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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2018 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 50

I think him wanting her to know him first proves he was looking for more that just sex with her

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2018 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 26

I LOVE MY SHOWERHEAD BUT BET EDWARD WOULD BE BETTER

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2018 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 67

Absolutely obsessed! I hope you write a sequel. Need to know delusional his mom really is!!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2018 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 67

Edward mother is just plain crazy and a drunk.

Reviewer: Redgirl2018 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2017 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2017 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 67

So  this IS the end? Will you mark it complete so as to not confuse your readers, me included? I don't know how I missed these last 2 chapters, but have now only found them. I knew Edward's mother wouldn't quit. She needs help. I would have loved to see the honeymoon, but maybe you'll save that for the sequel? I've had a blast reading this story. Thanks!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2017 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 66

I don't know how I missed reading this chapter. I found that I had this story marked complete at 65 chapters, when it has 67 and is still open. Good for Bella for tellling off that horrible snob of a mother Edward has. I'm sure she will try to ruin this wedding also, so please let me know when you will finish this. I'm on to read the last chapter posted now.

Reviewer: jmthorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2016 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 50

Bells needs to get over herself!!!! She would have done the same thing of worse completely avoid him!!!! 

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2016 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 67

Thanks good chapter awesome story



Author's Response:

Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 67

This story has really been great. Look forward to sequel!



Author's Response:

Thank you Im so glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 67

No wait, this can't be. I have to know what's up with the harridan. She's bound to have some evil waiting in the wings. I really enjoyed this story. Checking out your others while waiting on the sewuel.

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it . I have a great idea for the sequel but I'm writing something else at the moment but it won't be long. As for checking out my other stuff it's a bit different to this be warned ........

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 40

it wa very funny chapter , i like this chapter the most ,..sniffing women :):):):)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 65

Ohhhh  boy, I  can't  wait  for  this  scene !   It is going to  be  a  riot!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 64

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 1:41 PM Title: Deprivation Futuretake part 4

Need to know more, wedding??

Great story

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 11:30 AM Title: Deprivation Futuretake part 4

I have loves every part of this story



Author's Response:

Thank you one more chapter left I think x

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 6:26 PM Title: Deprivation Futuretake part 4

So good. 



Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: vivian321 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

I sorry I tried to private  message you but it would not let me I left a comment on another story I understand now that you wrote the story I read it in a contest and I voted for you  I can't believe I had forgotten  I am sorry again can't wait for a new story 



Author's Response:

Don't worry if you read half as much as I do its so easy to get muddled x

Reviewer: scgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 61

More , More , More Please!!!!!



Author's Response:

New chapter should be up now hope you enjoyit x

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 61

Great  chapter !  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much x

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 61

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

I'll see what I can do x

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 61

PLEASE one more. I am so happy with how you ended this story. Your povs were wonderful to read. You are a very talented story teller I look forward to more of your work. Thank you

Author's Response:

YOur very kind  thank you so much.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 60

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

Im nearly there with the chapter so it shouldn't be long.x

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 60

That was awesome 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much x

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 58

Thank you!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it x

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 59

Glad you can rent the room. Would want other people there for such a special moment. Plus you would know it was clean without other people's body fluids. 



Author's Response:

She needed it to be special so I agree no one else should be there x

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 59

Cool!  Great addition!



Author's Response:

Thank you so glad you enjoyed it x

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 59

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

I'm nearly done with the next chapter so not long to wait I promise x

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 59

Happy that they won't keep quite



Author's Response:

I know but I want to write another story but I can't concentrate on it because of these two lol. 

Reviewer: vggnns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 58

Thank you for this amazing story. I truly enjoyed all the ups and downs these two kids went through. I hope to read some steamy out takes whenever you get a chance. Looking forward to more stories by you! Love, love, love!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you and I will do the steamy out takes I promise x

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 58

Oh my gosh I have loved reading this amazing story I hope you do some outtakes... Looking forward to your next story I know it will be just as great😉



Author's Response:

Thank you so much x

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2016 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 57

Thank you for the update...Well Edward I think your both on the same page



Author's Response:

I know finally x

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 57

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

Thank you so glad you enjoyed it x

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 57

No you can't stop it there 😁😁😁😁😁



Author's Response:

Don't worry they will be ok

Reviewer: vggnns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 57

Finally!!!! Bravo Edward!!! Yes!!!!



Author's Response:

He did good didn't he

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 56

Really Bella.  How stupid are you?



Author's Response:

Not stupid probably teasing 

Reviewer: rosesblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 56

Poor Edward he's trying so hard lol 



Author's Response:

He has and it's about time for a reward

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2016 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 55

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

So glad your enjoying it x

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 55

Oh oh boy 



Author's Response:

I know but don't worry everything will be ok 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2016 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 55

thank you for the update.....Edward is on a Mission!!  Let's hope he didn't f it up...lol



Author's Response:

Don't worry I won't let him x

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 54

Finally getting on track. :)



Author's Response:

They are now all I have to decide is how much I'm going to torture you all x

Reviewer: rosesblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2016 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 53

I can't wait to see how things turn out staying over at Edwards x



Author's Response:

All I will tell you is that it's going to be messy !!!

