
This is a good story. Please update soon!
Date: 03 Feb 2019 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Love Esme she is so strong and will keep her grandson with her. I think Garett is getting just what he deserves.
Date: 02 Feb 2019 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
I love this story because you keep us on our toes.
I think Kate will be a great addition to Bella's team of girls.
I think Esme will take Laurie and go to London.
Date: 01 Feb 2019 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Well that baby is part Cullen so think even though he is black. You are giving away your grandson. Oh my.. talk about a Jerry Springer moment this was awful.
Date: 01 Feb 2019 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
:)
Date: 01 Feb 2019 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Jasper will be a great head. I hate that Edward wants to take the baby away from Esme. She loves him. She needs him.
Date: 01 Feb 2019 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Lol, wonderful chapter..."Your rightful place is an unmarked
grave" ...priceless!
Date: 01 Feb 2019 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
wow, so much treachery. Buh Bye Garrett you coward. Poor Laurie. I'm sure someone worthy will raise her.
Date: 01 Feb 2019 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
This is great!! I am always excited for more!! ;)
Date: 01 Feb 2019 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Nice
Date: 26 Jan 2019 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Omg love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 26 Jan 2019 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Great story
Date: 24 Jan 2019 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Wow!!!!!! I did not see that happening. Garret has some balls knocking off Carlisle. I hope Edward let's Esme have a little time with Garrett. I hope she at least gets one good hit on him.
Date: 21 Jan 2019 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
I thought it was strange that Garret survived with so little damage and Carlisle and Alice were both dead.
Date: 17 Jan 2019 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Thank you for the update! I absolutely love this story, especially all the twists 😁❤️
Date: 15 Jan 2019 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Well that makes since. Kill Carlise and Alice and blame Jasper. That way he gets what was rightfully his. Or so he thought. After what went down with Aro, William, Jacob and especially Charlie, you would think Garrett would remember that you can not fool Edward. He always knows the answer before he askes the question. Now I think Edward should let Esme claim the right for vengeance and let her eliminate Garrett. And I think Jasper and Kate would make a great couple. She proved her loyalty by telling the truth about the money. Love this story and can't wait for the next update. Thanks, Maria
Date: 15 Jan 2019 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Wow I can’t wait to hear why? Love this story so much.
Date: 15 Jan 2019 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Please update soon. I want to know the reason why he killed them
Date: 14 Jan 2019 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
So Garrett is going to die. I think Edward has a great idea about the baby I think Esme will go where ever the baby goes.
Date: 14 Jan 2019 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
I think it was kinda obvious that Garrett was behind Carlisle and Alice's murders.
Sherry
Date: 14 Jan 2019 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Thank you for the update..Well done..Edward is a very smart man..until you post again
Date: 14 Jan 2019 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Thank you for the update..Well done..Edward is a very smart man..until you post again
Date: 14 Jan 2019 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Thank you for the update..Well done..Edward is a very smart man..until you post again
Date: 14 Jan 2019 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
; )
Date: 14 Jan 2019 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 13 Jan 2019 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
see there that was quick. Jasper was the first one to be thought of but the wrong person to carry out the murder. So next the body guard.. sad..