[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2016 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh wow what is up with Jasper that girl was talking about his ex and he didn't say anything and as for Bella is is too nice her gut is telling her something is up with Jasper she needs to listen update soon
Date: 13 Jan 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
I sure wouldn't assume it might be Kelly, because of how she was talking at dinner, but who else would Bella recognize? It was creepy that Jasper was with a girl so very much like Bella. It made me nudge him up the suspect list some! I also felt so bad for Charlie having to listen to the stupid things she said about Maria!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh I'm really enjoying this story so many twists and turns cnt wait till next chapter x
Date: 13 Jan 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter. My guess is Leah is the new victim.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
Is it Kelly?!? I hope so! What an incesitive ahole. She can believe what she wants but don't hurt other people with your religious beliefs. It felt like she was doing it on purpose or she's just dumb. So dumb.
I swear the more I read, the more it sounds like Jasper. Also, what was up with him finding Bella's twin. Then saying he's never met anyone like her. Uhm, is he dense or that obsessed with Bella he can't tell them apart?!? Ugh!! I need more lucky for me the next chapters are coming!! I love this new writing train you're on!!! Keep them coming ladies!! I want to know who did it!!! That MacAvoy guy also seems suspect.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 12 Jan 2016 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
Is it Kelly?? Is Jasper the killer???
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2016 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
Kelly needs to think before she speaks, that is if she isn't the latest victim
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2016 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
Is there anyone else that thinks Jasper is losing his grip on reality?
Really Jasper, dating a girl that so closely resembles your dead fiancé's sister is nearing creepy.
Kelly is also wacked. Internal filter seems busted.
Is the latest victim someone Bella knows from school? It can't be Kelly. She doesn't fit the victim profile. And that would put Jasper near the top of the suspect list.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2016 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
Why are the detectives so ready to take the easy way out? The burden of proof lays with them. Bella seems to be the only one digging further into the crimes than the actual individuals assigned to the case.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
If it is Edward then I will definitely not have seen it coming. I'm still saying Jasper or the professor. Can't wait to find out for sure. Glad you all are doing better too.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
The more time goes by the more I think it's Jasper and possibly McAvoy working together. Ugh. It could be anyone!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2016 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
Jasper is totally setting Edward up. If there are two killers it's Jasper & the professor. My gut def. thinks it's Jasper.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
Edward can officially be taken off the list!
Date: 12 Jan 2016 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for the update! I don't think Edward had anything to do with it.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
I still think it is dr. Mc creepy. Poor Edward people just need to leave him alone. Paul deserved the beating Edward gave him.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 11 Jan 2016 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
All things point to Edward but it cant be
Date: 11 Jan 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh dear, I'm hoping it's not Edward. I don't want to think of him as a serial killer! There's only been one FF I know of where that was the case and I hope it never happens again. It's just not for me. What if Edward's father isn't really dead. What if someone close to him is setting him up. There is that temper of his to consider, though. I just don't know. You're doing a fabulous job here and I can't wait to find out who the killer is.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2016 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
I knew it was going to happen them putting Edward down as a suspect but who is it and what is his real motive
Date: 11 Jan 2016 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
As long as Bella and her dad don't believe he did it, I refuse to suspect Edward. Other people are too quick to name him, though! I'm going over suspects in my head and have a feeling I'm missing something, kind of like Bella is feeling!
Date: 31 Dec 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2015 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
Interesting that Jasper is now interested in Bella as more than a friend. His jealous reaction almost put him in the killer category. But, if I remember correctly, his eyes are blue.
Paul is a real nice piece of work.
Professor McAvoy is reachy the ultra creepy level.
Date: 24 Dec 2015 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
wondering if it is more than one person
Date: 24 Dec 2015 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
Paul is a sick fuck and Charlie is going to scare the hell out of him. Bella is so smart Edward is very protective of her
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2015 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think it's Professor McAvoy. Great story. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 23 Dec 2015 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
no theories here. I'm bummed that Edward doesn't love Bella back....
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
Holy snap that was crazy but who is behind it is it the professor and Jasper that would be crazy right update soon
Date: 23 Dec 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
Of course it's not Edward but now I feel a little better. He spent all night in jail. Jasper and that creepy professor McAvoy are acting all sorts of cray cray.
Date: 23 Dec 2015 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
I fid not see that coming but I guess I am not a detective and not paying enough attention to details
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
Happy holidays to you too
Date: 23 Dec 2015 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter.
