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Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh shit, this is not good, hope all works out and James plan is destroyed

 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

James REALLY sucks! That security guard should lose her job! Ugh....

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 15

I can't believe a security person would believe him without asking to see identification or calling someone. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 15

Poor Bella.  James is crazy 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

yikes

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 15

He's absolutely deranged! I have this feeling that after he sees her with her guys, he's going to try to rape her. It scares me. 😢

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 14

I am glad that she told the guys about James but I have a bad feeling about 'waiting' until Christmas Eve! o.O
I love this story and I am excited for more! :)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 14

I loved it but I hope the guys get there soon she needs them 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 14

I think Bella is in denial.  She needs to be careful. 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 14

Yeah I think she is down playing big time which is not good.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 14

she should really be taking the issue with james more seriously, especially since he flipped his lid

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 14

Bella is totally minimizing the danger with James. I think he's a real threat. I hope her guys get to her before James strikes again....

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 14

Glad she told them what was up.   Dont blame the boys for being pissed at Ms Cope.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

What has that bastard done to her, and why has she not called to cops!?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 14

She is totally deflecting but because she doesn't want to inconvenience her boys. They need to fly out earlier!! Come on spider senses!!! 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

Bella is going to get hurt by not listening to her inner voice.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 13

Wow poor Bella the flu and than she runs into her ex this can't be good she should have told the guys

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 13

yeah sounds to convenient.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

Glad she is going to be able to help Alec.  Ugh  of course James had to run into her.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

Ewwww  just a little creepy

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

James is back, there goes the fluff for a while.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 13

Apparently James has insider information regarding Bella's appearance in the Big Apple. New wife and baby wearing on his nerves? Is he longing for the days of quite and stature that Isabella once brought him?

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

Hmm... What has happened to James? I am sure he regrets his treatment of his ex wife now, but it's too late. He'd better not even try to go after her, or Edward and Garrett will come kick his pathetic, loser ass!!

*huggles*

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 13

Is it the flu or is she pregnant? I hope the latter. James is creepy and something is off...I hope she winds up her business in NY soon so she can go home to her men...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 13

James is a creep he wants what he once had and he thinks he should be able to revisit if he wants. The boys will kick his ass

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 12

I am so sad they will be apart she needs them as much as they need her they take such good care of her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 11

wow she knows what she wants and not afraid to ask for it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 10

together time is very good getting to know each other.  Under the christmas tree what a present

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 9

So happy they where able to talk about it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 8

That was hot as shit omg OMG OOMMGG lol

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

kind a filler chapter but keep going they can't all be "lemony" :)

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 13

Noooo!!! Bella should have told them!! Something tells me there is going to be trouble. I hope her boys are there to handle James. He is definitely going to try and hurt her if he doesn't get what he wants. Or, even better, I hope she beats him up herself. She is stronger than before and needs to stand up to herself. I think she can!!! James doesn't know what is going to hit him. Bella can then report him to the cops!! Gah!! I hope she beats him up herself!! 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

uh oh......  dam James!!   grrrrr

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

She needs to be careful

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 13

good

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm afraid that James will soon be in her face, and will find her new lifestyle loathsome. More than likely, he will attempt to make her miserable.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

They will be gaining some frequent flyer miles!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

Sucks they are sending her back to NYC.  With her luck, James will somehow be involved in the adoption case.  Sigh

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

Awe they are so sweet the guys love her just as much as she loves them to separation is going to be so hard on them

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

Edward needs to really sit down and explain his feelings to both Garret & Bella.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 12

This is where the ride gets bumpy.
The synopsis of this story tells the reader that James will become an issue for this love triangle.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 12

I think the boys should have some good sexy fun why they Skype with Bella and maybe dig into how this is effecting there feels for each other Edward hinted he loved them both

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 12

The boys are going to take a much needed vacation and join her in New York. That's the only option. They must. Lol. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 12

good

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh this will be difficult for all of them, I think. Since you put it out there that she may run into her ex, James, I think she will. I wonder if her unconventional relationship with these 2 gorgeous men will be found out by someone in the future and somehow be used against her.  I hope not, but it would make for some good angst....j/s. Thanks for this and love to you!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh no! My poor babies! How are they going to cope? I knew it! Edward is in deep. ;) I am so excited to see where you go with this. I can't wait! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 11

wow

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

Yes very sexy boys. Bella is one lucky girl. 

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoy these 3. I am in. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 11

Sensory overload is an understatement!

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow one lucky girl. The love of two great men. That take care of different kinds of needs.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow you just blew my mind so erotic and sensual 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 11

I So could go for some of that hot loving... loved every word keep it hot and yummy

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 11

I never found out if Edward felt any jealousy like Garret did on the following night? The night that Edward watched. I don't think Edward would because he knows their connection is stronger BUT maybe he did. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 11

Dayum that was hawt

 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 11

That was hot! I have to admit...the thought of a mouth on me while I'm full of cock is a delightful idea. *shudders* yeah...

*huggles*

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 11

ABSOLUTELY LOVE THEM!!! :)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 11

oh my god. your description of this scene leaves me breathless...gotta go see the pics.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 9

Hot damn so sexy and hot

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Bella but they guys make up for the sadness in her life 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

Have a feeling her egg donor will be back to start more trouble in the future.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

I hope next chapter is a great description of the magic they are about to make. ;)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 10

Renee's a greedy witch.
Is Bella barren or just decided not to have children?

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 10

Awwww....I love it! :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 10

good

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 10

Nothing like making love in front of a Christmas tree.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love it, Bella and Edward will always be my favorite.  THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2015 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

I like that they take care of a different type of needs for Bella but as a group its even more amazing. I do feel bad for Garrett because there does seem to be something special between Bella and Edward. Can't wait to see the ride we are going to go on.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

my fave CHRISTMAS movie

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

Bella needs to stop lying.  She loves Edward  but cares for Garrett.  She makes love with Edward and Garrett is a hot release.  Both are great, but not the same. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 9

Have I mentioned that I abso-freakin-lutely love this? Yes, I believe that I have a few times! ;) I LOVE THIS!!! *grabs shamwow*

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 8

I love this! They are all going to be just fine! ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 7

This is so fanfriggentastic!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 6

OMG! I LOVE THIS!!! LOVE!! ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 5

I absolutely love this!! I love them! I love to love this! ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

WOW!! *fans self* That was fantastic!! ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

HOLY SHIT!! WOW!! I MEAN SHAMWOW! ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love these boys!! ;)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

Best Holiday movie ever!
Edward still managed to end up with her in his arms.
Was Garrett's mind put at ease by Bella's words,or just appeased for the moment?

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 9

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 9

yumminess.  Glad she talked to B about what was up with him

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

It was Garrett's idea........
He is the one that set the boundaries of sex versus making love to this woman.
When it's his turn Edward may experience similar feelings of abandonment.
The connection that each of these two men have with Bella is very different.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

:)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

I wondered if this were going to change into an Edward and Bella only story...I am torn but I kinda hope not...

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 8

Yumminess.   Wonder how long till Garrett steps away though.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 8

good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 8

I loved it Holy hell that was erotic 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 8

Interestingly fun story

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 8

Yup. Garrett is not feeling the love BUT tomorrow is his night. Let's see how Edward feels then. I bet it's just because he was left out. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

I will say it again.  Bella is so lucky. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow. Just wow. I have no words other than give me more!! Lol. 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

Can't wait for the next chapter happy happy

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

Custody disputes can be so difficult sometimes.  Glad the Cope renovation is done.

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