 

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 53

Sneaky Edward!!! Loved the chapter.  I think you're doing a great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2016 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 53

Thank you for update..Edward got his wish



Author's Response:

He just had to convince her to go with him 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2016 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 53

I love how Edward wanted to call his mom 



Author's Response:

Boys are always mummies boys aren't they x

Reviewer: vggnns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 52

Now we're cookin! Ok...Edward better have an amazing plan for Bella and not a flop. Bella better not be a bitch to him. Oh my, this is going to be epic! Can't wait for the next chapters! It's gonna be awesome! Love, love, love!!!



Author's Response:

It is a good plan I promise

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2016 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 52

So glad she will give him a chance.



Author's Response:

She will let him in x

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 52

Yayyy!!! Can't wait to see how Edward reacts to her reaching out.  Or Emmett's reaction to Rose... I think they are tied as to which I want to see more.  Love this story though.



Author's Response:

We can start putting them back together now yeah x

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2016 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 52

Glad to see she has her head on straight 



Author's Response:

Yes things can change now she has sorted things out in her head 

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 51

Yes I think we're in a really good place. 



Author's Response:

I agree I think the tide has turned

Reviewer: vggnns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 51

Rose is a hero in my eyes. She not only helped her best friend, but also Edward. Fantastic! They both have some thinking to do and I hope it'll be fast! Can't wait for the next chapter! Looking good!



Author's Response:

We all need a friend like rosalie x

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 51

thank you for the update...I really like Rose in this story....She has them both thinking...I'm sorry Emmemt had to suffer...lol...well done..until you post again



Author's Response:

Rosalie has proved to be a good friend x

 

Reviewer: vggnns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 50

This was a tough chapter. Definitely see your point on letting Bella do some soul searching. She needs to find out what her heart is telling her and stop over analyzing the good intentions Edward had. Still fun to see him squirm though...lol. Love it!



Author's Response:

It is almost as though bella needs to sort herself out before she can forgive Edward to do that she has to understand people are not always black and white but sometimes they have grey areas !! Does that make sense ?!?!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 50

Hopefully she rethinks her stance and realizes that from the point Edward found out who she was he wanted to be Edward not MM.  Given he didn't realize SG would be someone he aleady knew, he didn't feel he could walk up and introduce himself as MM.  If he'd done that, I thing Bella would have suspected he'd staged what happend.  Frankly, Bella should stop thinking and follow the "Rose voice"in her head!   Soon please (;

Great chapter.  



Author's Response:

I agree I think rosalie gives excellent advice x

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 50

That could have gone so many different ways but I really like the path you chose! I agree, Bella definitely needs time to process the info. Very satisfying chapter. Thank you d84;a039;



Author's Response:

She has some thinking to do and needs to sort her own feelings out first x

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 50

She better soul search fast



Author's Response:

Don't be so impatient she needs to get this right lol x

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 50

I think Bella is in the wrong. Like she said herself, how do you bring something like that up? Oh, by the way, I might know you from the sex club... LOL!



Author's Response:

I agree bella is all over the place at the moment and please remember discretion is the key regarding my weekend activities 😜

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 50

Awww...  I have to say I agree with Rosalie a bit. Maybe Bella just needs to realize that they just need to clear the air and start over.  Hope you update again soon!



Author's Response:

I like Rosalie's outlook on life more people should live that way. X

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 49

Yes, there's nothing like Emmett's "extensive knowledge of the female species," is there?  Really like this story.



Author's Response:

Yes it's quite frightening thinking your leaving it to Emmett to sort out .

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 49

Oh Emmet



Author's Response:

I know X 

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 49

Hmmm, I hope the boys can come up with something good! I can't wait to hear what's happening in the girls corner 😀



Author's Response:

You really think with beer and pizza involved they will concentrate ?

Reviewer: vggnns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2016 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 49

Happy happy news. Edward is on a mission. Well done, and hopefully it will be something of use and not some dumbass boy idea to make her forgive him. Lol great chapter. Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

I think your first reaction might be the one !!!!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2016 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 49

As much as I hate to say it, Edward kinda deserves what he's going through.  He left way too much to chance by not being honest, but I love how its working for your story.



Author's Response:

I agree he has  taken too many chances let's hope he can talk her round 

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2016 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 48

Thank goodness the girls came to her rescue. Maybe now Bella can get it all sorted out!



Author's Response:

Yep I'm sure that Rosalie will sort her out.

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2016 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 48

Poor Bella all mixed up and confused.  Hope it all works itself out.



Author's Response:

She has good friends 'm surethey will make her see sense

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 47

Garrett got it easy.  Bella needs to cool down and listen to Edward.  He is still every thing she loves.



