Date: 31 Jan 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 42
I did not mind Bella acting like a brat, I understand why, she is a 17 year old girl who has had her life turned upside down and not given any explanation. I actually feel sorry for her. Edward is also quite young 24 so I suppose he could also be forgiven for his misjudgments, I do think though in some chapters he steps up and acts like the Edward we all wish we had.
very much worth a read and don’t miss the sequel!
Date: 14 Apr 2016 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 42
Your sequel is out and so I had to find out what happened in the first part of this series.
Bella's life was turned upsidedown.
Not one of the men in her life seemed to understand what she needed to mold herself into the perfect mob wife. A little honesty and trust would have gone a long way to smoothing over her confusion.
Kate was the ultimate pawn. She had no idea how dispensable her life was in the eyes of her husband and the Russian mob.
Now comes the part where a young married couple has to learn how to balance their emotions and build a solid foundation to ensure a successful marriage.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 42
God what a great story and it is one of the best. I love MAFIA stories about Edwrd and Bella but this had some meat to it, as thy say. Please don't wait to long to start Tied To New York because I will be so lost not knowing how these two loves work everything out.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 42
Feeling really bad for Bella. Yes she broke her promise but she is only 18 forced into a marriage and wasn't given a reason. Afterwards she lost everyone she cared about. Even her own sister and her fiance was behind it all. Who could blame her for wanting to be the one to end them and if not for Bella Garrett may have got away. I'm sure Edward did what he did because he's scared of losing her. He shouldn't be pushing her away when she needs him most. But you gotta love Edward too and I think he will figure that out. Very much looking forward to the sequel!!
Date: 25 Mar 2016 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 42
There's making a point and then there's being a dick. Edward has crossed that line too many times for him to be on a high horse about Bella's behavior. Both need to have someone hand them their asses. Bella at least has the excuse of not being properly prepared to his wife. For all the meadling Carlilse and Esme do they should have stepped in before weeks went by without them talking. I hope Bella keeps some of her fire and doesn't turn into some sort of step ford wife like Esme. Edward likes her furry side. He just needs to better control it.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 42
I can understand Edward’s anger to a certain degree. He loves her, but it is impossible for her to keep her promises to him even to save her own life. If I were in his position. I would be scared to death of getting more attached to someone that I might lose. Although I get why Bella did what she did, she could have died. He’s running scared because and fears that he will lose her because she is ruled by her emotions, and that is a death sentence in that business. She ran out in the middle of a gunfight with zero regard for her safety. How do you trust someone fully who you know will behave wrecklessly? Regardless of how he feels, he will need to find a better way to deal with these situations. I get needing to calm down, but he's barely spoken to her in weeks. That is not okay. They both have growing up to do. Great story.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 42
Wow! They went from being so close to barely talking. I can understand Bella getting caught up in things and I can understand Edward being so upset. Can't wait for Tied to New York! Hope you and your family have a Happy Easter!
Date: 24 Mar 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 41
I really don't know what Edward's problem is. If he didn't want Bella involved in this side of his world. He should have left her at home. Not only did she get her sister to reveal her plan so they weren't ambushed. She's the one who saved all of their asses by remembering the hidden room and escape route. Of all people in life who should have understood why Bella reacted the way she did, it should be Edward. So instead of being grateful for her help and that they managed to survive he punishes her. He needs a swift kick to the nuts. I know he was most likely scared, but what a shitty way to show it.
Date: 19 Mar 2016 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 39
Well, I was still surprised by how much Kate was involved. She still was played by Garrett, but so glad Bella took her out. I noticed that again Emmett is with Edward and you make a point of that, but not Jasper. So my money is still on him being the rat. Don't know why yet unless Alice is somehow connected to Garrett and the Russians. Garrett's sister maybe? I mean you did say no one bothered to look in Garrett's family. Can't wait to see how Bella and Edward take them all down.
Date: 19 Mar 2016 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 39
Isabella is a badass! Look out! How awful to hear your sister talk about your parents like that. And to know that your own sister was a part of their death is beyond terrible! I'm sure once Bella & Edward are safe she'll breakdown. Good thing she has Edward to comfort her.
Date: 17 Mar 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 38
Am I the only one who thinks this a set up? Let's face it Kate is not the sharpest tool in the shed. I have no doubt Garrett set this up. Probably told her he would rescue her and she could be there to see Edward and Bella die and get her 'rightful' claim to NY. Garrett's already proven how cunning he can be. He probably guessed right that Bella would want to confront her sister. This way he has both Edward and Bella together and away from Carlise's protection. Especially since there attacks on the home itself have failed and Carlisle won't let anyone in or out. With the sequel coming, I guess it doesn't end well from Garrett and Kate. Can't wait to see how this plays out and who the rat is.
Date: 17 Mar 2016 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 38
I wonder if Edward was shocked that Bella did not scream and yell at him instead she spoke reasonable to him and very calm. That probably scared him to death worse than her yelling. I understand she needs to talk to her sister I would be the same way. Can't wai for their meeting to find out what Kate's deal is.
Date: 16 Mar 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 38
Edward already gave his permission for Bella to come to NY with him, so WHY did Carlisle feel it necessary to give Bella his permission? What if Carlisle would've said no? Would Edward have still taken her, or gone back on his word? I mean, Edward is her husband, NOT Carlisle, so I feel at this point that Carlisle is just being domineering & ridiculous. That can't be good for a marriage - especially a new one that's practically between strangers, if E's parents are trying to control everything. They trust Edward enough to run the family "business", but not with his own wife? :/ Edward needs to put his parents in their place, especially where his private life is concerned.
Don't get me wrong...I know in the grand scheme of things that they are only trying to protect Bella, but she's not a little kid, even though she's behaved like one most of the time. Lol
Can't wait for more. ;)
Date: 16 Mar 2016 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 38
Oh, well, that is so very kind of Carlisle!!! o.O
So, they are heading off to NY for Bella to bang out Kate! Nice! lol
Oh and Emmett needs a good ass kicking for his interruption! :P
I am so very excited for the next update!!! :)
Date: 14 Mar 2016 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 37
The words may have been difficult for Edward to say, but I have no doubt that he meant them. Hopefully the whole house heard them! If Edward was mine is want everyone to hear us.
Hope you are able to get some rest! Looking forward to next chapter.
Date: 14 Mar 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 37
Short, but important chapter. Intense situations bring out intense emotions. Really hope we get an Edward point of view on this. I need to hear what was going on in his head when he finally admitted his feelings for Bella.