Date: 13 Jan 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
ok the l word is out it is amazing what bon jovi can do for you!!! ok that means something bad is going to happen am getting ready for it!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
ok it's out and more bon jovi i am sooo in love!!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
damn ed singing bon jovi i think i just had a big O!! hahah!! wow that is really hot to think about but jon is really HOT too and i have had a crush on him since high school!!!! i have been just crushing on ed for a fraction of the time. HAHA!!!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
ok i am also finding it way amusing that you named everything after the books... twilight is the bar, elcipse is the record shop, new moon in the record label and breaking dawn is the band...
love the story... but my dig on hannah montana is the best!!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
damn the ust is unbearable all ready and we are only on chapter 3 WOW!!!!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
all hail the gangs all here!!! bella you are one bad ass girl!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
cool she is hannah montana!! just joking!! sounds like it's going to be cool
Date: 27 Nov 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 61
Great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 61
Great story
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Aug 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 61
This is a fun story!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 61
Hell yeah!!!! Sequel
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Sequel is up!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 50
aaaawwwwwwwwwww..yeah!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 44
i like her and garrett's friendship!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 43
like I said earlier whiny bag.......grow up...tht was nothing to cry about...........i hope it was just the meds talking!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 42
aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww.....so perfect! I loved the last two chapters! BRAVO!!!!!!!!
THe dream was excellent! But I couldn't help but notice she didn't say that her belly was rounded or even mention a ring!?!?!?!?!!!!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 36
I will be honest...I have already read all this. THese last few chapters I have just skimmed through to read the bigger paragraphs because those are the ones that are Edward's thoughts.
I think you were too far into the story to go back to the very beginning and tell it from Edward's pov.
So I am looking forward to getting back to Bella being in the hospital!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
so where are these songs coming from.....who really sings them?
Author's Response:
Besides the first one by Bob Carlisle and the two by Bon Jovi, I wrote all of them.
Date: 16 Jun 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
she is a tittybaby....crying all the time....i know people get really emotional hell I do.......but seriously? And besides...if she and Edward were in the main house and the other couple were in the guest cottages...how in the hell did they hear them?
Date: 16 Jun 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
hahahaha I love it! It is so awesome! I am happy to be reading a fun loving story ....................so far!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
YES! loved it! What instruments or positions do the girls have in the band? I am sure that will come in future chapters...but I just want you to know what I am thinking as I go. :)
Date: 16 Jun 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
SO IS BELLA GOING TO TELL HIM THAT THEY WERE THOUGHT TO OPEN UP FOR HER???? AND JUST FOR CLARIFICATION PURPOSES...SHE WAS A VIRGIN UNTIL TONIGHT?
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella was a virgin and No, because she wasn't sure they would get the deal.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 61
I loved your story! It made me laugh, cry, pull my hair out, pissed and aroused! WOW! Can't wait to read the sequel!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. The sequel is up. I hope you enjoy it as well:)
Date: 12 May 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 61
that was good i liked it yes i want a sequal want to now wthat is going to happen npw
Author's Response:
Thank you. The first two chapters of the sequel are up:)
Date: 12 May 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
I usually skip over song lyrics but this one made me cry.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Bob Carlisle is an amazing musician:)
Date: 10 May 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 61
great chapter... would love to read the sequel
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 May 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 61
I think a sequel would be a great idea. There is still so much left to know... How does the tour go? Do any of them end up having kids? How would that play into their careers? To be honest though, I could do without the angst. There are just too many stories out there that are based on angst. You can have drama without the "plot to end Bella" angst. That was done well in this story already.
I really enjoyed this story. Hoping for a sequel.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I promise to answer all those questions with the sequel, but I can't promise you no angst. I already have 21 chapters of the sequel written.
Date: 09 May 2010 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 60
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 09 May 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
phew....wow Edward isn't messing around. he totally went for it. can't wait to see when they figure out who she is.
Date: 09 May 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
loving it so far.....only chapter 2 and bella has already owned mikes ass!!! go bad ass bella!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
lol, thanks ;)
Date: 08 May 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 59
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 59
This story just gets better and better!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 07 May 2010 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 58
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 May 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 57
everyone seems to be having babies. wonder how long until it is one of the 6 main characters?
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews:)
Date: 06 May 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 56
home at last. but only to leave again for the tour
Date: 06 May 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 55
gotta love the honeymoon! almost time to get back to real life.
Date: 06 May 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 54
honeymoon time! wonder how long till the world finds out and how they will.
Date: 06 May 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 53
so sweet. glad everyone was cool with the surprise.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 57
Amazing, it just gets better.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 06 May 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 52
the surprise is gonna be awesome!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews:)
Date: 06 May 2010 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 51
almost time for the wedding!