Author's Response:

Yes she needs to listen to the girls

Reviewer: vggnns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2016 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 47

I agree...Garrett is equally to blame here. He is the one that started this whole deception thing. But also, without him, Bella wouldnt have met MM. I hope it doesn't take her long to forgive Edward, but that also said, I hope she makes him work for it. Amazing chapters and so much information. Thank you for the updates!



Author's Response:

She needs to regroup and sort out whats important. It will take a little while but not too long

Reviewer: rockymickey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2016 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 47

LOL oh boy 



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 47

Oh good! I don't have to mention about Garett then. Lol. Edward needs to do some serious grovelling. Hopefully Bella will give him another chance. Men are so dumb sometimes lol. 



Author's Response:

Yes I'm trying to come up with some suitable grovelling

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2016 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 47

So glad I didn't have to wait long for you to update. But now I wait 



Author's Response:

Not too long I promise

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 46

Ummm how about tomorrow! Lol. This is going to be interesting 😀



Author's Response:

Hopefully interesting

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 46

Oh my gosh ever ever the huge tease 



Author's Response:

that i am hope it has been worth it.

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 47

Funny how that seems to happen to some people.  All their problems become everyone else's and while those people get hurt the person who started it all gets nothing but relief.  

Can't wait to see how Edward and Bella move forward.



Author's Response:

Yes he seems to have gotten away without too much hassle

Reviewer: pfarrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 47

Hope G is done with Renee! Now what will Edward do?



Author's Response:

Edward has to grovel  big style as for garrett well I may do an out take what do you think ?

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 46

ASAP!!!!! Loved this chapter, hated the cliffhanger!



Author's Response:

Ok now but you can't really blame me x

Reviewer: pfarrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 46

Dammit Edward, you should have told her!! Update soon!!! :)



Author's Response:

Yep he should have x

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 40

Those boys are so funny. 



Author's Response:

Can you just see them sitting there ?

Reviewer: krst188 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 45

Love, love, love it, cannot wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: scgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 45

ughh. I am so nervous for the big reveal. I hope it is not going to lend itself to 20 chapters of them breaking up and Bella hating him for keeping the secret.  So overdone. I think it might be fun to have her figure it out in the deprivation room??? How do you not know it is Edward, everything about him is amazing!!! Great chapter, cannot wait to read more.



Author's Response:

I can understand what your saying but really how would you react to it ? you wont have to wait long i promise x

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 45

Please tell me Edward is going to tell her soon!  Killing me! Ha ha. Great story! Thanks 😀



Author's Response:

It is getting harder and harder for him to own up x

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 45

He's in so deep 



Author's Response:

He is that x

Reviewer: vggnns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 44

I must say...you have intrigued me with the beginning of the story and thus far. I'm looking forward to when Bella finally puts two and two together, and realizes that her MM is in fact Edward. Sneaky sneaky Edward! But oh so charming! Well done and can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I'm so glad your enjoying it x

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 44

Sneaky sneaky Edward just wonder how she's going to react when she knows the whole backstory.



Author's Response:

How would you respond ? I'm trying to gauge the mood x

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 44

I think he should have told her that he is MM because when she finds out she is either going to be pissed or hurt if not both. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

I agree he should have told her , he really isn't thinking with his head x

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 44

When he decides a girl is worth it he really knows how to romance a girl. 



Author's Response:

He does but it's built on very shaky ground at the moment x

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2016 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 44

This was a great chapter! Totally built up the anticipation!!  Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

So glad your enjoying this x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 43

I hope she blows MM OFF.



Author's Response:

But MM is Edward so how does she do that ?

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 43

Loving this



Author's Response:

Thank you so much x

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 43

Eeek this is stressing me out! But I'm still loving this story!



Author's Response:

Stick with it its about to change direction x

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 42

Last two chapters were great 



Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 42

I just don't think being deceptive with this Bella is going to work out for him. Especially once she knows Jasper & Emmett knows.



Author's Response:

He doesn't see it as being deceptive, he sees it as .....

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 41

I wonder if she will want to blow Edward off.  I don't think he should go about it this way with her.



Author's Response:

No he shouldn't but he doesn't know how to tell her x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 40

Finally!  Oh my goodness!  I can't stop smiling!



Author's Response:

I couldn't stop smiling as I was writing this x

 

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 42

Hiya

Another fabby chapter....though I suspect that Edwards deception will come back to bite his ass.

Can't believe you have so few reviews...this is great!

I'll try an review more often!



Author's Response:

So glad your enjoying it. X

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 42

Why is he still not telling her the truth....bad start that could lead to problems.



Author's Response:

Yep he really isn't thinking straight 

Reviewer: fanficaddict2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I agree - bad move,  good story.

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 42

Uh oh! I think she's gonna be pissed when she finds out!🙀 But this story is so intriguing. I love it and can't wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

Yes I think he is going to be in for a shock

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 39

Oh there so close 



Author's Response:

What do you think he will do now he knows ?

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 39

He is so wrong...



Author's Response:

Yep not thinking straight at all

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2015 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 38

Thank you for another great chapter.... And enjoy your Christmas too! 

T



Author's Response:

Your very welcome hope you had a great Christmas x

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