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Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 7

oh my! stuffed Bella for Thanksgiving! what a visual. Tumblr, here I come.....

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

I love this they just work together they are all each other needs 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

Thanksgiving is usually all work and no play. Bella's very lucky. She gets both. Ha-ha

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

How could life get anybetter that this ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 6

Love Esma she is a very good friend

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 5

It's right on the tip of his toung and she feels the same she loves them both but in different ways

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

Holly shit need new undies lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2015 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

good

Reviewer: shawney cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2015 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it so far.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 6

Who's to say that Alice hasn't been listening to this conversation between Bella and her mother? Lol
If James ever gets ahold of this information, Bella's living situation, he could attempt to ruin her image as a family lawyer.
Esme is a great friend.

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 6

Essie is Team Bella all the way. I love her!!! The best revenge will be when James sees Bella with both young men and he's alone begging her for forgiveness. I hope he visits when they are all together. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2015 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 6

I loved it she has a great life now with her boys and girls this is where she is ment to be 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 6

Yes james is a grade A arsehole.  LOL for Alice asking about 2 boyfriends.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 6

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 6

Now I'm wondering if Garrett will be left behind once Bella reveals her true feelings....

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

James needs to get his arse kicked.  What a dick.  Glad the boy are spoiling her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

Esme will recognize Edward's feelings for Bella as they truly are, love. Will Esme have any words of wisdom for Bella's two lovers?

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love the three of them

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

Very good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 5

They are so sweet to her they make her feel beyond beautiful and cared for 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

Of course he will. He already is. He's s transparent. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2015 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love that Esme and Carlisle are into kink. Maybe you could do a spin-off story on them.....?  Edward is so sweet...is it too soon for his love declaration?  I guess we'll see. I love this story!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2015 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

good

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2015 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 4

They could come over to help me relax any day!!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 3

 

What an enticing meal! LOL

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2015 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

Sexy, sweet boys. Does she share? LOL

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 4

If Bella keeps this level of pleasurable release up for too long she'll need IV fluids. Ha ha

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2015 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 4

GAWD that was hawt

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2015 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 4

Damn woman!!! I love your stuff. So hot! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2015 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 4

good

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 4

So hot need a shower now well done

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

I could live on this....omg you make this so hot. I have no words...I want my own Edward and Garrett...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2015 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

Edward and Garrett are a combustible duo!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 3

Holly hell what a day dinner oh shit waiting for desert lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow what a day in heaven lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love these guys they care for her so much I wish they could just go to there own little island and just be happy.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2015 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

She has great control.  It would be so hard waiting when you have 2 handsome men torturing you.

Reviewer: Vtiedemann Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2015 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 3

I got my hand raised. Whew.  I need a cig...lol

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2015 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 3

Holy hell that was hot more please 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2015 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

good

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2015 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

These 3 will be the death of me!   Death by arousal.. What a way to go!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2015 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

Agh, burning up as bad as bella 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 2

I need them in my house

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2015 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hawt dayum. That was yummy

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2015 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

OMG!!!! This was just HOT. Pew. 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2015 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love this chapter hmmmm mmmmmm

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2015 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

They can take care of me any day!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

Gah!! I want some sexy boys like that. Sigh. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2015 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 2

Going to be a fun weekend. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2015 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh man these men know how to take care of and please her I am sooooooooooooooooo jealous 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2015 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 2

wow they aren't playing when they say do nothing.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2015 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

This lady is living the life.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

And so it begins! Woohoo! :)

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to see what kind of fun these 3 will be having.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

These three have a very unique chemistry and even deeper need to please each other by simply taking care of the stresses life throws their way.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

ohhhhhh can't wait

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a great start!! I am excited for more! :)

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love these three.. so excited to read more about their developing relationship. 

Reviewer: SweetTwilightDreams2rich Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this story. You are an amazing writer. Keep up the wonderful stories.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

good

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

You said angust at the end....does this tri become a twosome?

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved it I am so happy you are writing part two 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) looking forward to reading this 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can usually handle some angst in the middle of a story, but the end?  I don't know if I can handle that. If she does have to choose between the guys, I hope she chooses Edward.

Reviewer: TheUnderStudy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh Lordy! This is the second installment?! Let me  go back to the first

Reviewer: Spunkie09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to this story.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

How bad is the angst at the end? I don't handle angst very well .

Author's Response:

You'll just have to read and find out. :-)

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yay!!!!! I can't wait for more!  

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