Date: 23 Dec 2015 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
Too many Christmas cookies clogging up my brain, I guess! Still am not sure who it is. This whole chapter kind of gave me the creeps. The only ones I have eliminated as suspects are Bella, her dad and Edward, everyone else is on my list!
Date: 22 Dec 2015 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
There was a little happiness in this chapter. I loved it!
Date: 19 Dec 2015 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
Happiness will make you forget the bad.
Date: 16 Dec 2015 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
Aww I'm glad they finally admit their feelings
Date: 16 Dec 2015 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thrilled to hear about Charlie's Voice! This chapter was a real mix, bad because of the four dead girls, good because of Edwardgetting up the nerve to date Bella. I like the way they are together, but I hope he can keep her safe from the monster serial killer! I still fear he's going to come after Bella!
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2015 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
What a not so perfect time to drop the mike & two more bodies bomb!
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 13
Was Mike released before or after the additional two killings?
Edward is finally stepping out of his comfort zone and taking the leap of a relationship. This is going to irritate the killer even more.
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
I loved it they are sweet together and Edward he is too cute when he talks to her now who has been killed now and what will Bella do
Date: 16 Dec 2015 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 16 Dec 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
I try to guess but can't. Still need more clues. :-)
Date: 15 Dec 2015 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter. I'm still thinking Jasper or the creepy professor!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella shouldn't feel guilty
Date: 15 Dec 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
I don't think it was mike. I still it is professor creepy. I am glad they are dating Edward is so adorable how he asked her.
Date: 15 Dec 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for another chapter of this story! So we've eliminated Mike....why isn't Paul being considered a suspect? If he killed puppies, then it's only a short leap of a sick mind to killing women....or how about Mike's dad? Maybe in his twisted mind, those women who wouldn't act like he thought they should had to be stopped, in his mind? Hope your holiday season is warm and loving!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am glad she was able to have some happeness before shit hit the fan again
Date: 06 Dec 2015 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I always read your stories but I am not a fan of horror.
Date: 03 Dec 2015 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 12
Gosh dang it...does everyone and their frakking uncle have green eyes??? You guys certainly twist an amazing tale of "who done it". You leave a slew of clues that can lead to anyone...but my theory is...it's the Colonel Mustard in the green room with the candlestick...just kidding...however...I do believe it is Jasper, in his fractured mind, with Edwards blade from his shaving kit...Jasper couldn't handle Maria's altered ego life previously and having dealt with the death of his family from earlier in his life... he's a little messed up... and with the clue from the prologue of Bella hiding under a dead body f???hello...morgue anyone??? Lots of dead bodies available there...
I like how you talk about Jack the Ripper and theories on who he might be... I know you only touched upon it...but...if you want a good theory read...try Patricia Cornwell's book about him...pictures and everything.
Anywho...thanks for this story...can't wait for more...I just absolutely love all your stories...read you later...TTFN(ta-ta-for-now) :-)))
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh wow it gets deeper and deeper with every chapter with some answers you get more questions I love it more please
Date: 02 Dec 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
Mike and Aro are both creepy. Bella needs to be careful.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2015 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
I think Edward & Bella need to act as a couple again! :D
Date: 01 Dec 2015 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
Am I the only one who really doesn't like Maria?!
Why isn't Bella angry at her sister? Who the hell tells their sister that no one wants to date her because she doesn't have anything to hold on to?!
.. This story gets to me more than it should.
Date: 01 Dec 2015 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
Glad to hear about Charlie's Voice, I really liked it! There are too many candidates for serial killer for me to choose one. Now I have to add Mike into the mix! You have a wonderful cruise with your kids and we'll see you when you get back! Bon voyage!
Date: 01 Dec 2015 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
Peter has green eyes too...could he be the killer? One of the newly murdered girls was clutching a cross? Maybe Mike could be the murderer? Have a great vacation!
Date: 01 Dec 2015 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 01 Dec 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
Gah!!! I need more clues there are too many possible killers.
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2015 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
Another suspect to consider. Mike is crazy
Date: 30 Nov 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter
Date: 30 Nov 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
All a bunch of creeps now I think maybe Mike or Peter but I still lean to the professor . Edward is a good guy?
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'll bet the cross is similar to the one Mike was holding. Mike has blue eyes though right?
I'm still thinking it's the professor.
Edward wasn't acting when he had Bella inside the brothel. He used his true feelings to let Bella know how he thinks and feels about her.
It's sad that Charlie will eventually learn his oldest daughter turned tricks.
