Date: 21 Aug 2023 4:31 AM Title: 37: Reunions
Wow! Wasn't expecting this turn of events. Sounds wonderful that she still remembers her family from when she was young.
Date: 21 Aug 2023 12:28 AM Title: 29: X-rays and sleep
I'm sure that M Lewis is Bella.
Glad she woke up
Date: 21 Aug 2023 12:10 AM Title: 26: Revenge best served slow
Well, he's deserving of all of Tegan's actions.
Date: 20 Aug 2023 11:16 PM Title: 22: Family Buisness
I feel that this is definitely something needs to be involved with. She needs closure with Charlie and how awful he has been.
Date: 10 Oct 2020 5:52 AM Title: 1) secrets and proposals
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 02 Jan 2019 1:11 PM Title: 2) Parental Truths
Loved it!
Date: 02 Jan 2019 12:46 PM Title: 1) secrets and proposals
Loved it!
Date: 09 Aug 2018 4:11 PM Title: 1) secrets and proposals
I never received updates, going to read now
Date: 12 Feb 2018 7:36 PM Title: 15: Family Buisness
you know?
this bella is a lot of contradiction. here she is
having fears of being kidnapped but has been
again security detail since she has been young.
she is now preg with triplets yet still against security
when she has 3 children to protect. she recalls what
happened when she was kidnapped before clearly yet
fights against security. what the fk is wrong with her?
she is just a very foolish person. as i said before, she is
stubborn about things she shouldnt be. she is willing to
play with her 3 babies' lives not wanting security. she knows
exactly who her family is yet willing to allow danger to follow
her and her kids...foolish, moronic, idiotic, stupid girl.
Date: 12 Feb 2018 6:25 PM Title: 9: Bumps first picture
being stubborn isnt necessarily bad but bella is
stubborn about stupid things...
in fact, i am not sure i am liking this bella's
personality at all. this version of bella is just
a pain in the ass having issues about stupid
stuff.
Date: 12 Nov 2017 5:05 AM Title: Epi Edward POV
Daddy's perspective is always a fun look into his life with that many girls and a wife who can out manipulate him. lol
Date: 11 Nov 2017 6:21 AM Title: Epi Edward POV
Loved your story.
Date: 10 Nov 2017 9:56 PM Title: 35: Phone calls and Ice cream
Gee how many times has she been sold.
Date: 09 Nov 2017 10:13 AM Title: The Epilogue
Such a compelling story. I loved the relationship between Bella and Edward he was uber protective. Your described abuse and mob retribution were very graphic and made for a dark tale. I look forward to more of their story in the sequel.
Date: 08 Nov 2017 4:55 AM Title: 9: Bumps first picture
Wow 3.... how exciting.
Date: 08 Nov 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
I’m loving your story. I wouldn’t want to be around a mad Mum
Date: 08 Nov 2017 3:20 AM Title: Epi Edward POV
I'm so going to miss them & you.
Thank you!
Date: 06 Nov 2017 6:07 PM Title: Epi Edward POV
Yes I did thank you so much...so is Edward going to get a son?
Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:29 AM Title: Epi Edward POV
Haha love it
Date: 23 Oct 2017 9:21 AM Title: The Epilogue
Loved this story and can't wait for the sequel! You are such a talent. Thank you for all of the hard work, as I loved every word -- I'm sure many readers agree!
Date: 16 Oct 2017 3:02 AM Title: 3) Room of Memories
Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 16 Oct 2017 2:13 AM Title: 2) Parental Truths
This is greatly improved. Thank you
Date: 11 Oct 2017 4:49 PM Title: The Epilogue
thank you so much for a wonderful story...Charlie definetly is crazy in this story, he got what he deserved. I hope the new baby is a boy...The girls are adorable & loving...well done..can't wait for Family Surprises!!!
Date: 11 Oct 2017 11:34 AM Title: The Epilogue
:) loved this story. Looking forward to reading the sequel
Date: 30 Sep 2017 3:05 AM Title: 40: The reception
It took me a bit to finally catch on to the family mess that Isabella Swan belongs to by birth.
