Date: 09 Oct 2018 8:01 PM Title: Outtake 1 - Expecting
One of the best vampire stories I have ever read. I truly enjoyed your writing.
Date: 26 Apr 2018 8:39 PM Title: Outtake 1 - Expecting
Thank you for sharing your story and the hours of great reading.
Date: 12 May 2017 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum
This was a fantastic story. Loved it all. Can't say enough good things and enjoyed the humorous parts of Edward and Bellas' interactions. Thank you and excellent writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! If you enjoyed the humorous parts, you might want to keep an eye out on the reworked version on Fanfiction, that one will probably be edited quite drastically from chapter 3 onwards and will be more lighthearted than this one :) I'm hoping to start updating regularly in September :) take care!
Date: 10 May 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Ambush
This Edward is so complex and awesome.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your reviews! Glad to hear you're enoying the story <3
Date: 10 May 2017 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Of Vampires and Alcohol
A very good point made in this chapterodactyl about how vampires waste there time and could be so much more. I guess the Cullen appeal is that they do in the instance of Carlisle especially makes better use of his ability as a doctor.
Date: 10 May 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
I started reading this and I have to this is really a Gem of a Story! Different and funny and enjoyable. I am enjoying this Edward and Bella. Thank you!
Date: 04 Apr 2017 6:32 PM Title: Outtake 1 - Expecting
I really liked this story and I really liked this Edward other than him going to those clubs and being a Dom bc that's gross and no.... However, I don't care bc I loved him. I liked how he was so eccentric and fun! I love Canon Edward but he was always brooding. I love when he's fun! This story was so good. Thanks for writing it!!
Date: 25 Feb 2017 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum
Such a great story. I loved it from the very beginning to the very end. You're a talented writer.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Sorry for the late response, I just saw this :O Glad to hear you've enjoyed the story xxx :D
Date: 06 Feb 2017 6:25 AM Title: Outtake 1 - Expecting
This is definitely THE BEST vampire Bella and Edward fic I think I have ever read. I usually stay away from vampire fics(ironic because Twilight revolves around vamps...) because oftentimes they are unbelievable and distasteful, but this story was beyond amazing. It was witty, the storyline was superb and I spent all of today reading it - I could barely put it down. Really great, I wish there were more but perhaps I'll just read t over again!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Brittany! That means a lot to me :) I'm very glad you enjoyed the story!
Date: 29 Jan 2017 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum
Great story! I loved all the different historical elements
you brought to the story and the difference in cannon!
Date: 27 Jan 2017 6:30 AM Title: Outtake 1 - Expecting
Thank you for this
Date: 27 Jan 2017 2:46 AM Title: Outtake 1 - Expecting
Loved it ❣
Date: 23 Jan 2017 10:39 PM Title: Outtake 1 - Expecting
Edward spoils her
Author's Response:
Haha! He definitely does :D
Date: 23 Jan 2017 9:04 PM Title: Outtake 1 - Expecting
I'm confused. Why is she on. Bed rest if they adopted? I loved this story btw
Author's Response:
It's an AU outtake, requested by someone who wanted to see Bella pregnant. Not a part of the "real" story :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 Jan 2017 7:38 PM Title: Outtake 1 - Expecting
OMG Adorable!
Author's Response:
Thanks :D <3
Date: 28 Nov 2016 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Glad to hear there may be outtakes. If I didn't mention it before, I must reiterate this is by far my favorite interpretation of 'Bella and Edward'. The trust, care and humor truly makes the reader believe the pair can overcome anything and are honorable in their endeavors.
I will miss them thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words. :) :) <3
Date: 20 Nov 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Full Circle
It is a good fiction!.
Thank you
Date: 13 Nov 2016 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum
Loved it 💕
Author's Response:
Thank you! <3
Date: 13 Nov 2016 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum
Just finished reading this and I absolutely loved it. Well done your an excellent writer 😃😃
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D
Date: 03 Nov 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum
Great story. Very original
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 01 Nov 2016 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum
I am sad that it is over. Ok, I'm a little lost, what happened to Aro and Sulpicia? Glad everything seemed to work out for everyone.
Author's Response:
A couple of outtakes are coming! There's one that's half-written on Sulpicia/Aro :) Hopefully you'll enjoy them. Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 01 Nov 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum
Ok the end mmmm
Date: 31 Oct 2016 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! <3
Date: 31 Oct 2016 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum
Bella and Edward got there happily ever after.
Bella forgive both jacob and nessie.
Author's Response:
Thank you for being such a consistent supporter for the story :) I hope you liked the ending!
Date: 31 Oct 2016 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum
good job
Author's Response:
Thank you! <3 <3
Date: 31 Oct 2016 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum
This has been a fascinating story. You did a great job ! I look forward to future endeavors!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much Leslie! <3
Date: 31 Oct 2016 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum
good. hopefully there will be some future takes
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yes, there are some outtakes on the way :)
Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Full Circle
Finally getting caught up on my reading.
