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Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2016 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wow...sucks to be Aro

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2016 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 19

Very  well  written .   Absolutely  nothing  that  he  didn't  deserve .  Glad he  is  out  of  the  picture .  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2016 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

That was gruesome. Glad he can not hurt anyone any more. I am worried about the guy that Aro contacted to kill Edward and take Bella for his own. Edward and Bella have no idea that there is a contract on their heads. 

Reviewer: AngelsDeAmore Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 19

Yeah Aro is dead I'm so exited now Bella and Edward can focus on making a baby! Love this story keep it up!!

Reviewer: miss brickworks Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

I ENJOYED EVERY SECOND OF THAT. I HOPE JESSICA IS FOUND SOON BECAUSE I WANT BELLA TO BE THE ONE TO TORCHURE THAT SKANK WITHOUT MERCY. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I'M LOVING THIS STORY.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

Buh Bye Creepro!!  Good Riddance.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 19

Is it okay to be glad that he is dead? He didn't suffer as long as those poor girls.

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

Another great chapter

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 19

I think that they should have cut off the family jewels while he knew what was happening.  That would have been worse for him mentally.

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wow, such a strong chapter, Love it.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 19

Well it could have been more severe but I don't know how! LOL

Good job on getting rid of the menace.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 19

Bella just watched?  I would have thought maybe a piece of newton. Great chapter though. What about th guy aro partnered with that he promised Bella to?  Does that guy know she is a Donna yet?

Reviewer: GinnyD Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 19

wow, that was definetely wow

 

by the way, that Jack is really handsome guy, thanks for all the visuals... and good chapters as ever

 

have a nice Week, dear Clo

Reviewer: Redsoxfan1984 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 19

That was an awsome chapter

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 19

Aro is dead!!

Thats great :D

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 19

Well and thouroghly done.

Reviewer: kitty25478 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wow!!!!!!!! that was very graphic but very satisfying,looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 19

Why was Aro so mean and crazy. This is a fine chapter the killing of Aro from the beginning to his end was a rite of passage. Will his evil ass rest in peace, who knows, he will probably give the devil a hard time.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 19

That felt good from here. Mmmm! Yeah!  He got what he deserved. Well done. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 19

Karma...... 

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter. Now we just have to worry about that Roberto Cortez. He seemed awfully anxious to get his hands on Bella. I hope he's the next to go down.

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

Aro got what he deserved!

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 19

:O :O  ding dong the asshole is dead

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it cant wait for more

Reviewer: galwidanatitud Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 19

whew!  so deliciously evil.

Reviewer: sandezzy_ Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

that was a long and intense chapter..i love it and i love the way they got rid of Aro too.good riddance...So whats next Clo,now that aro is gone?

Reviewer: kerrioncullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh wow, girl I would not like to run into you in a dark alley, you are totally evil, and i love it. Thank you, he is gone, but what about that other guy he sent to kill Edward?

Reviewer: ladytink Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 19

Excellent chapter! I loved how each act of torture held a significance. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great update

Reviewer: pinay_samurai Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 19

Justice is served! 

Such a great chapter. :-) 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 18

Love this story

Reviewer: clozano Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 19

Absolutely loved it

Reviewer: charlieD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

Grusome but ausome. Love it more please.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wow. It felt like I was right there in the room with them.

Reviewer: anita blake Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 19

Whew glad he's finally dead.

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

Jesus!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 19

fantastic chapter so glad he got what he deserved

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 19

i love it i wish he was alive just so he could have more torture  but that's just me lol

Reviewer: brebre123h Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 19

Beautful

Reviewer: Mrsakey Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 19

The death was fitting. Xoxo for the chapter!

Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 19

to fast for my liking

Reviewer: TriMom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 19

It was exquisite!!! So much better than i could have imagined.  This is why you are the writer and I love you for it.  Thank you for doing your best in making sure this fucker was violated and handled just as he did in life.  I can just imagine that each of the parties would feel a little satisfaction but the shame of being related to such a vile creature would be such a disappointment to them.  Well done, Clo!! I'm looking forward to Elizabeth and Sean's love story and the creation of little Cullen at some point.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 19

Good riddance! 

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 19

Real good

Reviewer: Queen Nilah Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2016 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 18

Wow. The story us getting better and better. I hope Aro and Newton both get what they deserved. Love ur story and can't wait for a new update!

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2016 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 18

Even though I'm very much looking forward to Aro's torture, I gotta say, I'm not loving Eliabeth right now. I know it's a tough time for her but she's being way too mean to Sean. It also seems to be hijacking the story a bit. I'm starting to have a hard time keeping up with all these new couples. Still love this story, though.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  Elizabeth has been really hurt by her father and is having a hard time allowing her heart to open up, but lets just say the smooth talking Irish Lad is going to break down those walls.  The next chapter is the torture and death of Aro.  Several members of the family gets their revenge for all the hurt that he has caused. 

Reviewer: Redsoxfan1984 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2016 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 18

When will u update 



Author's Response:

I just posted a teaser in my Facebook group and on my Wordress Blog.  I will be posting the chapter either Saturday or Sunday.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2016 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 18

: ) READ YOU SOON💖

Reviewer: Canter2205 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 18

I love this story.

Reviewer: allrain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2016 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 18

Love this story would follow your writing anywhere,thanks for sharing 

Reviewer: readheadTanya Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2016 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

This kicks ass and I can't wait for an update!  Great job!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

Sean needs to be patient and kind toward Elizabeth.  She is being stupid right now because of her grieve. He needs to slowly romance her. She needs love in her life.  She is hardening her heart.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 18

LLove your story. Thank you for sharing.XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: csp4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I actually stuck that into my memory for my personal use::))

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 18

Moved over here from FFN so that I could keep reading the story. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

So glad you moved and I hoped that you didn't have too many boxes to unpack.  haha.  Here you will see that I post pictures with each chapter, so you may want to go back and reread the other chapters and enjoy them.

