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Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2015 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 38

 I love this story



Author's Response:

So glad your enjoying it x

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 37

You r such the tease



Author's Response:

I know but you love it x

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 36

Renee is a bitch, not Bella.  Bella is being used because Garrett isn't man enough to be honest with himself or the world. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Renee is definitley causing some problems. Her insecurity is really beginning to get to her.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 36

Renee is evil... Take your man and leave Izzy and her friend alone...they are Very Happy!!!



Author's Response:

She is so insecure she can't see past Garrett and Izzy just being friends.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 34

She better not run. That would be a sin.



Author's Response:

She wont run she is too excited about meeting her mystery man.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 33

This is so good.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 36

Love reading Edward's view



Author's Response:

Thank you I know alternate POV's aren't everones cup of tea.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 35

💋💋 love it love it



Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 34

Loved this chapter and this story. Yes she needs a good impaling!!! 



Author's Response:

She will get one I promise x

 

Reviewer: Pox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 34

Hello, kiss kiss and kiss.... Lol



Author's Response:

Noted thank you x

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 34

Kiss him



Author's Response:

I agree watch next chapter up soon x

Reviewer: IvyLane Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 34

Omg don't tease woman!!



Author's Response:

Come on it's what i do best, tease you and teach you pateince xx

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 34

Darn cliffie.  Can;t wait for the update.  



Author's Response:

It's up now so enjoy

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 34

Kiss him, you fool!



Author's Response:

Oh she will and the results are hopfeully what you are all a waiting for x

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 34

Oh my.  Go baby!!



Author's Response:

She will and it will be explosive x

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2015 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 31

Bella needs to tell Garrett the lying is over, but she wants the membership for her trouble. 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2015 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 31

Love it

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 29

Can't wait



Author's Response:

i've just updated x

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2015 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 26

She ran what love it



Author's Response:

She needs a girlie chat and some info Rosalie to the rescue

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 29

Bella needs to talk to Rosalie and tell her the truth about Garrett.  She will keep itconfidential for Bella.  She needs to be able to talk about this craziness. 



Author's Response:

she knows that but she is trying to keep secrets at the moment and no doing too good a job

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 28

Thank you for the update

Author's Response:

Your very welcome, the new ones are up now

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2015 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 25

Hi, Just wanted to say that I'm loving this fic of yours...but i usually read in my kindle, which is crap for writting reviews and messages with...so my apoloies for not leaving you much love, but know that it is felt if not expressed!

Thank you for sharing this with us all. T



Author's Response:

Your very kind thank you so much. Im so glad your enjoying it.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2015 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 25

Ahhhhhhh 



Author's Response:

I know lovely x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 17

Stupid Garrett!  I have no idea how she & he will actually find each other again other than them recognizing each other scent. 



Author's Response:

Well her scent will play a bid part.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 16

I'm so glad we got EPOV for this too!  

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 23

You are big big huge tease 



Author's Response:

I know but isn't it better than just everythg going smoothly xx

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 23

So close, but so far.



Author's Response:

I know so please be patient they will meet eventually maybe.......

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for your response. I would have had a good look around, however when they did hooked back up he did explain. It wasn't right for him leaving and getting his freak on, but he did explain.  She at least could have talked to him before  she blab is all I'm saying. I personally don't trust her now, I mean she not all innocent either. He did his in the open, she did hers in a black room.

All that said, I did enjoy your story. I got nothing but love for you. 

Reviewer: vivian321 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 23

I love your storys 



Author's Response:

You are very kind thank you so much

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 21

I love rose 



Author's Response:

I agree, everyone should have a Rosalie

Reviewer: IvyLane Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Your story is super hot i anxiously await each chapter XOXO



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review I'm very grateful x

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 21

Rosalie is such a hot head. Bella will be fine once she finds her mystery man.



Author's Response:

But Rosalie is only trying to look out for her

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

I have I'll feelings towards bella right now. If she was so upset about the evening; Garrett preferences and being left alone, why didn't  she just leave. Yet she stayed, wonder around and at the end, enjoyed herself by giving someone a blow job.

