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Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:29 AM Title: 8) Sleeping Beauty

Loved it!

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Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:14 AM Title: 7: Medical Emergencys

Loved it!

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Date: 24 Sep 2016 9:56 AM Title: 6) Family Elopment

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 9:17 AM Title: 4: Mafia sit downs and heart to hearts

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 8:58 AM Title: 3) Room of Memories

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 8:41 AM Title: 2) Parental Truths

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 8:17 AM Title: 1) secrets and proposals

Loved it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2016 6:00 PM Title: 27: Traitors within

I guess Bella will be delivering her triplets early.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2016 5:46 PM Title: 26: Revenge best served slow

Hope Mary is alright.
Charlie is delusional.
Getting everything he deserves.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2016 3:42 AM Title: 27: Traitors within

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

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Date: 11 Sep 2016 8:37 AM Title: 27: Traitors within

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2016 3:11 AM Title: 27: Traitors within

exciting chapter can not wait till the next

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2016 11:46 AM Title: 26: Revenge best served slow

Love your story can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2016 1:13 PM Title: 26: Revenge best served slow

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2016 3:24 AM Title: 26: Revenge best served slow

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2016 7:10 PM Title: 25: Rendezvous

Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039; 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2016 7:49 AM Title: 25: Rendezvous

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 6:04 AM Title: 24:Bad father examples

Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039; 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 10:20 PM Title: 24:Bad father examples

loved it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 7:14 AM Title: 24:Bad father examples

:)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 4:42 AM Title: 24:Bad father examples

Much  better  detail  than  the  original  version .    Good  job ! 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 1:16 AM Title: 24:Bad father examples

You added more Teagan and Mary. 😈 Nice.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 6:08 AM Title: 23: Two against One

Good  work on this rewrite    I  am  sure the  next  part  will  be  challenging .   Keep  up  the  great  work !  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 3:49 PM Title: 23: Two against One

:) 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 3:18 AM Title: 23: Two against One

LOVE THE CHAPTERS, HOW EVER LONG IT TAKES I READ IT ALL BEFORE AND LOVED IT AND KNOW I AM READING IT AGAIN...I LOVED IT SO MUCH,

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 1:43 PM Title: 22: Family Buisness

:) 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 1:52 AM Title: 22: Family Buisness

THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER, I HOPE EVERYTHING GOES WELL FOR YOU SOON, TAKE YOUR TIME AND I WILL BE HERE WHEN YOU COME BACK

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 8:15 PM Title: 21: Family Traditions

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 5:55 PM Title: 21: Family Traditions

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 3:30 AM Title: 20: Holiday Souvineers

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 10:52 AM Title: 20: Holiday Souvineers

:) 

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Date: 02 Mar 2016 10:51 AM Title: 19: From Beautiful Swan to a true Cullen

:) 

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2016 8:50 AM Title: 18: Wedding Surprises

Bella sounds a lot like me with the food situation! Lol I ate a watermelon a day with kid no 2

Reviewer: rockymickey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2016 5:34 PM Title: 18: Wedding Surprises

Great Story but something is wrong with this chapter

 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 2:29 PM Title: 18: Wedding Surprises

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 3:24 AM Title: 18: Wedding Surprises

Me Too, can not wait for more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 1:12 AM Title: 18: Wedding Surprises

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 9:42 PM Title: 17: Wedding gifts

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 7:22 PM Title: 17: Wedding gifts

Loved it...bring on the wedding and no surprises

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 7:38 AM Title: 17: Wedding gifts

Excellent  job , 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 6:14 AM Title: 17: Wedding gifts

:)

Reviewer: piperann_25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 3:09 AM Title: 1) secrets and proposals

? I see the sequal but not the Family Secrets- caution...is it on this site or FFN?



Author's Response:

It's in this actual story it's on the end in brackets

 

http://www.twcslibrary.net/viewstory.php?sid=11237&textsize=3&chapter=16

Reviewer: piperann_25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 2:01 AM Title: 16 Don't mess with mama bears (Safe)

Love this story!!! Do you have the original chapters? I would love to read the full chapter. 



Author's Response:

The complete chapter is the one stating caution in the title

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 1:48 AM Title: 16 Don't mess with mama bears (CAUTION)

The Somalis are evil 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 1:11 AM Title: 15: Family Buisness

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2016 9:30 AM Title: 15: Family Buisness

:) Happy New Year to you

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Date: 30 Dec 2015 9:36 AM Title: 14: The wedding plans

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 4:14 AM Title: 14: The wedding plans

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

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Date: 29 Dec 2015 9:19 AM Title: 12: Father Daughter time

:)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2015 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 11: Hospital escapes

Who called him and whereis Garrett and Bella

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 11: Hospital escapes

I hope she is alright 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2015 6:53 PM Title: 10) Arrogant police

:) 

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2015 10:33 PM Title: 9: Bumps first picture

I was so glad to see you updated!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2015 11:05 PM Title: 9: Bumps first picture

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2015 1:49 AM Title: 8) Sleeping Beauty

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 2:46 AM Title: 8) Sleeping Beauty

:) 

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Date: 24 Nov 2015 1:21 PM Title: 7: Medical Emergencys

:)

Reviewer: annacaroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2015 12:16 AM Title: 6) Family Elopment

Wow! this fic is very good. I hope the new chapter anxious. Ser you soon. xox

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 5:13 AM Title: 6) Family Elopment

Edward and Bella are going to miss lunch at this rate.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

Was Emmett or Alec who spilled the beans?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 4:38 AM Title: 4: Mafia sit downs and heart to hearts

Slow progress on the marriage front. At least they are in negotiations. Ha ha

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 3:59 AM Title: 3) Room of Memories

Not much is different in this chapter.
I remember not so patiently waiting for Bella's back story at this point.....

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 3:38 AM Title: 2) Parental Truths

Stubborn girl.......she knows how the Cullens feel about her. She has more than suspected Edward's love and devotion for a while now. Why make him fret over her emotional turmoil?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 3:24 AM Title: 1) secrets and proposals

It's good to see your story being posted on this site.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 12:07 AM Title: 6) Family Elopment

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2015 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 5

:)

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Date: 09 Nov 2015 10:40 AM Title: 4: Mafia sit downs and heart to hearts

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2015 10:40 AM Title: 3) Room of Memories

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2015 10:39 AM Title: 2) Parental Truths

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2015 10:39 AM Title: 1) secrets and proposals

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