Date: 15 Jun 2023 8:09 PM Title: Original Outline
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Date: 15 Jun 2023 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Home Is Where the Heart Is
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Date: 15 Jun 2023 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 24 - This House Is Not a Home
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Date: 15 Jun 2023 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Sacrifices
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Date: 15 Jun 2023 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Life is a Highway
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Date: 15 Jun 2023 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 21 - What's Mine Is Yours
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Date: 15 Jun 2023 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Desperate Times Call For Desperate Measures
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Date: 15 Jun 2023 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 19 - False Pretenses
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Date: 15 Jun 2023 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Perfect Date
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Date: 14 Jun 2023 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Changing My Course
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Date: 14 Jun 2023 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Would You Rather
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Date: 14 Jun 2023 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove
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Date: 14 Jun 2023 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 14 - The Three Date Rule
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Date: 13 Jun 2023 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Slow and Steady ... Wins the Date
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Date: 13 Jun 2023 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision
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Date: 13 Jun 2023 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare
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Date: 13 Jun 2023 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 10 - No Kiss And Make Up
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Date: 13 Jun 2023 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over
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Date: 13 Jun 2023 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar
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Date: 13 Jun 2023 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot
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Date: 13 Jun 2023 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters
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Date: 12 Jun 2023 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom
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Date: 12 Jun 2023 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Announcements
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Date: 12 Jun 2023 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream
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Date: 12 Jun 2023 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Best Laid Plans ...
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Date: 12 Jun 2023 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor
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Date: 29 Sep 2017 3:40 PM Title: Original Outline
Love the route u chose!
Date: 17 Jun 2017 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Changing My Course
Yeah so Emmett the voice of reason says tell Bella he's right because when someone else does she will rightfully be pissed and no doubt run. But we love our E&B drama so bring it on. Good chapter though. ;-)
Date: 15 Jun 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Slow and Steady ... Wins the Date
Some happy progress indeed!
Date: 15 Jun 2017 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare
Between her shrill and his immaturity it's hard to like them or wish hem HEA but I have faith so I press on. ;-)
Date: 15 Jun 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over
Oye these two kids! Edward must grow up. I see this more and a growth journey for him. He's 28 it's time. Bella was right to be pissed this time with the trash in the living room and going through her things. Tsk tsk. I do hope they find a medium soon if nothing else...friendship?
Date: 15 Jun 2017 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar
I don't think Bella should roll over easily especially since we know Edwards motives but sometimes it doesn't feel like she trying to push through his cocky to see him clearly either. This isn't a date they got MARRIED so the same dating rules don't apply. The Bella before the wedding felt more open then the post wedding Bella. Ah growing pains ;-)
Date: 15 Jun 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot
No doubt Edwards intentions are not noble here but Bella is coming off all Mom to his childish cocky. They both need a wake up call. I'm sure you've got goodies planned ;-)
Date: 15 Jun 2017 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters
Is Bella being steadfast though? I mean okay he came off cocky but she came off pretentious. And why not at least talk a bit to get to know each other. It was awkward but that was the point so...
Date: 15 Jun 2017 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor
Really Bella no kiss that seems ridiculous when you have friends and family there and you agreed to make this work. A peck wouldn't have killed you and now you've set the tone sweetie. And Edward its beyond immature and skanky to sleep with your FB 2 days before even if you view this as a fake marriage. Also girls are possessive even FBs. Then you invite her friend or not to your wedding. She probably still smells like you (I kid). Either way that's gross dear and not cool. JS
Date: 22 Apr 2017 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 10 - No Kiss And Make Up
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Date: 22 Apr 2017 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over
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Date: 22 Apr 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar
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Date: 22 Apr 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot
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Date: 22 Apr 2017 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters
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Date: 22 Apr 2017 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom
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Date: 22 Apr 2017 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Announcements
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Date: 22 Apr 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream
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Date: 22 Apr 2017 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Best Laid Plans ...
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Date: 22 Apr 2017 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor
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Date: 17 Feb 2017 11:16 PM Title: Original Outline
I am SOOOOOO happy with the ending you chose to use. I read the original outline and I felt like if you would have gone with that storyline I would have been crying for most of the rest of the story. You chose wonderfully and I truly appreciate it. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2017 1:33 AM Title: Epilogue
Bravo again another wonderful tale from you. I really loved the story line also. I look forward to your next story. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2017 1:33 AM Title: Epilogue
Bravo again another wonderful tale from you. I really loved the story line also. I look forward to your next story. Thank you
Date: 30 Jan 2017 1:32 AM Title: Epilogue
Bravo again another wonderful tale from you. I really loved the story line also. I look forward to your next story. Thank you
Date: 29 Jan 2017 8:08 AM Title: Epilogue
So sad it is over but I am glad to hear you are working on another already. Thanks so much
Date: 28 Jan 2017 5:51 PM Title: Epilogue
I have truly enjoyed reading your story. You are a really great writer. So glad things worked out for Edward and Bella. Can't wait to see what your next story holds. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2017 1:12 AM Title: Epilogue
Absolutely loved it.
