Date: 03 Nov 2017 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 68
I love this story. When I have a bad case of writer's block I go back and read my story from the beginning like a reader instead of a writer. So pull your story up on the website (so you can't edit it) and just read it. Many times it helps me find the life in it that I am missing.
Thanks for the advice. I tried what you said & realized how my writing has changed since I first started Changes almost 3 years ago... THREE! Omg, I saw so many simple mistakes that I should have caught. It made me cringe. It kinda embarrassed me, tbh. lol I do have to say though, I do like this story from a readers standpoint, & I'm not trying to toot my own horn by any means. It definitely needs to be gone back over & cleaned up, but I'm still proud of this one. I've came a long ways in my writing, I think. Sorry for the long response.
Date: 10 Feb 2016 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 56
Oh, girlfriend! TYVM for the comment and for the chapter. AMAZING, as always! Sorry to hear Sherry is sick, may she be healed quickly! As for Bella and Edward..............a beanie baby is on the way! Can't wait to hear more. I believe God puts people in our lives for special reasons, not that he took Jake from Bella..............the free will of evil men (terrorists) did that. Keep up the good story/fight, Sue! ILY!
Date: 04 Feb 2016 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 55
Thanks so much for soldiering through despite awful pain from those migraines! This was a cute chapter, and I'm more than old enough to have seen Lucy and Ethel get in trouble the first time around, never mind reruns! Sounds like Bella is happier than she's been for quite a while!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 52
Love this story! Take care of yourself. I have a good friend with fibro and I have severe arthritis, so I understand your limitations. Keep up the great work!
Thank you so much. It's difficult on good days.
Date: 22 Dec 2015 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 50
Don't you just love it when other people tell you how to write the story in your head? I suppose most of it is done in good faith, but still! I only hope they can talk to each other and thrash this all out. It's my humble opinion that these two are meant to be there for each other, they just need to realize that! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Thank you for understanding. Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!