Date: 23 Apr 2018 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Great chapter! Alice is a real piece of work. I feel sorry for Jasper being played like he was. Poor guy! I think the Russian wedding will be intereting. I am greatful for the chapter; it's been awhile... I love this story.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Well, she finally knows. I wonder what Lizzie is going to think. She did not seem to like the idea when they were going to meet Rose and her baby for lunch right before they were attacked in their home.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, the rat was Charlie. Jacob was his son. Charlie had a long time affair with Sue. Sue pretended to be a friend to Bella. I wonder what will happen to Sue now. Poor Bella, she will learn that her father was a rat and sent those men to kill her.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Omgosh!!! Victoria is a piece of work. Now we know where Tanya got her attitude from. Poor Jasper. I hope Carlisle does not put a hit out on Jasper. That would make Alice very upset with him.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Good chapter, but she did just what I figured she would. She brushed it off. It didn't matter that she might loose the baby she still should have been told. That was her child too. We're they just not going to tell her if she miscarried? We're they not going to let her grieve her lost child. She caved way to easily in my honest opinion and I really hope she starts thinking about his secret keeping and confronts him about it and he actually own up to it instead of distracting her with sex. You can always tell a good writer when they make you either like or not like a character with such emotion. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
Great chapter although I can't believe he is still keeping it a secret from her. I really hope she doesn't just brush it off when she finds out he's been keeping such a huge secret from her. She had every right in the world to know and I can't stand it when Bella just brushes it all off like oh well he lied and kept secrets but it's okay cause I just love him so much.
Date: 09 Jan 2018 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
The Woods where lucky to walk out the door they could of been leaving in a body bag such hatful ass holes. Lizzie is so cute OMG. The seceret will be out of the bag about the baby. I think she is going to freak out when she finds out that Edward knew about it and didnt tell her.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
I'm so loving this story right now and I can't seem to put it down, can't wait for your next update however, please do it soon as I'm looking forward to how everyone will react when Bella tells them she's pregnant especially Edward as he's already in the know x