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Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

well this is a new look for emmett great ch

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi

I believe that Bella is claustrophobic in the middle of human or vampire is likely males also be this way with wolves males. Carlisle has to enter the Doctor mode and try to understand what's going on with Bella for her to be so paranoid. And Rose should have realized it, she is nesvosa, uncomfortable and with the internal defense trying to attack everyone around her. XD

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 6:26 PM Title: Prologue

Hi

I honestly like this story I had read three chapters in the FF site and found six chapters on Wattpad, but there are only these chapters outside. I would like you to upgrade more chapters in the course of the month and this time you finish the story :)



Author's Response:

Hi Angelik, yes I have had issues in the past getting the story posted correctly. My children were younger and I had health issues at the time. Things have become much better now. I can finally focus on my stories. So I will be posting normally. I am re-eiditng as much as my knowledge will allow for the chapters I already have. Now I'm writing the other chapters that are long overdue. If you know anyone that can beta my stories, I'd sure appreciate it. Thanks for the read and comment. See you soon :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 10:47 PM Title: Prologue

Interesting.  

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 1:10 AM Title: Prologue

Love to see where you take this like the twist



Author's Response:

Thanks Petra! Many twists I can assure you, lol.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2015 7:01 PM Title: Prologue

yes but i think a jasper is better then edward lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and comment. There are many Jasper fans out there, lol.

Reviewer: Hanastasio Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2015 5:55 PM Title: Prologue

Love it.  Can't for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks Hanastasio! Posting another soon.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2015 5:12 PM Title: Prologue

It has peaked my interest for some reason sooooooo...... Although dark... I am looking forward to the next chapter. Your off to a good start   : )   READ YOU SOON♥



Author's Response:

Thanks Bobby! Will be posting another soon.

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