Date: 15 Feb 2016 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 28
Well Carlisle is a douche!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2016 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 28
lol Edward should hang the sheet off the side of the house, kind of like giving everyone the finger::) I actually snorted 2 times while thinking about this situation!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
I was worried there wouldn't be any blood & they would still have to cut someone. :D
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
Bella Était responsable Pour Une Fois.
Merci, Il Est Un bon chapitre.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2016 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 28
Even though it was ideal circumstances (they kind of were forced to do it) Edward did make it good for her. This Edward is a sweet mobward which is kind of refreshing.
Date: 12 Feb 2016 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 28
I can't imagine having to prove my virginity was taken! I know centuries ago, officials literally watched as it was taken after an upper-class marriage. I have a feeling that Bella and Edward will get along just fine. They trust one another! Wonderful chapter!
Date: 12 Feb 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 11 Feb 2016 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
So, Edward loses his patience with Bella rather quickly, and partly is her fault. However, there's no denying he cares for her A LOT, much more than I expected him to at this time in their marriage. As for Bella, she care for him a lot too. I think it's safe to say they are finally falling for each other.
Lets just hope, they manage to keep their tempers in check as much as possibe; especially now with this thing with Garrett and Kate.
Speaking about them, I am rather certain, Kate knew about the plan and agreed to kdnap Bella. Since we met her, she hasn't seem too sisterly or interested in Bella. We'll have to wait and see what happens.
Date: 11 Feb 2016 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 28
I am happy that he was so sweet with her. His father is still a bastard! lol
Date: 11 Feb 2016 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 28
There you go Carlisle. I think Bella is finally realizing that Edward is a great guy.
Date: 11 Feb 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
At least he was gentle for her first time and Carlisle the ass got his bloody sheets. I wonder how they will be in the morning.
Date: 11 Feb 2016 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 28
Pretty awesome first time in my book! Of course with someone so gentle and considerate like Edward that's a given! Wonder how things will be the morning after?! Looking forward to next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2016 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 28
thank you for the update...well done...I'm happy Bella didn't want Edward to get into more trouble...I'm sure Carlisle would have tested the blood...Edward pulled out so they won't get pregnant right away...I think Bella will enjoy herself with her husband...I'm sure they will have a heir soon....until you post again
Date: 11 Feb 2016 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wow about time and she loved it. Edward is a happy man.
Date: 11 Feb 2016 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 28
Hopefully Carlisle will be satified.....wanker
Date: 11 Feb 2016 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 28
I have to admit that I was worried she would be one of those girls who didn't bleed their first time...
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2016 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 27
"-I should have demanded to see the bloody sheets," lol lol I's so glad that tradition pretty much died out::))
Date: 09 Feb 2016 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 27
Don't blame her for not wanting to be talked about as a brood mare or so it seemed. Even worse that Carlisle expected it on the wedding night when she was drunk. That would have been a dick move.
Date: 08 Feb 2016 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
Bella is so confused. She doesn't know what she wants. She knows her sister is guilty. She needs to stop lying to herself. The rest will work out if she relaxes and realizes she has grown to care for Edward. She needs to stop fighting him.
Date: 08 Feb 2016 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 27
I love that Edward and Bella are getting closer. However, I think it would be better if his family gave them some privacy over this issue as long as he hasn't "bed" anyone else. I think it was a bitchy move on Esme to run and tell that to Carlisle. Bella seems to be trying hard to be who she should be but at every turn something happens and now her own sister is out to kill her. I'm guessing until the marriage is consummated it's not legal as far as Edward having New York. Poor Edward has really put up with a lot of crap with Bella but again if anyone would explain to her what's going on perhaps she will handle it better. She has started to see that Edward is the only one she can depend on. I would laugh if she asked Carlisle if he'd like to come witness the event so he can report such events back to the men and I hope she let's Esme know had she told her what was expected of her rather than run and tattle to her husband it would be appreciated. This poor girl has no one she can trust other than Edward so start giving the wife a little info. I love your fic so please keep the updates coming. Kind of wondering if Charlie had his own suspicions on Kate and why he arranged Edward and Bella's marriage so she would have someone protecting her. I can't wait for more!!