Sherry
Date: 27 Jan 2017 10:48 PM Title: Epilogue
Aw that is so beautiful. Love the idea of a "little ginger" spice coming along.
Such a great story. This is as close as I get to watching reality TV.
Date: 27 Jan 2017 4:46 PM Title: Epilogue
good ending. proposal and wedding were nice :)
Date: 27 Jan 2017 7:19 AM Title: Epilogue
Oh my goodness! Such happiness! I absolutely loved this story! Can't wait for your next one! ❤️
Date: 27 Jan 2017 5:55 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved the epi, can't wait for the futuretake/outtake to come.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2017 4:19 AM Title: Epilogue
Love the vow renewal and that Charlie was there that time. Wonderful end to the story. TY for writing and sharing with us all
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2017 1:47 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved this story!!!! Another epi please!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2017 12:03 AM Title: Epilogue
Great story. loved the ending.
Date: 26 Jan 2017 11:47 PM Title: Epilogue
I loved it! I can't wait to read your next story.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 26 Jan 2017 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor
Oh, my apologies ... I loved it! :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2017 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor
Oh, my apologies ... I loved it! :)
Date: 26 Jan 2017 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor
Oh, my apologies ... I loved it! :)
Date: 26 Jan 2017 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor
Oh, my apologies ... I loved it! :)
Date: 26 Jan 2017 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor
Oh, my apologies ... I loved it! :)
Date: 26 Jan 2017 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor
Oh, my apologies ... I loved it! :)
Date: 11 Jan 2017 12:50 PM Title: Original Outline
like this version better
Author's Response:
So do I now that it's all written. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Date: 10 Jan 2017 5:17 PM Title: Original Outline
I am so happy with the way you did it I think there was the right amount of angst. Thanks so much
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know you're happy with my choice to change the plot. I wasn't sure at first but am happy with the result.
Date: 07 Jan 2017 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Home Is Where the Heart Is
Thank you!
Xx T
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. The epi will be up in a few days. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2017 8:01 AM Title: Original Outline
send the epi
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2017 8:01 AM Title: Original Outline
send the epi
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2017 8:01 AM Title: Original Outline
send the epi
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2017 8:01 AM Title: Original Outline
send the epi
Author's Response:
The epi will be up in a few days. Thanks for reading and reviewing, even though your rating implies you didn't like the story much.
Date: 05 Jan 2017 10:54 AM Title: Original Outline
I'm glad you chose it the way you published it! I think it's far more realistic and it did a lot for their relationship. To be open and honest is so important and I loved how Bella changed her mind upon hearing Edward's declaration of love!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. Even though I wasn't sure at first which way to go, I'm really happy with the way it all turned out, and I'm glad you agree.
Date: 02 Jan 2017 12:47 AM Title: Original Outline
I like it better the way you finished it! I like the changes.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I was nervous about the responses to the original outline, but you all seem to be happy with the way I handled things. :)
Date: 31 Dec 2016 6:41 AM Title: Original Outline
I LOVE the chapter you published. Much better. Great fic! Can't wait for your next one.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you agree with my decision to change the plot. It was much more fun this way.
Date: 31 Dec 2016 5:55 AM Title: Original Outline
happy with what you went with ;)
happy new year
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know you like my change of heart. It was a difficult decision, but I'm happy with the way it turned out.
Date: 31 Dec 2016 4:50 AM Title: Original Outline
I liked how you wrote it. I think there was enough angst in the beginning when Bella didn't want to give in to Edward's advances. I also think that it showed Edward and Bella that Vicky wasn't more than a friend with benefits. Can't wait for the epi.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked my changes. I was a bit nervous about it.
The epilogue will be up in a few days. See you then.
Date: 31 Dec 2016 4:07 AM Title: Original Outline
I love the route you decided to take, in fact I prefer it to what you had planned, not because I dislike angst (I love it in fact), I just agree that the breaking up and getting back together route is used too often. In my opinion a lit of relationships can't come back from that, so to have done it with how rocky their start was would've made it unbelievable to me.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. And thanks again for your help with the restaurant name. I was totally clueless there.
The epilogue will be up in a few days. See you then.
Date: 31 Dec 2016 3:12 AM Title: Original Outline
I like the ending that you did write. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank for letting me know you agree with my choice. I was nervous about it, but in hindsight, I'm glad the new ending occurred to me.
The epilogue will be up in a few days. See you then.
Date: 31 Dec 2016 12:03 AM Title: Original Outline
I liked how it went. Any chance at a future shot.
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know you liked my change of heart. Yeah, there will be a future shot, probably at some point in the future when I have good news to announce ;).
See you in a few days when the epi posts.
