Date: 22 Sep 2016 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved this. Read straight through. Can't wait for the epi. You will get to it eventually, I hope. Although if it's a choice between Bound & this I definitely want Bound updates. Love your writing. I have you on alert for anything new.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
I would have expected no less from Edward, this was so like him! Of course Bella was right there with him, sharing his train of thought and feeling as he did! I'm thinking even her father won't be terribly upset at what they did here together! It was a lovely wedding and a lovely chapter. My only gripe is that it's nearly the end and we won't get anymore! I have truly enjoyed this story!
Date: 06 Mar 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Sorry it's taken so long bad weather equals car wrecks.a48;d52;
With Edward breathing in all the smoke will he survive it or will he find another handkerchief?
What he can also do is back in that time since there wasn't air mask is wet a cloth and put it to there mouth and nose. It's even a step we still do.
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Date: 29 Feb 2016 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yep History has been changed right here. That poor cow vindicated and James King has been charged with burning down Chicago.
Thanks for the review. When I decided to write a fic on The Great Chicago Fire, I wanted a different spin on history, so that is how James became the one that started the fire. He was in my originial notes on the story, but then a few weeks before I wrote that chapter I came upon this article. I thought you might find it interesting. http://www.hydeparkmedia.com/cohn.html
Date: 29 Feb 2016 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
enjoying the story. I keep wondering if I read it before.
I have not read a story like this in the fandom, not to say that someone else wrote one. But I have asked around and everyone I spoke with said they had not.
Date: 28 Feb 2016 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Idiot could have taken off his pants and saved himself. Too bad James didn't go alone, but caused the death of many innocent people. Edward's father had it coming, at least is was quick, a consolation for his wife. Hope Bella and Edwardcan find shelter insid the church - at least temporarily.
Date: 28 Feb 2016 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love it! Why do I have a feeling that James is going to somehow survive this??? Hope Edward and Bella can get somewhere safe. I hope Bella's family is ok and I hope that Edwards home is untouched by the fire. I can't wait to read more, hope you can update this again soon.
Date: 27 Feb 2016 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
That fire was so devestating, but it had a couple of great side effects. Both James and Edward's father are dead and can no longer hurt anyone! I may be a heartless old woman, but I'm glad Alice is safe and Edward has Isabella by his side! Life will be so much easier and more comfortable for all concerned. We opnly have to worry about Charlie and Emmett making it through safely!
Date: 27 Feb 2016 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Qu'est-ce que dévaste!
Je souhaite que de Jasper dans pu se sauver.
Quel est ce que l'église est vraiment un lieu?
Profondément la continuation.
Je vous remercie.
Merci pour votre avis. Je me sens honoré que vous avez pris le temps de le traduire en français. Juste pour vous faire savoir Jasper n'a échappé et sera de retour dans les chapitres suivants .
Date: 11 Feb 2016 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
James is so disgusting. He plans to have rough sex with Alice after he weds her. Never mind that she is most likely a virgin and very delicate. Plus he's rigging a card game. That man will get in trouble. I'm sure once the man he plans on duping finds out he has been cheated, James will earn a beating. Poor Jasper, having to witness James plans. Edward's father wasted no time in throwing Edward's belongings out of his office. Something tells me Mr. Rodney does not give Edward's father his haircut and shave.
Date: 11 Feb 2016 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward Masen Sr really is a very unlikable man. He thinks of his daughter as an expense, and wants to marry her off to a man with a questionable character. He sleeps with other women. I was disgusted with his thoughts that if Edward did not want to share his bed with Tanya Denali after they were married he would do so himself with no regard to his wife. He thinks only of the fact that the union between Alice andJames would help his bid for governor. And he only wants Edward to marry Tanya for her money he hopes to get his hands on. He does not care if his family is unhappy, only being selfish for his own wants.
Date: 07 Feb 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
I hope it isn't the big one quite yet! I want Edward to find a way to save his sister from that monster her father wants to sell her to! Then, I want Edward and Bella solidly together, also! The manners and mores of a long ago time, such as this are such fun to read and learn!
Date: 07 Feb 2016 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter! I would love to know what Edwards mother knows and thinks about everything that is going on. I'm glad to see that she and Alice seem to like Bella. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you can update this again soon.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh most wonderful heart I 💕💕Mr Rodney ..Old man tucker ...really .. all I could think about was Mr. Edwards and Little House on the prairie..I know I'm the old lady. Also wanted to give a BRAVO to the banner I love it. Another wonderful chapter I'll head over to Age of Edward contest now waiting for more of your fantastic tale. Thank you for Bound update too cannot wait for Edward to become a father holy shit.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm counting on Jasper to get the means to derail James' awful plans for Alice. Masen senior is sickening in his disregard for either of his children, but especially for Alice! Looking forward to the big first date between Bella and Edward! By the way, am I correct in assuming the lovely shop girl who sold him the lace handkerchief is Rosalie?
Date: 12 Jan 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Good for Edward securing Bella's father's permission to court his daughter. Poor Alice, about to be sold to theat monster James! I hope Edward can rescue her from that awful fate! As for the glow in the sky frightening Masen, Sr., too bad he's not burning in those flames right now!
Date: 09 Jan 2016 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
The prospects are not good for Alice and Edward to get to marry the spouse of their choice. I doubt that Edward can sway his father's opinion about courting Bella. He doesn't seem to care for his children's input, let alone feelings, just about prestige and wealth. Who would give their daughter to a man like James?
Date: 09 Jan 2016 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
I hope Edward completes his plan to speak to Bella's father before informing his own. I fear there will be repercussions! If only Jasper could save Alice from James King's evil clutches! I'm not a bit impressed by Masen, Senior, obviously not a very principled man!