Why couldn't she keep Garrett preferences to herself until she at least talked to him.  For that, I don't trust her. No she didn't agree, but she did say she would think about it. I mean really, how old is she....18. What the hell was she crying about. 



Author's Response:

I think she was just totally over awed with everything that happened. She went out on the date expecting one thing, only to realise everything was completely out of her control. Honestly would you have walked out or would you have had a good look round ?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 19

I think Garrett and Renee need to use a room if he wants to keep his secret. He will be noticed in the common rooms.  Someone might come in  while he is in the middle of his fun.Bella deserves to have fun,  not just watch the action. 



Author's Response:

I suppose they feel free, people around them will only be concerned about themselves.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 19

Last two chapters were great can't wait to see more u have me hooked



Author's Response:

Thank you so much I'm glad your enjoying it.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 17

Wow, Garret is a piece of work to actually talk to "his date" while he is in the middle of that.  



Author's Response:

I thought that yet your the only person to comment on it .

Reviewer: annacaroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

Kkk poor Garret or not kkkk

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2015 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 17

Nice nice

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 15

So they will get together but not know each other! Unbelievable! I wasn't expecting this!!!



Author's Response:

You should know me better than that by now !!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

Will Bella enjoy the sensory room too?



Author's Response:

She has some decisions to make before going in there x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 13

Nothing like having something sprung on you!  Garrett is a dick!



Author's Response:

He definitely has a very strange idea of a first date x

Reviewer: aliciaw68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

Keep reading and al will be revealed. In fact a little too much will be on show !!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 12

I feel that last question should then have the answer...I'll never tell.  Xoxo gossip girl.  Haha

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 11

I have feeling Garrett is not the go to guy!



Author's Response:

What ever gives you that idea ?????

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2015 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 10

Grrr again Edward doesn't get to hear about her.  I see what you were talking about! I'm sad I'm all caught up.  :(. The good news is TWCS is posting my most recently updated favorite stories when you update so I shouldn't have the same problem that I had last time. have a great week!



Author's Response:

I think I managed to post the new story a different way this time so maybe I did something wrong last time. Glad you getting updates now

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2015 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

Your response to my reviews about "fate not being kind & the missed meetings will only get worse" has me shaking in my boots & worried lots of frustration is to come.  Poor me & poor Bella's lady bits. :(. I'm too hooked to runaway from this...

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2015 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 8

You are the worst tease ever!!! Talk about cock blocking them and they don't even know it!



Author's Response:

I can assure you it will get worse

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2015 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 7

Going on a manhunt!



Author's Response:

Everyone should have friends that care so much

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2015 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 6

A taster evening.... Very interesting! Is this where they will meet and realize it isn't 100% what they are wanting?



Author's Response:

You'll just have to be very patient I'm afraid 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2015 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

20 chapters already? Wow you are a writing machine!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2015 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 4

Looks like his balcony is going to offer tons of enjoyment, he just hasn't realized it yet. ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2015 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 3

Her thoughts and thinking process continue to make me laugh.  Her and Edward are going to have a field day together!  I can't wait to see their reactions when they meet.  I'm betting her "her girly bits" will sing!



Author's Response:

Fate is not going to be kind so hang in there

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2015 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 2

Edward the slut monster!



Author's Response:

He is that ,but he does realise it,let's hope he can change his ways

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2015 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

I just flew back from the west coast and have been up since 3am west coast time & I just realized I have been missing out on your new story!  I'm so tired but I knew I needed to read the first chapter.  It did not disappoint! I needed a good laugh!  The smell of James is hilarious!  We have all been there and you put it into words perfectly! So so funny!



Author's Response:

Thank you I was beginning to think you weren't with me on this one . Hope you enjoy it

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

Happy happy



Author's Response:

Glad your enjoying this 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2015 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 8

They all need some help.  They seem lonely and desperate. 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 8

Great job can't wait for them to meet



Author's Response:

Your going to have to be patient I'm afraid fate is not going to be kind to them

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 4

Very interesting  and  well-written .   Look forward to  future  chapters . 



Author's Response:

Thank you I hope your enjoying the story

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