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Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 26

Oh my goodness!  You take care of yourself first!  We, your friends and fans will be here waiting when you get back!  Sending prayers for a speedy recovery!

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love this. Makes me happy that they are happy!

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 24

My Christmas miracle!  It happened!  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter.  

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 24

YAY i liked this chapter :) :) :) :)

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

I'm really happy that Xander was finally able to figure out what really matter the most to him no matter what the outcome of the DNA test.  

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) :) :) :)

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

Here we go!  Still hoping for a miracle :)

 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 22

Wow, the doctor was way forward and stupid if she thought she could temp him away.  

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) :) :) :) :) :)

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2015 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 21

ok Xander dont bring up rape to the love of your life again or ill open a can of whoop ass

>:(

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 21

I'm sorry but he is giving me whiplash with this and I am not sure what Olivia isn't getting to the point she just wants to tell him to pack a bag.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 20

Glad he finally wised up.

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great update....happy to see they are working their way back to each other. Though I know the journey is not over and will be full of ups and downs.

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 20

Finally! Oh Xander, you melt my heart. My Christmas miracle in the works :)

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

YAY over that damn bump :D :D :D * i dont mean the baby bump* :D

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2015 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 19

Olivia is in denial if she doesn't know she should be worried.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2015 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 18

:) :) i really hope that baby is Xanders :D :D

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

His dad's story should have been enough for him to head the F12 Home!!!  I hope he can deal with this fast, or they might get to the point that Olivia decides there is no going back.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 17

ok DNA TEST NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

Xander get your head out of your ass please :)

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2015 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

Glad someone pointed out in no uncertain terms how selfish he is being,

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2015 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Olivia can't catch a break.  I keep hoping Xander will come to his senses soon, 

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2015 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 16

I'm hoping for a Christmas miracle :)

 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 16

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooo

DAMN CLIFFYS >:( NEED MORE PLEASE PLEASE

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2015 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 15

This is heartbreaking.  I wonder what the test results are going to be.  Hopefully the doctor that Edward is going to talk to will get him to pull his heard out of his butt.

Stories about Hunter and Tess would be great.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 15

i would love to hear more about hunter and tess :D :D but i wanna HEA HEA soon PLEASE

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2015 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh man, this was a hard chapter to read.  I have to admit that I would really like to kick Xander's butt right now.   I understand he is having a hardtime, but could it really be any worse then Olivia?   He is not acting as if his love is unconditional and I think the longer Olivia has to realize this the more she will realize his love isn't as deep and commited as he has professed.   I am sure he will lose the respect of many of others as well, because she deserves better.  

Can't wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2015 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 14

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO i need more please

 

PS NO MORE DRAMA PLEASE PLEASE

HEA HEA HEA HEA HEA :p

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 13

If Edward would have gone home with Bree, I would beat him to death.  Hoping it is his and they are just wrong.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 13

 HEA HEA HEA HEA PLEASE HEA

and that baby neeeds to be Xanders please please

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh my gosh! No!  Please let her have conceived before all this happened!  These two just can't catch a break!  I'm sick :(

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 12

Omg- I thought you might go in this direction, because as a reader, timelines weren't matching up for me. Now I see why! This is heartbreaking- and of course leads to the drama you foreshadowed in the synopsis. I can't even breathe- this going to wreak havoc. I have so many questions. First, will we find out who spilled the beans? Second, I truly wonder what they will do. To have a child that is a constant reminder of horror, but also is a part of you. Wow.  And like Olivia says in the story what has she done to deserve all of this?!  And to what extent is Xander going to go off the deep end because we know he will. Excellent chapter. I'm horrified on behalf of Olivia  and can't wait to see where this information takes them both individually and as a couple.  Finally can you please kill off the defendants they are absolutely vile and disgusting and just the visual of them sitting there smirking while her life falls apart absolutely disgusts me.  Can't Nick call in some favors somewhere and take care of them?

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 12

I knew this was comming...So how soon can they do test to find out the father?  Will you make us wait until the baby is born.  And I thought that one of the men did not have intercoursse with her.  He had her give a blow job then put the poker in her anis.  Did he co more when she was pased out?

 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

I feel so sorry for these two.  

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 12

noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo IT NEEDS TO BE XANDERS BABY PLEASE PLEASE :O

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow, what is the chance that the doc would be one of his past playmates.  I suspected something like that from her reaction at the first meeting.  I feel for her having to go to court again.

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 10

So how long ago was she kidnapped and how far along is she pregnet?  Are they going to try to say that one of them may be the father of the baby?

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

I just found this!  Whoohoo!  I knew you wouldn't leave us hanging!  So excited for this!

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

:O :O

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2015 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 7

:O :O that chapter needs a shamwow warning lol :) :)

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2015 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) :)  ;)

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2015 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter! So happy the story is progressing and I'm wondering about Olivia...she just seems so off about this pregnancy...almost.  It's weird I'm still trying to figure it out.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

:( :(

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2015 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

<3 <3 <3

Reviewer: devilish1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love this story!  Please let her have conceived before her abduction. Xander needs to be the daddy. They don't need any more pain from her attack.

 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) :) :)

Reviewer: devilish1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you so much for continuing this wonderful story.  Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

:O :O cant wait to read more :) :) :) <3

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