Date: 18 Nov 2018 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
is this an honor and suicide killings? hate to say
#1 did Carlisle kill his daughter then himself...or
#2 did Alice kill Carlisle as he tried to kill her...or
#3 did someone else kill both Carlisle and Alice
are they going to make it look like #1 or frame Jasper or
since it is a mafia world, it was someone, an assassin?
Date: 11 Nov 2018 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Wow, I kept waiting for something to happen at the wedding. Then when Edward got a phone call I thought something happened to Lizzie. Didn't see something happening to Carlisle & Alice. I love this story can't wait to see what happenes.
Date: 04 Nov 2018 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Was a fun and interesting chapter. Were the wedding details real? I would love to attend a wedding like that. Oh but what a cliffhanger!hopefully your writers blocknis gone. It is a mafia story and these things happen. Lol 😂
Date: 23 Apr 2018 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man
Great chapter! Alice is a real piece of work. I feel sorry for Jasper being played like he was. Poor guy! I think the Russian wedding will be intereting. I am greatful for the chapter; it's been awhile... I love this story.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Well, she finally knows. I wonder what Lizzie is going to think. She did not seem to like the idea when they were going to meet Rose and her baby for lunch right before they were attacked in their home.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, the rat was Charlie. Jacob was his son. Charlie had a long time affair with Sue. Sue pretended to be a friend to Bella. I wonder what will happen to Sue now. Poor Bella, she will learn that her father was a rat and sent those men to kill her.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Omgosh!!! Victoria is a piece of work. Now we know where Tanya got her attitude from. Poor Jasper. I hope Carlisle does not put a hit out on Jasper. That would make Alice very upset with him.