Date: 06 May 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 50
i wonder if bella is gonna give tyler an exclusive on the wedding?
Date: 06 May 2010 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 49
on her lat tour, silly.
Date: 06 May 2010 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 48
glad to see the leg is getting better and will not effect the tour.
Date: 06 May 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 47
oh boy. lookd like we are winding this one doen,
Date: 06 May 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 46
oh boy outta retirement
Date: 06 May 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 57
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 06 May 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 45
/oooo the big question has been popped! wonder what she'll say? heehee
Date: 06 May 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 44
all that fame and fortune and still so insecure...
Date: 06 May 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 43
wow mood swing?
Date: 06 May 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 42
home and on the wayto 'normal' life
Date: 06 May 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 41
well everyone can breate easier now that she is awake and doing good
Date: 06 May 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 40
yay she's awake!
Date: 06 May 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 39
everyone comming together to form the complete family.
Date: 06 May 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 57
She's just coming out of a cast and boot and going straight into stiletto heels? That's a recipe for a broken ankle isn't it?
Author's Response:
Probably:)
Date: 06 May 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 38
now we just need her to wake up
Date: 06 May 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 37
love the constant hard-on. too funny!
Date: 05 May 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 36
dreams do come true...
Date: 05 May 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 35
and still there is no mention of b being a virgin. i'm sorry but it seems like a big deal to me and something that would have been talked about. especially since he admitted he was one too..
Date: 05 May 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 34
eddie's trip down memory lane... wonder how bella is doing?
Date: 05 May 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 33
well at least alice is ok and now bella just has to wake up and get better. with the broken bones i wonder what that means for the tour?
Date: 05 May 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 31
well the return of james... i wondered how long till he came back into the picture.
Date: 05 May 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
the article was great!
Date: 05 May 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 29
steadily moving down the road to happiness
Date: 05 May 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 28
yay charlie and renee are back together. and bella has her mom back.
Date: 05 May 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 27
because you will be a member of the family, more than you already are.
Date: 05 May 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
everyone seems to be settling in well.
Date: 05 May 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
looks like we have a song wonder what aro and the others will think?
Date: 05 May 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 24
well hopefully the interview looks good on paper as well.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 56
I just finished this entire publishing and it is by far one of the best versions I've read. Keep it comming. Thx
Author's Response:
Thank you:) There are 61 chapters and a sequel:)
Date: 05 May 2010 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
dun dun dun!
Date: 05 May 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 56
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 May 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 22
silly girl it is called a distraction...
Date: 05 May 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
yeah rose good question.
Date: 05 May 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
we have the new look now it will be the sound and new music. life in LA is gonna be a wild ride for these guys. it is cool that your bella is the 'old pro' at this and is so confident and take charge.
Date: 05 May 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
wow looks like their heads are spinning. it is a lot to take in.
Date: 05 May 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 18
well it looks like it is time for the fun to begin
Date: 05 May 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
ok why has edward not brought up bella being a virgin? she again pointed to it this chapter saying she only had one relatioship before e and that ended because she was not ready for sex. you'd think they would talk about it, it is a big deal.
Date: 05 May 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
i guess it would be pretty amazing for her friends to see her 'real life' but add in they too could get there... just wow for each of them!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews:)
Date: 05 May 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
well it seems that bella managed to find some good friends while living in the shark tank that is LA.
Date: 05 May 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 14
what's up with eddie? this is sounding like a pretty awesome day all in all.
Date: 05 May 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
sounds like bella is gonna hook everyone up!
Date: 05 May 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
looks like it is gonna be a busy night!
Date: 05 May 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
heehee! wonder why charlie doesn't seem surprised?
Date: 05 May 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
well it looks like bella doesn't need to tell the gang, they already know. now we just have to wait and see the reactions.
Date: 05 May 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
so she was a virgin! wonder what eddie is gonna think of that? she's 24 and a rock star for goodness sake!
Date: 05 May 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
well hot damn. first she holds it in and then she just blurts it out. i wonder what eddie's gonna say?
Date: 05 May 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
looks like bella is definately gonna have to start letting them in. at least edward.
Date: 05 May 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
uh oh what is the big 'talk' gonna be about?
Date: 05 May 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
so does that mean that rock star bella is still a card carrying member of the V club?
Date: 05 May 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
i wonder how long until hher secret gets out?
Date: 05 May 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
well that was kinda forward of edward.
Date: 05 May 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
but if she sings won't that give her away? at least raise suspicions?
Date: 05 May 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
wonder what charlie is gonna say about all of this?
Date: 04 May 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 55
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 May 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 54
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 May 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 53
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 02 May 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
this is pretty lame.
Author's Response:
Sorry, you feel that way.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 51
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank:)