Date: 29 Sep 2017 6:22 PM Title: 40: The reception
thank you for the update...well done
Date: 08 Sep 2017 7:19 PM Title: 39: The Wedding
Hey, that's not very nice. You left us hanging.
So Bella and Ben had a backup plan to get her out. Haha
Leah sure enjoyed putting on that little display. Lol
Date: 08 Sep 2017 7:03 PM Title: 38: Claiming Bella
Interesting item to be doing business over don't you think? Bella may not like being referred to as a negotiation item.
But Family always seems to find a way to categorize each member. Lol
Date: 08 Sep 2017 6:33 PM Title: 37: Reunions
Charlie took so many things away from Bella.
Date: 08 Sep 2017 6:32 PM Title: 37: Reunions
Charlie took so many things away from Bella.
Date: 08 Sep 2017 5:56 PM Title: 36: The hunt
Happy memories,lots of stress.
Date: 08 Sep 2017 5:29 PM Title: 35: Phone calls and Ice cream
Just another layer of Charlie's hatred towards his daughter.
Date: 08 Sep 2017 3:52 AM Title: 39: The Wedding
Oh come on.......!
Date: 06 Sep 2017 6:25 AM Title: 39: The Wedding
So rude with that cliffhanger
Date: 06 Sep 2017 3:46 AM Title: 39: The Wedding
That was mean to end it like that☹️
Date: 06 Sep 2017 3:41 AM Title: 39: The Wedding
It should be a BOY.......... The indentical twins are girls but the fraternal twin has to be a B - O - Y !!!!!!! That way Edward gets to have his heir along with having help with the two girls. Thank you.
Date: 03 Sep 2017 5:12 AM Title: 38: Claiming Bella
Fabulous chapter
Date: 01 Sep 2017 3:04 PM Title: 35: Phone calls and Ice cream
:)
Date: 01 Sep 2017 9:53 AM Title: 37: Reunions
Beautiful chapter
Date: 01 Sep 2017 2:31 AM Title: 37: Reunions
Oh my goodness!! I have been so happy to see a couple of new chapters since the last time I saw an update at this site. I love this story and am SO happy that you are continuing to update it. I look forward to seeing what happens next so PLEASE keep the updates coming!! :-) I really enjoy your writing style. Keep up the good work!! Thank you
Date: 30 Aug 2017 6:02 PM Title: 35: Phone calls and Ice cream
:)
Date: 30 Aug 2017 2:19 AM Title: 35: Phone calls and Ice cream
This story is getting good now. Edward family are gping for blood now.
Date: 15 Aug 2017 11:04 PM Title: 34: Truthful revelations
I am so glad you were able to update!! Yeah!! I hope that things are going better for you, and hope that more updates can be coming soon. Thank you
Date: 14 Aug 2017 3:35 PM Title: 34: Truthful revelations
Welcome back thanks for updating I love the story
Date: 13 Aug 2017 2:37 AM Title: 34: Truthful revelations
:)
Date: 02 Jun 2017 2:49 AM Title: 33: Secret Messages
Loved it can't wait for more ’
Date: 01 Jun 2017 3:41 PM Title: 33: Secret Messages
I can't tell you how much I look forward to a new chapter of this story!! You have a way of writing that pulls me into the story and all that is happening. You have such a wonderful talent and hope that you continue to write and bring us all that are reading into your creative world through your written words. Thank you for your creativity and allowing us to share in it!! Thank you. I look forward to the next chapter you upload!! Hope to hear from you soon!!
Date: 31 May 2017 3:58 PM Title: 33: Secret Messages
Thank you for the update... I love this story, can't eait to see how it all unfolds
Date: 11 May 2017 2:42 AM Title: 32: Unplanned Visitors
Loving this a second time around
Date: 11 May 2017 2:26 AM Title: 32: Unplanned Visitors
Loved it can't wait for more ’
Date: 23 Apr 2017 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 31: Mission accepted
So sad for her, I hope Edward get revenge.
