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Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 25

Please update

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 25

Please update

Reviewer: bemidjibear Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 25

Your story has me hooked. I am really enjoying it. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: twinicole Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 25

Please update

Reviewer: flowerboxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2016 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 25

MISSING YOUR STORY HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON.......

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 25

I hope they can stay strong.  At least the weddings will be a happy time. 

Reviewer: kuch44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love the zombicized twilight!

Reviewer: telaviv Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it so much......

Looks like calm before the storm

Please update soon

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 25

Wow!! Can't wait to see what will happen with the military!! They do have a lot of different ways to defent themseves.. What with the fences and the swamp and the guns but will it be enough? And what about the zoms? Are they leaving town in search of food? Update soon!!!

Reviewer: LeslieC Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 25

A lot can happen in a week...

Reviewer: telaviv Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it a lot!!!!

Can't wait to read the next chapter.....

Reviewer: twinicole Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 24

So sad

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 24

Although I can't appreciate the brutality of the situation I can only imagine I would have done the same given the situation.  I love this strong Bella.  I cried when I read this. 

Reviewer: flowerboxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great job Bella....I feel  bad for the families.............Great story....I love it...........

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 24

It is so hard for them! Marcus was a good husband, agood father and a good friend and everyone will feel his loss for ever! But I agree that his death will make them stronger in the end because they will be more guarded! Update soon!!

Reviewer: LeslieC Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 24

Wow, so sad.

Reviewer: flowerboxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 23

I hope bella killed the blonde bitch..............

 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

This was a sad chapter. Edwards dad died a hero. The woman should not have pushed him toward the zoms, but I quess she was scared. I quess all of the people know they are taking a chance every time they go outside the walls.

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMG!! Poor Edward !! And it wil be even worse for his mother because he at least have Bella and  his son! What happened with thee others? Did they take them to the plantation? Even the woman that pushed Edward's father to the zoms? Or did they leave her behind? Will she face some kind of trial? I really love all this action and drama! Update soon!!

Reviewer: flowerboxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 22

love....love .....love this story.....................

Reviewer: twinicole Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it.  can't wait tell the next update.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 22

Love little Ant.  Great rescue.  And, good riddance to Royce.  Bastard deserved what he got.  Poetic justice and all.  Hopefully their next rescue would find some of the mothers still alive.  

Reviewer: LeslieC Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 22

Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 22

Absolutelly loved it!! Anyony seems to be such a sweetheart and I'm so happy that Edward and Bella will keep him!! Will they get married with a ceremony or not? And are there anymore children and women out there? Can't wait to read more...



Author's Response:

I'm not sure if they can get married legally ...but they might have  a small ceremony  possibly..and as for the other woman and children, I'm not sure just yet..you will have to wait and  See... Thank you for sticking with this story...and all the great reviews...johnnysgirl

Reviewer: 1SadAngel-Luvs-VampWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 22

Thanks for the update. Glad they were able to save some of the children... 

Reviewer: bakerusaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 22

You have an amazing story here! Thank you so much for putting it out there.



Author's Response:

Thank you for saying that..I hope that I will continue to make all my readers happy!  Thanks johnnysGirl

Reviewer: 1SadAngel-Luvs-VampWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thanks for the update. Royce deserved a little more pain, he was a Sick F***... Looking forward for the rescue mission...



Author's Response:

Oh I agree. He was a sick  f***  as you put it. But I tried my best, to give you (the reader) the idea that more much  more pain was given. I sometimes wonder how description to detail  I should write.

I may a scene  out then go back and read it,  wondering if it's enough or to much... But hopefully I'm getting it across....However  thank you for all the reviews...

I will do my best to keep the action and drama going....thanks Johnnysgirl  !!!!!!!

Reviewer: LeslieC Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

Damn, that was pretty sick. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 21

I fear, more than anything, that when what we call 'Civilization' falls, that the more monster-like among us will be unleashed.



Author's Response:

First of all thank you for the reviews. But I also  fear what the world will become..  When you think about it, the media  reports these monsters  even now.... But in the event that  Civilization

does fall,  I certainly  do have fears..  I'm not saying that we will face zombies or anything...but think of it this way.. What if the goverment declared Marshal Law... The violence alone from that could make people become unnoticeable....           But that is something we all hope never happens, in this life time or the future...

Thank you for all the reviews....Johnnsgirl 

    

Reviewer: twinicole Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 21

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: twinicole Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 20

Can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: 1SadAngel-Luvs-VampWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks for the update. I'm hooked to this story! 

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

Yes finaly some answers!! We got tobknow who the men outside are and what they want! I really loved how Bella reacted to everything ... She is so well trained! And I'm glad the guys are fine! Can't wait to read about the attack!!

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 20

Yeah, that's what I'm talkin' about! Good action going on here.

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 19

OMG Who are they??? How do they now so much about the city and how can they find our guys? And what about the mob of zombies? Why where they so much and how could they appear so quickly? Did they somehow became smarter? I mean in their need for food perhaps they became better in smelling humans? And did those other followed them bacj to the plantation? Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 18

Perfect!! Thank God they found the pawn shop with the metal bars vecause the glass wouldn't be avle to hold all those zombiea out! 

Reviewer: Jenablur Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 19

Damn damn!  Oh it's getting good!

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 19

Holy sheet, batman, that was FANTASTIC! Can't wait for update!

Reviewer: 1SadAngel-Luvs-VampWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 19

Looking forward to the next chapter! 

Reviewer: LeslieC Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wow, can't wait to see what's been happening with the other team.

Reviewer: twinicole Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 19

Please update again now I can't wait to see what happens

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

Good job on keeping the suspense going. I'm all keyed up wondering how the hell they gonna get outta this mess...