Date: 08 Feb 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 27
I hope he doesn't try to pressure her. She shouldn't have to sleep with him until she's ready. If he pushes her she will pull a lot farther away from him and go right back to hating him again.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2016 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 27
WOW, I DID NOT LIKE EDWARDS FATHER ATTIUTED , HE IS VERY OLD FASHION. It was none of their business whether BELLA and EDWARD had sex or not, IT IS HARD SHE HAS A LOT TO DEAL WITH IT , SHE IS NOW LIVING WITH THEM AND SHE NOW HAS ENEMY WITH HER SISTER SITUATION AND DEATH OF HER PARENTS THIS IS NOT GREAT FOR EDWARD PARENTS THINK SO CHEAP
Date: 07 Feb 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 27
I really wish you would write a little more about Edward's past. For someone 7 years older than Bella, he can be a real idiot. He knows Bella is reeling from just fiding out her sister tried to kill her and he just acts like it's no big deal. I really wonder if Edward has ever been in a relationship before. I think he has been all work and no play because his relationship skills need some work. I've read some of the other reviews and was surprised so many are mad at Bella for letting it slip that she hasn't sleep with Edward yet. I think it's totally understandable that her mind was all over the place. What is really starting to grate on me is Esme and Carlise's attitudes. They have no smypathy at all for what Bella is dealing with. I'm beginning to think the valium Rosalie gave Bella belonged to Esme and that's how she goes through life with her emotions constatly under wraps. I don't blame Bella one bit for reacting the way she did. Who in all of hell discusses thier son and daughter in law's sex life like that! One it's just creepy and two it's gross. Cullen men might take a vow to value thier wives, but they sure don't respect them. I'll give Edward some credit for not really pushing the issue with her. Bella really hasn't had many days since they have been married where her life hasn't been in complete turmoil. Hope she hands Edward his balls for calling her virginity an issue. Way to make a girl feel wanted. Bella has been saving it as a gift for her husband and the man she thought she would love. He just acts like it something to cross off his list to make daddy happy. Please God, don't let it happen in that house. Can't wait to see what Bella says.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2016 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 27
Good update
Date: 07 Feb 2016 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 27
I think she is ready lol
Date: 07 Feb 2016 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
Hahahaha loved this chapter!
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 27
This chapter I did not see coming! Edward better start wining & dining her again. He needs another present Thursday.
Date: 06 Feb 2016 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 27
I don't blame Bella for being upset! That would be ridiculously embarrassing! But the thought of "correcting the issue", let's go!! LOL
Date: 06 Feb 2016 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 06 Feb 2016 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
Here I thought maybe staying with Edwards mom and dad might be a good thing. Bella just lost her parents and her sister may be trying to kill her. She needs love and support. i thought she might find some of it with mom and pop Cullen now I'm not so sure. I'm still real glad to see her trusting Edward.
Date: 06 Feb 2016 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
She has every right to be pissed about them talking about their sex life in front of all the men...I would definitely not want to "correct the issue" in that house!! Men are so stupid sometimes! ;)
Date: 06 Feb 2016 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 27
I would be mad to with them discussing it in front of all the men in the "family". If Edward's dad had an issue with it he could have taken it up on private with Edward., not only front of everyone.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
But he does expect us to correct the issue and soon??? Are you serious?? It is not a business deal. It is making love for the first time. She is a virgin and in a forced marriage and let's not forget a teenager. Unbelievable!!!
Date: 06 Feb 2016 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
what a brat but it makes me laugh, can not wait until Edward shows up at her, lol
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 26
There is a huge war brewing! I hope Bella needs to snuggle him tonight.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh my gosh her own sister is turning against her.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
He has made her day a really fun one.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 26
sister betraying bella , is hard to trust anyone
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
i thought this chapter was like caught me if you can , bella running away and edward is to chasing her like the begining of your story , i like it , to be hard to get but , i am happy about your story . thank you for taking your time and writting this wonderfull story.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
Glad to see that Bella is finally starting to grow some brain cells::)) Altho, I definitely would have put up a big stink too over the forced marriage. I would have been extremely worried about her IQ if her red flags didn't wave while talking to her sister.
Date: 04 Feb 2016 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 26
I have to say I can't wait to see where this goes! This attempt to take Bella proves so much planning went into this. Kate can't say she was caught up in the moment. She was already in Detroit, It takes 2 hours to fly in from NY. Which means she was already in town in case this the reading of the will didn't go thier way. I'm beginning to believe that Kate was looking for the will at her parents house before the funeral which is why she was so ready to go back into that house. Not to mention who supplied Kate with armed men, the russians? All of this is only pushing Bella to trust Edward. That man has said time and time again that all he wants is to protect her. Bella at least believes that. Can't wait for what Edward does!
Date: 04 Feb 2016 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 26
OMG!!! Loved the last chapters!all I can say is amazing!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2016 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 26
I hope you write more and I love the story
Date: 04 Feb 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh , it's getting good...????
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter!
Date: 03 Feb 2016 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 26
I love this story please update soon
Date: 03 Feb 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
wow, so happy with the update love this story
Date: 03 Feb 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm so glad Bella got away! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 03 Feb 2016 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
Poor Bella. Someone else in her life that's been lying to her and trying to hurt her.
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2016 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 26
thank you for the update...Kate what were you thinking?
