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Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 50

great chapter



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Thank you

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 49

love the last few chapters... I just can't wait till the wedding:)



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Thank you

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 49

great chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 48

great chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 46

love it!!!! can't wait for the wedding... i hope the tour is still on



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 45

great story just read the whole lot can not wait to read more

Reviewer: Ella Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 45

Perfect. 

The perfect proposal for them .



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Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 45

OMG!!! i was so waiting for this... love it:)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 44

love it



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 43

I understand her reason for wanting to foot the bill.



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thanks:)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 41

YAY Glad Bella is awake!!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 40

love the chapter.. glad that she woke up can't wait to see what happens know...



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 35

i love hearing edwards pov but i want more story.. how is bella is she awake is she going to be ok.. what is going to happen with the tour



Author's Response:

There are about five more chapters from EPOV

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 33

i really liked this chapter..



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Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 32

OMG!!!!! Not what I thought was going to happen.. But, I love it! I can't wait to see what happens.... please update soon!!



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Reviewer: Ella Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 32

DAMN!! Not what I wanted to read first thing this morning, but it's still an amazing chapter.



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Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 31

I knew James would come back!



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Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 31

Everyone should have a panic button!



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Yes, they should!

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 29

this was a very funny chapter. can't wait for more..



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Thanks!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved the chapter, hope you update more soon



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thanks

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 27

OMG!!! i am so loving this! I can't wait for the next update....



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

i am really liking this story..



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 26

I really love this story, it's so cool. The song they sang, is it a song you wrote or someone else 'cause it's pretty good and it would be interesting to hear.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Except for the two Bon Jovi songs and the song by Bob Carlisle, I wrote them all:)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

Love it!! :) tho I am waiting for some drama... where or where is James??



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James is coming:) I promise!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) Glad Tyler didn't try anything and I really hope he doesn't break her trust!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looks good
I see in the sumary you say nc-17, but the rateing is T. Bet you will have a ton more readers if that is corrected. Meg

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm sure how the rating mix up happened but thank you for pointing it out to me:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 18

Really cool chapter. Looking forward to the next 1.



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

Haha that was such a good chapter!! Can't wait for the next one!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 11

So everything is almost to perfect now what is going to happen????



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Oh, I have plenty of twists and turns planned!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 10

WOW the cat is out of the bag and what a way to wake up in the morning.



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Woulnd't that be a nice way to wake up?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 9

ABOUT TIME FOR THE TELLING AND THE FUCKIN



Author's Response:

lol, I know~!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

Aww damn cliffie! Love the story. Please update soon. 



Author's Response:

lol, I will soon. THanks for the review:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 8

About time now is he going to freak out or be cool with it?????  cant wait for more



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lol, thanks for both reviews:) More shall come:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 7

She needs to take him out back fuck his brains out and when he puts them back in she need to tell him the truth about her

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: clancy67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story, I'm excited to read the rest of the chapters you've got posted. Thanks for sharing your story, I'm having a great time reading it tonight.



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 6

:)



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 6

Are they going to ask her to be in there band and then she will have to tell them who she is?????  Love the shock factor she is using



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Thank you!  I promise she will tell them soon:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 6

Are they going to ask her to be in there band and then she will have to tell them who she is?????  Love the shock factor she is using

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

Very good when is she going to tell them?



Author's Response:

We have a few more chapter's before the big reveal!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

Is she going to tell them who she is?



Author's Response:

not yet

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2010 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

OH someone turn a fan on that was hot.



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Thanks, hon:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

I love kick ass Bella and how sweet is Charlie wants to hear his baby sing.  So do the others already have it figured out who she is???



Author's Response:

Thanks you:) And no, they don't!

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

sounds good so far



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: FutureMrsBCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

cant wait 4 the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks, hon:)

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

i love the new story so far and was wondering if there are going to be two loves in bellas life thats the way it sounded in the summary is it going to be edward and jasper i hope i love these kind of storys so please update soon



Author's Response:

Thanks! I can assure you that this is not a E/B/J story...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks,hon :)

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