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Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2016 2:53 AM Title: America's Favorite Dancer Is ...

I'm SO glad you didn't leave the big announcement hanging in a cliffie for next chapter! Thank you for the reveal now! Why do I think Alice isn't done yet?  I hope those tabloids she tried to give bogus information on Bella to, that called he on her confidentiality agreement, bust her with the judges in the end.  Renee still hasn't been heard from yet, either.  I hope I'm just wrong about those 2 not being done yet.  This has been a wonderful story. I'm really enjoying reading it!

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2016 1:39 AM Title: America's Favorite Dancer Is ...

YES YES YES WHOOP WHOOP :D

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2016 5:36 PM Title: Final Four

Gawd I hope you take Malice down hard.  I know she's up to something with B's skank of an egg donor.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 7:12 PM Title: Final Four

good

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 2:43 AM Title: Final Four

Please post next chapter soon

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2016 1:18 PM Title: Final Four

your writing is sooo amazing as always. so much research and effort

i'm sure have gone into this. the emotions your stories evoke show

how great your writing is. of course, you've left us on a sort of a

cliffhanger. so what was all that about the medical file renee gave to alice?

what suspense....cant wait!

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2016 12:49 PM Title: Road to the Finale

will you please stop bella from being soooo nice?

right after the hit, after falling to the floor, bella says, it was an accident.

why would she continue to give alice excuses, an alibi of sort when

she knows how evil alice is?

bella and her friends need to be more offensive, NOT defensive and

just wait for things to happen...it will be too late!

soooo frustrating!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2016 7:35 PM Title: Final Four

Brava!  You make this story sizzle with all kinds of emotions!  I hate Alice and very much look forward to  her getting her due. She won't win. You wouldn't do that! Would you? No, not ever!  With Alice showing smugness on her face, I think she's got something planned to sabotage Bella and make herself win. Whatever it is, I hope it backfires! Thanks for a great story!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2016 9:04 AM Title: Final Four

:) 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2016 7:16 AM Title: Final Four

Bella will win this :) :)

2nd place jasper

3rd place Jacob

4th place malice

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2016 1:34 AM Title: Final Four

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!  I really hate Alice! 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 7:33 PM Title: Road to the Finale

Merci pour ce bon chapitre, j'aime cette fiction.

Baisers

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 7:25 PM Title: Road to the Finale

Alice will get it in the end. 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 9:06 AM Title: Road to the Finale

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!  Poor Bella!  I really hate Alice! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2016 5:15 PM Title: Road to the Finale

Poor B.  I don't trust Malice as far as I can throw her.  Glad E is there to help take care of her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2016 12:27 PM Title: Road to the Finale

A camera needs to follow Alice every second of the day to either prevent her from doing any more harm or catch her in the act of cavorting with Renee.

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2016 8:26 AM Title: Road to the Finale

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 11:13 PM Title: Road to the Finale

cannot wait

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 8:57 PM Title: Road to the Finale

I think Alice has something else up her sleeve 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 5:58 PM Title: Road to the Finale

How Alice made it look like her treatment of Bella wasn't intentionially rough, and meant to cause damage, is beyond me! She must have gotten coaching on how to make her intent look innocent!  I know she was trying to hurt Bella!  I hope Renee is caught and made to confess she collaborated with Alice to sabotage Bella so that they both will go down!  Her sexy time with Edward was great, but all too short. I know you are building up to it and the slow burn is excruciating!  Thanks for a great story!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 4:30 AM Title: Road to the Finale

good

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 3:14 AM Title: Road to the Finale

so glad to see you posting this story. excellent chapter. 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 12:50 AM Title: Road to the Finale

How can she say it will be for nothing if she doesn't win?  She would have never met Edward otherwise.

Reviewer: Becka13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 10:52 PM Title: When Love Takes Over

What happened!!!? It's been a month!!! Update pretty please!



Author's Response:

I've had to take a step back ... check out this blog post about my update schedules: http://tufano79.blogspot.com/2016/08/public-service-announcement_25.html 

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 7:20 AM Title: When Love Takes Over

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 5:55 AM Title: Cheap Thrills

Uh-oh! I really hate Alice and Renee!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 5:28 AM Title: Mambo

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 4:56 AM Title: Gravity

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 5:33 PM Title: Kiss of the Spider Woman

Loved it! I really hate Alice and Renee!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 4:55 PM Title: Fuego

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 4:13 PM Title: The Dance

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 3:38 PM Title: I Know You Want Me

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 1:53 PM Title: Time

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 1:18 PM Title: Eyes on Fire

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 12:47 PM Title: Someone to Watch over Me

Loved it! I really hate Alice!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 12:19 PM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 11:44 AM Title: The Green Mile

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 10:59 AM Title: California Dreamin'

Loved it! I really hate Alice!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 10:25 AM Title: New York Minute

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 10:00 AM Title: You are the New Day

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 9:31 AM Title: Pas de Deux

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 9:12 AM Title: A Dream Fulfilled

Loved it!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2016 6:50 PM Title: When Love Takes Over

good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2016 7:38 PM Title: When Love Takes Over

Bella better check her room. I would not put it past Alice to get an old narcotics prescription from Renee and hide it in Bella's room.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 7:01 PM Title: When Love Takes Over

They should have told Alistair and Carmen that Malice was trying to get into B's room.   Glad Jasper doesn't have to live the lie anymore.  