Date: 03 Feb 2016 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 03 Feb 2016 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 26
Glad she listened to Marcus and Jasper this time. It was good seeing her turn towards Edward. Can't wait to find out more about Kate and Garrett. I sure hope Kate did not have anything to do with her parents death. That would be awful.
Date: 03 Feb 2016 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 26
Holy sh*t!! WOW!!! This is fantastic!!! :)
Date: 03 Feb 2016 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 26
Edward will make them pay for that I am so glad she told him everything she loves him
Date: 03 Feb 2016 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
Yup! Sounds like Garrett wants New York and is willing to fight dirty for it! Their women and children are always " untouchable"! If he thinks Edward will give in, I think he has a surprise coming! Love the tension and sudden trusting Bella has for Edward! She to.d him she was in danger! I'll be the one biting my nails till the next chapter. Thank you for all that you do to make your stories so special!
Date: 03 Feb 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
Nooooo, update soon!!
Date: 02 Feb 2016 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 25
I don't trust Kate and Garrett.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great cliff hanger! But more please!
Date: 02 Feb 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
Finally, she is trusting Edward and doing the right thing. I just wonder if Kate and Garrett were behind killing their parents. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 02 Feb 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh no, so glad Bella listened to her gut and called Edward lets hope Marcus can save himself and her otherwise Edward is going to go a bit mental. Please update again soon as you've left us on a cliffhanger.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
You had to leave it there?
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you for the update...thank god Bella decided to calll Edward... Kate is not right...let's hope Marcus can save Bella and himself....until you post again
Date: 02 Feb 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 25
ooh sounds like Kate wants to die, trying to kidnap and hold Bella hostage.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh no! Kate's not there to "help" at all. Is she acting on her own or under orders from Garrett? I was hoping that B wouldn't try to leave E especially after they've actually started talking and getting along. So glad she was questioning things and called E. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
Glad she got some shooting practice.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
OMG! Bella is being betrayed by her own sister?! Wow! I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to hear what's happening!
Date: 02 Feb 2016 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
That explains why Kate had so strong opinions about Bella's wedding that day on the church and why it surprised her so much when Bella slap her, she was counting on Bella being always spoil and that she wouldn't have instincts when she call her this time. Will see if she wants her dead or just disappear her
Date: 02 Feb 2016 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
Om gosh i wanna know whats going on with Kate!!! I cant believe she would harm bella but i can see her being angry over her and garret not being the heads in ny. Post again super soon! Im dying to know whats next!
Date: 02 Feb 2016 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 02 Feb 2016 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am so happy that she called Edward. Since glad that she told him she thinks she is in trouble. I am glad that she did not trust her sister. Can't believe Kaye.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oooh, cliffie...
Date: 02 Feb 2016 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 25
That bitch! I knew she was trouble. The murder of her parents nothing more than a power play. They never figured on the will naming anyone else. Now they're going after Bella because she has power over Edward even if she doesn't know it yet. He cares for her a lot. My guess is Garrett knows just how much. Poor Bella this is going to devastate her.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 25
OH SHIT! Kate and Garrett are not happy but I can't believe she would try and hurt her own sister! >:(
Date: 02 Feb 2016 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 25
She doesnt want to leave him and I dont think Garrett should be trusted.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 25
yikes, kate is really going to go after b
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2016 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
Kate est dans le coup,
Garret veut se débarrasser d'Edward.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2016 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 24
it would be fun if princess get angry towards edward , it would be funny
Date: 01 Feb 2016 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 24
It's nice to have Edward and Bella have some time together that is stress free. It's much needed. I also noticed Edward's need to be close to Bella in his attempt to gain her trust and give her a sense of security with him. Edward's second gift served two purposes one to mark her as his ( he is a possessive man) and to help Bella feel secure. She lost so much in such as short amount of time - her family, home and name. She needs to know she's a big part of the Cullen family. You have me on edge about why Edward has to return to NY so fast. The funeral was only 2 days ago and he has to fly back. My guess is he found Jacob. Till next time.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
Yay a chapter tomorrow !!!sooo happy !
Date: 01 Feb 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
i love that you (well Edward) give her a dog, and certainly Chinese descendants dog are very protective, I used to have chow chow or mixed with akita, definitely the best I had.
thanks for another chapter
Date: 01 Feb 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love the puppy. Edward is a softy when it comes to Bella. At least she did not argue or throw a fit at the end of this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2016 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
thank you for the update...well done...they seem to be getting along better
Date: 01 Feb 2016 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 24
Pop! I am excited for more!! :)
Date: 01 Feb 2016 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
He is trying and she is to she needs to be pationt
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2016 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
oh uh , it is not easy to grive , it was nice chapter ,but i feel it is to soon to forgiving edward