Date: 30 Dec 2016 9:22 PM Title: Original Outline
I prefer the version you posted. I'm becoming such an agnst weenie
Author's Response:
Thank for sharing your thoughts. I'm an angst wuss, too. To be honest, I stopped reading angst stories a while ago. Life is serious and sad enough as it is. Fiction should be fun.
The epilogue will post in a few days. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2016 9:12 PM Title: Original Outline
I'm not one to normally review. I love this story, and I enjoyed the plot the way it turned out. Now that you mention it, I would have also enjoyed more angst. But it doesn't matter, you are the author. If you liked what you wrote, then who the heck cares? This is your plot and you can do whatever you want to it. Just stay true to yourself. Can't wait for the epi!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your review and your encouraging words. I'm sorry I cheated you out of the angst, but I have to say, I prefer how the story turned out.
The epilogue will be up in a few days. See you then.
Date: 25 Dec 2016 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Home Is Where the Heart Is
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. The epi will post in a few days. See you then.
Date: 24 Dec 2016 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Home Is Where the Heart Is
What a great surprise. Marry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too. Thanks for the great gift.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Edward had the perfect Christmas present for Bella. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
The epi will be up in a few days. See you then.
Date: 23 Dec 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Home Is Where the Heart Is
sweet of e
Author's Response:
Yeah, he's a sweetheart. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.
The epi will be up in a few days. See you then.
Date: 22 Dec 2016 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Home Is Where the Heart Is
I'm really speechless at this point ;) ...speechless at this wonderful final of the story and that everything turned out well for Bella and Edward. What Edward has done for her is incredible and shows how close the two of them have grown. Now they can really enjoy their lives and become an even better couple!
What I like so much about your story is that their personalities are realistic and no one acts totally weird or excessive. When Bella hears that Seth hacked into her account, she's irritated but not mad - and that's what makes up a good relationship in my opinion!
I'm really looking forward to the further outtakes, the epilogue and whatever else escapes your mind ;) You did great again with this story and of course I voted for it (along with TBL).
Now have a wonderful Christmas with your family and enjoy the holidays!
See you around!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words. It's really encouraging to hear that you liked the personality growth and how their relationship turned out. Thank you as well for voting for my stories in the TFFAs. I can't believe TBL actually finished third for Best Snuggle Fic.
The epi will be up in a few days. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2016 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Home Is Where the Heart Is
I loved how this ending turned out. You done well.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm glad you're happy with the HEA. The epi will be up in a few days. See aou then.
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Home Is Where the Heart Is
:) loved this story. Looking forward to reading the epilogue and outtakes. Merry Christmas and Happy new year to you too
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you loved the HEA. The epi will be up in a few days. See you then.
Date: 21 Dec 2016 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Home Is Where the Heart Is
AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!!!!Thank you for sharing with us. So glad that everything worked out for them. Another great story from you. Can't wait to see what you do next.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the ending. They deserved their HEA.
The epi will be up in a few days. See you then.
Date: 21 Dec 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Home Is Where the Heart Is
I can't feel sorry for how Bella felt while away. She did it to herself, I get wanting to help out an old friend/boss, but you were the one who extended her stay instead of trying to figure out another way. Glad they got their HEA. I loved Edward more then Bella in this one, but then again I am Team Edward lol!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. It wasn't only Bella's fault she stayed so long. After the phonecall, telling Edward it might be longer, Edward had Shelly keep her until everything with the restaurant was taken care of. However, I know you're Team Edward and I won't be able to sway you ;).
The epi will be up in a few days. See you then.
Date: 21 Dec 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Home Is Where the Heart Is
Glad she talked it out with Charlie. I think a vow renewal would be wonderful. Poor B. Jake and E are making her crazy. Glad Ms Cope pushed her to go.
Wonderful way to surprise her. E was very busy in those weeks. I like the idea of partners. Go Marcus for helping too. Spezia is perfect.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Charlie finally came around. It was definitely time.
Things with the restaurant worked out fine. Now, I'll definitely consider that vow renewal ...
Epi will be up soon. See you then.
Date: 07 Dec 2016 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 24 - This House Is Not a Home
wondering if she would still want voluturi's or if maybe, working at the diner might inspire her to open her own place
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. As nice as working at a diner might be, Bella's culinary aspirations go beyond French toast, burgers and fries. I'm sure, whatever Edward has planned will be just perfect. See you next chapter.
Date: 05 Dec 2016 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 24 - This House Is Not a Home
Edward will do what ever he can to get Bella what she needs. It is to hard for them to be apart.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. They won't be apart for much longer. Bella will be back soon. See you next chapter.
Date: 05 Dec 2016 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 24 - This House Is Not a Home
will there be an epi? I hope he's getting her resturant back for her. I know it he's going to use that letter for the million dollar offer to help with the loan.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, there will be an epi, probably some time in January. And I have a few ideas for some outtakes/futuretakes. See you next chapter.