Date: 23 Apr 2017 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 31: Mission accepted
Poor Bella
Date: 24 Mar 2017 3:48 PM Title: 30: The Real M Lewis
Love Love Love this story!! Can't wait for the next update. Will be here waiting anxiously.... ”
Date: 14 Mar 2017 3:38 AM Title: 30: The Real M Lewis
Loved it can't wait for more ’
Date: 13 Mar 2017 4:45 AM Title: 30: The Real M Lewis
Loved it can't wait for more ’
Date: 09 Mar 2017 4:37 AM Title: 30: The Real M Lewis
Is this a new part of the story, i don't remember reading this, I like it
Date: 08 Mar 2017 8:21 PM Title: 30: The Real M Lewis
Loved it. Lmao he's having two girls and will be in jail by the time they're teenagers.
Date: 07 Mar 2017 9:00 AM Title: 30: The Real M Lewis
Love your story can't wait to read more!
Date: 22 Jan 2017 9:34 PM Title: 29: X-rays and sleep
was good but would like to see the ending it let you hang
Date: 08 Jan 2017 2:26 AM Title: 29: X-rays and sleep
Are you going to finish this story?
Date: 11 Dec 2016 1:50 AM Title: 29: X-rays and sleep
Awe!
Such an emotional chapter! I have faith that they'll all be okay!
Date: 10 Dec 2016 5:55 PM Title: 26: Revenge best served slow
Yes! That bastard deserves ALL of it!
Date: 09 Dec 2016 1:47 PM Title: 24:Bad father examples
LOVED IT!
Date: 07 Dec 2016 4:52 AM Title: 6) Family Elopment
Great chapter!
Date: 06 Dec 2016 10:06 PM Title: 1) secrets and proposals
Love LOVE Love your torture methods!
Date: 06 Dec 2016 5:11 PM Title: 29: X-rays and sleep
I can't rearrange the letters to make sense of who M Lewis could be.
Date: 26 Nov 2016 1:21 AM Title: 29: X-rays and sleep
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 24 Nov 2016 5:42 PM Title: 28) Walking down memory lane.
I hope she is alright
Date: 24 Nov 2016 5:55 AM Title: 28) Walking down memory lane.
Thank You....Happy Holidays
Date: 24 Nov 2016 5:36 AM Title: 28) Walking down memory lane.
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 25 Sep 2016 5:03 AM Title: 27: Traitors within
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 25 Sep 2016 4:54 AM Title: 26: Revenge best served slow
Loved it!
Date: 25 Sep 2016 4:23 AM Title: 24:Bad father examples
Loved it!
Date: 25 Sep 2016 4:01 AM Title: 23: Two against One
Loved it!
Date: 25 Sep 2016 2:17 AM Title: 22: Family Buisness
Loved it!
Date: 25 Sep 2016 2:00 AM Title: 21: Family Traditions
Loved it!
Date: 25 Sep 2016 1:44 AM Title: 20: Holiday Souvineers
Loved it!
Date: 25 Sep 2016 1:09 AM Title: 19: From Beautiful Swan to a true Cullen
Loved it!
Date: 25 Sep 2016 12:20 AM Title: 18: Wedding Surprises
Loved it! I hate Charlie!
Date: 25 Sep 2016 12:05 AM Title: 17: Wedding gifts
Loved it!
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:50 PM Title: 16 Don't mess with mama bears (Safe)
Loved it!
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:45 PM Title: 16 Don't mess with mama bears (CAUTION)
Uh-oh!
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:22 PM Title: 15: Family Buisness
Loved it!
Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:53 PM Title: 14: The wedding plans
Loved it!
Date: 24 Sep 2016 7:50 PM Title: 12: Father Daughter time
Loved it!
Date: 24 Sep 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: Hospital escapes
Loved it!
Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:58 AM Title: 10) Arrogant police
Loved it!
Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:37 AM Title: 9: Bumps first picture
Loved it!