Date: 30 Nov 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh yeah will love more from Charlie's voice. Hmm I know the professor is still the most likely suspect but mike is now a close second and wow on the Maria was a escort. Texan was who got her out whould that be jasper.
Date: 30 Nov 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wonderful! You keep upping the tension and the suspect list! I love it. Thanks for making me think and making me almost pull my hair out trying to figure out who " Sent from Hell" is!
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2015 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
Jasper gave Bella the clue! He said he & Alice had a good conversation... Yeah before he killed her. He killed Maria in jealousy.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2015 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
So it still isn't a 100 % that it is the professor.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2015 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
Jasper is extremely possessive. He could be the killer.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2015 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
The killer is sitting in your house! Where is Edward?
Date: 28 Nov 2015 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
I dont think she should of went to the morgue to close to her sisters way of dying she have a mental break.
Date: 25 Nov 2015 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
It is going to be hard to forget. It is going to haunt her dreams.
Date: 25 Nov 2015 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
I hate that Jasper is so against edward. I still think it is the professor and he is super creepy asking Bella out ick. She need to be with edward I knew it was Bella he was talking about.
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2015 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 11
Will Bella tell anyone about Professor McAvoy hitting on her while still acting as her instructor? Or the fact that he gives off a strange vibe that makes her feel uncomfortable?
The profile the professor gave to Bella is too generic for a seasoned criminologist.
Does Bella trigger her own attack by declining the professor's advances?
I haven't figured out the link between the deceased women's names.
Date: 25 Nov 2015 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
I suspect everyone!!!! They are all acting strange.
Date: 25 Nov 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
can'r figure out the names
Date: 25 Nov 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
I still have no other idea as to who is the killer. I fervently hope it's not Edward.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2015 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh wow Jasper is losing his shit and Edward is being strong for her and sweet too but as for the names are the from the Bible at least part of there names
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow he hears his master's voice in his head he is past off his rocker
Date: 24 Nov 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
I still can't figure it out. I think she should stay away from the professor though. How many chapters are there?
Date: 24 Nov 2015 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter.
Date: 24 Nov 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Not being good with puzzles, I don't see what the victim's names are telling us. As for Bella seeing Mary's body, that probably was not a very good idea, especially since she can picture her sister like that! I think Bella needs to listen to her intuition about Professor McAvoy, and stay away from him!
Date: 24 Nov 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
Nice chapter, loved the change.
Date: 23 Nov 2015 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
I would freak out if I received that letter. I would have gone to the police. No bluffing. He is crazy.
Date: 22 Nov 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
Getting into this story is quite adictive! I find myself doing the detective thing and asking all the pertinent questions. Who? Why? Where? It's very "heady"! I had a feeling about the Professor. He teaches classes about serial killers! I realize not all professors who cover this subject would do what he has done, but how many of them would go so far to be able to read the police report of a murder? This way, he knows what to watch out for, any loose connections, etc. Brilliant really! This fiction is well written and full of ups and downs. I love it! I just keep hoping Bella can somehow be saved!
Thank you for all your hard work - especially considering all the personal issues you've had to deal with lately! I know the feeling of that loss you are feeling right now, but trust me! The ache will subside! Also know you remain in my prayers.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
So is it the professor. She called the professor and his phone rang. His mother was crazy it seemed and did it help in his craziness she said his eyes were that of a sinner so maybe she was a religious nut and perhaps punished him for what she thought were sins.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm sorry for all your troubles. May they end soon. So the only clue I can see is his green eyes. Sure hope it isn't Edward. He is one sick MF
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2015 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
I know it was him
Date: 21 Nov 2015 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
I have been thinking of you wishing you well be good to yourself.
I still think it is the professor cant wait to find out who it is.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
good. still so many questions
Date: 21 Nov 2015 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
I hope everything turns around for you ladies soon. Another great chapter as always can't wait for the next one. I'm thinking the professor did it.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
Sorry to hear you guys have had such a hard time, I hope you have some peace and calm from now on! Now I'm pretty sure Professor McAvoy is the crazy serial killer! Now the insane bastard is going to kill two at a time! I have goosebumps!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
So the professor is our assailant. Not surprising.
I'm still not sure what warrants Bella being added to the same category as the hookers.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
Ahhh. I have so many ideas. It could be a partner killing. Maybe the doctor and the professor working together. However, I think it will be one guy who is schizophrenic. This is what leads to believe it's the Doctor. He's always heard the voice and wanted to learn more about the illness and how to "fix" himself but now the other voice has taken over.