Date: 22 Sep 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Two Covens
SorryI am behind on reading and reviewing.
Date: 15 Sep 2016 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Fainting, Fingers & Fountains
Too bad she doesn't know sign language.
Date: 15 Sep 2016 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Volturi
I sorta confused. How did drinking drinking her blood in front of them prove she would keep her mouth shut? I guess I'll find out next chapter.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late reply, it's been a crazy month for me! Edward was trying to show that she trusts him and that he has her under control. Not the best way to go about it, but he wasn't keen on letting Aro have her hand and risking him not being able to read her mind (Aro would want her as part of the Guard if he finds out at this point). Hope that explains it!
Date: 13 Sep 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Full Circle
hope so
Date: 13 Sep 2016 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Full Circle
Edward is so sure killing ARO is the right thing to do.
Date: 12 Sep 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Full Circle
This has been a truly great vampire story!
Date: 12 Sep 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Full Circle
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 12 Sep 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Full Circle
I think Edward is right. Aro needs to go! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 12 Sep 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part II)
:-)
Author's Response:
:-D
Date: 11 Sep 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part I)
:-)
Author's Response:
Thanks :-)
Date: 10 Sep 2016 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part II)
:-)
Date: 10 Sep 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
:-)
Date: 10 Sep 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Where are we going?
:-)
Date: 06 Sep 2016 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Two Covens
good
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 06 Sep 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Two Covens
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Author's Response:
Thank you! <3
Date: 03 Sep 2016 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Two Covens
This is a real good, I love reading ever chapter's of this story!
I would love to see a jacob, nessie, and Charlie point of view after bella tell jacob to leave, the kidnapping, the rescue, and when bella tell them edward her mate.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you reviewing every chapter <3 I'll keep your request in mind, if I manage to write it I'll definitely post it :)
Date: 02 Sep 2016 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Two Covens
This has been a great story with a fascinating bunch of twists ! You have done a great job with it ! Not being of the "baby" persuasion , I would love to see further details about Edward and Bella's life tho ether down the road! Keep up the great work !
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words Leslie! I'll keep your request in mind :)) If I manage to write them I'll definitely post them!
Date: 02 Sep 2016 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Two Covens
Awesome
Author's Response:
Thank you :) <3
Date: 01 Sep 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 35 - The Aftermath
This Story has Truely Intrigued & Captivated me!! Please Update again really soon!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! <3 New chapter coming up in about 10 minutes :)
Date: 28 Aug 2016 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 35 - The Aftermath
Bella and Edward are okay!!
Bella know she will have to have a heart to heart with Charlie and Jacob both.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are!! And yes, we are coming full circle soon :)
Thank you for taking the time to comment :D
Date: 27 Aug 2016 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 35 - The Aftermath
Great chapter ! Keep up the great work !
Author's Response:
Thanks Leslie! :D
Author's Response:
Thanks Leslie! :D
Date: 27 Aug 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 35 - The Aftermath
Wonderful
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! <3
Date: 26 Aug 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 35 - The Aftermath
whooots loved it for some reason i am not getting the email alerts so i am gin go try to re add to favs and see if it starts up again but i will latch for you to update too .
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :D And ok :) looking forward to hearing from you whenever~
Date: 26 Aug 2016 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 35 - The Aftermath
Glad you have had a good summer. Thank you for updating.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review :) I hope you had a good summer too.
Date: 26 Aug 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 35 - The Aftermath
good
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 05 Aug 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Peace and Pieces
wow, i read your stories in two days , i love your charector espicall edward the funny, crazy vampire edward , he deals with bella well , i love he made breakfast for her and was carefull of her ,so she doesnt do suicide again , at the end of the chapters their funny side was and it got very serious , your plot was very nice and you are great writer , thank you for writting this story
Author's Response:
Hello, thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed Edward's character and the plot, it means a lot. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the last few chapters and the outtakes :)
Date: 29 Jul 2016 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part II)
edward reminds me of if ford prefect and zaphod beeblebrox had a child and i feel like arthur dent but i think i'll go on this ride for a bit and see where it takes us.
Author's Response:
Haha! I've had the Hitchhiker on my to read list for a while and you just bumped it up! Hope you're enjoying the story :D
Date: 27 Jul 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Peace and Pieces
Some the trouble is over with for now.
Author's Response:
You're right! Finally little breather :)
Date: 27 Jul 2016 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Peace and Pieces
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Author's Response:
Thank you <3 <3
Date: 27 Jul 2016 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Peace and Pieces
I believe this is my favorite interpretation of Edward. A perfect blend of pragmatic, crazy and loving. Thanks for sharing your talent
Author's Response:
Thank you, your comment made my day :D I'm so glad you like Edward's personality :) Hope you'll keep enjoying the chapters to come!