Reviewer: twinicole Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it

Reviewer: 1SadAngel-Luvs-VampWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great read. Loving the action!

Reviewer: 1SadAngel-Luvs-VampWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loving this story, looking forward for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Jenablur Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 17

I am a sucker for anything zombie!  I would love to read more of this story! It's a great read!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 17

First, thank you for not killing Jasper.  Lol, we all love that guy.  The lighthearted chapter was a nice touch after the worry about Jas and the others. Ready for the next battle to ensue.  Loving this story.

 

 

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 17

Haha.. Wow I'm so happy that Jasper and the guys are goin to be fine! He deserve to be happy with Alice!! So what will happen when they go out? Wilk the same survivors attack them again? And Bella being a girl could prove dangerous... The survivors what take every woman ot girl.. Will she be dresses as a man? Can't wait for more..

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh thank God, it would be such a waste of goodlookin' skin to make Jasper a zombie or kill him off....jsyk!

Reviewer: twinicole Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 17

Thank god Jasper is alive. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 16

Omg omg omg!!! Really??? Jasper is dead and is Cullen? So they are all have the virus inside them an d if they die they become zombies?! I'm realy sad that Jasper is dead but I'm more worried if more in the plantation will turn? Did Jasper manage to atrack more than the doctor? Are they even safe inside the plantation anymore? And who were the ones attacking them in the city? Are they with the army? Ot are thwy just survivors that wanted their car and weapons? And do the survivors have cameras in the city? How did they know were the boys were? Update soon!! 

Reviewer: bakerusaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

aww damn...why!!??!! lol good chapter, though

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh no., no Jazz!!

Reviewer: LeslieC Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 16

Damn, lost Jasper.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 16

How the hell did Jasper become a zombie hew was only shot!!! Unless the bullet that hit him had gone through a zombie and had infected him that way but that is like a long shot! I mean it's still possible but ah man that sucks that he's a zombie I was hoping they'd all make it through this! Hopefully no one else turns into a zombie because of Jasper. Great chapter can't wait for more! 

Reviewer: twinicole Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh no Jasper. Please update again fast.

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 16

NO! Not Jasper, gdammit!

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2016 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 15

Hahaha.. I love this Bella!!! She will indeed go after them if they aren't back after the 48 hours .. And she knew almost everything before Charlie told them... She is amazing!!  The army is geting desperate and that is never a good thing! Will they find out about the plantation? And will they attack them in an attempt to take the place and everything they have? It was a good thing that Charlie send the boys now before all the fuel are gone anc before the army come south...  Can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

Damn straight.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great fic.  Love all the detail and especially that the family has been reunited. Eager for the next steps.

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

I really like the life they have inside the plantation and now that the guys are back they have almost nothing to worry about! They have to worry about the fuel thought ... What are they going to do? Will they try to go to the city or near it ti get what they need? Or will they visit a small town near by? Will they have any problems with other survivors? And what will happen with Edward and Bella? Can't wait for more... 

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 14

So good, I'm loving this...can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: HEAT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 13

So I will be honest, I kept seeing this story and was hesitant on starting it. I decided to give it a try and I can say that I am truly enjoying it and looking forward to more. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 13

Omg!! Yes! They cleared the entire base and they have more people to help them protect the plantation! Everything is going so good for them! Will it continue until they get home? It's now almost a month since they started their way back , since they need more than two weeks at the base... Can't wait to read more..

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 13

I'm really enjoying this story, I squee when I see it's been updated! I'm a Walking Dead fan, didn't mean to be, but it sucked me in when my hubby and son were watching while I was on the computer....finally broke down and joined them. Keep up the good work! If you need somebody to check your spelling, let me know.

Reviewer: LeslieC Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 13

Cool glad Charlie is ready for that many people.

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 12

Excellent chapter, I'm really enjoying this! Keep 'em coming!

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wow nice nice! This chapter was really great. They are moving again and can't wait to read more..

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh Goodness, yikes, it's heating up! Can't wait for next update!

Reviewer: bakerusaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 11

amazing! I wait an for each update anxiously :)

Reviewer: LeslieC Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 11

I'm still reading and enjoying. 

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 11

I really like how they communicate with each other without even having to say anything! Emmet knew that something was wrong in Edward's and Jasper's car! Is Ron a good guy? Will he stay with them all the way to Swan's plantation? Look forward to reading more.. 

Reviewer: purplerose75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 11

This story is great..keep going!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2016 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love love love this story so fur!!! I love that Charlie and the boys were prepared and that Bella is such a badass!! Can't wait to read more!!! Hope you update soon!!! 

Reviewer: twinicole Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2016 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love this story. Can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

Gah! Gotta have more SOON!!! LOVE IT!

Reviewer: Bigcheeks Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2016 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 7

You are doing great with this story.  KEEP WRITING

 

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Keep it up.. It's great 

Reviewer: LeslieC Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 9

Yes, please continue. I'm enjoying it.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 8

I just want more every time I read the new chapter! I can honestly say that for this being your first story it's so good and I'm so hooked! Can't wait for more! 

Reviewer: leegav0406 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

Luv it keep up the good work

Reviewer: phillips Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

Enjoying your story, keep it coming.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Super excited for this story! Loving everything so far and always love a good bad ass Bella! Plus I live zombie Twilight crossovers for some reason! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: LeslieC Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Always love a good zombie crossover.

Reviewer: phillips Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2016 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

Great story. I can't understand why more aren't reading it. Sometimes it takes quite a few chapter for others to start to pick it up. 

Reviewer: phillips Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2016 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 3

Enjoying this. Keep on writing, I have a feeling it will just keep getting better.

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