Date: 12 Mar 2016 10:49 AM Title: The Truth but I still Love You
Really enjoyed reading this hope you update soon
Date: 20 Aug 2015 11:42 AM Title: The Truth but I still Love You
Great story but the grammar is really in need of help. You need someone to proof this for you. I love the story though. Good luck!i
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2015 11:03 PM Title: The Truth but I still Love You
OK I am curious to where you are going to go with this. So far liking this. I am not sure what to think of alice. If alice didn't want her in it. Then should of not set them up. Please update soon.
Date: 11 Aug 2015 5:31 PM Title: The Meet and greet
Great first chapter I have added you to my favorites congratulations on your first fic I look forward it.
Date: 11 Aug 2015 7:10 AM Title: Epov: Her First Time
Sweetie you seriously need help there are simply too many grammatical errors. With some help I think this story is worth reading.
Date: 11 Aug 2015 7:04 AM Title: The Meet and greet
Sweetie you need a beta and a pre~reader obviously English must not be your first language. I think with a little help it will all work out. READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 11 Aug 2015 3:27 AM Title: The Meet and greet
IInteresting
Date: 11 Aug 2015 1:46 AM Title: The Truth but I still Love You
I don't know what to say.
Date: 11 Aug 2015 1:41 AM Title: The First Date
I have to be honest,there are alot of spelling errors. Do you have spell check?
Date: 11 Aug 2015 1:36 AM Title: Epov: Her First Time
Again dark lettering and skippiny around to much.Details-first date,how they got to a second and lemon was not good.Sorry the story is in the details.One word- CONFUSED!!
Date: 11 Aug 2015 1:27 AM Title: The Meet and greet
I have a hard time reading dark lettering.Please use white it's much easier to read. I LIKE THE STORY so far. The chapter was not to long. THANK YOU!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2015 1:47 PM Title: The Truth but I still Love You
Love your story .