Date: 27 Jul 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Peace and Pieces
Glad it seems like the main battle is over. Why does Didyme seem sad? What will they find when they return? What about Aro and Sulpicia? What the werewolves? Thank you for your update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! Those are some great questions - they should be answered in the chapters to come :)
<3
Ara
Date: 27 Jul 2016 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Peace and Pieces
Awesome chapter I love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 27 Jul 2016 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Peace and Pieces
missed you
Author's Response:
missed you too!
Thanks for commenting :)
Date: 27 Jul 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Peace and Pieces
good
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 27 Jul 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Peace and Pieces
Congratulations! Thanks for the update! and thanks for writing
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response:
Thanks Lisa! :D I hope you enjoyed the chapter :)
Date: 25 Jul 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Through Smoke and Mirrors
I relly like your story, I hope you will contiue. It would be a shame if you would leave this story unfinished
Author's Response:
I will continue it! I've been stuck editing and re-writing chapter 34, but once it's done it'll definitely be posted :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01 Jul 2016 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Through Smoke and Mirrors
Edward going to get bella.
Bella will have to fight back, I know whatever happened; if bella and edward survival. Bella going have to talk to both jacob and nessie, let them know she found happiness.
IT safe to say bella moved on with her life.
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella has definitely moved on! :)
Thanks for taking the time to comment - I really appreciate it!
Love,
Ara
Date: 01 Jul 2016 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Through Smoke and Mirrors
Awesome job
Date: 28 Jun 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Through Smoke and Mirrors
J'aime ce chapitre.
Edward va trouver Bella et les autres.
Aro va certainement payer pour le mal qu'il a fait pour Sulpicia.
Date: 28 Jun 2016 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Through Smoke and Mirrors
Wow. So did Sulpicia put Aro in the coffin and bury him? How did she mange to do rhat? Thanks for the update
Author's Response:
Yes she did - in a misguided attempt to 'protect' him from the vampires who would torture him lest they should lose. She has Keenan, and I imagine she ambushed Aro while he was off-guard.
Thanks for commenting :)
Date: 28 Jun 2016 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Through Smoke and Mirrors
good :)
Date: 28 Jun 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Through Smoke and Mirrors
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 28 Jun 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Through Smoke and Mirrors
Wow!! Aro using Jane against his wife? I agree with Edward enough is enough. I think Bella may find her power if Edward is the one facing danger. I can't wait for more!! I can never get enough and want to keep reading.
Author's Response:
Yes, the strain of caring for Sulpicia and her illness has finally caused Aro to snap! And you have a point there. More to come as soon as I can!
Thanks for taking the time to comment Robin :)
Love,
Ara
Date: 20 Jun 2016 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 32 - The Runaway Princess
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) More coming! <3
Date: 19 Jun 2016 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Runaway Princess
Edward better hurry
Author's Response:
How will he get to her? Will he manage it? More to come soon! Thanks for taking the time to review! <3
Date: 18 Jun 2016 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Runaway Princess
Bella is stronger then she looks.
Author's Response:
She is indeed! :) Thanks for commenting! <3
Date: 18 Jun 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 32 - The Runaway Princess
Wow what is next.
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks so much for commenting on every chapter, I really appreciate it! Hope you're enjoying the story :) More to come soon!
Date: 18 Jun 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Request
Excellent
Date: 18 Jun 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Awakening
Awesome
Date: 18 Jun 2016 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Tick Tock
Awesome
Date: 18 Jun 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Metamorphosis
Wonderful
Date: 18 Jun 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 27 - A Better World
Cool
Date: 18 Jun 2016 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Man in the Meadow
Excellent
Date: 18 Jun 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 25 - An Unravelling
Very cool
Date: 18 Jun 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Welcome
Freaking awesome
Date: 18 Jun 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Operation Rescue-the-Hostages
Awesome
Date: 18 Jun 2016 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Letting Go
Excellent job.
Date: 18 Jun 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 21 - "For the Best"
Awesome
Date: 18 Jun 2016 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Family
Excellent
Date: 18 Jun 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 19 - A Lover's Lie
Excellent
Date: 18 Jun 2016 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Propositions
Awesome
Date: 18 Jun 2016 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Circuses and Semicircles
Is that emmett? Nice
Author's Response:
Oh no it isn't Emmett, it's Aro!
:)
Date: 18 Jun 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Ingress
Wonderful
Date: 18 Jun 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Impetus
Fantastic
Date: 18 Jun 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Crossroads
Freaking awesome
Date: 17 Jun 2016 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Eumenes
Cool
Date: 17 Jun 2016 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Reunion
Marvelous
Date: 17 Jun 2016 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Runaway Princess
I'm so glad your back can't wait till next chapter :)
Author's Response:
So glad to hear from you too!😘 More to come soon!
Date: 17 Jun 2016 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Escape and Escapism
Fantastic
Date: 17 Jun 2016 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Two Histories
Fabulous job