Reviewer: clozano Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 18

I just want to let you know that I really love your stories so much that i just recently became a member of twcs just so I could read them I was following this story on fan fiction and was sad to see you go..please update soon



Author's Response:

I am so happy that you followed me here.  I think you will love reading my stories here, because as you saw I post pictures with each chapter.  If you have any questions or would love to see more about my stories, follow my blog over on Wordpress.  hearfortwilight.wordpress.com

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 18

[Suddenly, he was faced with a punk ass kid dressed in all black, holding a knife. “Give me your fucking money or I will cut you, motherfucker.” The kid snarled, shaking the knife in Sean’s face. Shit, this was not this kid’s lucky day.] lol lol I'll say!

Author's Response:

And did you like the statement Elizabeth gave Sean.  "Take a exlax, because you are so full of shit."  One of my favorite quotes.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

I am happy you loved it. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 18

Love it! Cannot wait to read more.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 18

Of course I am so sad for Elizabeth, Aro is indeed a evil man, I would hope that she would give Sean a chance. Good chapter and a lot to look forward to, torture of the worst humans you can find.

Reviewer: Mrsakey Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

Crazy massive love for this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I hope you voting for Bound to the Family as the Top 10 Fic of 2015.  You can vote once a day until February 29th.  I hope I can keep you love going with the rest of Bound and Dangerous.  There will be a three book in the series and I am currently working on the outline for it.  Thanks again.

 

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 18

I am glad Aro is going to get what he deserves!!

Reviewer: Hanastasio Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 18

Love it. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great job.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wonder how long until Elizabeth comes around.  Now is def not the time for Sean to push it.  Though being around for her during this time would be a good thing to do.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 18

Good chapter!

Reviewer: brookletp Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

Poor Elizabeth. I hope she lets Sean in soon as I'm sure having him for support through her grief would be a great help. Looking forward to the next chapter and Aro getting what's coming to him.

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 18

I want elizabeth to get her head out of her ass miss high and mighty and give sean a chance.  She is pissing me off like she is better than him not giving him a chance to talk

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

I can not wait for Aro to get his.  Mike Newton and Jessica are about stupid.

Feel bad for Elisabeth.  Can not wait for Sean to shut her up and get her to listen!!!

 

Loving this and looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 18

aro is in for one hell of an ass whopping feel so sorry for elizabeth though look forward to next update sorry to hear about all the trouble with ff i can totally understand why you pulled all your stories its shocking what has been going on cant believe people are stealing stories thats just so low x



Author's Response:

Thanks for your understanding.  I love it here on TWCS, because they care about the authors.  Be prepared for a graphic chapter and the death of Aro.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 18

Poor Elizabeth.   She needs to let Sean in 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh. Great way to close the loop on other secondary characters. I see it all coming together now. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved that we are getting traction on the dismemberment of one Aro. Hope we will soon be able to shatter the walls and get some loving on Sean and Elizabeth. They sound perfect together.

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great Chapter

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

Excellent chapter, thank you.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 18

I feel sorry for Elizabeth.  I hope  Sean does not listen to Elizabeth.  Hope he comes along with them. Can't wait for the next update.  Wish the chapters were a little longer. Ok, I have forgotten about Mike. What is the deal with him? Please help remind me please. 



Author's Response:

Michael Newton was a member of the Cullen family but has been sleeping with Jessica who was Aro's goomah. 

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 18

Another good chapter.

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 18

Love it

Reviewer: Chiisuture Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 18

i feel so sorry for elizabeth, and for sean for some reason. I hope they will get aro good. i can't wait to see how this ends

Reviewer: sandezzy_ Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 18

all this tension is making my anxiety level rise....and i love it! i love this chapter! can't wait to see aro gone! can't wait for your next update

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 18

I love this story! I am so happy that you are still going to be posting this story here!! :)=)

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 18

Awesome chapter poor elizabeth its heartbreaking so glad aro is going to get whats coming to him hes just evil.n hope newton does too lol.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

Cant wait for more

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 18

That was intense and the pictures were perfect.

Reviewer: Queen Nilah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 17

Really glad I was able to get on here and create an account. I can't wait for ur continuation 😊😊I'm head over heels IN LOVE with this story and it's prequel!!

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ohhh ouch.... that sounds painful 

Reviewer: kerrioncullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

Great

Reviewer: kerrioncullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 17

Update soon, see i kept my promise to follow and here i am. how bout the same kind of torture he likes to inflict on women how about he get some of that payback.

Reviewer: scgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2016 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 17

Nothing is too horrible from Aro. Make it hurt.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2016 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: sandezzy_ Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2016 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 17

ohh as usual i love your story and this new development...can't wait for you to update soon so they can get rid of that fucker Aro! Love you and please update quickly 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2016 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 17

Yes, loving your story. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 17

so good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2016 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 17

Sounds like there is a columbian drug lord to be added to the hit list now.  ROFL for Aro not being able to enjoy the girls.  LOVE it

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 17

I hope they find out about Roberto.

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2016 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 17

I dont want this roberto to be able to get to edward or bella i want them to threaten snd scare him off please.

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2016 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

i love it so far what your doing to him lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2016 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 17

Karma is visiting Aro 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2016 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 17

Il est un bon chapitre.

Aro est impuissante, bien fait pour lui. Je suis impatient de lire le chapitre suivant. Baisers

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