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 3:14 AM Title: When Love Takes Over

Was Alice trying to plant contraband in Bella's room?
Will Jacob and Jasper try to protect Bella in the house now that they are the only two males remaining?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2016 12:41 PM Title: When Love Takes Over

I like this chapter, there is only Alice and Bella, Jacob and to Chatter. That is going to make Alice to damage Bella.

Thank you kisses

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2016 11:35 AM Title: When Love Takes Over

a great story I look forward to each chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2016 11:04 PM Title: When Love Takes Over

:) 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2016 8:03 PM Title: When Love Takes Over

What a great chapter!  Bella triumphed and came closer to Edward in every possible way, save one.  Alice, despite being a hateful bitch, managed to make it to the finals. Will she try one last desperate attempt to sabotage Bella? It woudn't be a smart thing for her to do, but I woudn't put it past her!  I'm curious about where Renee is in all of this. She just kind of disappeared. Don't tell me she is waiting in the wings to pull one last stunt! Yuck! Such drama. I love it! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Becka13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 2:47 AM Title: Cheap Thrills

Update? Please? It's been 13 days

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 6:55 PM Title: Cheap Thrills

They have to get Alice and Renee. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 6:50 AM Title: Cheap Thrills

I loved it wow after all this evil planning will it blow up in there face instead I hope so update soon

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 2:45 PM Title: Cheap Thrills

Is Renee that stupid?
The release of someone's medical information has become a violation of a federal statute when not authorized or under the umbrella of insurance or employer.
So Alice's phone is really busted?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 10:34 AM Title: Cheap Thrills

Renée est diabolique et Alice est fou.

J'espère que Bella va échapper à leurs projets d'assassiner.

Je vous remercie.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2016 7:05 PM Title: Cheap Thrills

This is bad! Hopefully Alice can be stopped before she can damage Bella permanently. She's such an evil bitch and I hope she gets caught and gets what is coming to her! Lemons? Bring 'em! This is a very enjoyable story!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2016 11:14 AM Title: Cheap Thrills

Poor Bella.  They are evil 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2016 5:38 AM Title: Cheap Thrills

Oh wow! those two witches need to go down. Poor B.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2016 3:49 AM Title: Cheap Thrills

good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:20 PM Title: Mambo

Bella needs to be extra diligent,  since Rose is gone. Alice is getting too close.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 4:25 PM Title: Mambo

Unfortunate, but not unexpected, that Rose was eliminated.
At least Bella still has Jacob and Jasper as look outs and support. Will Rose go back home or stay to watch the end of the show?

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 2:02 AM Title: Mambo

This chapter was fantastic 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2016 6:58 PM Title: Mambo

so good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2016 4:07 AM Title: Mambo

good

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 9:53 PM Title: Mambo

Somehow I see the finale coming down to Bella and Alice. At least Bella has a lot of people in her corner. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 4:23 PM Title: Mambo

:) 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 6:30 AM Title: Mambo

This was amazing!  I really wanted Alice gone, but I cannot wait to see what plan you have for her!  :D

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 3:48 AM Title: Mambo

Yea Malice really needs to get caught doing something.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 3:27 AM Title: Mambo

Oh snap Rose is gone but Alice is only hanging on by a thread  so what will she try next

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 12:30 AM Title: Mambo

Have I told you that I love the long chapters you give us in this story? I do! Once again, Alice sabotaged Bella, resulting in an injured ankle, and nothing was done. Wouldn't the camera replay have shown what Alice did? I guess if nobody complained, the tape wouldn't be reviewed. Thanks for the nice, hot lemon between Bella and Edward! Just because there was no penetration doesn't mean they didn't have sex, in my not-so-humble opinion!

Reviewer: Becka13 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2016 2:35 AM Title: Gravity

It has almost been a month since you updated... Can we get a new chapter?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 12:01 PM Title: Gravity

It's getting hot between our 2 favorite dancers. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 4:49 PM Title: Gravity

good

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2016 11:26 AM Title: Gravity

Will Alice slip up and Jasper take the opportunity to grab her phone?
Edward finally found the best medicine to help Bella relax. His tongue, works wonders. Lol.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2016 11:08 AM Title: Gravity

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2016 7:46 AM Title: Gravity

Well it is heating up in more than one way now will they be able to put a stop to Alice before she hurts Bella and can the call the cops on her mother I hope so but hot damn Edward and Bella are on fire

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2016 3:55 AM Title: Gravity

wow, Jazz is a good actor.  Hope they can get that phone away before Malice has a chance to hurt her.  Yummy ending .

