[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2017 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great story. I loved it that Bella and Seth had twin boys, and that Peter has been teaching them various things... LOL.
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Well done - keep up the good work.
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[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, that was quite the benefit package that Seth was offered.
LOL, I enjoyed Seth's way of becoming engaged to be married to Bella, and her acceptance.
Well done - keep up the good work.
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[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2017 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
I loved that they played doctor.
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I got a kick out of Seth's reaction to Bella and her older lady friends' book exchange transactions.
Well done - keep up the good work.
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[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2017 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
I was chuckling when I read Bella acting as excited as a kid when she asked Seth if she could see his puppy (wolf form). I loved how things progressed from there.
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What is a "booper" car?
Well done - keep up the good work.
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[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2017 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
I was chuckling when I read Bella acting as excited as a kid when she asked Seth if she could see his puppy (wolf form). I loved how things progressed from there.
;-D
What is a "booper" car?
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
I would be freaked out by touchy-feely strangers invading my personal space too - poor Bella. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2017 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
*cackling* OMG, "Big and Bouncy" - too funny. I love it!
Great first chapter.
Well done - keep up the good work.
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[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2017 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
*cackling* OMG, "Big and Bouncy" - too funny. I love it!
Great first chapter.
Well done - keep up the good work.
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[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2016 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! Jasper and Peter are awesome! I also love Seth in this story.
Thankyou for sharing this story with us.
XoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin aka Alia