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2016 2:54 AM Title: Gravity

Alice should go home please * i normally love alice but in this story i wanna kick her ass*

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2016 2:18 AM Title: Gravity

That was a jam packed chapter! Lots of things going on! Geez Alice is the epitome of selfish bitch. Her treatment of Jasper on their date was awful! The only good thing to come out of that is Jasper seeing Renee's text. I hope he finds a way to get that phone to Bella before he has to endure any more of Alice's sleaze. Ugh. Edward and Bella's lemony time was just great and I can't wait for more! Thanks!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 1:46 AM Title: Kiss of the Spider Woman

I loved it I think Bella has a new family building I hope she will be able to truly believe it 

And thank goodness Jasper saw Alice for who she really is now what will they do about what he found out

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2016 3:24 PM Title: Kiss of the Spider Woman

good

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2016 2:41 PM Title: Kiss of the Spider Woman

Maybe Jasper will keep up the charade of liking Alice to get the scoop on what Renee wants done to Bella?
He can be the inside operative. Explain to Alister and Carmen what he read on her phone and how she vehemently slandered both Esme and Bella.
Can the organization set a trap to catch Alice in the act of sabotaging Bella's chances of winning the competition? It is a risk to Bella though.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2016 11:10 AM Title: Kiss of the Spider Woman

I quit watchimg for same reason

love this story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2016 8:00 AM Title: Kiss of the Spider Woman

:) 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2016 1:05 AM Title: Kiss of the Spider Woman

Now that Jasper has seen the real Alice, I don't think he will be on her side at all!  He didn't even like kissing her there at the end!  Alice was so selfish ordering the most expensive thing she could find with no regard for Jasper's money issues. I hope she doesn't get to cause any more harm before she's eliminated!  Does conspiring with Reneee, who has already been banned, constitute any breach of the rules? I hope so and hope they kick her out for it! Thanks for the chapter!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2016 10:53 PM Title: Kiss of the Spider Woman

Glad b got some time with Esme.  Finally Jasper sees her for the bitch that a is. 

Reviewer: Becka13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 6:51 PM Title: A Dream Fulfilled

Please update again soon!!! It's been so long! I'm dying here!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 12:07 PM Title: Fuego

They need to get Alice.  She needs to go down.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 4:05 PM Title: Fuego

good

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 11:22 PM Title: Fuego

Phone in Pool?  Yea right.  Get her phone records.  Although don't think renee is going to just leave.  Poor Jasper and the biatch

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 6:56 PM Title: Fuego

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 11:29 AM Title: Fuego

Maybe Jasper can help trap Alice in her lies. If he could only get her phone for a few minutes. Or get ahold of her cellphone bill that tracks her calls. That would secure the connection between Renee and Alice.
The I Love You's have emerged. Yeah!
Momma Esme to the rescue. Some extra from her will do Bella some good.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 10:38 AM Title: Fuego

AMAZING

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 7:26 AM Title: Fuego

:) :) :)  i am really enjoying this story :)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 5:52 AM Title: Fuego

I knew it Alice was talking to Bella's mom now what will she try next and I hope the cameras catch Alice in her true form the devil

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 4:23 AM Title: Fuego

another riveting chapter! damn Renee for hurting Bella with her petty jealosy. I hope Alice trips and breaks a leg and that it ends her dancing career. She deserves no less. Maybe Jasper can see through her lies and get the goods on her so she will go away. Love that Bella has not one but two mommy surrogates who love her.  Can't wait for the lemony goodness for E and B!

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 4:02 AM Title: Fuego

I'm not surprised that Alice is working with Renee. But they should have been more stealthy about getting her phone. I think Rose or one of the other girls should have looked at her phone while she was dancing. That way she would not be able to get rid of anything. But at least Edwad and the rest are on guard now. And I do hope Bella lets Edward get her some counseling. Although having her great support network I am sure is helping. At least with Bella out of the house, Alice has less chance to mess with her. I just hope Jasper doesn't get sucked into her game too much.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 7:44 AM Title: The Dance

I am glad that Tyler is a good friend to her and now she knows it for sure I think he is right about Alice and Renee they are both evil bitchs.  I love Edward Wow

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 4:20 AM Title: I Know You Want Me

They had a great date and finely got there kiss now they will make of for missed time lol.  Renee wants Bella's fame

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 3:50 AM Title: The Dance

Is Tyler on to something? Could he have a sixth sense about Renee and Malice working together to take down Bella?

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